Comments received on poems by William Hromada
Time fades
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem William we write our pages and with time they blur and may become illegible but the stain remains. In the same way our errors may become blurs but the stain remains. This metaphor works for many instances of life. Well written my friend
March 11th, 2026 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem William we write our pages and with time they blur and may become illegible but the stain remains. In the same way our errors may become blurs but the stain remains. This metaphor works for many instances of life. Well written my friend
March 11th, 2026 05:08
Time fades
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice metaphor that running ink and wet paper. Well done
March 10th, 2026 18:24
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice metaphor that running ink and wet paper. Well done
March 10th, 2026 18:24
Memories in my phone
sorenbarrett said:
Digital photos I have lost too many and to keep them in a cloud is a cost that never was there when they were on paper. A most engaging write
March 7th, 2026 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
Digital photos I have lost too many and to keep them in a cloud is a cost that never was there when they were on paper. A most engaging write
March 7th, 2026 13:58
You left not me
RSM0812 said:
What beautiful message of love eternally lost. Short and sweet with amazing imagery and word placement. Nice work.:)
March 4th, 2026 23:14
RSM0812 said:
What beautiful message of love eternally lost. Short and sweet with amazing imagery and word placement. Nice work.:)
March 4th, 2026 23:14
You left not me
sorenbarrett said:
Silence is the loudest noise. It is deafening at times. Nicely written William
March 4th, 2026 17:08
sorenbarrett said:
Silence is the loudest noise. It is deafening at times. Nicely written William
March 4th, 2026 17:08
Spring air
Poetic Licence said:
That has a very calm and soothing feel to those words, making it enjoyable to read.
March 1st, 2026 19:52
Poetic Licence said:
That has a very calm and soothing feel to those words, making it enjoyable to read.
March 1st, 2026 19:52
Spring air
sorenbarrett said:
Some very nice lines in this poem that is soft and warm. Well done
March 1st, 2026 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
Some very nice lines in this poem that is soft and warm. Well done
March 1st, 2026 14:59
Let it ride
sorenbarrett said:
Well formed a snapshot of images with a metaphor within. Yes birds have their baggage too. Nicely written
February 27th, 2026 15:32
sorenbarrett said:
Well formed a snapshot of images with a metaphor within. Yes birds have their baggage too. Nicely written
February 27th, 2026 15:32
Sound of Rain
sorenbarrett said:
Short but full of meaning it is most metaphoric. Well done.
February 26th, 2026 16:31
sorenbarrett said:
Short but full of meaning it is most metaphoric. Well done.
February 26th, 2026 16:31
Sound of Rain
arqios said:
The rain tends to wash away then we towel off or blowdry clean 🕊️🙏🏻 beautiful
February 22nd, 2026 19:17
arqios said:
The rain tends to wash away then we towel off or blowdry clean 🕊️🙏🏻 beautiful
February 22nd, 2026 19:17
Sound of Rain
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic thought that accompanies the images and condenses into a beautiful rain of a poem
February 22nd, 2026 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic thought that accompanies the images and condenses into a beautiful rain of a poem
February 22nd, 2026 16:25
I still miss you
sorenbarrett said:
Damage in a relationship does not prevent its repeat. A lovely analogy. Well done my friend
February 21st, 2026 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Damage in a relationship does not prevent its repeat. A lovely analogy. Well done my friend
February 21st, 2026 09:07
I still miss you
sorenbarrett said:
Short but clear in how much one misses someone else. Nicely said
February 20th, 2026 17:29
sorenbarrett said:
Short but clear in how much one misses someone else. Nicely said
February 20th, 2026 17:29
Healing
sorenbarrett said:
I love how that last line leaves hope for the future. Well written my friend
February 19th, 2026 18:44
sorenbarrett said:
I love how that last line leaves hope for the future. Well written my friend
February 19th, 2026 18:44
Healing
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and moving one thing that poetry can do and should do. A lovely write and a fave
February 18th, 2026 17:39
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and moving one thing that poetry can do and should do. A lovely write and a fave
February 18th, 2026 17:39
I think it was good?
sorenbarrett said:
Pure sensation with no substance is poetic as it runs on like a stream down hill. Very nice William
February 17th, 2026 19:54
sorenbarrett said:
Pure sensation with no substance is poetic as it runs on like a stream down hill. Very nice William
February 17th, 2026 19:54
Weekends turn
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a mood well set by the imagery. William you have done what poetry is supposed to do left the feeling so strong that it is like the smell of coffee being brewed and can not be denied. A fave
February 16th, 2026 16:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a mood well set by the imagery. William you have done what poetry is supposed to do left the feeling so strong that it is like the smell of coffee being brewed and can not be denied. A fave
February 16th, 2026 16:33
Rain falls
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning poem. Especially loved \"until the whole house
leans into its rhythm.\"
February 16th, 2026 08:28
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning poem. Especially loved \"until the whole house
leans into its rhythm.\"
February 16th, 2026 08:28
Rain falls
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful wording in this poem \"bruise of light\" a combination that I wish I had thought of. Beautiful a fave.
February 15th, 2026 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful wording in this poem \"bruise of light\" a combination that I wish I had thought of. Beautiful a fave.
February 15th, 2026 16:46
No Valentine
sorenbarrett said:
A good write of what love is and what one does not have or does and appreciate what is in one\'s hand
February 14th, 2026 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
A good write of what love is and what one does not have or does and appreciate what is in one\'s hand
February 14th, 2026 12:42
Breaking up is hard
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts with clear images of a broken beginning however the ending has possible multiple meanings. It is in this uncertainty that the strength of the poem lies. Nicely done
February 13th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts with clear images of a broken beginning however the ending has possible multiple meanings. It is in this uncertainty that the strength of the poem lies. Nicely done
February 13th, 2026 04:10
When I see you smile
Vipassana said:
lovely imagery, like
light spills like honey from your lips
February 12th, 2026 02:14
Vipassana said:
lovely imagery, like
light spills like honey from your lips
February 12th, 2026 02:14
It was fun
sorenbarrett said:
How brief is the sensation be it joy, excitement, passion any activity. Here and gone, even fear and panic might be the same. A lovely write so brief itself. It was fun while it lasted.
January 25th, 2026 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
How brief is the sensation be it joy, excitement, passion any activity. Here and gone, even fear and panic might be the same. A lovely write so brief itself. It was fun while it lasted.
January 25th, 2026 07:24
She sees me
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of defects detected of magnetic pull power and pain, the undefeatable force of love. A cleansing of disturbances and the awareness of how small one is in comparison to knowledge. Well written
January 11th, 2026 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of defects detected of magnetic pull power and pain, the undefeatable force of love. A cleansing of disturbances and the awareness of how small one is in comparison to knowledge. Well written
January 11th, 2026 14:26
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