Comments received on poems by Aman 12
Soul Suction
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write and idea in this poem. It speaks of exercising the tongue and opening one\'s mouth. Well written
January 20th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write and idea in this poem. It speaks of exercising the tongue and opening one\'s mouth. Well written
January 20th, 2026 04:04
Small Sorrows
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its images presents a dream of a psychedelic nature to a dystopian world where metaphor falls heavy on the land. Well done
January 19th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its images presents a dream of a psychedelic nature to a dystopian world where metaphor falls heavy on the land. Well done
January 19th, 2026 04:05
Knife
sorenbarrett said:
It is the deep philosophical meaning in each line and metaphor used that makes this a fave. A lovely write that delves deep into current psychosocial events and people. It outlines a personality type and their way of dealing with the world. Well written
January 15th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
It is the deep philosophical meaning in each line and metaphor used that makes this a fave. A lovely write that delves deep into current psychosocial events and people. It outlines a personality type and their way of dealing with the world. Well written
January 15th, 2026 04:08
Counterfeit Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
Upon first read this poem was difficult for me to understand but not difficult to appreciate the beautiful metaphors and images it took further readings to gain some understanding that goes deeper than the surface. Nicely crafted and a fave
January 13th, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
Upon first read this poem was difficult for me to understand but not difficult to appreciate the beautiful metaphors and images it took further readings to gain some understanding that goes deeper than the surface. Nicely crafted and a fave
January 13th, 2026 07:40
If
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and structured this poem asks those eternal questions that divide opinions. Nicely done
January 11th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and structured this poem asks those eternal questions that divide opinions. Nicely done
January 11th, 2026 04:25
Searching for a Foot
sorenbarrett said:
Here a depiction of an event seems metaphor as well. A journey with no soles and a deadly spider as well that society tells one to ignore. Where is the joy when flowers are removed. All leads to a cliff anyway.
January 7th, 2026 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
Here a depiction of an event seems metaphor as well. A journey with no soles and a deadly spider as well that society tells one to ignore. Where is the joy when flowers are removed. All leads to a cliff anyway.
January 7th, 2026 07:07
Cactus
sorenbarrett said:
But I\'m not dead yet! A harsh and powerful poem of a man that is scarcely a man. A preditor and vampire of health a parakite that sucks the blood of hope. With great imagery this poem was presented causing the reader to cringe and withdraw. A fave
January 6th, 2026 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
But I\'m not dead yet! A harsh and powerful poem of a man that is scarcely a man. A preditor and vampire of health a parakite that sucks the blood of hope. With great imagery this poem was presented causing the reader to cringe and withdraw. A fave
January 6th, 2026 07:17
Oval Moons Of Omen
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed money can not buy happiness but it makes one comfortable in one\'s misery. A lovely write
January 5th, 2026 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed money can not buy happiness but it makes one comfortable in one\'s misery. A lovely write
January 5th, 2026 06:20
Flags
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write with metaphor and bite. It has poignant meaning that flies in the face of any reader. Well written with good rhyme and flow it is a fave
January 1st, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write with metaphor and bite. It has poignant meaning that flies in the face of any reader. Well written with good rhyme and flow it is a fave
January 1st, 2026 04:47
Snow of Bargains
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the originality and fun of this piece. it is a most entertaining read due to its accurate portrayal in satire of todays market society
December 31st, 2025 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the originality and fun of this piece. it is a most entertaining read due to its accurate portrayal in satire of todays market society
December 31st, 2025 09:35
Lying Scissors
sorenbarrett said:
A sad and dark subject that pulls at the heart. Well done
December 14th, 2025 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
A sad and dark subject that pulls at the heart. Well done
December 14th, 2025 09:27
Tonight, with Hope
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem the shadows of a parental nightmare, the loss of a child no greater loss. This poem gives this feel. Not sadness but abject despair. Very dark
December 13th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem the shadows of a parental nightmare, the loss of a child no greater loss. This poem gives this feel. Not sadness but abject despair. Very dark
December 13th, 2025 04:34
Bulldozer
Doggerel Dave said:
No reason why it could not be satire well strung together. The meanings/connotations hanging off \'bulldozer\' are many - all pointing in the same direction.
December 12th, 2025 07:10
Doggerel Dave said:
No reason why it could not be satire well strung together. The meanings/connotations hanging off \'bulldozer\' are many - all pointing in the same direction.
December 12th, 2025 07:10
Bulldozer
sorenbarrett said:
Brute force of technology destroys homes, lives justice just as the same enacted by individuals. A great write the seems a metaphor for many things. Well done.
December 12th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Brute force of technology destroys homes, lives justice just as the same enacted by individuals. A great write the seems a metaphor for many things. Well done.
December 12th, 2025 04:09
Shadow
coracaodacripta said:
You could probably go more into depth with this, but I say that about my own writings, too, and sometimes enough is just right. This is a thought provoking, and surprisingly imaginative read. I couldn\'t help but recall the way my shadow shifts beneath high street lamps at night. Sometimes I like my shadow more than I like my person. Thanks for this.
December 10th, 2025 09:29
coracaodacripta said:
You could probably go more into depth with this, but I say that about my own writings, too, and sometimes enough is just right. This is a thought provoking, and surprisingly imaginative read. I couldn\'t help but recall the way my shadow shifts beneath high street lamps at night. Sometimes I like my shadow more than I like my person. Thanks for this.
December 10th, 2025 09:29
Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
We call our most faithful companion our shadow and whether, as it appears, this is literal or metaphoric it rings true. A most lovely write and a fave
December 10th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
We call our most faithful companion our shadow and whether, as it appears, this is literal or metaphoric it rings true. A most lovely write and a fave
December 10th, 2025 04:43
Dame Justice
sorenbarrett said:
I like this poem that is a metaphoric satire and twists and turns several times in its sleep. Lovely and a fave
December 7th, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
I like this poem that is a metaphoric satire and twists and turns several times in its sleep. Lovely and a fave
December 7th, 2025 03:45
Cult
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with great flow and meter as well as rhyme. The message is such a good one as well and all together make it a fave
December 5th, 2025 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with great flow and meter as well as rhyme. The message is such a good one as well and all together make it a fave
December 5th, 2025 10:16
Coins
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poignant message clothed in fine rhyme. Aman your poems are a pleasure to read and this one no less so although it speaks of an unpleasant subject. You say it well with good meter and flow. Your allegory and metaphor are well fit and not common \"gnats and disease\" A fave
December 4th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poignant message clothed in fine rhyme. Aman your poems are a pleasure to read and this one no less so although it speaks of an unpleasant subject. You say it well with good meter and flow. Your allegory and metaphor are well fit and not common \"gnats and disease\" A fave
December 4th, 2025 04:12
Larceny
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem and I use the word love loosely but mean it completely. This poem to me indicates a deep knowledge and experience with love and understanding of the often misunderstood English language. The last two stanzas of the poem stand out to me and are masterful and so well worded. A fave
December 2nd, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem and I use the word love loosely but mean it completely. This poem to me indicates a deep knowledge and experience with love and understanding of the often misunderstood English language. The last two stanzas of the poem stand out to me and are masterful and so well worded. A fave
December 2nd, 2025 04:18
A Brief case
jarcher54 said:
Strong confident images. They are quite original but crisp and clear. The juxtaposition of a newborn and the dying is old stuff but rings true here. Intellectually a bit cold but quite a gut punch. Nice work.
December 1st, 2025 21:44
jarcher54 said:
Strong confident images. They are quite original but crisp and clear. The juxtaposition of a newborn and the dying is old stuff but rings true here. Intellectually a bit cold but quite a gut punch. Nice work.
December 1st, 2025 21:44
A Brief case
sorenbarrett said:
A very powerful poem, that evokes strong images and raises the emotions. It does not address the hose wears or even wins, but the simple act itself becomes sufficient. The issue of justice is strongly questioned in this poem very well done and a favorite.
December 1st, 2025 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
A very powerful poem, that evokes strong images and raises the emotions. It does not address the hose wears or even wins, but the simple act itself becomes sufficient. The issue of justice is strongly questioned in this poem very well done and a favorite.
December 1st, 2025 10:58
A Brief case
Doggerel Dave said:
Still don\'t know where you live, but it could well be some part of Sydney....
December 1st, 2025 07:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Still don\'t know where you live, but it could well be some part of Sydney....
December 1st, 2025 07:06
Bias
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is clothed in such poetic garments of words and metaphor it dazzles the eye. Romantic as well it calls out to the reader. Well done
November 29th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is clothed in such poetic garments of words and metaphor it dazzles the eye. Romantic as well it calls out to the reader. Well done
November 29th, 2025 04:23
National Sport-
Doggerel Dave said:
Consumerism rules and by G.. how the money rolls in...
I clothe myself from charity shops where possible.
November 28th, 2025 16:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Consumerism rules and by G.. how the money rolls in...
I clothe myself from charity shops where possible.
November 28th, 2025 16:28
National Sport-
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the game we are forced to play, already on the field and crowd watching. The cheering markets try to entice a score when I could really care less who wins or looses, but the family awaits in hopes of a victor. Well written
November 28th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the game we are forced to play, already on the field and crowd watching. The cheering markets try to entice a score when I could really care less who wins or looses, but the family awaits in hopes of a victor. Well written
November 28th, 2025 07:05
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