Comments received on poems by Aman 12
Tonight, with Hope
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem the shadows of a parental nightmare, the loss of a child no greater loss. This poem gives this feel. Not sadness but abject despair. Very dark
December 13th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem the shadows of a parental nightmare, the loss of a child no greater loss. This poem gives this feel. Not sadness but abject despair. Very dark
December 13th, 2025 04:34
Bulldozer
Doggerel Dave said:
No reason why it could not be satire well strung together. The meanings/connotations hanging off \'bulldozer\' are many - all pointing in the same direction.
December 12th, 2025 07:10
Doggerel Dave said:
No reason why it could not be satire well strung together. The meanings/connotations hanging off \'bulldozer\' are many - all pointing in the same direction.
December 12th, 2025 07:10
Bulldozer
sorenbarrett said:
Brute force of technology destroys homes, lives justice just as the same enacted by individuals. A great write the seems a metaphor for many things. Well done.
December 12th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Brute force of technology destroys homes, lives justice just as the same enacted by individuals. A great write the seems a metaphor for many things. Well done.
December 12th, 2025 04:09
Shadow
coracaodacripta said:
You could probably go more into depth with this, but I say that about my own writings, too, and sometimes enough is just right. This is a thought provoking, and surprisingly imaginative read. I couldn\'t help but recall the way my shadow shifts beneath high street lamps at night. Sometimes I like my shadow more than I like my person. Thanks for this.
December 10th, 2025 09:29
coracaodacripta said:
You could probably go more into depth with this, but I say that about my own writings, too, and sometimes enough is just right. This is a thought provoking, and surprisingly imaginative read. I couldn\'t help but recall the way my shadow shifts beneath high street lamps at night. Sometimes I like my shadow more than I like my person. Thanks for this.
December 10th, 2025 09:29
Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
We call our most faithful companion our shadow and whether, as it appears, this is literal or metaphoric it rings true. A most lovely write and a fave
December 10th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
We call our most faithful companion our shadow and whether, as it appears, this is literal or metaphoric it rings true. A most lovely write and a fave
December 10th, 2025 04:43
Dame Justice
sorenbarrett said:
I like this poem that is a metaphoric satire and twists and turns several times in its sleep. Lovely and a fave
December 7th, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
I like this poem that is a metaphoric satire and twists and turns several times in its sleep. Lovely and a fave
December 7th, 2025 03:45
Cult
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with great flow and meter as well as rhyme. The message is such a good one as well and all together make it a fave
December 5th, 2025 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with great flow and meter as well as rhyme. The message is such a good one as well and all together make it a fave
December 5th, 2025 10:16
Coins
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poignant message clothed in fine rhyme. Aman your poems are a pleasure to read and this one no less so although it speaks of an unpleasant subject. You say it well with good meter and flow. Your allegory and metaphor are well fit and not common \"gnats and disease\" A fave
December 4th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poignant message clothed in fine rhyme. Aman your poems are a pleasure to read and this one no less so although it speaks of an unpleasant subject. You say it well with good meter and flow. Your allegory and metaphor are well fit and not common \"gnats and disease\" A fave
December 4th, 2025 04:12
Larceny
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem and I use the word love loosely but mean it completely. This poem to me indicates a deep knowledge and experience with love and understanding of the often misunderstood English language. The last two stanzas of the poem stand out to me and are masterful and so well worded. A fave
December 2nd, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem and I use the word love loosely but mean it completely. This poem to me indicates a deep knowledge and experience with love and understanding of the often misunderstood English language. The last two stanzas of the poem stand out to me and are masterful and so well worded. A fave
December 2nd, 2025 04:18
A Brief case
jarcher54 said:
Strong confident images. They are quite original but crisp and clear. The juxtaposition of a newborn and the dying is old stuff but rings true here. Intellectually a bit cold but quite a gut punch. Nice work.
December 1st, 2025 21:44
jarcher54 said:
Strong confident images. They are quite original but crisp and clear. The juxtaposition of a newborn and the dying is old stuff but rings true here. Intellectually a bit cold but quite a gut punch. Nice work.
December 1st, 2025 21:44
A Brief case
sorenbarrett said:
A very powerful poem, that evokes strong images and raises the emotions. It does not address the hose wears or even wins, but the simple act itself becomes sufficient. The issue of justice is strongly questioned in this poem very well done and a favorite.
December 1st, 2025 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
A very powerful poem, that evokes strong images and raises the emotions. It does not address the hose wears or even wins, but the simple act itself becomes sufficient. The issue of justice is strongly questioned in this poem very well done and a favorite.
December 1st, 2025 10:58
A Brief case
Doggerel Dave said:
Still don\'t know where you live, but it could well be some part of Sydney....
December 1st, 2025 07:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Still don\'t know where you live, but it could well be some part of Sydney....
December 1st, 2025 07:06
Bias
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is clothed in such poetic garments of words and metaphor it dazzles the eye. Romantic as well it calls out to the reader. Well done
November 29th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is clothed in such poetic garments of words and metaphor it dazzles the eye. Romantic as well it calls out to the reader. Well done
November 29th, 2025 04:23
National Sport-
Doggerel Dave said:
Consumerism rules and by G.. how the money rolls in...
I clothe myself from charity shops where possible.
November 28th, 2025 16:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Consumerism rules and by G.. how the money rolls in...
I clothe myself from charity shops where possible.
November 28th, 2025 16:28
National Sport-
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the game we are forced to play, already on the field and crowd watching. The cheering markets try to entice a score when I could really care less who wins or looses, but the family awaits in hopes of a victor. Well written
November 28th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the game we are forced to play, already on the field and crowd watching. The cheering markets try to entice a score when I could really care less who wins or looses, but the family awaits in hopes of a victor. Well written
November 28th, 2025 07:05
Purple Diary
Doggerel Dave said:
The function of a secret diary well noted. But why here?
The read, smooth and sharp was easy and in its own way entertaining.
November 27th, 2025 05:56
Doggerel Dave said:
The function of a secret diary well noted. But why here?
The read, smooth and sharp was easy and in its own way entertaining.
November 27th, 2025 05:56
Purple Diary
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recorded private history in the form of a diary. I love the line \"It wheezes loud like broken trumpets\" this leaves the feeling that what it contains is earnest but maybe not totally accurate, a one sided view perhaps. Well written
November 27th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recorded private history in the form of a diary. I love the line \"It wheezes loud like broken trumpets\" this leaves the feeling that what it contains is earnest but maybe not totally accurate, a one sided view perhaps. Well written
November 27th, 2025 04:14
Sharks
Doggerel Dave said:
Your commentary made it for me. Each of your statistics could be woven into separate pins with the chance of separate solutions Your home page tells me nothing of whom you are.
Poem retained my interest though.
November 26th, 2025 19:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Your commentary made it for me. Each of your statistics could be woven into separate pins with the chance of separate solutions Your home page tells me nothing of whom you are.
Poem retained my interest though.
November 26th, 2025 19:17
Sharks
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor is a great one that speaks loudly. The author\'s note was quite helpful in narrowing the meaning and putting the poem in context. Women encounter different hazards in life and with the women\'s movement in latter years their struggle has become more widely known. Men\'s story has been neglected in this tide lacks representation. Very nicely written
November 26th, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor is a great one that speaks loudly. The author\'s note was quite helpful in narrowing the meaning and putting the poem in context. Women encounter different hazards in life and with the women\'s movement in latter years their struggle has become more widely known. Men\'s story has been neglected in this tide lacks representation. Very nicely written
November 26th, 2025 04:36
Tailor
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woweee totally impressive awesome content, rhyming and flow, Kudos aplenty!!!
Last stanza was a moral jewel in the crown of entire poem!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 11:18
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woweee totally impressive awesome content, rhyming and flow, Kudos aplenty!!!
Last stanza was a moral jewel in the crown of entire poem!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 11:18
Tailor
sorenbarrett said:
There are a few characteristics that human\'s possess and those are lust and greed. Capitalism thrives on them with top sellers being sex, power, wealth and fame. A lovely poem that emphasizes at least one if not more of these. Well done
November 24th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
There are a few characteristics that human\'s possess and those are lust and greed. Capitalism thrives on them with top sellers being sex, power, wealth and fame. A lovely poem that emphasizes at least one if not more of these. Well done
November 24th, 2025 04:06
Boundless Skin
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful it speaks with the savor of Arabic poetry a seasoning of the east. It is lovely in its vivid images and associations. Loved it satisfying my taste for the exotic
November 22nd, 2025 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful it speaks with the savor of Arabic poetry a seasoning of the east. It is lovely in its vivid images and associations. Loved it satisfying my taste for the exotic
November 22nd, 2025 06:48
Revenge Needed Me
sorenbarrett said:
Every once in a while I read a poem that I wish I had written and this is one. Most wonderful it is
November 21st, 2025 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
Every once in a while I read a poem that I wish I had written and this is one. Most wonderful it is
November 21st, 2025 07:41
Tragedy of Intellect
sorenbarrett said:
A great critique on comedy as seen in our era. Put in poetic form with good rhyme and meter it turns itself into a sonnet. Well done
November 20th, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A great critique on comedy as seen in our era. Put in poetic form with good rhyme and meter it turns itself into a sonnet. Well done
November 20th, 2025 03:48
Butter storms
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good write. A easily identifiable life that serves as a metaphor for the development of some relationships or rather the deterioration of them. Nicely done.
November 19th, 2025 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good write. A easily identifiable life that serves as a metaphor for the development of some relationships or rather the deterioration of them. Nicely done.
November 19th, 2025 08:16
Jingle Bells
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how tradition melts into plastic and candles become LED lights. Christmas is Christmas where fifty percent of sales are made over things that no one needs be feel obligated to buy. A lovely satirical write that I happen to agree with one hundred percent. Well written and a fave
November 17th, 2025 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how tradition melts into plastic and candles become LED lights. Christmas is Christmas where fifty percent of sales are made over things that no one needs be feel obligated to buy. A lovely satirical write that I happen to agree with one hundred percent. Well written and a fave
November 17th, 2025 11:18
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