Comments received on poems by StarLoom
2025
sorenbarrett said:
The chaos of this time of life with school, sports and a relationship. Nicely expressed in poetic rhyme
December 28th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
The chaos of this time of life with school, sports and a relationship. Nicely expressed in poetic rhyme
December 28th, 2025 17:40
Birthday Silence
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded in this poem is the feeling of the process of aging. Well expressed in good rhyme
December 27th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded in this poem is the feeling of the process of aging. Well expressed in good rhyme
December 27th, 2025 03:54
Singapore Days
sorenbarrett said:
This poem incorporates fond memories associated with a time and place now gone. Well done
December 26th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem incorporates fond memories associated with a time and place now gone. Well done
December 26th, 2025 03:46
Zero Point
sorenbarrett said:
Why we hide our inner child I will never know it is the most beautiful part of us and the only part of us worthy of love. A wonderful write. Happy holidays to you
December 25th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Why we hide our inner child I will never know it is the most beautiful part of us and the only part of us worthy of love. A wonderful write. Happy holidays to you
December 25th, 2025 04:13
Distant Door
sorenbarrett said:
Keep believing. A poem that lays it out there raw and open. A lovely write
December 16th, 2025 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
Keep believing. A poem that lays it out there raw and open. A lovely write
December 16th, 2025 11:13
The Girl on the Ledge
Paul Bell said:
The tribulations of growing up and entering the minefield.
On the plus side, someone else is getting cheated on now.
December 8th, 2025 13:13
Paul Bell said:
The tribulations of growing up and entering the minefield.
On the plus side, someone else is getting cheated on now.
December 8th, 2025 13:13
The Girl on the Ledge
sorenbarrett said:
The truth can hurt but not knowing can be worse. A painful poem of what love holds in store and how as a metaphor that all love has its infidelities whether actual or mental cast in fantasies. A lovely heart felt poem
December 8th, 2025 10:27
sorenbarrett said:
The truth can hurt but not knowing can be worse. A painful poem of what love holds in store and how as a metaphor that all love has its infidelities whether actual or mental cast in fantasies. A lovely heart felt poem
December 8th, 2025 10:27
Girl with Coloured eyes
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about forming love and the timidness that goes with it. Very nicely done
December 3rd, 2025 21:27
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about forming love and the timidness that goes with it. Very nicely done
December 3rd, 2025 21:27
She doesn\'t even know
sorenbarrett said:
Tender, soft and most romantic this poem puts them all together and leaves on a whimsical note. A lovely write
November 29th, 2025 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
Tender, soft and most romantic this poem puts them all together and leaves on a whimsical note. A lovely write
November 29th, 2025 11:12
