Comments received on poems by Aman 12



The Last Slice
sorenbarrett said:

This poem applies well on different levels to humanity as a whole and to vulture ridden families when parents die. We all seem to be greed driven where we feel entitled to take whatever we see and want. A wonderful write full of great images and metaphor. Nicely done and a fave

July 14th, 2025 04:33

The Last Slice
Priya Tomar said:

Rhythm flows like resless river......
Beautiful poem..

July 14th, 2025 00:27