Comments received on poems by ashley driscoll
Shoting Star
Cheeky Missy said:
Very nice! Your comment with it made it mean so much more. Your title doubled rather seems to express your longing for the elusive shooting star.
December 30th, 2010 21:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Very nice! Your comment with it made it mean so much more. Your title doubled rather seems to express your longing for the elusive shooting star.
December 30th, 2010 21:39
Lonly
Cheeky Missy said:
It is fascinating, because initially you can look at it as saying nothing seriously, but looking longer, can read into it something deeper....the cold corresponds so perfectly with the hateful treatment. Your title was well chosen, the way you put it with a capital "L"....so lonely and therefore so "only".
December 29th, 2010 23:59
Cheeky Missy said:
It is fascinating, because initially you can look at it as saying nothing seriously, but looking longer, can read into it something deeper....the cold corresponds so perfectly with the hateful treatment. Your title was well chosen, the way you put it with a capital "L"....so lonely and therefore so "only".
December 29th, 2010 23:59
Lonly
nair36 said:
Great poem, not all my poems are positive but I kind of do the same thing you do when I get a hard time from people. I'm quite sure that there is an angel by your side so if I could rate this poem I'd give you a 10 because you had a purpose and a message behind your poem. Great job and keep it up.
December 29th, 2010 22:47
nair36 said:
Great poem, not all my poems are positive but I kind of do the same thing you do when I get a hard time from people. I'm quite sure that there is an angel by your side so if I could rate this poem I'd give you a 10 because you had a purpose and a message behind your poem. Great job and keep it up.
December 29th, 2010 22:47
