Comments received on poems by Natavia Hobert
I feel
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing is all or nothing the truth lies in between. Nicely written about a feeling that is not all or nothing. Well done
October 4th, 2025 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing is all or nothing the truth lies in between. Nicely written about a feeling that is not all or nothing. Well done
October 4th, 2025 11:21
My body
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the fatigue in this write. It is like a weight that drags me down. Nicely imaged it conveys its message well.
October 3rd, 2025 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the fatigue in this write. It is like a weight that drags me down. Nicely imaged it conveys its message well.
October 3rd, 2025 08:37
3-6 months they said...
sorenbarrett said:
The sadness of missing someone close no longer here. The loss of life\'s separation at death. A lovely poem in homage
October 2nd, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
The sadness of missing someone close no longer here. The loss of life\'s separation at death. A lovely poem in homage
October 2nd, 2025 07:20
On the inside and out
sorenbarrett said:
The facade and the body underneath. The main structure and the finished look. Well put in this poem. Both one and the same but the appearance is far different. Nicely penned
September 30th, 2025 21:02
sorenbarrett said:
The facade and the body underneath. The main structure and the finished look. Well put in this poem. Both one and the same but the appearance is far different. Nicely penned
September 30th, 2025 21:02
Ashes
sorenbarrett said:
It\'s not so bad that it\'s on fire but I hate when those around fan the flames. A most identifiable read.
September 28th, 2025 16:31
sorenbarrett said:
It\'s not so bad that it\'s on fire but I hate when those around fan the flames. A most identifiable read.
September 28th, 2025 16:31
My tears
sorenbarrett said:
Sad nothing more painful than a dry cry. It\'s like the dry heaves it hurts. Good write
September 27th, 2025 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
Sad nothing more painful than a dry cry. It\'s like the dry heaves it hurts. Good write
September 27th, 2025 10:10
What more do they want?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of regrets well written. It comes through sad.
September 26th, 2025 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of regrets well written. It comes through sad.
September 26th, 2025 14:52
I\'m just \"One girl\"..
sorenbarrett said:
A poem feeling so solitary and alone but still with desire and wishes well penned.
September 25th, 2025 16:05
sorenbarrett said:
A poem feeling so solitary and alone but still with desire and wishes well penned.
September 25th, 2025 16:05
Why?
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Sad poetry, many times there are people who cares and loves someone but they may not show it, or they might express themselves differently.
September 24th, 2025 16:06
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Sad poetry, many times there are people who cares and loves someone but they may not show it, or they might express themselves differently.
September 24th, 2025 16:06
Why?
sorenbarrett said:
So many feelings of isolation and rejection in this poem. Sad and most lonely
September 24th, 2025 13:54
sorenbarrett said:
So many feelings of isolation and rejection in this poem. Sad and most lonely
September 24th, 2025 13:54
Why?
Paul Bell said:
Yeah, sometimes you feel invisible out there, even in a crowded place.
When you want peace, everyone wants you, when you need people they\'ve disappeared.
September 24th, 2025 13:46
Paul Bell said:
Yeah, sometimes you feel invisible out there, even in a crowded place.
When you want peace, everyone wants you, when you need people they\'ve disappeared.
September 24th, 2025 13:46
Lately..
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of abandonment, isolation, rejection fall out of this poem and it seems that depression follows. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2025 10:31
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of abandonment, isolation, rejection fall out of this poem and it seems that depression follows. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2025 10:31
I lay here wondering...
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts in a continual chain come through in this poem where one thought leads to another. A common experience of reflections. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts in a continual chain come through in this poem where one thought leads to another. A common experience of reflections. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 08:25
Box of darkness..
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of being trapped and a feeling of helplessness as to how to escape. Well written
September 21st, 2025 11:06
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of being trapped and a feeling of helplessness as to how to escape. Well written
September 21st, 2025 11:06
I try to feel.. But I can\'t.
Keeter C said:
I’ve been there and still return for brief visits sometimes just to remind me that I don’t live there anymore.
September 21st, 2025 08:32
Keeter C said:
I’ve been there and still return for brief visits sometimes just to remind me that I don’t live there anymore.
September 21st, 2025 08:32
I try to feel.. But I can\'t.
TommyDingo said:
Fantastic poem remember though any good thing that dies inside can rise again, your heart doesnt know how to quit, because it doesnt know how to lie!. I hope your okay I promise you this whatever your problems are tomorrow they will be a little bit better!.
September 20th, 2025 17:36
TommyDingo said:
Fantastic poem remember though any good thing that dies inside can rise again, your heart doesnt know how to quit, because it doesnt know how to lie!. I hope your okay I promise you this whatever your problems are tomorrow they will be a little bit better!.
September 20th, 2025 17:36
I try to feel.. But I can\'t.
sorenbarrett said:
When all thought and feeling is gone one is gone. A sad and existentially dark poem. A lovely write
September 20th, 2025 15:43
sorenbarrett said:
When all thought and feeling is gone one is gone. A sad and existentially dark poem. A lovely write
September 20th, 2025 15:43
