Comments received on poems by John Lee
Laundry
Tropicana said:
you're such a lyrical genius!!! you said your vocab is bad but I feel like it just comes naturally for you
July 4th, 2016 15:52
Tropicana said:
you're such a lyrical genius!!! you said your vocab is bad but I feel like it just comes naturally for you
July 4th, 2016 15:52
O\'Lord
lysistrata said:
Every time you follow your instinct when it comes to writing, you gain power,positive energy and spiritual wisdom... And it's sooo obvious in this poem,my friend.😁🌌
June 30th, 2016 08:02
lysistrata said:
Every time you follow your instinct when it comes to writing, you gain power,positive energy and spiritual wisdom... And it's sooo obvious in this poem,my friend.😁🌌
June 30th, 2016 08:02
O\'Lord
Dee said:
Hi John Lee...Emotional and heartfelt work...Many of the lines brought me to the edge of tears...especially ' I don't wanna hurt any more' ' I used almost the same line in one of my free verse poems and I wept when writing it.. and I got teary again in reading yours...Clear imagery and a beautiful plea written from the heart ..The Lord has heard you for sure ...Bravo my friend. .A pleasure to read and review this fine work....Dee
A perfect picture too....
June 30th, 2016 06:16
Dee said:
Hi John Lee...Emotional and heartfelt work...Many of the lines brought me to the edge of tears...especially ' I don't wanna hurt any more' ' I used almost the same line in one of my free verse poems and I wept when writing it.. and I got teary again in reading yours...Clear imagery and a beautiful plea written from the heart ..The Lord has heard you for sure ...Bravo my friend. .A pleasure to read and review this fine work....Dee
A perfect picture too....
June 30th, 2016 06:16
Midnight Confessions
lysistrata said:
My friend,
I just finished my confession to Bert. But if we start writing confessions, we might as well start writing our autobiographies?! Do you keep a diary John?
June 27th, 2016 15:29
lysistrata said:
My friend,
I just finished my confession to Bert. But if we start writing confessions, we might as well start writing our autobiographies?! Do you keep a diary John?
June 27th, 2016 15:29
Seventeen
lysistrata said:
Wait. Is all this stuff you write autobiographical/confessional?
If they are,let it ALL out,because you are getting better and better both artistically and mentally
(I think?)
I have guests this long weekend,hence not a line from me,so I got your message...
I would check them out next week. Thanks for taking my advice and reading my stuff.😃
June 26th, 2016 02:11
lysistrata said:
Wait. Is all this stuff you write autobiographical/confessional?
If they are,let it ALL out,because you are getting better and better both artistically and mentally
(I think?)
I have guests this long weekend,hence not a line from me,so I got your message...
I would check them out next week. Thanks for taking my advice and reading my stuff.😃
June 26th, 2016 02:11
The Monster In My Closet
John Lee said:
Oohhh!!! I just noticed the misspell! Thank you for that!
June 25th, 2016 12:59
John Lee said:
Oohhh!!! I just noticed the misspell! Thank you for that!
June 25th, 2016 12:59
The Monster In My Closet
John Lee said:
Moving into the closet expresses one detaching from the world.. locking it is not letting anyone close to them to keep from heartache. Thank you and I'll get on those pictures
June 25th, 2016 12:56
John Lee said:
Moving into the closet expresses one detaching from the world.. locking it is not letting anyone close to them to keep from heartache. Thank you and I'll get on those pictures
June 25th, 2016 12:56
The Monster In My Closet
lysistrata said:
No objections.It flows nicely...
I yet need to check you out 'there'.
Just a tiny typo:
"See I moved into this closest and I
locked it.."
When you find time,add more photos to your previous poems...
Let me know,because I want to read them ALL,before downloading your e-book.📖
June 25th, 2016 10:58
lysistrata said:
No objections.It flows nicely...
I yet need to check you out 'there'.
Just a tiny typo:
"See I moved into this closest and I
locked it.."
When you find time,add more photos to your previous poems...
Let me know,because I want to read them ALL,before downloading your e-book.📖
June 25th, 2016 10:58
Paralyzing
lysistrata said:
John,
My only tiny objection is the following bit:
"Searching for my feelings, I no longer
feel things.."
I would have preferred a different word to replace "feel".
The rest,along with the sketch you chose, can almost be 'paralyzing'!!😓😓
June 23rd, 2016 09:37
lysistrata said:
John,
My only tiny objection is the following bit:
"Searching for my feelings, I no longer
feel things.."
I would have preferred a different word to replace "feel".
The rest,along with the sketch you chose, can almost be 'paralyzing'!!😓😓
June 23rd, 2016 09:37
Therapist
lysistrata said:
It is fine.
It is splendid.
You are going deeper and deeper.
You are getting better and better,my friend.
June 21st, 2016 10:45
lysistrata said:
It is fine.
It is splendid.
You are going deeper and deeper.
You are getting better and better,my friend.
June 21st, 2016 10:45
Therapist
John Lee said:
Can anyone tell me how to post my poem the way I wrote it?? The lines are all out of whack!
June 20th, 2016 21:02
John Lee said:
Can anyone tell me how to post my poem the way I wrote it?? The lines are all out of whack!
June 20th, 2016 21:02
33rd Round
lysistrata said:
I think this could be a song! Happy Father's Day,John....
June 19th, 2016 15:56
lysistrata said:
I think this could be a song! Happy Father's Day,John....
June 19th, 2016 15:56
The Squirts
IAmJaz said:
Lmfao, I love this. There's so many days that this has happened to me.
June 19th, 2016 10:23
IAmJaz said:
Lmfao, I love this. There's so many days that this has happened to me.
June 19th, 2016 10:23
Tree On A Hill
lysistrata said:
John,I like your symbolism,but I want you to look up again your opening line and this bit at your end ("this hill we'll be free").
A tree is always FREE,no matter what...What does meekness bring? It brings happiness,spiritual maturity and growth. The roots of a Tree become stronger and the feet of a Man stand stable on the ground. I am sure you could find the right word to fix that bit...😀😯 That's the reason you are my friend!
June 18th, 2016 13:25
lysistrata said:
John,I like your symbolism,but I want you to look up again your opening line and this bit at your end ("this hill we'll be free").
A tree is always FREE,no matter what...What does meekness bring? It brings happiness,spiritual maturity and growth. The roots of a Tree become stronger and the feet of a Man stand stable on the ground. I am sure you could find the right word to fix that bit...😀😯 That's the reason you are my friend!
June 18th, 2016 13:25
Super Dad
lysistrata said:
So you are another Flawed Human Being?!
Self Knowledge could bring you Peace...
I am proud of your confession,so should your girls.
Let them know; Let them read....
June 16th, 2016 08:48
lysistrata said:
So you are another Flawed Human Being?!
Self Knowledge could bring you Peace...
I am proud of your confession,so should your girls.
Let them know; Let them read....
June 16th, 2016 08:48
Inside The Box
lysistrata said:
Saints live in flames
Wise Men next to them....
Keep writing my friend & Take a good look at my pet published with my poem,today.
June 12th, 2016 04:22
lysistrata said:
Saints live in flames
Wise Men next to them....
Keep writing my friend & Take a good look at my pet published with my poem,today.
June 12th, 2016 04:22
Moca Boy
lysistrata said:
You surprised me with your twist,John Lee.
I am neither a moca girl nor I have four legs,but I do like moca ice-cream...
Thanks for sharing your affection for animals.......
June 9th, 2016 14:56
lysistrata said:
You surprised me with your twist,John Lee.
I am neither a moca girl nor I have four legs,but I do like moca ice-cream...
Thanks for sharing your affection for animals.......
June 9th, 2016 14:56
Blood Sweat and Tears
lysistrata said:
You nailed it.
Are you into death metal?
Cheers JohnLee.😭
June 8th, 2016 08:38
lysistrata said:
You nailed it.
Are you into death metal?
Cheers JohnLee.😭
June 8th, 2016 08:38
I\'m Free
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN JOHN - If you allow the Son of God (Jesus) to make you free - You will be free indeed ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN
May 25th, 2016 11:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN JOHN - If you allow the Son of God (Jesus) to make you free - You will be free indeed ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN
May 25th, 2016 11:30
Jesus
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing JOHN a great Truth I Jesus said "Come unto me all you are weak and heavy laden and I will give you rest" He also said "I am the WAY - the TRUTH and the LIFE and no one has access to GOD except through me" "There is no other name - except the name of JESUS whereby we must be saved - AMEN". Great poem - great truth - great flow BRIAN
April 28th, 2016 13:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing JOHN a great Truth I Jesus said "Come unto me all you are weak and heavy laden and I will give you rest" He also said "I am the WAY - the TRUTH and the LIFE and no one has access to GOD except through me" "There is no other name - except the name of JESUS whereby we must be saved - AMEN". Great poem - great truth - great flow BRIAN
April 28th, 2016 13:30
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