Comments received on poems by Libellule
Mythos
sorenbarrett said:
So many entranced by the screen few read anymore and poetry less still. How much is lost in the lazy dust of technology and its mindless hypnotic fast food poison of additives for flavor. So well constructed and rhymed with good meter the meaning hidden in metaphor. Nicely done
April 18th, 2025 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
So many entranced by the screen few read anymore and poetry less still. How much is lost in the lazy dust of technology and its mindless hypnotic fast food poison of additives for flavor. So well constructed and rhymed with good meter the meaning hidden in metaphor. Nicely done
April 18th, 2025 05:22
Cryptical
sorenbarrett said:
(All of these secrets kept within
a true bounty of virtue and sin
yet left here forever unread
hiding behind words still unsaid)
A verse that encapsulates poets. A beautiful poem of taking what\'s inside and putting it out for others
(Playing these haunting tunes
as cryptic as buried runes
I again now lead you astray
with rhyming verse I now say)
Love the poem a fave
April 17th, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
(All of these secrets kept within
a true bounty of virtue and sin
yet left here forever unread
hiding behind words still unsaid)
A verse that encapsulates poets. A beautiful poem of taking what\'s inside and putting it out for others
(Playing these haunting tunes
as cryptic as buried runes
I again now lead you astray
with rhyming verse I now say)
Love the poem a fave
April 17th, 2025 09:02
Cursivity
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and well said. Cursive does connect each letter to the next as each thought should be connected to the next. In its beauty letter become more personal and it is a pity that not only is it no longer being taught in most schools but children and even adults are having trouble reading it. A lost art. A lovely poem
April 16th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and well said. Cursive does connect each letter to the next as each thought should be connected to the next. In its beauty letter become more personal and it is a pity that not only is it no longer being taught in most schools but children and even adults are having trouble reading it. A lost art. A lovely poem
April 16th, 2025 05:14
Airport
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! a lovely poem in its ambiguity it speaks to many things. Loved the write
April 15th, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! a lovely poem in its ambiguity it speaks to many things. Loved the write
April 15th, 2025 09:07
Memory
sorenbarrett said:
Your word choice in this poem is so perfect in its description that it bridges the gap between literary and emotional meaning and for this a fave
April 14th, 2025 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
Your word choice in this poem is so perfect in its description that it bridges the gap between literary and emotional meaning and for this a fave
April 14th, 2025 04:52
Purification
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem full of rhyme that takes one to a place more sublime
April 13th, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem full of rhyme that takes one to a place more sublime
April 13th, 2025 06:54
Eloquence
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the flow and meter in this poem it flows off the tongue like honey spread on bread. Very nice
April 12th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the flow and meter in this poem it flows off the tongue like honey spread on bread. Very nice
April 12th, 2025 04:39
Eloquence
teardrop said:
Very well written. I am a huge fan at rhyming..(that\'s mainly what I wrote. The read was awesome and I love the story it tells. Not one line seemed forced.
Looking forward to reading more of your words.
April 12th, 2025 04:27
teardrop said:
Very well written. I am a huge fan at rhyming..(that\'s mainly what I wrote. The read was awesome and I love the story it tells. Not one line seemed forced.
Looking forward to reading more of your words.
April 12th, 2025 04:27
Ripples in Rhyme
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem set in great rhyme and meter with such a smooth flow. It evokes similar feelings in my own poetic process. Its solid organization from beginning to end seals it as a fave
April 11th, 2025 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem set in great rhyme and meter with such a smooth flow. It evokes similar feelings in my own poetic process. Its solid organization from beginning to end seals it as a fave
April 11th, 2025 05:43
Darkened Ink
sorenbarrett said:
Dark but light this poem speaks of Carpe diem. Well written and with good rhyme it speaks of written memories of what we do.
April 10th, 2025 08:31
sorenbarrett said:
Dark but light this poem speaks of Carpe diem. Well written and with good rhyme it speaks of written memories of what we do.
April 10th, 2025 08:31
Ritualize
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, the preparation of writing their poem at the end of the day, the only place they can say what really happened and the truth, with a wonderful last line, really enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 11:45
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, the preparation of writing their poem at the end of the day, the only place they can say what really happened and the truth, with a wonderful last line, really enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 11:45
Ritualize
sorenbarrett said:
For its wonderful rhyme a fave. The journey is felt in this poem and it tells it well. A lovely piece whose structure and rhyme are its strength. Great wording and flow to this very nice work.
April 9th, 2025 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
For its wonderful rhyme a fave. The journey is felt in this poem and it tells it well. A lovely piece whose structure and rhyme are its strength. Great wording and flow to this very nice work.
April 9th, 2025 08:36
Liminal
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write beautifully written, pleasure to read
April 8th, 2025 07:07
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write beautifully written, pleasure to read
April 8th, 2025 07:07
Liminal
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem has some marvelous lines and the metaphor is a good one. Loved it a fave
April 8th, 2025 06:23
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem has some marvelous lines and the metaphor is a good one. Loved it a fave
April 8th, 2025 06:23
Tinge
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely gentle write on the thought process of putting pen to paper, really enjoyed the read
April 7th, 2025 13:54
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely gentle write on the thought process of putting pen to paper, really enjoyed the read
April 7th, 2025 13:54
Tinge
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about the process of writing. A colorful and bright write. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about the process of writing. A colorful and bright write. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 13:47
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