Comments received on poems by Eira Solen
Bleed Within, Not Around
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in this poem introducing the counter culture idea of controlling oneself as opposed to what people are told is healthy showing their emotions. A great balance by noting that disregards other by showing your anger. Nicely done
July 15th, 2025 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in this poem introducing the counter culture idea of controlling oneself as opposed to what people are told is healthy showing their emotions. A great balance by noting that disregards other by showing your anger. Nicely done
July 15th, 2025 12:52
Unrequited Love
sorenbarrett said:
We all have choices and sometimes we feel we made the wrong one and can\'t go back. A tough realization. Clocks only run one way. Good read
May 23rd, 2025 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
We all have choices and sometimes we feel we made the wrong one and can\'t go back. A tough realization. Clocks only run one way. Good read
May 23rd, 2025 11:46
Unrequited Love
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching, honest and heartfelt write of acknowledging the way they treated someone who truly loved them, and clearly has remorse over that, emotional and well expressed write
May 23rd, 2025 11:03
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching, honest and heartfelt write of acknowledging the way they treated someone who truly loved them, and clearly has remorse over that, emotional and well expressed write
May 23rd, 2025 11:03
The Guilt I Carry
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of taking on the blame of two. Written as direct and raw. Nicely written
April 19th, 2025 14:33
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of taking on the blame of two. Written as direct and raw. Nicely written
April 19th, 2025 14:33
The Weight of Redemption
Poetic Licence said:
A sense the feeling in this write, children cannot amend for their parent\'s mistakes or misgivings and it is unfair to expect them to do so, the pressure of expectation just becomes to much, nicely expressed and written
April 7th, 2025 13:52
Poetic Licence said:
A sense the feeling in this write, children cannot amend for their parent\'s mistakes or misgivings and it is unfair to expect them to do so, the pressure of expectation just becomes to much, nicely expressed and written
April 7th, 2025 13:52
The Weight of Redemption
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic question that each person has to answer for themselves. Nicely said.
April 7th, 2025 13:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic question that each person has to answer for themselves. Nicely said.
April 7th, 2025 13:41
