Comments received on poems by John Lee
A Letter From A Villain
L. B. Mek said:
\'The villain never mattered until society held captive his innocence.
It\'s easy to point and judge him for all he is while they portray as innocent.\'
\'The villain is the one that\'s truly real in, this world of insanity, shameful righteous vanities.
So he says..
Thank you father, thank you mother, thanks to all that ever said they\'ve loved me.
Thanks for creating me, a villain and I\'m so glad to be, free from all the hypocrisy.\'
\'Father forgive them for they know not what they do.
If you come down they\'ll just make a villain of you too.\'
\'Rejected by society
Projected that it\'s all I\'ll be
And I\'d be it again
Yours truly, a villain\'
such emphatic resolve
and a powerful, Poetic voice
(even devoid of any theological alignment
I bow to your superior poetic talent
and wisdom of inclusivity, dear Poet
may your faith, ever empower you)
thank you!
April 21st, 2023 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'The villain never mattered until society held captive his innocence.
It\'s easy to point and judge him for all he is while they portray as innocent.\'
\'The villain is the one that\'s truly real in, this world of insanity, shameful righteous vanities.
So he says..
Thank you father, thank you mother, thanks to all that ever said they\'ve loved me.
Thanks for creating me, a villain and I\'m so glad to be, free from all the hypocrisy.\'
\'Father forgive them for they know not what they do.
If you come down they\'ll just make a villain of you too.\'
\'Rejected by society
Projected that it\'s all I\'ll be
And I\'d be it again
Yours truly, a villain\'
such emphatic resolve
and a powerful, Poetic voice
(even devoid of any theological alignment
I bow to your superior poetic talent
and wisdom of inclusivity, dear Poet
may your faith, ever empower you)
thank you!
April 21st, 2023 05:47
Cover Me Up (a poem)
Esteven said:
Very touching and beautifully expressed, and what makes it more special is that it comes from the heart...it is not a lot of people who are willing to open up like that so congratulations to you that you did
October 25th, 2022 08:27
Esteven said:
Very touching and beautifully expressed, and what makes it more special is that it comes from the heart...it is not a lot of people who are willing to open up like that so congratulations to you that you did
October 25th, 2022 08:27
Sea
arqios said:
When at times I find my feet at the edge of the shore this poem bears it all. It flows quite smoothly and brings the thought and heart along. Thanks for sharing. (Liked/Faved)
June 20th, 2022 03:14
arqios said:
When at times I find my feet at the edge of the shore this poem bears it all. It flows quite smoothly and brings the thought and heart along. Thanks for sharing. (Liked/Faved)
June 20th, 2022 03:14
Alternate Sanity
sylviasearcher said:
This is like the theme of my novel, Iām trying to edit it at the moment
October 4th, 2019 07:27
sylviasearcher said:
This is like the theme of my novel, Iām trying to edit it at the moment
October 4th, 2019 07:27
It Is Finished
ForeverJesus7 said:
This is a great piece. It would be nice if I could think of something nicer to say. Your writing is very true.
Persistence is key
December 12th, 2018 18:58
ForeverJesus7 said:
This is a great piece. It would be nice if I could think of something nicer to say. Your writing is very true.
Persistence is key
December 12th, 2018 18:58
Let Me Show You My Mind
Goldfinch60 said:
That mind is there otherwise you would not have been able to write these fine words.
November 4th, 2018 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
That mind is there otherwise you would not have been able to write these fine words.
November 4th, 2018 01:26
I Belong To You
John Lee said:
It\'s a song guys! Nashville cut the demo for me
June 12th, 2017 21:12
John Lee said:
It\'s a song guys! Nashville cut the demo for me
June 12th, 2017 21:12
It Is Finished
Myjoyisfull79 said:
We search and deny, we find then forget
We are blind though we see
Until we believe then we see. Wooooo!!š® Love when my mind is Blown! š
May 1st, 2017 22:55
Myjoyisfull79 said:
We search and deny, we find then forget
We are blind though we see
Until we believe then we see. Wooooo!!š® Love when my mind is Blown! š
May 1st, 2017 22:55
The Break Up
brianna jean zeiger said:
This is so powerful and beautiful! I am so sorry for your pain, but everything gets better over time!
April 18th, 2017 23:44
brianna jean zeiger said:
This is so powerful and beautiful! I am so sorry for your pain, but everything gets better over time!
April 18th, 2017 23:44
Whore
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very well written..intense...and most men can relate to it..
April 4th, 2017 03:02
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very well written..intense...and most men can relate to it..
April 4th, 2017 03:02
You Never Imagined
Augustus said:
This could be the love for the open waters of the sea. Anyway, enjoyed.
February 11th, 2017 19:39
Augustus said:
This could be the love for the open waters of the sea. Anyway, enjoyed.
February 11th, 2017 19:39
For You
John Lee said:
Thank you! I gotta find someone to turn it into music!
February 7th, 2017 20:55
John Lee said:
Thank you! I gotta find someone to turn it into music!
February 7th, 2017 20:55
Something In The Way
Christina8 said:
I love Nirvana--wearing a Nirvana tee right now! Your poem was well written but I knew it must\'ve been inspired by that song. Sorry about your broken heart! Great job!
February 5th, 2017 12:38
Christina8 said:
I love Nirvana--wearing a Nirvana tee right now! Your poem was well written but I knew it must\'ve been inspired by that song. Sorry about your broken heart! Great job!
February 5th, 2017 12:38
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