Comments received on poems by Atticus_made
Wanderer
sorenbarrett said:
All things come to the patient, dreams enacted for those that wait. Lovely
March 2nd, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
All things come to the patient, dreams enacted for those that wait. Lovely
March 2nd, 2026 04:30
Joining
lilmoonxx said:
I really like the writing style and the flow of the poem. Really takes you back to older writing. A fav
March 1st, 2026 05:04
lilmoonxx said:
I really like the writing style and the flow of the poem. Really takes you back to older writing. A fav
March 1st, 2026 05:04
Joining
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write to read, I think you can only build trust if all eyes are open, walkly blindly only leads to failure and disappointment, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 18:01
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write to read, I think you can only build trust if all eyes are open, walkly blindly only leads to failure and disappointment, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 18:01
Joining
sorenbarrett said:
To trust with eyes open is the key for me. Do not walk blind into a relationship of trust always keep eyes open even after many years. Sleep only brings dreams. Nicely done
February 27th, 2026 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
To trust with eyes open is the key for me. Do not walk blind into a relationship of trust always keep eyes open even after many years. Sleep only brings dreams. Nicely done
February 27th, 2026 06:27
The sun
sorenbarrett said:
This a poem that speaks with desire to see again one held dear. Nicely worded it has a longing feeling to it.
February 26th, 2026 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
This a poem that speaks with desire to see again one held dear. Nicely worded it has a longing feeling to it.
February 26th, 2026 04:57
New York
Friendship said:
Being from New York, I really can relate. Your poem is New York City itself, capturing its essence as a vibrant, dynamic place filled with history and modernity. It explores the dichotomy of experiences and perceptions within the city, as well as the emotional responses that arise from them.
February 25th, 2026 08:22
Friendship said:
Being from New York, I really can relate. Your poem is New York City itself, capturing its essence as a vibrant, dynamic place filled with history and modernity. It explores the dichotomy of experiences and perceptions within the city, as well as the emotional responses that arise from them.
February 25th, 2026 08:22
New York
sorenbarrett said:
Well described a tribute to a city well written. Well done
February 25th, 2026 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Well described a tribute to a city well written. Well done
February 25th, 2026 05:47
brown bears
Paul Bell said:
Beware the bear that walks with care, he\'ll sneak up behind you like you\'re not there.
Something cute about bears.
February 23rd, 2026 04:46
Paul Bell said:
Beware the bear that walks with care, he\'ll sneak up behind you like you\'re not there.
Something cute about bears.
February 23rd, 2026 04:46
brown bears
lilmoonxx said:
Silence has the loudest impact. Your poem reflects that in the most simple way. A personal fav.
February 23rd, 2026 04:01
lilmoonxx said:
Silence has the loudest impact. Your poem reflects that in the most simple way. A personal fav.
February 23rd, 2026 04:01
brown bears
sorenbarrett said:
Silence has its virtues and just because we don\'t know what or even if something is thinking does not mean that there are not thoughts there. Those signs it leaves without words are the clues. Nicely worded
February 23rd, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Silence has its virtues and just because we don\'t know what or even if something is thinking does not mean that there are not thoughts there. Those signs it leaves without words are the clues. Nicely worded
February 23rd, 2026 03:45
Grass
sorenbarrett said:
It is the small that have big dreams, but from small acorns tall trees grow. A good write
February 13th, 2026 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
It is the small that have big dreams, but from small acorns tall trees grow. A good write
February 13th, 2026 07:13
Grass
lilmoonxx said:
It shows one the simplicity of something like grass. Is the thing poking out of the grass a worm?
February 13th, 2026 06:45
lilmoonxx said:
It shows one the simplicity of something like grass. Is the thing poking out of the grass a worm?
February 13th, 2026 06:45
You.
sorenbarrett said:
It often is the mixture of sweet and sour that makes the recipe just right
February 12th, 2026 07:12
sorenbarrett said:
It often is the mixture of sweet and sour that makes the recipe just right
February 12th, 2026 07:12
A pineapple within my burger
lilmoonxx said:
I get the context lol. Is it Bangchan\'s pinapple dilemma?
February 12th, 2026 06:09
lilmoonxx said:
I get the context lol. Is it Bangchan\'s pinapple dilemma?
February 12th, 2026 06:09
Butterfly
Vipassana said:
it reads like an elegant elegy. and this line
he will shine no matter if his wings still beat or lay still framed on the wall.
I find particularly compelling
February 12th, 2026 02:13
Vipassana said:
it reads like an elegant elegy. and this line
he will shine no matter if his wings still beat or lay still framed on the wall.
I find particularly compelling
February 12th, 2026 02:13
A sight worthy only for the little prince in my heart
sorenbarrett said:
Quite an image cast in this poetic description. very nice
February 4th, 2026 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
Quite an image cast in this poetic description. very nice
February 4th, 2026 05:09
A rainy morning day
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last line that finishes the poem with a totally different view. Yes indeed people are not only curious but judgmental and associate anyone different as odd wanting to get information to gossip about. Nicely written
February 2nd, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last line that finishes the poem with a totally different view. Yes indeed people are not only curious but judgmental and associate anyone different as odd wanting to get information to gossip about. Nicely written
February 2nd, 2026 03:59
Tulips
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of what is beauty in all the senses. Nicely crafted
January 30th, 2026 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of what is beauty in all the senses. Nicely crafted
January 30th, 2026 10:05
Stars in the Sky ⟡ ݁₊ .
sorenbarrett said:
I always found it interesting that people want to name stars after themselves and there were even sites that sold that privilege. A great poem of possession even in love.
January 29th, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
I always found it interesting that people want to name stars after themselves and there were even sites that sold that privilege. A great poem of possession even in love.
January 29th, 2026 05:01
My reflection
Friendship said:
A powerful poem on oneself. Your poem suggests a struggle with self-acceptance and the fear of facing one\'s true self, as the reflection represents an aspect of the self that is neglected or misunderstood.
January 26th, 2026 05:47
Friendship said:
A powerful poem on oneself. Your poem suggests a struggle with self-acceptance and the fear of facing one\'s true self, as the reflection represents an aspect of the self that is neglected or misunderstood.
January 26th, 2026 05:47
My reflection
sorenbarrett said:
Here there is a lack of recognition as to what one has become. A great poem of reflection
January 26th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Here there is a lack of recognition as to what one has become. A great poem of reflection
January 26th, 2026 04:10
Arguments
sorenbarrett said:
Many times indeed arguments are a pointless waste of breath even if they see it with their own eyes they would not believe it their mind made up. A great poem
January 21st, 2026 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
Many times indeed arguments are a pointless waste of breath even if they see it with their own eyes they would not believe it their mind made up. A great poem
January 21st, 2026 11:04
A ruler
sorenbarrett said:
Although this poem seems to be about a close relationship for me it is nature it is directed to. A tender and lovely write
January 19th, 2026 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
Although this poem seems to be about a close relationship for me it is nature it is directed to. A tender and lovely write
January 19th, 2026 07:22
The girl and her Orange ribbons
sorenbarrett said:
We all ask why we are not like others. Why I don\'t have musical talent, good at math, a great athlete, beautiful as a model, popular. So little we understand. A wonderful write
January 16th, 2026 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
We all ask why we are not like others. Why I don\'t have musical talent, good at math, a great athlete, beautiful as a model, popular. So little we understand. A wonderful write
January 16th, 2026 06:53
The girl and her Orange ribbons
Paul Bell said:
Yes why indeed.
It\'s all conformity, got to stay in your box and not rock the boat.
Definitely don\'t mention the red ribbon, this will get you thrown out the pure house for sure.
January 16th, 2026 04:51
Paul Bell said:
Yes why indeed.
It\'s all conformity, got to stay in your box and not rock the boat.
Definitely don\'t mention the red ribbon, this will get you thrown out the pure house for sure.
January 16th, 2026 04:51
Butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor built into the word itself a tribute to musician and animal. Well done
January 14th, 2026 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor built into the word itself a tribute to musician and animal. Well done
January 14th, 2026 06:39
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