Comments received on poems by William Hromada
Windows
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! The eyes are the window to the soul. In this poem this is expanded upon and with great images. Lovely
December 3rd, 2025 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! The eyes are the window to the soul. In this poem this is expanded upon and with great images. Lovely
December 3rd, 2025 15:47
Windows
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words of sensitivity where the eyes are the mirror of the soul
November 30th, 2025 18:38
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words of sensitivity where the eyes are the mirror of the soul
November 30th, 2025 18:38
Windows
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the deep emotional connection between two individuals, using the metaphor of eyes as windows to convey intimacy and insight into one\'s inner thoughts and feelings.
November 30th, 2025 17:20
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the deep emotional connection between two individuals, using the metaphor of eyes as windows to convey intimacy and insight into one\'s inner thoughts and feelings.
November 30th, 2025 17:20
Chilly day by pool
sorenbarrett said:
A dip in a chilly pool can be refreshing or chilling and if cold enough can take your breath away. Lovely
November 29th, 2025 17:43
sorenbarrett said:
A dip in a chilly pool can be refreshing or chilling and if cold enough can take your breath away. Lovely
November 29th, 2025 17:43
Chilly day by pool
sorenbarrett said:
The change of the seasons expressed in this poem. Well written
November 28th, 2025 13:53
sorenbarrett said:
The change of the seasons expressed in this poem. Well written
November 28th, 2025 13:53
If I Were a Book
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads more refined that its predecessor with greater smoothness and clarity
November 25th, 2025 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads more refined that its predecessor with greater smoothness and clarity
November 25th, 2025 08:44
If I Were a Book
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy with so many points made. We all are our own book a diary that changes day to day. Well done
November 24th, 2025 15:48
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy with so many points made. We all are our own book a diary that changes day to day. Well done
November 24th, 2025 15:48
Fall skies
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and romantic the same in this poem. Most lovely
November 23rd, 2025 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and romantic the same in this poem. Most lovely
November 23rd, 2025 13:43
Fall Rain
sorenbarrett said:
I love the merging of the decomposed with beauty and the focus on the good in what is. A mental state of stoicism in the positive sense. Lovely wording and images a fave
November 22nd, 2025 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
I love the merging of the decomposed with beauty and the focus on the good in what is. A mental state of stoicism in the positive sense. Lovely wording and images a fave
November 22nd, 2025 14:36
If I could help
Megan Blaney said:
This sounds like something my partner would say to me, if he was a poet
November 20th, 2025 14:15
Megan Blaney said:
This sounds like something my partner would say to me, if he was a poet
November 20th, 2025 14:15
Confidence
sorenbarrett said:
This poem I recognize as one you have reworked still holds many of its past great features and holds its charm with a new sense of grace. Well done
November 20th, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
This poem I recognize as one you have reworked still holds many of its past great features and holds its charm with a new sense of grace. Well done
November 20th, 2025 09:02
Confidence
Demar Desu said:
Damn this the type of poem I would send to my wife. 10/10!
November 20th, 2025 08:59
Demar Desu said:
Damn this the type of poem I would send to my wife. 10/10!
November 20th, 2025 08:59
My world
sorenbarrett said:
\"the way a tide returns shells to the same shore
because it cannot bear to keep them.
If the map of my days were folded small enough
to fit inside a locket,
your heartbeat would be the clasp
that keeps the whole world from spilling out.\"
Such a wonderful string of thoughts in this part of the poem. The whole poem full of great lines a lovely piece of work. I have to say I have grown tired of most love poems that are often so trite but this one bursts forth in wonderful lines. Loved it. A fave
November 19th, 2025 15:22
sorenbarrett said:
\"the way a tide returns shells to the same shore
because it cannot bear to keep them.
If the map of my days were folded small enough
to fit inside a locket,
your heartbeat would be the clasp
that keeps the whole world from spilling out.\"
Such a wonderful string of thoughts in this part of the poem. The whole poem full of great lines a lovely piece of work. I have to say I have grown tired of most love poems that are often so trite but this one bursts forth in wonderful lines. Loved it. A fave
November 19th, 2025 15:22
Patience
sorenbarrett said:
\"I listen to the small chaos of her morning
and feel the minute hand loosen its grip.
She is late to every date
the way tides are late to the moon:
not careless,
simply answering a different clock.\"
What a marvelous passage... This is simply a masterful poem!! It speaks so normal in an average man\'s view turned into such poetic metaphor and line after line of identifiable but well crafted verse. Brilliant! A definite fave
November 17th, 2025 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
\"I listen to the small chaos of her morning
and feel the minute hand loosen its grip.
She is late to every date
the way tides are late to the moon:
not careless,
simply answering a different clock.\"
What a marvelous passage... This is simply a masterful poem!! It speaks so normal in an average man\'s view turned into such poetic metaphor and line after line of identifiable but well crafted verse. Brilliant! A definite fave
November 17th, 2025 11:09
4 months
sorenbarrett said:
So short and yet full of romance a great short.
November 16th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
So short and yet full of romance a great short.
November 16th, 2025 09:41
Sunny fall day
sorenbarrett said:
Some feelings are enough in and of themselves and need no justification. I feel the peace and warmth in this short poem of tranquility. Lovely
November 15th, 2025 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
Some feelings are enough in and of themselves and need no justification. I feel the peace and warmth in this short poem of tranquility. Lovely
November 15th, 2025 08:05
If I could help
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful reassurance resides in this poem it is calming and warm nicely done
November 14th, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful reassurance resides in this poem it is calming and warm nicely done
November 14th, 2025 09:53
If I could help
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that I remember this in a different form. To take on oneself the burden of another. To carry another\'s load. Well written
November 13th, 2025 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that I remember this in a different form. To take on oneself the burden of another. To carry another\'s load. Well written
November 13th, 2025 19:40
I make you happy
sorenbarrett said:
Mutual love is a win win situation. A lovely write
November 11th, 2025 15:01
sorenbarrett said:
Mutual love is a win win situation. A lovely write
November 11th, 2025 15:01
I am With You
V. Nayak said:
lovely, reminds me a of a voyage, chanting \"We\'re not afraid to die... if we can all be together\"
November 11th, 2025 06:45
V. Nayak said:
lovely, reminds me a of a voyage, chanting \"We\'re not afraid to die... if we can all be together\"
November 11th, 2025 06:45
I am With You
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic declaration of staying in there come hell or high water. Nicely said
November 10th, 2025 18:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic declaration of staying in there come hell or high water. Nicely said
November 10th, 2025 18:28
I am With You
hzugman said:
A message of unconditional love and support. Nice!
November 10th, 2025 11:12
hzugman said:
A message of unconditional love and support. Nice!
November 10th, 2025 11:12
I am With You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of no fear. Lovely persistence and dependability. Loved it
November 7th, 2025 15:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of no fear. Lovely persistence and dependability. Loved it
November 7th, 2025 15:12
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