Comments received on poems by Aman 12
Before The Sun Sets
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of being taken advantage of and overwork but then in some way are we not this maid?
July 30th, 2025 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of being taken advantage of and overwork but then in some way are we not this maid?
July 30th, 2025 10:50
Thirteen
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully written piece of poetry, of empathy and understanding, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 04:41
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully written piece of poetry, of empathy and understanding, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 04:41
Thirteen
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of understanding and empathy. Marvelously imaged and worded it gets a fave
July 23rd, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of understanding and empathy. Marvelously imaged and worded it gets a fave
July 23rd, 2025 04:14
Gladiator Games
Priya Tomar said:
Well written.
You wrote on dark days of history.
July 17th, 2025 05:09
Priya Tomar said:
Well written.
You wrote on dark days of history.
July 17th, 2025 05:09
Gladiator Games
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write of history of the darker side of man, and sadly there are many who do enjoy all the killing and devastation, a game I would never take part it, nicely expressed and written write
July 17th, 2025 04:44
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write of history of the darker side of man, and sadly there are many who do enjoy all the killing and devastation, a game I would never take part it, nicely expressed and written write
July 17th, 2025 04:44
Meat
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully crafted and written write, really enjoyed the read
July 15th, 2025 10:43
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully crafted and written write, really enjoyed the read
July 15th, 2025 10:43
Meat
Damaso said:
Incredible. At times, I was stunned. This writing possesses a powerful intensity. It makes it both real and elevated. I enjoyed it to the end. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 10:32
Damaso said:
Incredible. At times, I was stunned. This writing possesses a powerful intensity. It makes it both real and elevated. I enjoyed it to the end. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 10:32
Meat
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Past guilt I felt from this write. In my old age I have learned that passion is measured in lb. and oz. Love is measured in happiness two different commodities once in a great while the two come together. A fave.
July 15th, 2025 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Past guilt I felt from this write. In my old age I have learned that passion is measured in lb. and oz. Love is measured in happiness two different commodities once in a great while the two come together. A fave.
July 15th, 2025 09:45
The Last Slice
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, with some lovely lines and imagery, enjoyed the read
July 14th, 2025 21:51
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, with some lovely lines and imagery, enjoyed the read
July 14th, 2025 21:51
The Last Slice
sorenbarrett said:
This poem applies well on different levels to humanity as a whole and to vulture ridden families when parents die. We all seem to be greed driven where we feel entitled to take whatever we see and want. A wonderful write full of great images and metaphor. Nicely done and a fave
July 14th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem applies well on different levels to humanity as a whole and to vulture ridden families when parents die. We all seem to be greed driven where we feel entitled to take whatever we see and want. A wonderful write full of great images and metaphor. Nicely done and a fave
July 14th, 2025 04:33
The Last Slice
Priya Tomar said:
Rhythm flows like resless river......
Beautiful poem..
July 14th, 2025 00:27
Priya Tomar said:
Rhythm flows like resless river......
Beautiful poem..
July 14th, 2025 00:27
