Comments received on poems by Atticus_made
Heidelberg
Paul Bell said:
The student city, but definitely worth a visit.
Sure, I\'ve driven through it heading else where.
December 15th, 2025 11:52
Paul Bell said:
The student city, but definitely worth a visit.
Sure, I\'ve driven through it heading else where.
December 15th, 2025 11:52
Heidelberg
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel in this poem of antiquity and of heritage as well as a sense of quaintness and distinction. Nicely done
December 15th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel in this poem of antiquity and of heritage as well as a sense of quaintness and distinction. Nicely done
December 15th, 2025 04:00
A hinting forest
sorenbarrett said:
You got me on the artist, but the poem is beautiful
December 12th, 2025 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
You got me on the artist, but the poem is beautiful
December 12th, 2025 06:15
A jester
sorenbarrett said:
The first glance the season and the red hat with dark eyes I thought of St. Nick but then it grew serious and I knew it was not. As for the singer I do not venture to guess knowing but a hand full of modern singers and most non commercial, most of my knowledge comes from a previous generation. The poem itself is very well written and quite poetic regardless of the person. Nicely written it speaks for itself
December 11th, 2025 06:23
sorenbarrett said:
The first glance the season and the red hat with dark eyes I thought of St. Nick but then it grew serious and I knew it was not. As for the singer I do not venture to guess knowing but a hand full of modern singers and most non commercial, most of my knowledge comes from a previous generation. The poem itself is very well written and quite poetic regardless of the person. Nicely written it speaks for itself
December 11th, 2025 06:23
The letter of Amel
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as a grizzly metaphor for we reap what we sow and that as with all else neglect and abandonment breeds anger and resentment leading at times to violence. This can be turned on the innocent and even those that are nurturing and that care. There is no turning back when it has been too long time being a lock on the door. Well done nicely written in a period style the suits well the setting. The images are graphic and it has a sudden stop to it that emphasizes the meaning. Loved it
December 9th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as a grizzly metaphor for we reap what we sow and that as with all else neglect and abandonment breeds anger and resentment leading at times to violence. This can be turned on the innocent and even those that are nurturing and that care. There is no turning back when it has been too long time being a lock on the door. Well done nicely written in a period style the suits well the setting. The images are graphic and it has a sudden stop to it that emphasizes the meaning. Loved it
December 9th, 2025 04:07
The man at the end of the Dike (translated version)
sorenbarrett said:
Truly Germanic in nature this tale bears all the trimmings of a folk tale with the old style of not sugaring the tale for children. It is dark and full of meaning. Traditional in nature it reads as a classic
December 8th, 2025 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
Truly Germanic in nature this tale bears all the trimmings of a folk tale with the old style of not sugaring the tale for children. It is dark and full of meaning. Traditional in nature it reads as a classic
December 8th, 2025 06:37
