Comments received on poems by Sharvi
Don\'t fly
Poetic Licence said:
We are guilty of this, trying to go that step to far, nicely expressed and written
July 21st, 2025 06:44
Poetic Licence said:
We are guilty of this, trying to go that step to far, nicely expressed and written
July 21st, 2025 06:44
Don\'t fly
MatPie said:
To dream the impossible is reality hitting you onto the ground!
July 20th, 2025 13:49
MatPie said:
To dream the impossible is reality hitting you onto the ground!
July 20th, 2025 13:49
Don\'t fly
sorenbarrett said:
As a desire so common to children and adults this poem seems a metaphor as well of trying to reach beyond one\'s abilities. Nicely written
July 20th, 2025 13:17
sorenbarrett said:
As a desire so common to children and adults this poem seems a metaphor as well of trying to reach beyond one\'s abilities. Nicely written
July 20th, 2025 13:17
Betrayal, is it?
Poetic Licence said:
A original write of jealously, claiming it back from heavenly bodies, very nicely written
July 17th, 2025 12:03
Poetic Licence said:
A original write of jealously, claiming it back from heavenly bodies, very nicely written
July 17th, 2025 12:03
Betrayal, is it?
sorenbarrett said:
A unique poem of jealousy in metaphor it may speak of a person but as it speaks of nature it personifies the heavenly bodies. Well done and quite original.
July 17th, 2025 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
A unique poem of jealousy in metaphor it may speak of a person but as it speaks of nature it personifies the heavenly bodies. Well done and quite original.
July 17th, 2025 10:56
