Comments received on poems by ameliewho
Oblivious girl
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI AMELIE ~ YOU do look like Morticia in your AVI ! Thanks for a great poem which made me think about the message that the World Leaders are giving out ! Homo Sapiens does have superior brain and Goid gave us responsibility for Planet Earth ~ probably the only Living Planet in our Galaxy. Man is superior but He acts more like an APE than an ANGEL ! We are mucking up the Earth and unless we all go more GREEN we will destroy our habitation an there's nowhere else to go. Keep thinking and keep writing ! Love BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
September 17th, 2016 04:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI AMELIE ~ YOU do look like Morticia in your AVI ! Thanks for a great poem which made me think about the message that the World Leaders are giving out ! Homo Sapiens does have superior brain and Goid gave us responsibility for Planet Earth ~ probably the only Living Planet in our Galaxy. Man is superior but He acts more like an APE than an ANGEL ! We are mucking up the Earth and unless we all go more GREEN we will destroy our habitation an there's nowhere else to go. Keep thinking and keep writing ! Love BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
September 17th, 2016 04:27
Worthless you
Augustus said:
Sorry you had to witness. Tell me about the syrup like whisper. Syrup flows very slowly.?
September 14th, 2016 21:59
Augustus said:
Sorry you had to witness. Tell me about the syrup like whisper. Syrup flows very slowly.?
September 14th, 2016 21:59
Body Dysmorphia
Emile Dubois said:
Sadness and loss are themes that are present from the beginning, by the end an eerie presence of hopelessness, yet Ironically a wonderful insight into the world beyond the veneer.
September 14th, 2016 13:55
Emile Dubois said:
Sadness and loss are themes that are present from the beginning, by the end an eerie presence of hopelessness, yet Ironically a wonderful insight into the world beyond the veneer.
September 14th, 2016 13:55
Body Dysmorphia
Burtle said:
I can relate. I too would rather see those around me happy while I stay broken for their sake. Amazing poem. Keep writing about this. :)
May 7th, 2016 19:12
Burtle said:
I can relate. I too would rather see those around me happy while I stay broken for their sake. Amazing poem. Keep writing about this. :)
May 7th, 2016 19:12
Fuck it
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW AMELIE - You seem in a very negative mood today wanting to copulate everything into oblivion ! Are you really "Done with it all". I find the only good thing - when i reach rock bottom and want to really F**K everything is the the only way is up. What I find paradoxical is that poem with such an anarchistic content has such a rhythmic and rhymic structure ! That give me hope that by tomorrow you'll be out of the "slough of despond" and back up on the "mountain top" ! Thanks for sharing | BRIAN
April 29th, 2016 17:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW AMELIE - You seem in a very negative mood today wanting to copulate everything into oblivion ! Are you really "Done with it all". I find the only good thing - when i reach rock bottom and want to really F**K everything is the the only way is up. What I find paradoxical is that poem with such an anarchistic content has such a rhythmic and rhymic structure ! That give me hope that by tomorrow you'll be out of the "slough of despond" and back up on the "mountain top" ! Thanks for sharing | BRIAN
April 29th, 2016 17:51
Dementia
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME - and thank you for your first poem. Well crafted in elegant rhyming couplets which give the poem great flow. The subject is one we increasingly face and recently happened to a neighbour of mine. She saw her beloved husband deteriorate mentally from a respected intelligent man to unintelligible gibberish. In the end she had to put him in a home. I attended his funeral which was an excellent tribute by his Sons and for her - in a sense - it was a release and a relief. You have captured the scenario tenderly but realistically - BRIAN
April 27th, 2016 19:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME - and thank you for your first poem. Well crafted in elegant rhyming couplets which give the poem great flow. The subject is one we increasingly face and recently happened to a neighbour of mine. She saw her beloved husband deteriorate mentally from a respected intelligent man to unintelligible gibberish. In the end she had to put him in a home. I attended his funeral which was an excellent tribute by his Sons and for her - in a sense - it was a release and a relief. You have captured the scenario tenderly but realistically - BRIAN
April 27th, 2016 19:18
