Comments received on poems by Aman 12
Are all Numbers Dead?
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording with alliteration help take the concept of this poem to new heights. Numbers are just that an abstract concept to conceptualize concrete events. Very nicely done
August 10th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording with alliteration help take the concept of this poem to new heights. Numbers are just that an abstract concept to conceptualize concrete events. Very nicely done
August 10th, 2025 04:28
Picnic at the Paradox
Poetic Licence said:
What a wonderfully crafted and thought out write, although done in a tongue in cheek way it references the present day struggles and experience\'s that many nations still have to endure and survive, nicely expressed and written
August 8th, 2025 10:11
Poetic Licence said:
What a wonderfully crafted and thought out write, although done in a tongue in cheek way it references the present day struggles and experience\'s that many nations still have to endure and survive, nicely expressed and written
August 8th, 2025 10:11
Picnic at the Paradox
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well the three stooges as a child and it seems that they are archetypes of present day politics. Nicely crafted
August 8th, 2025 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well the three stooges as a child and it seems that they are archetypes of present day politics. Nicely crafted
August 8th, 2025 10:01
Modern Day Macbeth
2781 said:
It sounded like a critique on the Gaza war, or am I once again, off the track?
August 6th, 2025 06:56
2781 said:
It sounded like a critique on the Gaza war, or am I once again, off the track?
August 6th, 2025 06:56
Modern Day Macbeth
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the horror of war which is built into the Human DNA built on human greed, money to be made, power to be taken, primitive desire for revenge, rigid inability to accept differences in others be it religion, race, or values. A powerful write
August 6th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the horror of war which is built into the Human DNA built on human greed, money to be made, power to be taken, primitive desire for revenge, rigid inability to accept differences in others be it religion, race, or values. A powerful write
August 6th, 2025 05:07
Before The Sun Sets
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of being taken advantage of and overwork but then in some way are we not this maid?
July 30th, 2025 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of being taken advantage of and overwork but then in some way are we not this maid?
July 30th, 2025 10:50
Thirteen
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully written piece of poetry, of empathy and understanding, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 04:41
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully written piece of poetry, of empathy and understanding, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 04:41
Thirteen
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of understanding and empathy. Marvelously imaged and worded it gets a fave
July 23rd, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of understanding and empathy. Marvelously imaged and worded it gets a fave
July 23rd, 2025 04:14
Gladiator Games
Priya Tomar said:
Well written.
You wrote on dark days of history.
July 17th, 2025 05:09
Priya Tomar said:
Well written.
You wrote on dark days of history.
July 17th, 2025 05:09
Gladiator Games
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write of history of the darker side of man, and sadly there are many who do enjoy all the killing and devastation, a game I would never take part it, nicely expressed and written write
July 17th, 2025 04:44
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write of history of the darker side of man, and sadly there are many who do enjoy all the killing and devastation, a game I would never take part it, nicely expressed and written write
July 17th, 2025 04:44
Meat
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully crafted and written write, really enjoyed the read
July 15th, 2025 10:43
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully crafted and written write, really enjoyed the read
July 15th, 2025 10:43
Meat
Damaso said:
Incredible. At times, I was stunned. This writing possesses a powerful intensity. It makes it both real and elevated. I enjoyed it to the end. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 10:32
Damaso said:
Incredible. At times, I was stunned. This writing possesses a powerful intensity. It makes it both real and elevated. I enjoyed it to the end. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 10:32
Meat
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Past guilt I felt from this write. In my old age I have learned that passion is measured in lb. and oz. Love is measured in happiness two different commodities once in a great while the two come together. A fave.
July 15th, 2025 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Past guilt I felt from this write. In my old age I have learned that passion is measured in lb. and oz. Love is measured in happiness two different commodities once in a great while the two come together. A fave.
July 15th, 2025 09:45
The Last Slice
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, with some lovely lines and imagery, enjoyed the read
July 14th, 2025 21:51
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, with some lovely lines and imagery, enjoyed the read
July 14th, 2025 21:51
The Last Slice
sorenbarrett said:
This poem applies well on different levels to humanity as a whole and to vulture ridden families when parents die. We all seem to be greed driven where we feel entitled to take whatever we see and want. A wonderful write full of great images and metaphor. Nicely done and a fave
July 14th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem applies well on different levels to humanity as a whole and to vulture ridden families when parents die. We all seem to be greed driven where we feel entitled to take whatever we see and want. A wonderful write full of great images and metaphor. Nicely done and a fave
July 14th, 2025 04:33
The Last Slice
Priya Tomar said:
Rhythm flows like resless river......
Beautiful poem..
July 14th, 2025 00:27
Priya Tomar said:
Rhythm flows like resless river......
Beautiful poem..
July 14th, 2025 00:27
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