Comments received on poems by William Hromada



Will the Bus be Late?
Kevin Hulme said:

It\'s like Waiting for Godot.
I know what you mean.

March 18th, 2026 19:27

Will the Bus be Late?
sorenbarrett said:

This I take for a rewrite William since I remember it well or maybe its just a bad case of deja vu but it seems to read smoother this time

March 18th, 2026 07:08

Will the Bus be Late?
sorenbarrett said:

A great write that is more than a ride but that hope that hangs on with each promise made. Well done William

March 17th, 2026 14:54

Storms coming
sorenbarrett said:

The storm an allegory of life itself and within it multiple metaphors so nicely crafted each a vivid image. It is for these beautiful metaphors that I give it a fave.

March 16th, 2026 08:25

By myself is not alone
Kevin Hulme said:

Agree with your sentiments here. The Past is in everything we see. Especially our dear departed in certain objects.
Enjoyed.

March 13th, 2026 20:39

By myself is not alone
2781 said:

I like it.

March 13th, 2026 07:42

By myself is not alone
Carmen Luca said:

By myself is never alone... beautiful poem, relatable. Well crafted.

March 13th, 2026 06:57

By myself is not alone
sorenbarrett said:

A most heartfelt poem William and I know I have been there before. That solitude and quite that brings back memories and echoes of the past resounding in everything around. A wonderful piece of work and a fave

March 13th, 2026 06:22

Time fades
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem William we write our pages and with time they blur and may become illegible but the stain remains. In the same way our errors may become blurs but the stain remains. This metaphor works for many instances of life. Well written my friend

March 11th, 2026 05:08

Time fades
sorenbarrett said:

What a nice metaphor that running ink and wet paper. Well done

March 10th, 2026 18:24

Memories in my phone
sorenbarrett said:

Digital photos I have lost too many and to keep them in a cloud is a cost that never was there when they were on paper. A most engaging write

March 7th, 2026 13:58

You left not me
RSM0812 said:



March 4th, 2026 23:14

You left not me
RSM0812 said:

What beautiful message of love eternally lost. Short and sweet with amazing imagery and word placement. Nice work.:)

March 4th, 2026 23:14

You left not me
sorenbarrett said:

Silence is the loudest noise. It is deafening at times. Nicely written William

March 4th, 2026 17:08

Spring air
Poetic Licence said:

That has a very calm and soothing feel to those words, making it enjoyable to read.

March 1st, 2026 19:52

Spring air
sorenbarrett said:

Some very nice lines in this poem that is soft and warm. Well done

March 1st, 2026 14:59

Let it ride
sorenbarrett said:

Well formed a snapshot of images with a metaphor within. Yes birds have their baggage too. Nicely written

February 27th, 2026 15:32

Sound of Rain
sorenbarrett said:

Short but full of meaning it is most metaphoric. Well done.

February 26th, 2026 16:31

Sound of Rain
William Hromada said:

I didn’t mean to republish

February 26th, 2026 14:26

Sound of Rain
arqios said:

The rain tends to wash away then we towel off or blowdry clean 🕊️🙏🏻 beautiful

February 22nd, 2026 19:17

Sound of Rain
sorenbarrett said:

A most poetic thought that accompanies the images and condenses into a beautiful rain of a poem

February 22nd, 2026 16:25

I still miss you
sorenbarrett said:

Damage in a relationship does not prevent its repeat. A lovely analogy. Well done my friend

February 21st, 2026 09:07

I still miss you
sorenbarrett said:

Short but clear in how much one misses someone else. Nicely said

February 20th, 2026 17:29

Healing
sorenbarrett said:

I love how that last line leaves hope for the future. Well written my friend

February 19th, 2026 18:44

Healing
sorenbarrett said:

Haunting and moving one thing that poetry can do and should do. A lovely write and a fave

February 18th, 2026 17:39

I think it was good?
sorenbarrett said:

Pure sensation with no substance is poetic as it runs on like a stream down hill. Very nice William

February 17th, 2026 19:54

No Valentine
Vipassana said:

beautifully done

February 16th, 2026 20:13

Rain falls
Vipassana said:

really nice vibe

February 16th, 2026 20:10

Weekends turn
sorenbarrett said:

This poem has a mood well set by the imagery. William you have done what poetry is supposed to do left the feeling so strong that it is like the smell of coffee being brewed and can not be denied. A fave

February 16th, 2026 16:33

Rain falls
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Stunning poem. Especially loved \"until the whole house
leans into its rhythm.\"

February 16th, 2026 08:28

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