Comments received on poems by William Hromada
Like No Other
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This piece is bold, magnetic, and intensely self-assured. It paints a portrait of someone unapologetically and compelling both intimidating and irresistible. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 14:48
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This piece is bold, magnetic, and intensely self-assured. It paints a portrait of someone unapologetically and compelling both intimidating and irresistible. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 14:48
Like No Other
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of who one is and the offer to have you accept them for that. Said very poetically and nicely worded
September 17th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of who one is and the offer to have you accept them for that. Said very poetically and nicely worded
September 17th, 2025 04:57
PATHS
Demar Desu said:
You talk about nature but I felt like this was a poem of love for a partner… at least that’s how I felt. Good poem
September 16th, 2025 07:10
Demar Desu said:
You talk about nature but I felt like this was a poem of love for a partner… at least that’s how I felt. Good poem
September 16th, 2025 07:10
FEAR
NinjaGirl said:
Fear certainly can be a type of fuel, which I feel like you reference in your last line. I love how you end with rising above the fear, and the anxiety.
September 15th, 2025 21:50
NinjaGirl said:
Fear certainly can be a type of fuel, which I feel like you reference in your last line. I love how you end with rising above the fear, and the anxiety.
September 15th, 2025 21:50
FEAR
sorenbarrett said:
To me fear is a bit stronger than anxiety and often comes out of it. A descriptive write of this emotion that strikes at the heart and desire for survival. Well done
September 15th, 2025 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
To me fear is a bit stronger than anxiety and often comes out of it. A descriptive write of this emotion that strikes at the heart and desire for survival. Well done
September 15th, 2025 05:51
Is It Too Soon To Love You?
Fred1794 said:
Beautifully impatient in its repetition. I can feel the sense of falling in love easily and quickly quite perfectly. I wish you luck.
September 14th, 2025 19:28
Fred1794 said:
Beautifully impatient in its repetition. I can feel the sense of falling in love easily and quickly quite perfectly. I wish you luck.
September 14th, 2025 19:28
Is It Too Soon To Love You?
Jasper said:
Okay, a lot of brilliance in this poem. I absolutely adore these images and metaphors. This poem does a good job of conveying the sweet pain of the tantalization of love. It is great. These lines are especially poignant - \"Time bends when I\'m near, / Like the light through a prism\'s hue. / Feeling\'s bloom like flowers, / Is it too soon to love you?\"
Also I feel like some of this poem was written in meter but I cannot quite tell. It\'s like WANTING to be in meter, which if you did that on purpose is brilliant because it would correspond with how you want to be in love.
Only a couple suggestions, though.
The last line is moderately confusing and I think its preceding line would make for a stronger ending. I think you may have just left it in for the rhyme.
Omit \"Feels like\" in the second line. What affect does it really produce? It negates the power of the metaphor. \"My heart\'s got its own clock\" would do just fine.
I really like this. Delightful metaphors in here, seriously man, like damn. Keep it up, I look forward to reading future stuff. 👍👍
September 14th, 2025 18:08
Jasper said:
Okay, a lot of brilliance in this poem. I absolutely adore these images and metaphors. This poem does a good job of conveying the sweet pain of the tantalization of love. It is great. These lines are especially poignant - \"Time bends when I\'m near, / Like the light through a prism\'s hue. / Feeling\'s bloom like flowers, / Is it too soon to love you?\"
Also I feel like some of this poem was written in meter but I cannot quite tell. It\'s like WANTING to be in meter, which if you did that on purpose is brilliant because it would correspond with how you want to be in love.
Only a couple suggestions, though.
The last line is moderately confusing and I think its preceding line would make for a stronger ending. I think you may have just left it in for the rhyme.
Omit \"Feels like\" in the second line. What affect does it really produce? It negates the power of the metaphor. \"My heart\'s got its own clock\" would do just fine.
I really like this. Delightful metaphors in here, seriously man, like damn. Keep it up, I look forward to reading future stuff. 👍👍
September 14th, 2025 18:08
Is It Too Soon To Love You?
sorenbarrett said:
A good question that only the author can answer. Never too soon to love but maybe too soon to commit. A great write
September 14th, 2025 17:10
sorenbarrett said:
A good question that only the author can answer. Never too soon to love but maybe too soon to commit. A great write
September 14th, 2025 17:10
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