Comments received on poems by Aman 12
Orbiting Fate
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever wording in this poem together with some great metaphoric pairings. Nicely rhymed a fave
February 12th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever wording in this poem together with some great metaphoric pairings. Nicely rhymed a fave
February 12th, 2026 04:07
Mucilage
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem seeks to illuminate the often-overlooked emotional landscape of domestic life, revealing the complexities and struggles that accompany routine tasks. It invites readers to reflect on the intersection of the mundane and the profound in everyday existence.
February 11th, 2026 17:52
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem seeks to illuminate the often-overlooked emotional landscape of domestic life, revealing the complexities and struggles that accompany routine tasks. It invites readers to reflect on the intersection of the mundane and the profound in everyday existence.
February 11th, 2026 17:52
Mucilage
sorenbarrett said:
A dark profession of near slavery in servitude. A sad read of the realities of life. Nicely written in most poetic terms
February 11th, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A dark profession of near slavery in servitude. A sad read of the realities of life. Nicely written in most poetic terms
February 11th, 2026 04:31
Wagons
sorenbarrett said:
A mixed bag here of two different worlds laid out in two different gramatical and language genre. It leaves the mind searching.
February 6th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
A mixed bag here of two different worlds laid out in two different gramatical and language genre. It leaves the mind searching.
February 6th, 2026 04:10
Age of Almost
sorenbarrett said:
So near yet so far. Plastic is the word that comes to mind. Plastic wood that looks close to wood but not quite, a plastic smile is the same. A plastic artificial world of technology where the imagined is worth more than the real. Nicely written
February 5th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
So near yet so far. Plastic is the word that comes to mind. Plastic wood that looks close to wood but not quite, a plastic smile is the same. A plastic artificial world of technology where the imagined is worth more than the real. Nicely written
February 5th, 2026 04:26
Age of Almost
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Beautiful irony...or is it almost beautiful?
February 5th, 2026 03:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Beautiful irony...or is it almost beautiful?
February 5th, 2026 03:34
Smudged Sky
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! Crammed full of wonderful imagery this poem is a beautiful sky itself. Lovely
February 4th, 2026 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! Crammed full of wonderful imagery this poem is a beautiful sky itself. Lovely
February 4th, 2026 05:57
Hinge
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and sad poem of abuse and betrayal where there is an imbalance in power. Well written
January 29th, 2026 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and sad poem of abuse and betrayal where there is an imbalance in power. Well written
January 29th, 2026 08:00
Smile
sorenbarrett said:
This is a light hearted and fun read that seems more folk tale than anything else. I loved it.
January 28th, 2026 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
This is a light hearted and fun read that seems more folk tale than anything else. I loved it.
January 28th, 2026 06:56
Pyre
Thomas W Case said:
Mercy burns bright, but the world still chokes on its ash.
Even flames meant to heal leave soot where it lands, stubborn and unrepentant.
January 27th, 2026 09:08
Thomas W Case said:
Mercy burns bright, but the world still chokes on its ash.
Even flames meant to heal leave soot where it lands, stubborn and unrepentant.
January 27th, 2026 09:08
Pyre
sorenbarrett said:
Pitty, mercy, forgiveness beautiful lights to illuminate darkness and warm us on a cold journey. A wonderful write
January 27th, 2026 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
Pitty, mercy, forgiveness beautiful lights to illuminate darkness and warm us on a cold journey. A wonderful write
January 27th, 2026 06:15
Bowl Of Grated Coconut
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant!!! Masterfully written this poem from beginning to end carries the marks of a classic. It contains elements of greatness in message, metaphor, rhyme and meter. It is an obvious fave from beginning to end. One of the better poems that I have read on this and four other sites.
January 24th, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant!!! Masterfully written this poem from beginning to end carries the marks of a classic. It contains elements of greatness in message, metaphor, rhyme and meter. It is an obvious fave from beginning to end. One of the better poems that I have read on this and four other sites.
January 24th, 2026 03:51
Soul Suction
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write and idea in this poem. It speaks of exercising the tongue and opening one\'s mouth. Well written
January 20th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write and idea in this poem. It speaks of exercising the tongue and opening one\'s mouth. Well written
January 20th, 2026 04:04
Small Sorrows
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its images presents a dream of a psychedelic nature to a dystopian world where metaphor falls heavy on the land. Well done
January 19th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its images presents a dream of a psychedelic nature to a dystopian world where metaphor falls heavy on the land. Well done
January 19th, 2026 04:05
Knife
sorenbarrett said:
It is the deep philosophical meaning in each line and metaphor used that makes this a fave. A lovely write that delves deep into current psychosocial events and people. It outlines a personality type and their way of dealing with the world. Well written
January 15th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
It is the deep philosophical meaning in each line and metaphor used that makes this a fave. A lovely write that delves deep into current psychosocial events and people. It outlines a personality type and their way of dealing with the world. Well written
January 15th, 2026 04:08
Counterfeit Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
Upon first read this poem was difficult for me to understand but not difficult to appreciate the beautiful metaphors and images it took further readings to gain some understanding that goes deeper than the surface. Nicely crafted and a fave
January 13th, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
Upon first read this poem was difficult for me to understand but not difficult to appreciate the beautiful metaphors and images it took further readings to gain some understanding that goes deeper than the surface. Nicely crafted and a fave
January 13th, 2026 07:40
If
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and structured this poem asks those eternal questions that divide opinions. Nicely done
January 11th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and structured this poem asks those eternal questions that divide opinions. Nicely done
January 11th, 2026 04:25
Searching for a Foot
sorenbarrett said:
Here a depiction of an event seems metaphor as well. A journey with no soles and a deadly spider as well that society tells one to ignore. Where is the joy when flowers are removed. All leads to a cliff anyway.
January 7th, 2026 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
Here a depiction of an event seems metaphor as well. A journey with no soles and a deadly spider as well that society tells one to ignore. Where is the joy when flowers are removed. All leads to a cliff anyway.
January 7th, 2026 07:07
Cactus
sorenbarrett said:
But I\'m not dead yet! A harsh and powerful poem of a man that is scarcely a man. A preditor and vampire of health a parakite that sucks the blood of hope. With great imagery this poem was presented causing the reader to cringe and withdraw. A fave
January 6th, 2026 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
But I\'m not dead yet! A harsh and powerful poem of a man that is scarcely a man. A preditor and vampire of health a parakite that sucks the blood of hope. With great imagery this poem was presented causing the reader to cringe and withdraw. A fave
January 6th, 2026 07:17
Oval Moons Of Omen
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed money can not buy happiness but it makes one comfortable in one\'s misery. A lovely write
January 5th, 2026 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed money can not buy happiness but it makes one comfortable in one\'s misery. A lovely write
January 5th, 2026 06:20
Flags
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write with metaphor and bite. It has poignant meaning that flies in the face of any reader. Well written with good rhyme and flow it is a fave
January 1st, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write with metaphor and bite. It has poignant meaning that flies in the face of any reader. Well written with good rhyme and flow it is a fave
January 1st, 2026 04:47
Snow of Bargains
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the originality and fun of this piece. it is a most entertaining read due to its accurate portrayal in satire of todays market society
December 31st, 2025 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the originality and fun of this piece. it is a most entertaining read due to its accurate portrayal in satire of todays market society
December 31st, 2025 09:35
Lying Scissors
sorenbarrett said:
A sad and dark subject that pulls at the heart. Well done
December 14th, 2025 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
A sad and dark subject that pulls at the heart. Well done
December 14th, 2025 09:27
Tonight, with Hope
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem the shadows of a parental nightmare, the loss of a child no greater loss. This poem gives this feel. Not sadness but abject despair. Very dark
December 13th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem the shadows of a parental nightmare, the loss of a child no greater loss. This poem gives this feel. Not sadness but abject despair. Very dark
December 13th, 2025 04:34
Bulldozer
Doggerel Dave said:
No reason why it could not be satire well strung together. The meanings/connotations hanging off \'bulldozer\' are many - all pointing in the same direction.
December 12th, 2025 07:10
Doggerel Dave said:
No reason why it could not be satire well strung together. The meanings/connotations hanging off \'bulldozer\' are many - all pointing in the same direction.
December 12th, 2025 07:10
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