Comments received on poems by William Hromada
Walking in the dark
sorenbarrett said:
This wears a coat of sophistication and flare. Nicely done and excuse my blather for I have been traveling for two days without rest.
April 8th, 2026 15:20
sorenbarrett said:
This wears a coat of sophistication and flare. Nicely done and excuse my blather for I have been traveling for two days without rest.
April 8th, 2026 15:20
If I had Three Wishes
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful wishes William I was almost certain that the first wish would be for a million more. I guess that violates the code of ethics for wish making
April 7th, 2026 19:22
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful wishes William I was almost certain that the first wish would be for a million more. I guess that violates the code of ethics for wish making
April 7th, 2026 19:22
If I had Three Wishes
Katie B. said:
Very pleasant with a hint of whimsy. Thought provoking, if I had 3 wishes?
April 7th, 2026 18:42
Katie B. said:
Very pleasant with a hint of whimsy. Thought provoking, if I had 3 wishes?
April 7th, 2026 18:42
If I had Three Wishes
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem it is so nicely creative on a old subject of three wishes. So well worded
April 2nd, 2026 18:22
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem it is so nicely creative on a old subject of three wishes. So well worded
April 2nd, 2026 18:22
Cherry Blossoms
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! Nature at its best. So nicely worded with tenderness
March 29th, 2026 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! Nature at its best. So nicely worded with tenderness
March 29th, 2026 14:04
Storms coming
Vipassana said:
great imagery, and seems to be your forte.
The sky bruises purple,
a slow fist unclenching over the ridge—
clouds roll in like old debts,
heavy with what they’ve carried too long.
really wonderful.
March 28th, 2026 17:15
Vipassana said:
great imagery, and seems to be your forte.
The sky bruises purple,
a slow fist unclenching over the ridge—
clouds roll in like old debts,
heavy with what they’ve carried too long.
really wonderful.
March 28th, 2026 17:15
Let it ride
Vipassana said:
nicely done, especially with lines like
I walk the sidewalk like it owes me
something—maybe a shadow
that doesn’t keep tripping over itself.
March 26th, 2026 01:46
Vipassana said:
nicely done, especially with lines like
I walk the sidewalk like it owes me
something—maybe a shadow
that doesn’t keep tripping over itself.
March 26th, 2026 01:46
Virginia weather
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely description of weather\'s secret making a joke at which we cry or laugh. Well penned
March 24th, 2026 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely description of weather\'s secret making a joke at which we cry or laugh. Well penned
March 24th, 2026 10:52
Will the Bus be Late?
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s like Waiting for Godot.
I know what you mean.
March 18th, 2026 19:27
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s like Waiting for Godot.
I know what you mean.
March 18th, 2026 19:27
Will the Bus be Late?
sorenbarrett said:
This I take for a rewrite William since I remember it well or maybe its just a bad case of deja vu but it seems to read smoother this time
March 18th, 2026 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
This I take for a rewrite William since I remember it well or maybe its just a bad case of deja vu but it seems to read smoother this time
March 18th, 2026 07:08
Will the Bus be Late?
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that is more than a ride but that hope that hangs on with each promise made. Well done William
March 17th, 2026 14:54
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that is more than a ride but that hope that hangs on with each promise made. Well done William
March 17th, 2026 14:54
Storms coming
sorenbarrett said:
The storm an allegory of life itself and within it multiple metaphors so nicely crafted each a vivid image. It is for these beautiful metaphors that I give it a fave.
March 16th, 2026 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
The storm an allegory of life itself and within it multiple metaphors so nicely crafted each a vivid image. It is for these beautiful metaphors that I give it a fave.
March 16th, 2026 08:25
By myself is not alone
Kevin Hulme said:
Agree with your sentiments here. The Past is in everything we see. Especially our dear departed in certain objects.
Enjoyed.
March 13th, 2026 20:39
Kevin Hulme said:
Agree with your sentiments here. The Past is in everything we see. Especially our dear departed in certain objects.
Enjoyed.
March 13th, 2026 20:39
By myself is not alone
Carmen Luca said:
By myself is never alone... beautiful poem, relatable. Well crafted.
March 13th, 2026 06:57
Carmen Luca said:
By myself is never alone... beautiful poem, relatable. Well crafted.
March 13th, 2026 06:57
By myself is not alone
sorenbarrett said:
A most heartfelt poem William and I know I have been there before. That solitude and quite that brings back memories and echoes of the past resounding in everything around. A wonderful piece of work and a fave
March 13th, 2026 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
A most heartfelt poem William and I know I have been there before. That solitude and quite that brings back memories and echoes of the past resounding in everything around. A wonderful piece of work and a fave
March 13th, 2026 06:22
Time fades
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem William we write our pages and with time they blur and may become illegible but the stain remains. In the same way our errors may become blurs but the stain remains. This metaphor works for many instances of life. Well written my friend
March 11th, 2026 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem William we write our pages and with time they blur and may become illegible but the stain remains. In the same way our errors may become blurs but the stain remains. This metaphor works for many instances of life. Well written my friend
March 11th, 2026 05:08
Time fades
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice metaphor that running ink and wet paper. Well done
March 10th, 2026 18:24
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice metaphor that running ink and wet paper. Well done
March 10th, 2026 18:24
Memories in my phone
sorenbarrett said:
Digital photos I have lost too many and to keep them in a cloud is a cost that never was there when they were on paper. A most engaging write
March 7th, 2026 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
Digital photos I have lost too many and to keep them in a cloud is a cost that never was there when they were on paper. A most engaging write
March 7th, 2026 13:58
You left not me
RSM0812 said:
What beautiful message of love eternally lost. Short and sweet with amazing imagery and word placement. Nice work.:)
March 4th, 2026 23:14
RSM0812 said:
What beautiful message of love eternally lost. Short and sweet with amazing imagery and word placement. Nice work.:)
March 4th, 2026 23:14
You left not me
sorenbarrett said:
Silence is the loudest noise. It is deafening at times. Nicely written William
March 4th, 2026 17:08
sorenbarrett said:
Silence is the loudest noise. It is deafening at times. Nicely written William
March 4th, 2026 17:08
Spring air
Poetic Licence said:
That has a very calm and soothing feel to those words, making it enjoyable to read.
March 1st, 2026 19:52
Poetic Licence said:
That has a very calm and soothing feel to those words, making it enjoyable to read.
March 1st, 2026 19:52
Spring air
sorenbarrett said:
Some very nice lines in this poem that is soft and warm. Well done
March 1st, 2026 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
Some very nice lines in this poem that is soft and warm. Well done
March 1st, 2026 14:59
Let it ride
sorenbarrett said:
Well formed a snapshot of images with a metaphor within. Yes birds have their baggage too. Nicely written
February 27th, 2026 15:32
sorenbarrett said:
Well formed a snapshot of images with a metaphor within. Yes birds have their baggage too. Nicely written
February 27th, 2026 15:32
Sound of Rain
sorenbarrett said:
Short but full of meaning it is most metaphoric. Well done.
February 26th, 2026 16:31
sorenbarrett said:
Short but full of meaning it is most metaphoric. Well done.
February 26th, 2026 16:31
Sound of Rain
arqios said:
The rain tends to wash away then we towel off or blowdry clean 🕊️🙏🏻 beautiful
February 22nd, 2026 19:17
arqios said:
The rain tends to wash away then we towel off or blowdry clean 🕊️🙏🏻 beautiful
February 22nd, 2026 19:17
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