Comments received on poems by Aman 12
Limbs of Lies
sorenbarrett said:
From the individual hunter that defended hunting grounds to the nation that defends borders both based on keeping their life style the two bent on keeping intruders out so as to survive. When the lands were new accommodating others was good for safety and help but as recourses became scares no new comers were welcome. Humanity extends first to self then to others a species built on selfishness and self preservation not species preservation and sacrificing charity. A lovely and thought provoking poem
August 26th, 2025 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
From the individual hunter that defended hunting grounds to the nation that defends borders both based on keeping their life style the two bent on keeping intruders out so as to survive. When the lands were new accommodating others was good for safety and help but as recourses became scares no new comers were welcome. Humanity extends first to self then to others a species built on selfishness and self preservation not species preservation and sacrificing charity. A lovely and thought provoking poem
August 26th, 2025 08:12
Womb on Trial
sorenbarrett said:
The world needs someone to blame and extends its roots looking for shame. A scapegoat is required for every sacrifice and nothing less will suffice. A poignant poem with some very good lines and metaphor
August 24th, 2025 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
The world needs someone to blame and extends its roots looking for shame. A scapegoat is required for every sacrifice and nothing less will suffice. A poignant poem with some very good lines and metaphor
August 24th, 2025 13:24
Womb on Trial
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful twist on the old saying that love is blind. Too true to catch the attention of new lovers and too late to relight the fire of those that have been scorched. A beautiful poem too full of truth to hang on the wall but instead hidden in the pages of dusty volumes of a library we all walk by but seldom enter. A fave
August 19th, 2025 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful twist on the old saying that love is blind. Too true to catch the attention of new lovers and too late to relight the fire of those that have been scorched. A beautiful poem too full of truth to hang on the wall but instead hidden in the pages of dusty volumes of a library we all walk by but seldom enter. A fave
August 19th, 2025 07:29
Peace is in Pieces
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant and thought out write, and sadly very true, nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 09:32
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant and thought out write, and sadly very true, nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 09:32
Peace is in Pieces
sorenbarrett said:
Plays on words make the central line of this poem. It plays through it like a chorus. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
Plays on words make the central line of this poem. It plays through it like a chorus. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 09:25
I Want That World
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of wanting an ideal world which we will never get, some greats lines in this, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 08:48
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of wanting an ideal world which we will never get, some greats lines in this, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 08:48
I Want That World
sorenbarrett said:
An ideal world we all wish for but never get. It is what it is and like it of lump it we have to deal with it. A great read
August 14th, 2025 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
An ideal world we all wish for but never get. It is what it is and like it of lump it we have to deal with it. A great read
August 14th, 2025 08:38
Are all Numbers Dead?
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted and written write, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 07:23
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted and written write, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 07:23
Are all Numbers Dead?
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording with alliteration help take the concept of this poem to new heights. Numbers are just that an abstract concept to conceptualize concrete events. Very nicely done
August 10th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording with alliteration help take the concept of this poem to new heights. Numbers are just that an abstract concept to conceptualize concrete events. Very nicely done
August 10th, 2025 04:28
Picnic at the Paradox
Poetic Licence said:
What a wonderfully crafted and thought out write, although done in a tongue in cheek way it references the present day struggles and experience\'s that many nations still have to endure and survive, nicely expressed and written
August 8th, 2025 10:11
Poetic Licence said:
What a wonderfully crafted and thought out write, although done in a tongue in cheek way it references the present day struggles and experience\'s that many nations still have to endure and survive, nicely expressed and written
August 8th, 2025 10:11
Picnic at the Paradox
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well the three stooges as a child and it seems that they are archetypes of present day politics. Nicely crafted
August 8th, 2025 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well the three stooges as a child and it seems that they are archetypes of present day politics. Nicely crafted
August 8th, 2025 10:01
Modern Day Macbeth
2781 said:
It sounded like a critique on the Gaza war, or am I once again, off the track?
August 6th, 2025 06:56
2781 said:
It sounded like a critique on the Gaza war, or am I once again, off the track?
August 6th, 2025 06:56
Modern Day Macbeth
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the horror of war which is built into the Human DNA built on human greed, money to be made, power to be taken, primitive desire for revenge, rigid inability to accept differences in others be it religion, race, or values. A powerful write
August 6th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the horror of war which is built into the Human DNA built on human greed, money to be made, power to be taken, primitive desire for revenge, rigid inability to accept differences in others be it religion, race, or values. A powerful write
August 6th, 2025 05:07
Before The Sun Sets
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of being taken advantage of and overwork but then in some way are we not this maid?
July 30th, 2025 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of being taken advantage of and overwork but then in some way are we not this maid?
July 30th, 2025 10:50
Thirteen
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully written piece of poetry, of empathy and understanding, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 04:41
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully written piece of poetry, of empathy and understanding, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 04:41
Thirteen
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of understanding and empathy. Marvelously imaged and worded it gets a fave
July 23rd, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of understanding and empathy. Marvelously imaged and worded it gets a fave
July 23rd, 2025 04:14
Gladiator Games
Priya Tomar said:
Well written.
You wrote on dark days of history.
July 17th, 2025 05:09
Priya Tomar said:
Well written.
You wrote on dark days of history.
July 17th, 2025 05:09
Gladiator Games
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write of history of the darker side of man, and sadly there are many who do enjoy all the killing and devastation, a game I would never take part it, nicely expressed and written write
July 17th, 2025 04:44
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write of history of the darker side of man, and sadly there are many who do enjoy all the killing and devastation, a game I would never take part it, nicely expressed and written write
July 17th, 2025 04:44
Meat
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully crafted and written write, really enjoyed the read
July 15th, 2025 10:43
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully crafted and written write, really enjoyed the read
July 15th, 2025 10:43
Meat
Damaso said:
Incredible. At times, I was stunned. This writing possesses a powerful intensity. It makes it both real and elevated. I enjoyed it to the end. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 10:32
Damaso said:
Incredible. At times, I was stunned. This writing possesses a powerful intensity. It makes it both real and elevated. I enjoyed it to the end. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 10:32
Meat
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Past guilt I felt from this write. In my old age I have learned that passion is measured in lb. and oz. Love is measured in happiness two different commodities once in a great while the two come together. A fave.
July 15th, 2025 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Past guilt I felt from this write. In my old age I have learned that passion is measured in lb. and oz. Love is measured in happiness two different commodities once in a great while the two come together. A fave.
July 15th, 2025 09:45
The Last Slice
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, with some lovely lines and imagery, enjoyed the read
July 14th, 2025 21:51
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, with some lovely lines and imagery, enjoyed the read
July 14th, 2025 21:51
The Last Slice
sorenbarrett said:
This poem applies well on different levels to humanity as a whole and to vulture ridden families when parents die. We all seem to be greed driven where we feel entitled to take whatever we see and want. A wonderful write full of great images and metaphor. Nicely done and a fave
July 14th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem applies well on different levels to humanity as a whole and to vulture ridden families when parents die. We all seem to be greed driven where we feel entitled to take whatever we see and want. A wonderful write full of great images and metaphor. Nicely done and a fave
July 14th, 2025 04:33
The Last Slice
Priya Tomar said:
Rhythm flows like resless river......
Beautiful poem..
July 14th, 2025 00:27
Priya Tomar said:
Rhythm flows like resless river......
Beautiful poem..
July 14th, 2025 00:27
