Comments received on poems by Aman 12
Revenge Needed Me
sorenbarrett said:
Every once in a while I read a poem that I wish I had written and this is one. Most wonderful it is
November 21st, 2025 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
Every once in a while I read a poem that I wish I had written and this is one. Most wonderful it is
November 21st, 2025 07:41
Tragedy of Intellect
sorenbarrett said:
A great critique on comedy as seen in our era. Put in poetic form with good rhyme and meter it turns itself into a sonnet. Well done
November 20th, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A great critique on comedy as seen in our era. Put in poetic form with good rhyme and meter it turns itself into a sonnet. Well done
November 20th, 2025 03:48
Butter storms
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good write. A easily identifiable life that serves as a metaphor for the development of some relationships or rather the deterioration of them. Nicely done.
November 19th, 2025 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good write. A easily identifiable life that serves as a metaphor for the development of some relationships or rather the deterioration of them. Nicely done.
November 19th, 2025 08:16
Jingle Bells
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how tradition melts into plastic and candles become LED lights. Christmas is Christmas where fifty percent of sales are made over things that no one needs be feel obligated to buy. A lovely satirical write that I happen to agree with one hundred percent. Well written and a fave
November 17th, 2025 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how tradition melts into plastic and candles become LED lights. Christmas is Christmas where fifty percent of sales are made over things that no one needs be feel obligated to buy. A lovely satirical write that I happen to agree with one hundred percent. Well written and a fave
November 17th, 2025 11:18
Who
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the creativity in subject and manner of expressing it in metaphor and allegory. Loved the cynical approach to societies establishment of rules or customs for social convenience. Nicely done
November 15th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the creativity in subject and manner of expressing it in metaphor and allegory. Loved the cynical approach to societies establishment of rules or customs for social convenience. Nicely done
November 15th, 2025 03:52
Nest of Stillborn Rats
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of allegories that cast shadows of violence in a darkening world. We still live in a world where we fight over who\'s god is bigger.
November 14th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of allegories that cast shadows of violence in a darkening world. We still live in a world where we fight over who\'s god is bigger.
November 14th, 2025 03:58
Twice
sorenbarrett said:
Didn\'t realize that it was declared twice this makes a good deal of sense in the poem. Well written with graphic images that rattle the bones, jar the brain and shrivel the innards. Dark and sad it is a haunting tragedy
November 12th, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Didn\'t realize that it was declared twice this makes a good deal of sense in the poem. Well written with graphic images that rattle the bones, jar the brain and shrivel the innards. Dark and sad it is a haunting tragedy
November 12th, 2025 08:43
Chilled Champagne
sorenbarrett said:
Veiled in metaphor this poem holds deep criticism of man\'s iron irony. I loved
\"Dolphins flesh ruptures
floating belly-up, they wash
ashore beside plastic rosaries.\"
What an image, metaphor and satire all in one. This poem is masterful and plays out to the end. A fave
November 11th, 2025 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
Veiled in metaphor this poem holds deep criticism of man\'s iron irony. I loved
\"Dolphins flesh ruptures
floating belly-up, they wash
ashore beside plastic rosaries.\"
What an image, metaphor and satire all in one. This poem is masterful and plays out to the end. A fave
November 11th, 2025 07:28
Happiness
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor told in good rhyme and meter making a great narrative with a moral. Well done
November 7th, 2025 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor told in good rhyme and meter making a great narrative with a moral. Well done
November 7th, 2025 08:33
Bootprints in Bellies
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is brutally raw and explicit in its metaphors. It is hard to read but then so too is reality. Its imagery is graphic and its message most pertinent. It calls out against the savagery of war and mankind. In the last line there is a double twist where a glimmer of hope is given to women\'s control as bleak and dark as that might be. A fave
November 5th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is brutally raw and explicit in its metaphors. It is hard to read but then so too is reality. Its imagery is graphic and its message most pertinent. It calls out against the savagery of war and mankind. In the last line there is a double twist where a glimmer of hope is given to women\'s control as bleak and dark as that might be. A fave
November 5th, 2025 04:00
Dearest November
sorenbarrett said:
Most poetic lines paint this poem with colors and feelings The whole first stanza is a painting. Most lovely
November 3rd, 2025 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
Most poetic lines paint this poem with colors and feelings The whole first stanza is a painting. Most lovely
November 3rd, 2025 09:17
Advice
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely rhymed this poem fits so well with the term it portrays. It flows like advice free and given on every side. A wonderful poem and a fave
November 2nd, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely rhymed this poem fits so well with the term it portrays. It flows like advice free and given on every side. A wonderful poem and a fave
November 2nd, 2025 05:03
Raised by Mannequin
Rocky Lagou said:
Oooof this is great! I love a good persona poem and this perspective from which you write from is very eye opening. “Silent saints of scarcity.” Ah! I love me a good alliterative line.
November 1st, 2025 09:39
Rocky Lagou said:
Oooof this is great! I love a good persona poem and this perspective from which you write from is very eye opening. “Silent saints of scarcity.” Ah! I love me a good alliterative line.
November 1st, 2025 09:39
Raised by Mannequin
sorenbarrett said:
This is creative and individualistic in nature a great metaphor of consumerism painted in a mannequin and of capitalism in a store window and shopping cart. Lovely
November 1st, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
This is creative and individualistic in nature a great metaphor of consumerism painted in a mannequin and of capitalism in a store window and shopping cart. Lovely
November 1st, 2025 04:25
Oranges
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of metaphor where oranges and lemons are the fruits of the garden and the seeds sprout. Well done
October 30th, 2025 09:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of metaphor where oranges and lemons are the fruits of the garden and the seeds sprout. Well done
October 30th, 2025 09:54
Clock
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in this poem. Are we not like the clock. A fun read full of great images as well it ticks its way along and winds down and I was expecting it to say (apart) rather than part at the end.
October 29th, 2025 10:19
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in this poem. Are we not like the clock. A fun read full of great images as well it ticks its way along and winds down and I was expecting it to say (apart) rather than part at the end.
October 29th, 2025 10:19
Clout
sorenbarrett said:
Such social commentary in vivid metaphor that uncovers civility\'s darker nature and false front. So well imaged and with great rhyme and flow. It mirrors the veneer of society and what lays beneath.
October 28th, 2025 07:52
sorenbarrett said:
Such social commentary in vivid metaphor that uncovers civility\'s darker nature and false front. So well imaged and with great rhyme and flow. It mirrors the veneer of society and what lays beneath.
October 28th, 2025 07:52
Decorated Mule
sorenbarrett said:
For those in power ignorance of the masses is in their best interest. A lovely write of a dystopia not far from where we are.
October 27th, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
For those in power ignorance of the masses is in their best interest. A lovely write of a dystopia not far from where we are.
October 27th, 2025 06:54
Tabled, as always
sorenbarrett said:
The old saying (opinions are like assholes everybody has one) but actually they are more like fingerprints with everyone\'s being different. There are no right ones or wrong just different and everyone thinks that theirs is sacred. Wars are started that way. A good write
October 25th, 2025 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
The old saying (opinions are like assholes everybody has one) but actually they are more like fingerprints with everyone\'s being different. There are no right ones or wrong just different and everyone thinks that theirs is sacred. Wars are started that way. A good write
October 25th, 2025 09:56
Yet to
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of women as a commodity to be looked at, coveted, lusted after, bought and sold. Well written
October 23rd, 2025 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of women as a commodity to be looked at, coveted, lusted after, bought and sold. Well written
October 23rd, 2025 06:43
Curses are Nurses
sorenbarrett said:
Mixing clever wordplay and rhyme this poem sends its message well. Fun to read and with a good message it is a fave
October 21st, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
Mixing clever wordplay and rhyme this poem sends its message well. Fun to read and with a good message it is a fave
October 21st, 2025 06:54
Twirl of Genocide
NinjaGirl said:
Wow...I\'m so glad you wrote a poem to inform us about it!
October 20th, 2025 21:04
NinjaGirl said:
Wow...I\'m so glad you wrote a poem to inform us about it!
October 20th, 2025 21:04
Twirl of Genocide
sorenbarrett said:
It has always been interesting to me how some cultural customs are viewed differently by other cultures and change over the years. Western cultural customs may be viewed as just as cruel by outsiders but go unnoticed within the culture. We judge and those that have power enforce. A good read
October 20th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
It has always been interesting to me how some cultural customs are viewed differently by other cultures and change over the years. Western cultural customs may be viewed as just as cruel by outsiders but go unnoticed within the culture. We judge and those that have power enforce. A good read
October 20th, 2025 05:18
Heartquake
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of a narrative poem and a message as well. Nicely crafted and well worded with great metaphor and splendid images it speaks to me and a fave
October 18th, 2025 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of a narrative poem and a message as well. Nicely crafted and well worded with great metaphor and splendid images it speaks to me and a fave
October 18th, 2025 09:40
A Nation built of Corridors
sorenbarrett said:
Full of symbolism this poem speaks in metaphor. Well crafted.
October 17th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Full of symbolism this poem speaks in metaphor. Well crafted.
October 17th, 2025 04:32
Venture of Chemistry
sorenbarrett said:
A geologic poem of grit and determination great metaphors for something solid and persevering. Nicely done
October 13th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A geologic poem of grit and determination great metaphors for something solid and persevering. Nicely done
October 13th, 2025 03:58
Lines of Hope
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very entertaining and fun read delivering it\'s message in an enjoyable way, well written
October 10th, 2025 15:45
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very entertaining and fun read delivering it\'s message in an enjoyable way, well written
October 10th, 2025 15:45
Lines of Hope
sorenbarrett said:
This fun story told in a child like manner is a message in and of itself and with fun rhyme it gets a fave
October 10th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
This fun story told in a child like manner is a message in and of itself and with fun rhyme it gets a fave
October 10th, 2025 04:21
Sodium Sky
sorenbarrett said:
Here a menace that we have created now a threat. I think of Hitchcock\'s The Birds and at another layer Mary Shelly\'s Frankenstein. In feeding them we foster their growth, concentrated in cities where they can not be shot and protected by animal rights groups they thrive to the detriment of the ecosystem and us. A fave
October 7th, 2025 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
Here a menace that we have created now a threat. I think of Hitchcock\'s The Birds and at another layer Mary Shelly\'s Frankenstein. In feeding them we foster their growth, concentrated in cities where they can not be shot and protected by animal rights groups they thrive to the detriment of the ecosystem and us. A fave
October 7th, 2025 06:49
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