Comments received on poems by StarLoom
Alignment
sorenbarrett said:
A most in depth look at the aspects of love and boundaries. Well written with a good deal of thought and wisdom
January 28th, 2026 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
A most in depth look at the aspects of love and boundaries. Well written with a good deal of thought and wisdom
January 28th, 2026 12:08
Almost, Not Mine
sorenbarrett said:
So well written in good rhyme and flow it follows the knowledge that one is not the one and that another must be found. Well done
January 27th, 2026 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
So well written in good rhyme and flow it follows the knowledge that one is not the one and that another must be found. Well done
January 27th, 2026 10:14
Terrace Tears
sorenbarrett said:
With rhyme and near rhyme this poem tells of the fear of loosing something near and dear. The fear itself is enough to shake one to the core. Nicely written
January 14th, 2026 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
With rhyme and near rhyme this poem tells of the fear of loosing something near and dear. The fear itself is enough to shake one to the core. Nicely written
January 14th, 2026 07:43
2025
sorenbarrett said:
The chaos of this time of life with school, sports and a relationship. Nicely expressed in poetic rhyme
December 28th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
The chaos of this time of life with school, sports and a relationship. Nicely expressed in poetic rhyme
December 28th, 2025 17:40
Birthday Silence
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded in this poem is the feeling of the process of aging. Well expressed in good rhyme
December 27th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded in this poem is the feeling of the process of aging. Well expressed in good rhyme
December 27th, 2025 03:54
Singapore Days
sorenbarrett said:
This poem incorporates fond memories associated with a time and place now gone. Well done
December 26th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem incorporates fond memories associated with a time and place now gone. Well done
December 26th, 2025 03:46
Zero Point
sorenbarrett said:
Why we hide our inner child I will never know it is the most beautiful part of us and the only part of us worthy of love. A wonderful write. Happy holidays to you
December 25th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Why we hide our inner child I will never know it is the most beautiful part of us and the only part of us worthy of love. A wonderful write. Happy holidays to you
December 25th, 2025 04:13
Distant Door
sorenbarrett said:
Keep believing. A poem that lays it out there raw and open. A lovely write
December 16th, 2025 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
Keep believing. A poem that lays it out there raw and open. A lovely write
December 16th, 2025 11:13
The Girl on the Ledge
Paul Bell said:
The tribulations of growing up and entering the minefield.
On the plus side, someone else is getting cheated on now.
December 8th, 2025 13:13
Paul Bell said:
The tribulations of growing up and entering the minefield.
On the plus side, someone else is getting cheated on now.
December 8th, 2025 13:13
The Girl on the Ledge
sorenbarrett said:
The truth can hurt but not knowing can be worse. A painful poem of what love holds in store and how as a metaphor that all love has its infidelities whether actual or mental cast in fantasies. A lovely heart felt poem
December 8th, 2025 10:27
sorenbarrett said:
The truth can hurt but not knowing can be worse. A painful poem of what love holds in store and how as a metaphor that all love has its infidelities whether actual or mental cast in fantasies. A lovely heart felt poem
December 8th, 2025 10:27
Girl with Coloured eyes
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about forming love and the timidness that goes with it. Very nicely done
December 3rd, 2025 21:27
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about forming love and the timidness that goes with it. Very nicely done
December 3rd, 2025 21:27
She doesn\'t even know
sorenbarrett said:
Tender, soft and most romantic this poem puts them all together and leaves on a whimsical note. A lovely write
November 29th, 2025 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
Tender, soft and most romantic this poem puts them all together and leaves on a whimsical note. A lovely write
November 29th, 2025 11:12
