Comments received on poems by Awam



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Damaso said:

Incredible. At times, I was stunned. This writing possesses a powerful intensity. It makes it both real and elevated. I enjoyed it to the end. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.

July 15th, 2025 10:32

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sorenbarrett said:

Brilliant! Past guilt I felt from this write. In my old age I have learned that passion is measured in lb. and oz. Love is measured in happiness two different commodities once in a great while the two come together. A fave.

July 15th, 2025 09:45

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Poetic Licence said:

A beautiful write, with some lovely lines and imagery, enjoyed the read

July 14th, 2025 21:51

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arqios said:

Welcome to MPS, AmanπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

July 14th, 2025 12:40

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sorenbarrett said:

This poem applies well on different levels to humanity as a whole and to vulture ridden families when parents die. We all seem to be greed driven where we feel entitled to take whatever we see and want. A wonderful write full of great images and metaphor. Nicely done and a fave

July 14th, 2025 04:33

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Priya Tomar said:

Rhythm flows like resless river......
Beautiful poem..

July 14th, 2025 00:27

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