Comments received on poems by Awam
Advice
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely rhymed this poem fits so well with the term it portrays. It flows like advice free and given on every side. A wonderful poem and a fave
November 2nd, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely rhymed this poem fits so well with the term it portrays. It flows like advice free and given on every side. A wonderful poem and a fave
November 2nd, 2025 05:03
Raised by Mannequin
Rocky Lagou said:
Oooof this is great! I love a good persona poem and this perspective from which you write from is very eye opening. “Silent saints of scarcity.” Ah! I love me a good alliterative line.
November 1st, 2025 09:39
Rocky Lagou said:
Oooof this is great! I love a good persona poem and this perspective from which you write from is very eye opening. “Silent saints of scarcity.” Ah! I love me a good alliterative line.
November 1st, 2025 09:39
Raised by Mannequin
sorenbarrett said:
This is creative and individualistic in nature a great metaphor of consumerism painted in a mannequin and of capitalism in a store window and shopping cart. Lovely
November 1st, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
This is creative and individualistic in nature a great metaphor of consumerism painted in a mannequin and of capitalism in a store window and shopping cart. Lovely
November 1st, 2025 04:25
Oranges
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of metaphor where oranges and lemons are the fruits of the garden and the seeds sprout. Well done
October 30th, 2025 09:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of metaphor where oranges and lemons are the fruits of the garden and the seeds sprout. Well done
October 30th, 2025 09:54
Clock
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in this poem. Are we not like the clock. A fun read full of great images as well it ticks its way along and winds down and I was expecting it to say (apart) rather than part at the end.
October 29th, 2025 10:19
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in this poem. Are we not like the clock. A fun read full of great images as well it ticks its way along and winds down and I was expecting it to say (apart) rather than part at the end.
October 29th, 2025 10:19
Clout
sorenbarrett said:
Such social commentary in vivid metaphor that uncovers civility\'s darker nature and false front. So well imaged and with great rhyme and flow. It mirrors the veneer of society and what lays beneath.
October 28th, 2025 07:52
sorenbarrett said:
Such social commentary in vivid metaphor that uncovers civility\'s darker nature and false front. So well imaged and with great rhyme and flow. It mirrors the veneer of society and what lays beneath.
October 28th, 2025 07:52
Decorated Mule
sorenbarrett said:
For those in power ignorance of the masses is in their best interest. A lovely write of a dystopia not far from where we are.
October 27th, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
For those in power ignorance of the masses is in their best interest. A lovely write of a dystopia not far from where we are.
October 27th, 2025 06:54
Tabled, as always
sorenbarrett said:
The old saying (opinions are like assholes everybody has one) but actually they are more like fingerprints with everyone\'s being different. There are no right ones or wrong just different and everyone thinks that theirs is sacred. Wars are started that way. A good write
October 25th, 2025 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
The old saying (opinions are like assholes everybody has one) but actually they are more like fingerprints with everyone\'s being different. There are no right ones or wrong just different and everyone thinks that theirs is sacred. Wars are started that way. A good write
October 25th, 2025 09:56
Yet to
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of women as a commodity to be looked at, coveted, lusted after, bought and sold. Well written
October 23rd, 2025 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of women as a commodity to be looked at, coveted, lusted after, bought and sold. Well written
October 23rd, 2025 06:43
Curses are Nurses
sorenbarrett said:
Mixing clever wordplay and rhyme this poem sends its message well. Fun to read and with a good message it is a fave
October 21st, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
Mixing clever wordplay and rhyme this poem sends its message well. Fun to read and with a good message it is a fave
October 21st, 2025 06:54
Twirl of Genocide
NinjaGirl said:
Wow...I\'m so glad you wrote a poem to inform us about it!
October 20th, 2025 21:04
NinjaGirl said:
Wow...I\'m so glad you wrote a poem to inform us about it!
October 20th, 2025 21:04
Twirl of Genocide
sorenbarrett said:
It has always been interesting to me how some cultural customs are viewed differently by other cultures and change over the years. Western cultural customs may be viewed as just as cruel by outsiders but go unnoticed within the culture. We judge and those that have power enforce. A good read
October 20th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
It has always been interesting to me how some cultural customs are viewed differently by other cultures and change over the years. Western cultural customs may be viewed as just as cruel by outsiders but go unnoticed within the culture. We judge and those that have power enforce. A good read
October 20th, 2025 05:18
Heartquake
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of a narrative poem and a message as well. Nicely crafted and well worded with great metaphor and splendid images it speaks to me and a fave
October 18th, 2025 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of a narrative poem and a message as well. Nicely crafted and well worded with great metaphor and splendid images it speaks to me and a fave
October 18th, 2025 09:40
A Nation built of Corridors
sorenbarrett said:
Full of symbolism this poem speaks in metaphor. Well crafted.
October 17th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Full of symbolism this poem speaks in metaphor. Well crafted.
October 17th, 2025 04:32
Venture of Chemistry
sorenbarrett said:
A geologic poem of grit and determination great metaphors for something solid and persevering. Nicely done
October 13th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A geologic poem of grit and determination great metaphors for something solid and persevering. Nicely done
October 13th, 2025 03:58
Lines of Hope
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very entertaining and fun read delivering it\'s message in an enjoyable way, well written
October 10th, 2025 15:45
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very entertaining and fun read delivering it\'s message in an enjoyable way, well written
October 10th, 2025 15:45
Lines of Hope
sorenbarrett said:
This fun story told in a child like manner is a message in and of itself and with fun rhyme it gets a fave
October 10th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
This fun story told in a child like manner is a message in and of itself and with fun rhyme it gets a fave
October 10th, 2025 04:21
Sodium Sky
sorenbarrett said:
Here a menace that we have created now a threat. I think of Hitchcock\'s The Birds and at another layer Mary Shelly\'s Frankenstein. In feeding them we foster their growth, concentrated in cities where they can not be shot and protected by animal rights groups they thrive to the detriment of the ecosystem and us. A fave
October 7th, 2025 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
Here a menace that we have created now a threat. I think of Hitchcock\'s The Birds and at another layer Mary Shelly\'s Frankenstein. In feeding them we foster their growth, concentrated in cities where they can not be shot and protected by animal rights groups they thrive to the detriment of the ecosystem and us. A fave
October 7th, 2025 06:49
Dry Ice
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a modern art work of piecing words and alliteration about a drug that is mind altering as well. Well done
October 5th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a modern art work of piecing words and alliteration about a drug that is mind altering as well. Well done
October 5th, 2025 04:16
Anatomy of Peace
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words pull at weak accords. Powerful lines for tenuous promises. To stop a man from fighting is like telling him to stop breathing his selfishness prevails. A lovely write
October 4th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words pull at weak accords. Powerful lines for tenuous promises. To stop a man from fighting is like telling him to stop breathing his selfishness prevails. A lovely write
October 4th, 2025 03:54
Harroween
sorenbarrett said:
I love the similes and allegories in this poem most original in its satire it flows and gains a fave
October 1st, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
I love the similes and allegories in this poem most original in its satire it flows and gains a fave
October 1st, 2025 04:27
The Deed
sorenbarrett said:
Unconventional, most interesting juxtapositions, graphic and symbolic it speaks to me and a fave
September 26th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Unconventional, most interesting juxtapositions, graphic and symbolic it speaks to me and a fave
September 26th, 2025 03:49
Brunch of Beasts
Keeter C said:
Nice read and so much can be read into it.
September 18th, 2025 23:52
Keeter C said:
Nice read and so much can be read into it.
September 18th, 2025 23:52
Grapevine
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this metaphoric work is very close to one that I a posting tomorrow. Very nice and a fave
September 18th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this metaphoric work is very close to one that I a posting tomorrow. Very nice and a fave
September 18th, 2025 08:21
Like a Number
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
The poem leaves a lingering sense of sorrow, blending innocence and mortality, forcing the reader to confront both the fragility and uniqueness of life. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:38
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
The poem leaves a lingering sense of sorrow, blending innocence and mortality, forcing the reader to confront both the fragility and uniqueness of life. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:38
Like a Number
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to me a poem of refugees, war victims, a hard read but well done a fave
September 17th, 2025 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to me a poem of refugees, war victims, a hard read but well done a fave
September 17th, 2025 09:34
Rules are made of Rubber
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that feels on the surface like a poem for children but just below the surface lurks a cynical commentary on the justice system and how people legally get around the system. The intent of the law means nothing it is the letter of the law that is enforced. A lovely write and a fave
September 16th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that feels on the surface like a poem for children but just below the surface lurks a cynical commentary on the justice system and how people legally get around the system. The intent of the law means nothing it is the letter of the law that is enforced. A lovely write and a fave
September 16th, 2025 04:38
Brunch of Beasts
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a politicians brunch to me. Really great images with what appears to be incongruous combinations that in fact make great sense as metaphors for a world crazier than Alice\'s Wonderland. Nicely done a fave
September 15th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a politicians brunch to me. Really great images with what appears to be incongruous combinations that in fact make great sense as metaphors for a world crazier than Alice\'s Wonderland. Nicely done a fave
September 15th, 2025 04:27
Tracing Outlines
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
‘I used to believe in conversations,
Now I just nod my head
and surrender to the script.‘ This is powerful ‘I use to believe’ the repetition makes it engaging. Nice work.
Believe. Nicely written.
September 12th, 2025 11:20
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
‘I used to believe in conversations,
Now I just nod my head
and surrender to the script.‘ This is powerful ‘I use to believe’ the repetition makes it engaging. Nice work.
Believe. Nicely written.
September 12th, 2025 11:20
Tracing Outlines
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the lines in this poem of self doubt and questions. A poem of darkness of thought. Well done
September 12th, 2025 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the lines in this poem of self doubt and questions. A poem of darkness of thought. Well done
September 12th, 2025 09:32
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