Comments received on poems by laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall
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grindbaby16 said:
I much enjoyed this poem. For some can compare. very well written
May 25th, 2016 16:59
grindbaby16 said:
I much enjoyed this poem. For some can compare. very well written
May 25th, 2016 16:59
out of place
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LAUREN - Heaven is better than this - O my what joy and bliss - Walkin' down the streets of solid Gold - Livin' in a land where we'll never grow old - Life on earth with my Lord is fine - But Heaven is better than this. Every Blessing - thanks for sharing - BRIAN
May 23rd, 2016 16:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LAUREN - Heaven is better than this - O my what joy and bliss - Walkin' down the streets of solid Gold - Livin' in a land where we'll never grow old - Life on earth with my Lord is fine - But Heaven is better than this. Every Blessing - thanks for sharing - BRIAN
May 23rd, 2016 16:46
why
laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall said:
Yes it really was i cud tell many stories but god kept me thru it an my kids too
May 11th, 2016 09:04
laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall said:
Yes it really was i cud tell many stories but god kept me thru it an my kids too
May 11th, 2016 09:04
why
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW LAUREN ! Lots and lots of vective and angst in your poem. Was it really that bad ? Thinkin' of you an' prayin' for you BRIAN
May 11th, 2016 05:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW LAUREN ! Lots and lots of vective and angst in your poem. Was it really that bad ? Thinkin' of you an' prayin' for you BRIAN
May 11th, 2016 05:27
people
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
VERY TRUE LAUREN ! Love the form of this poem - straight from your heart ! One continuous unpunctuated sentence throbbing with rhyme and rhythm ! Love the message of this poem " When we are dealing with people honesty and openness is always the best policy !" Always tell it like it is and trade truth for truth - YOURS BRIAN
May 9th, 2016 03:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
VERY TRUE LAUREN ! Love the form of this poem - straight from your heart ! One continuous unpunctuated sentence throbbing with rhyme and rhythm ! Love the message of this poem " When we are dealing with people honesty and openness is always the best policy !" Always tell it like it is and trade truth for truth - YOURS BRIAN
May 9th, 2016 03:32
mirror
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
"Mirror Mirror on the wall you tell the truth about us all" Thanks for sharin' LAUREN your short fast flowing story about the image seen in the mirror. There are many times when I don't want to face the mirror because of what I see. My face bruised in an accident or a fight - too ugly to go out - until it heals. In my experience there is nothing worse than a BATTERED WIFE & MOTHER the one least deserving of her husbands drunken wrath. Very powerful writing but a shocking topic ! Thinkin' of you - BRIAN
April 29th, 2016 10:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
"Mirror Mirror on the wall you tell the truth about us all" Thanks for sharin' LAUREN your short fast flowing story about the image seen in the mirror. There are many times when I don't want to face the mirror because of what I see. My face bruised in an accident or a fight - too ugly to go out - until it heals. In my experience there is nothing worse than a BATTERED WIFE & MOTHER the one least deserving of her husbands drunken wrath. Very powerful writing but a shocking topic ! Thinkin' of you - BRIAN
April 29th, 2016 10:35
inside thoughts
laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall said:
Thank u this was my first poem posted i have more but i am a little neevouse to post them
April 29th, 2016 00:56
laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall said:
Thank u this was my first poem posted i have more but i am a little neevouse to post them
April 29th, 2016 00:56
