Comments received on poems by Aman 12
Brunch of Beasts
Keeter C said:
Nice read and so much can be read into it.
September 18th, 2025 23:52
Keeter C said:
Nice read and so much can be read into it.
September 18th, 2025 23:52
Grapevine
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this metaphoric work is very close to one that I a posting tomorrow. Very nice and a fave
September 18th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this metaphoric work is very close to one that I a posting tomorrow. Very nice and a fave
September 18th, 2025 08:21
Like a Number
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
The poem leaves a lingering sense of sorrow, blending innocence and mortality, forcing the reader to confront both the fragility and uniqueness of life. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:38
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
The poem leaves a lingering sense of sorrow, blending innocence and mortality, forcing the reader to confront both the fragility and uniqueness of life. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:38
Like a Number
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to me a poem of refugees, war victims, a hard read but well done a fave
September 17th, 2025 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to me a poem of refugees, war victims, a hard read but well done a fave
September 17th, 2025 09:34
Rules are made of Rubber
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that feels on the surface like a poem for children but just below the surface lurks a cynical commentary on the justice system and how people legally get around the system. The intent of the law means nothing it is the letter of the law that is enforced. A lovely write and a fave
September 16th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that feels on the surface like a poem for children but just below the surface lurks a cynical commentary on the justice system and how people legally get around the system. The intent of the law means nothing it is the letter of the law that is enforced. A lovely write and a fave
September 16th, 2025 04:38
Brunch of Beasts
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a politicians brunch to me. Really great images with what appears to be incongruous combinations that in fact make great sense as metaphors for a world crazier than Alice\'s Wonderland. Nicely done a fave
September 15th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a politicians brunch to me. Really great images with what appears to be incongruous combinations that in fact make great sense as metaphors for a world crazier than Alice\'s Wonderland. Nicely done a fave
September 15th, 2025 04:27
Tracing Outlines
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
‘I used to believe in conversations,
Now I just nod my head
and surrender to the script.‘ This is powerful ‘I use to believe’ the repetition makes it engaging. Nice work.
Believe. Nicely written.
September 12th, 2025 11:20
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
‘I used to believe in conversations,
Now I just nod my head
and surrender to the script.‘ This is powerful ‘I use to believe’ the repetition makes it engaging. Nice work.
Believe. Nicely written.
September 12th, 2025 11:20
Tracing Outlines
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the lines in this poem of self doubt and questions. A poem of darkness of thought. Well done
September 12th, 2025 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the lines in this poem of self doubt and questions. A poem of darkness of thought. Well done
September 12th, 2025 09:32
Anti Fairytale
rebellion_in_sanity said:
😁😀🤣 wish there were more like this poem. Thoroughly enjoyed.
September 12th, 2025 07:49
rebellion_in_sanity said:
😁😀🤣 wish there were more like this poem. Thoroughly enjoyed.
September 12th, 2025 07:49
Anti Fairytale
sorenbarrett said:
They say stay away from cliches in poetry but here they make the poem and for every rule there is an exception. A fun read full of surprises. Lovely and a fave
September 11th, 2025 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
They say stay away from cliches in poetry but here they make the poem and for every rule there is an exception. A fun read full of surprises. Lovely and a fave
September 11th, 2025 07:44
Gut Lords
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and powerful it speaks of a war of waste a lovely write and a fave
September 10th, 2025 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and powerful it speaks of a war of waste a lovely write and a fave
September 10th, 2025 11:04
Fogtown Fables
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
This poem is vivid, and full of storytelling energy. love the rhymes “map/chap, ajar/car, schemes/dreams” which give it a musical, storybook feel. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 12:09
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
This poem is vivid, and full of storytelling energy. love the rhymes “map/chap, ajar/car, schemes/dreams” which give it a musical, storybook feel. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 12:09
Fogtown Fables
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words where a story is told in nouns instead of adjective clowns. Loved it
September 8th, 2025 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words where a story is told in nouns instead of adjective clowns. Loved it
September 8th, 2025 05:08
Ligature of Language
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
This poem challenges societal expectations around gender, language, and identity, using strong imagery and metaphor to make its point. Juxtaposition / Contrast “gentle man” vs. “strong woman” highlights societal double standards. Nicely written.
September 7th, 2025 09:13
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
This poem challenges societal expectations around gender, language, and identity, using strong imagery and metaphor to make its point. Juxtaposition / Contrast “gentle man” vs. “strong woman” highlights societal double standards. Nicely written.
September 7th, 2025 09:13
Ligature of Language
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded this sends its message well in metaphor and allegory. Loved it a fave
September 7th, 2025 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded this sends its message well in metaphor and allegory. Loved it a fave
September 7th, 2025 05:20
Indigestible
sorenbarrett said:
This gives a good deal of food for thought. Here picking a bone means biting one\'s tongue. Quite the read that is thought provoking
August 30th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
This gives a good deal of food for thought. Here picking a bone means biting one\'s tongue. Quite the read that is thought provoking
August 30th, 2025 04:27
Limbs of Lies
sorenbarrett said:
From the individual hunter that defended hunting grounds to the nation that defends borders both based on keeping their life style the two bent on keeping intruders out so as to survive. When the lands were new accommodating others was good for safety and help but as recourses became scares no new comers were welcome. Humanity extends first to self then to others a species built on selfishness and self preservation not species preservation and sacrificing charity. A lovely and thought provoking poem
August 26th, 2025 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
From the individual hunter that defended hunting grounds to the nation that defends borders both based on keeping their life style the two bent on keeping intruders out so as to survive. When the lands were new accommodating others was good for safety and help but as recourses became scares no new comers were welcome. Humanity extends first to self then to others a species built on selfishness and self preservation not species preservation and sacrificing charity. A lovely and thought provoking poem
August 26th, 2025 08:12
Womb on Trial
sorenbarrett said:
The world needs someone to blame and extends its roots looking for shame. A scapegoat is required for every sacrifice and nothing less will suffice. A poignant poem with some very good lines and metaphor
August 24th, 2025 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
The world needs someone to blame and extends its roots looking for shame. A scapegoat is required for every sacrifice and nothing less will suffice. A poignant poem with some very good lines and metaphor
August 24th, 2025 13:24
Womb on Trial
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful twist on the old saying that love is blind. Too true to catch the attention of new lovers and too late to relight the fire of those that have been scorched. A beautiful poem too full of truth to hang on the wall but instead hidden in the pages of dusty volumes of a library we all walk by but seldom enter. A fave
August 19th, 2025 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful twist on the old saying that love is blind. Too true to catch the attention of new lovers and too late to relight the fire of those that have been scorched. A beautiful poem too full of truth to hang on the wall but instead hidden in the pages of dusty volumes of a library we all walk by but seldom enter. A fave
August 19th, 2025 07:29
Peace is in Pieces
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant and thought out write, and sadly very true, nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 09:32
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant and thought out write, and sadly very true, nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 09:32
Peace is in Pieces
sorenbarrett said:
Plays on words make the central line of this poem. It plays through it like a chorus. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
Plays on words make the central line of this poem. It plays through it like a chorus. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 09:25
I Want That World
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of wanting an ideal world which we will never get, some greats lines in this, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 08:48
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of wanting an ideal world which we will never get, some greats lines in this, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 08:48
I Want That World
sorenbarrett said:
An ideal world we all wish for but never get. It is what it is and like it of lump it we have to deal with it. A great read
August 14th, 2025 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
An ideal world we all wish for but never get. It is what it is and like it of lump it we have to deal with it. A great read
August 14th, 2025 08:38
Are all Numbers Dead?
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted and written write, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 07:23
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted and written write, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 07:23
Are all Numbers Dead?
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording with alliteration help take the concept of this poem to new heights. Numbers are just that an abstract concept to conceptualize concrete events. Very nicely done
August 10th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording with alliteration help take the concept of this poem to new heights. Numbers are just that an abstract concept to conceptualize concrete events. Very nicely done
August 10th, 2025 04:28
Picnic at the Paradox
Poetic Licence said:
What a wonderfully crafted and thought out write, although done in a tongue in cheek way it references the present day struggles and experience\'s that many nations still have to endure and survive, nicely expressed and written
August 8th, 2025 10:11
Poetic Licence said:
What a wonderfully crafted and thought out write, although done in a tongue in cheek way it references the present day struggles and experience\'s that many nations still have to endure and survive, nicely expressed and written
August 8th, 2025 10:11
Picnic at the Paradox
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well the three stooges as a child and it seems that they are archetypes of present day politics. Nicely crafted
August 8th, 2025 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well the three stooges as a child and it seems that they are archetypes of present day politics. Nicely crafted
August 8th, 2025 10:01
Modern Day Macbeth
2781 said:
It sounded like a critique on the Gaza war, or am I once again, off the track?
August 6th, 2025 06:56
2781 said:
It sounded like a critique on the Gaza war, or am I once again, off the track?
August 6th, 2025 06:56
Modern Day Macbeth
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the horror of war which is built into the Human DNA built on human greed, money to be made, power to be taken, primitive desire for revenge, rigid inability to accept differences in others be it religion, race, or values. A powerful write
August 6th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the horror of war which is built into the Human DNA built on human greed, money to be made, power to be taken, primitive desire for revenge, rigid inability to accept differences in others be it religion, race, or values. A powerful write
August 6th, 2025 05:07
Before The Sun Sets
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of being taken advantage of and overwork but then in some way are we not this maid?
July 30th, 2025 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of being taken advantage of and overwork but then in some way are we not this maid?
July 30th, 2025 10:50
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