Comments received on poems by PerditaRose
My Apology
sorenbarrett said:
Miscommunication, misunderstanding, the key to many arguments, fights and wars, breeding mistrust, anger and tragedy. Well written
November 11th, 2025 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
Miscommunication, misunderstanding, the key to many arguments, fights and wars, breeding mistrust, anger and tragedy. Well written
November 11th, 2025 07:32
The Glass Deer
sorenbarrett said:
An image dear of a deer kept near and now out of fear put behind glass clear. A touching write.
November 10th, 2025 21:15
sorenbarrett said:
An image dear of a deer kept near and now out of fear put behind glass clear. A touching write.
November 10th, 2025 21:15
November
sorenbarrett said:
A most vivid and clearly put haiku. Nicely written
November 9th, 2025 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
A most vivid and clearly put haiku. Nicely written
November 9th, 2025 16:25
Asleep
sorenbarrett said:
A race in one\'s sleep. Nicely portrayed and with a timely reveal
November 8th, 2025 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
A race in one\'s sleep. Nicely portrayed and with a timely reveal
November 8th, 2025 14:07
Night
arqios said:
Welcome to MPS! This is raw, unsettling, and beautifully put together. Thanks for sharing such a powerful piece. 🕊️🙏
November 6th, 2025 19:09
arqios said:
Welcome to MPS! This is raw, unsettling, and beautifully put together. Thanks for sharing such a powerful piece. 🕊️🙏
November 6th, 2025 19:09
Night
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is hard to put the finger on but it is special. Is it the dark topic, the rhyme scheme that feels like a heart beat and the tercets make it feel as though it is skipping a beat yet caught up in the next tercet. All merge in whole message that is haunting. Welcome to MPS with a fave
November 6th, 2025 15:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is hard to put the finger on but it is special. Is it the dark topic, the rhyme scheme that feels like a heart beat and the tercets make it feel as though it is skipping a beat yet caught up in the next tercet. All merge in whole message that is haunting. Welcome to MPS with a fave
November 6th, 2025 15:37
Night
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Perdita. And welcome to the Poetic side.
November 6th, 2025 14:47
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Perdita. And welcome to the Poetic side.
November 6th, 2025 14:47
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