Comments received on poems by Libellule
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sorenbarrett said:
Again a wonderful write. How many times I have pruned from my poems lines that I would have left in but for cutting down length. Less is more they say and I believe is true. Never the less loss of many thoughts and lines lie in the dark. Love this poem and it\'s a fave
May 5th, 2025 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
Again a wonderful write. How many times I have pruned from my poems lines that I would have left in but for cutting down length. Less is more they say and I believe is true. Never the less loss of many thoughts and lines lie in the dark. Love this poem and it\'s a fave
May 5th, 2025 13:22
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lewisgale mental hospital said:
\"If they ask you: What is the sign of your Father in you?, say to them: It is movement and rest.\"
httpp://earlychristianwritings.com/thomas/gospelthomas50.html
May 5th, 2025 12:50
lewisgale mental hospital said:
\"If they ask you: What is the sign of your Father in you?, say to them: It is movement and rest.\"
httpp://earlychristianwritings.com/thomas/gospelthomas50.html
May 5th, 2025 12:50
Silent Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Some really good metaphors in this piece it is smooth and flows well. Very nice
May 3rd, 2025 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
Some really good metaphors in this piece it is smooth and flows well. Very nice
May 3rd, 2025 13:43
Dark Continent
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a continent that well could be a song. Very nicely done
April 30th, 2025 08:56
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a continent that well could be a song. Very nicely done
April 30th, 2025 08:56
Incognito
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the disguise of a poet. Hidden behind the mask of verse one\'s soul to immerse in words raw yet metaphoric. A glorious farse even when one\'s costume is sparce leaves the mind euphoric. (excuse the poetic rant) I love this poem of how poems are a poet\'s disguise and the question of whether it is worth it. Nicley written loved the rhyme and flow
April 28th, 2025 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the disguise of a poet. Hidden behind the mask of verse one\'s soul to immerse in words raw yet metaphoric. A glorious farse even when one\'s costume is sparce leaves the mind euphoric. (excuse the poetic rant) I love this poem of how poems are a poet\'s disguise and the question of whether it is worth it. Nicley written loved the rhyme and flow
April 28th, 2025 09:33
Alchemist of Time
sorenbarrett said:
Literary alchemists is what poets are trying to make gold out of lead and seldom finding the philosopher stone to accomplish it with. A lovely write
April 26th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
Literary alchemists is what poets are trying to make gold out of lead and seldom finding the philosopher stone to accomplish it with. A lovely write
April 26th, 2025 05:05
Soulful Breath
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem of sensual strength and power, seductively erotic and romantic it breaths that air mentioned. Lovely
April 25th, 2025 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem of sensual strength and power, seductively erotic and romantic it breaths that air mentioned. Lovely
April 25th, 2025 09:22
Poeticist
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice write of the energy driving the poet in their search for expression of the e=internal and external. Nicely written
April 24th, 2025 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice write of the energy driving the poet in their search for expression of the e=internal and external. Nicely written
April 24th, 2025 06:02
Rendering
sorenbarrett said:
So identifiable this metaphoric depiction of the existential crisis we go through at various times in our life.
April 23rd, 2025 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
So identifiable this metaphoric depiction of the existential crisis we go through at various times in our life.
April 23rd, 2025 05:38
Knick-Knack-Kerouac
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is what I call a poem. Starting sweet becoming quirky with a dash of passion and a sprinkle of charm this poem does what many can\'t and that is put affection in common terms that are so poetic. Loved it a fave
April 22nd, 2025 08:32
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is what I call a poem. Starting sweet becoming quirky with a dash of passion and a sprinkle of charm this poem does what many can\'t and that is put affection in common terms that are so poetic. Loved it a fave
April 22nd, 2025 08:32
A Flock of Clocks
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play in this poem to give it spice and flavor. A most wonderful write and a Fave
April 21st, 2025 13:51
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play in this poem to give it spice and flavor. A most wonderful write and a Fave
April 21st, 2025 13:51
Out of Ink
sorenbarrett said:
I too have thought what can be said that has not already been said. Yet each poem is different written in the ink of the soul that wrote it from the emotional blood of its author as different as each person yet the same as all humanity. We all have similar feelings but as individual as we they are stated in our own way. Stolen phrases and words are just that trite if not felt but jewels if from the heart. A thought provoking and wonderful poem.
April 20th, 2025 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
I too have thought what can be said that has not already been said. Yet each poem is different written in the ink of the soul that wrote it from the emotional blood of its author as different as each person yet the same as all humanity. We all have similar feelings but as individual as we they are stated in our own way. Stolen phrases and words are just that trite if not felt but jewels if from the heart. A thought provoking and wonderful poem.
April 20th, 2025 07:00
Thorny
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice rhyme in a poem about writing. The poem flows well with good meter it in metaphor speaks of itself. Very nicely done
April 19th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice rhyme in a poem about writing. The poem flows well with good meter it in metaphor speaks of itself. Very nicely done
April 19th, 2025 05:42
Mythos
sorenbarrett said:
So many entranced by the screen few read anymore and poetry less still. How much is lost in the lazy dust of technology and its mindless hypnotic fast food poison of additives for flavor. So well constructed and rhymed with good meter the meaning hidden in metaphor. Nicely done
April 18th, 2025 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
So many entranced by the screen few read anymore and poetry less still. How much is lost in the lazy dust of technology and its mindless hypnotic fast food poison of additives for flavor. So well constructed and rhymed with good meter the meaning hidden in metaphor. Nicely done
April 18th, 2025 05:22
Cryptical
sorenbarrett said:
(All of these secrets kept within
a true bounty of virtue and sin
yet left here forever unread
hiding behind words still unsaid)
A verse that encapsulates poets. A beautiful poem of taking what\'s inside and putting it out for others
(Playing these haunting tunes
as cryptic as buried runes
I again now lead you astray
with rhyming verse I now say)
Love the poem a fave
April 17th, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
(All of these secrets kept within
a true bounty of virtue and sin
yet left here forever unread
hiding behind words still unsaid)
A verse that encapsulates poets. A beautiful poem of taking what\'s inside and putting it out for others
(Playing these haunting tunes
as cryptic as buried runes
I again now lead you astray
with rhyming verse I now say)
Love the poem a fave
April 17th, 2025 09:02
Cursivity
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and well said. Cursive does connect each letter to the next as each thought should be connected to the next. In its beauty letter become more personal and it is a pity that not only is it no longer being taught in most schools but children and even adults are having trouble reading it. A lost art. A lovely poem
April 16th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and well said. Cursive does connect each letter to the next as each thought should be connected to the next. In its beauty letter become more personal and it is a pity that not only is it no longer being taught in most schools but children and even adults are having trouble reading it. A lost art. A lovely poem
April 16th, 2025 05:14
Airport
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! a lovely poem in its ambiguity it speaks to many things. Loved the write
April 15th, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! a lovely poem in its ambiguity it speaks to many things. Loved the write
April 15th, 2025 09:07
Memory
sorenbarrett said:
Your word choice in this poem is so perfect in its description that it bridges the gap between literary and emotional meaning and for this a fave
April 14th, 2025 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
Your word choice in this poem is so perfect in its description that it bridges the gap between literary and emotional meaning and for this a fave
April 14th, 2025 04:52
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