Comments received on poems by William Hromada
Patience
sorenbarrett said:
\"I listen to the small chaos of her morning
and feel the minute hand loosen its grip.
She is late to every date
the way tides are late to the moon:
not careless,
simply answering a different clock.\"
What a marvelous passage... This is simply a masterful poem!! It speaks so normal in an average man\'s view turned into such poetic metaphor and line after line of identifiable but well crafted verse. Brilliant! A definite fave
November 17th, 2025 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
\"I listen to the small chaos of her morning
and feel the minute hand loosen its grip.
She is late to every date
the way tides are late to the moon:
not careless,
simply answering a different clock.\"
What a marvelous passage... This is simply a masterful poem!! It speaks so normal in an average man\'s view turned into such poetic metaphor and line after line of identifiable but well crafted verse. Brilliant! A definite fave
November 17th, 2025 11:09
4 months
sorenbarrett said:
So short and yet full of romance a great short.
November 16th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
So short and yet full of romance a great short.
November 16th, 2025 09:41
Sunny fall day
sorenbarrett said:
Some feelings are enough in and of themselves and need no justification. I feel the peace and warmth in this short poem of tranquility. Lovely
November 15th, 2025 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
Some feelings are enough in and of themselves and need no justification. I feel the peace and warmth in this short poem of tranquility. Lovely
November 15th, 2025 08:05
If I could help
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful reassurance resides in this poem it is calming and warm nicely done
November 14th, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful reassurance resides in this poem it is calming and warm nicely done
November 14th, 2025 09:53
If I could help
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that I remember this in a different form. To take on oneself the burden of another. To carry another\'s load. Well written
November 13th, 2025 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that I remember this in a different form. To take on oneself the burden of another. To carry another\'s load. Well written
November 13th, 2025 19:40
I make you happy
sorenbarrett said:
Mutual love is a win win situation. A lovely write
November 11th, 2025 15:01
sorenbarrett said:
Mutual love is a win win situation. A lovely write
November 11th, 2025 15:01
I am With You
Nayak said:
lovely, reminds me a of a voyage, chanting \"We\'re not afraid to die... if we can all be together\"
November 11th, 2025 06:45
Nayak said:
lovely, reminds me a of a voyage, chanting \"We\'re not afraid to die... if we can all be together\"
November 11th, 2025 06:45
I am With You
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic declaration of staying in there come hell or high water. Nicely said
November 10th, 2025 18:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic declaration of staying in there come hell or high water. Nicely said
November 10th, 2025 18:28
I am With You
hzugman said:
A message of unconditional love and support. Nice!
November 10th, 2025 11:12
hzugman said:
A message of unconditional love and support. Nice!
November 10th, 2025 11:12
I am With You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of no fear. Lovely persistence and dependability. Loved it
November 7th, 2025 15:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of no fear. Lovely persistence and dependability. Loved it
November 7th, 2025 15:12
Your Worries are Mine
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully framed with each darkness matched with light and fears and worries matched with company and a fresh start. Great images and lines in this poem
\"Your worries wrap \'round my heart, a familiar ache, Like whispers of doubt in the morning\'s quiet wake.\" lovely! fave
November 6th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully framed with each darkness matched with light and fears and worries matched with company and a fresh start. Great images and lines in this poem
\"Your worries wrap \'round my heart, a familiar ache, Like whispers of doubt in the morning\'s quiet wake.\" lovely! fave
November 6th, 2025 07:02
Meant to Be
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded with clever metaphors it wends its way toward its message of love. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded with clever metaphors it wends its way toward its message of love. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 09:13
Meant to Be
Niko Papadatos said:
Incredible poem about love. Out of all the love poems I have read in my short life, the ones you produce are among my favorite
November 4th, 2025 08:44
Niko Papadatos said:
Incredible poem about love. Out of all the love poems I have read in my short life, the ones you produce are among my favorite
November 4th, 2025 08:44
Lucky Guy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of declaration and recognition. It speaks of being lucky and how fortunate that is. Loved this poem
November 3rd, 2025 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of declaration and recognition. It speaks of being lucky and how fortunate that is. Loved this poem
November 3rd, 2025 09:46
I’ll wait
Iamjo said:
There’s something so beautiful about waiting. At times hurtful, it feels rewarding. Thanks for sharing 🫶
November 2nd, 2025 07:32
Iamjo said:
There’s something so beautiful about waiting. At times hurtful, it feels rewarding. Thanks for sharing 🫶
November 2nd, 2025 07:32
I’ll wait
sorenbarrett said:
Wistful, hauntingly romantic and with a longing that reaches out beyond space and time. Lovely and a fave
November 2nd, 2025 07:31
sorenbarrett said:
Wistful, hauntingly romantic and with a longing that reaches out beyond space and time. Lovely and a fave
November 2nd, 2025 07:31
Not ready for cold
David Welch said:
Real-life or metaphor, make sure you got a good hot water heater. Goes a long way to lessen the bite...
November 1st, 2025 11:35
David Welch said:
Real-life or metaphor, make sure you got a good hot water heater. Goes a long way to lessen the bite...
November 1st, 2025 11:35
Not ready for cold
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful true of the season but also as a metaphor true of age.
November 1st, 2025 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful true of the season but also as a metaphor true of age.
November 1st, 2025 11:10
Silence
Rocky Lagou said:
Yeah, peace is so elusive. Mere silence isn’t enough. A more powerful force(s) is necessary for such an unattainable desire. I love this 🤍
November 1st, 2025 01:45
Rocky Lagou said:
Yeah, peace is so elusive. Mere silence isn’t enough. A more powerful force(s) is necessary for such an unattainable desire. I love this 🤍
November 1st, 2025 01:45
Silence
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here. (a child\'s laugh as soft as snow) now that\'s a good one. Very nicely crafted
October 31st, 2025 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here. (a child\'s laugh as soft as snow) now that\'s a good one. Very nicely crafted
October 31st, 2025 10:14
Your heart
sorenbarrett said:
I love these shorts that I often view more as quotes than poems but the two often become intertwined. Nicely done
October 30th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
I love these shorts that I often view more as quotes than poems but the two often become intertwined. Nicely done
October 30th, 2025 04:06
Sorry
sorenbarrett said:
An apology in poetic form that speaks of asking for forgiveness for unintended harm done. Well written it sets the tone and leaves a feeling of sorrow behind.
October 28th, 2025 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
An apology in poetic form that speaks of asking for forgiveness for unintended harm done. Well written it sets the tone and leaves a feeling of sorrow behind.
October 28th, 2025 07:47
Fall
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful depiction of fall or autumn, cooling and death but a fresh feel in the air. Metaphor as well? Lovely images.
October 27th, 2025 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful depiction of fall or autumn, cooling and death but a fresh feel in the air. Metaphor as well? Lovely images.
October 27th, 2025 06:14
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