Comments received on poems by William Hromada
Confidence
sorenbarrett said:
This poem I recognize as one you have reworked still holds many of its past great features and holds its charm with a new sense of grace. Well done
November 20th, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
This poem I recognize as one you have reworked still holds many of its past great features and holds its charm with a new sense of grace. Well done
November 20th, 2025 09:02
Confidence
Demar Desu said:
Damn this the type of poem I would send to my wife. 10/10!
November 20th, 2025 08:59
Demar Desu said:
Damn this the type of poem I would send to my wife. 10/10!
November 20th, 2025 08:59
My world
sorenbarrett said:
\"the way a tide returns shells to the same shore
because it cannot bear to keep them.
If the map of my days were folded small enough
to fit inside a locket,
your heartbeat would be the clasp
that keeps the whole world from spilling out.\"
Such a wonderful string of thoughts in this part of the poem. The whole poem full of great lines a lovely piece of work. I have to say I have grown tired of most love poems that are often so trite but this one bursts forth in wonderful lines. Loved it. A fave
November 19th, 2025 15:22
sorenbarrett said:
\"the way a tide returns shells to the same shore
because it cannot bear to keep them.
If the map of my days were folded small enough
to fit inside a locket,
your heartbeat would be the clasp
that keeps the whole world from spilling out.\"
Such a wonderful string of thoughts in this part of the poem. The whole poem full of great lines a lovely piece of work. I have to say I have grown tired of most love poems that are often so trite but this one bursts forth in wonderful lines. Loved it. A fave
November 19th, 2025 15:22
Patience
sorenbarrett said:
\"I listen to the small chaos of her morning
and feel the minute hand loosen its grip.
She is late to every date
the way tides are late to the moon:
not careless,
simply answering a different clock.\"
What a marvelous passage... This is simply a masterful poem!! It speaks so normal in an average man\'s view turned into such poetic metaphor and line after line of identifiable but well crafted verse. Brilliant! A definite fave
November 17th, 2025 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
\"I listen to the small chaos of her morning
and feel the minute hand loosen its grip.
She is late to every date
the way tides are late to the moon:
not careless,
simply answering a different clock.\"
What a marvelous passage... This is simply a masterful poem!! It speaks so normal in an average man\'s view turned into such poetic metaphor and line after line of identifiable but well crafted verse. Brilliant! A definite fave
November 17th, 2025 11:09
4 months
sorenbarrett said:
So short and yet full of romance a great short.
November 16th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
So short and yet full of romance a great short.
November 16th, 2025 09:41
Sunny fall day
sorenbarrett said:
Some feelings are enough in and of themselves and need no justification. I feel the peace and warmth in this short poem of tranquility. Lovely
November 15th, 2025 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
Some feelings are enough in and of themselves and need no justification. I feel the peace and warmth in this short poem of tranquility. Lovely
November 15th, 2025 08:05
If I could help
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful reassurance resides in this poem it is calming and warm nicely done
November 14th, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful reassurance resides in this poem it is calming and warm nicely done
November 14th, 2025 09:53
If I could help
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that I remember this in a different form. To take on oneself the burden of another. To carry another\'s load. Well written
November 13th, 2025 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that I remember this in a different form. To take on oneself the burden of another. To carry another\'s load. Well written
November 13th, 2025 19:40
I make you happy
sorenbarrett said:
Mutual love is a win win situation. A lovely write
November 11th, 2025 15:01
sorenbarrett said:
Mutual love is a win win situation. A lovely write
November 11th, 2025 15:01
I am With You
Nayak said:
lovely, reminds me a of a voyage, chanting \"We\'re not afraid to die... if we can all be together\"
November 11th, 2025 06:45
Nayak said:
lovely, reminds me a of a voyage, chanting \"We\'re not afraid to die... if we can all be together\"
November 11th, 2025 06:45
I am With You
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic declaration of staying in there come hell or high water. Nicely said
November 10th, 2025 18:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic declaration of staying in there come hell or high water. Nicely said
November 10th, 2025 18:28
I am With You
hzugman said:
A message of unconditional love and support. Nice!
November 10th, 2025 11:12
hzugman said:
A message of unconditional love and support. Nice!
November 10th, 2025 11:12
I am With You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of no fear. Lovely persistence and dependability. Loved it
November 7th, 2025 15:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of no fear. Lovely persistence and dependability. Loved it
November 7th, 2025 15:12
Your Worries are Mine
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully framed with each darkness matched with light and fears and worries matched with company and a fresh start. Great images and lines in this poem
\"Your worries wrap \'round my heart, a familiar ache, Like whispers of doubt in the morning\'s quiet wake.\" lovely! fave
November 6th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully framed with each darkness matched with light and fears and worries matched with company and a fresh start. Great images and lines in this poem
\"Your worries wrap \'round my heart, a familiar ache, Like whispers of doubt in the morning\'s quiet wake.\" lovely! fave
November 6th, 2025 07:02
Meant to Be
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded with clever metaphors it wends its way toward its message of love. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded with clever metaphors it wends its way toward its message of love. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 09:13
Meant to Be
Niko Papadatos said:
Incredible poem about love. Out of all the love poems I have read in my short life, the ones you produce are among my favorite
November 4th, 2025 08:44
Niko Papadatos said:
Incredible poem about love. Out of all the love poems I have read in my short life, the ones you produce are among my favorite
November 4th, 2025 08:44
Lucky Guy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of declaration and recognition. It speaks of being lucky and how fortunate that is. Loved this poem
November 3rd, 2025 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of declaration and recognition. It speaks of being lucky and how fortunate that is. Loved this poem
November 3rd, 2025 09:46
I’ll wait
Iamjo said:
There’s something so beautiful about waiting. At times hurtful, it feels rewarding. Thanks for sharing 🫶
November 2nd, 2025 07:32
Iamjo said:
There’s something so beautiful about waiting. At times hurtful, it feels rewarding. Thanks for sharing 🫶
November 2nd, 2025 07:32
I’ll wait
sorenbarrett said:
Wistful, hauntingly romantic and with a longing that reaches out beyond space and time. Lovely and a fave
November 2nd, 2025 07:31
sorenbarrett said:
Wistful, hauntingly romantic and with a longing that reaches out beyond space and time. Lovely and a fave
November 2nd, 2025 07:31
Not ready for cold
David Welch said:
Real-life or metaphor, make sure you got a good hot water heater. Goes a long way to lessen the bite...
November 1st, 2025 11:35
David Welch said:
Real-life or metaphor, make sure you got a good hot water heater. Goes a long way to lessen the bite...
November 1st, 2025 11:35
Not ready for cold
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful true of the season but also as a metaphor true of age.
November 1st, 2025 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful true of the season but also as a metaphor true of age.
November 1st, 2025 11:10
Silence
Rocky Lagou said:
Yeah, peace is so elusive. Mere silence isn’t enough. A more powerful force(s) is necessary for such an unattainable desire. I love this 🤍
November 1st, 2025 01:45
Rocky Lagou said:
Yeah, peace is so elusive. Mere silence isn’t enough. A more powerful force(s) is necessary for such an unattainable desire. I love this 🤍
November 1st, 2025 01:45
Silence
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here. (a child\'s laugh as soft as snow) now that\'s a good one. Very nicely crafted
October 31st, 2025 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here. (a child\'s laugh as soft as snow) now that\'s a good one. Very nicely crafted
October 31st, 2025 10:14
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