Comments received on poems by Atticus_made
A day away
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a write of excitement and joy nicely worded.
April 7th, 2026 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a write of excitement and joy nicely worded.
April 7th, 2026 19:32
Yearning
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being possessed and captured by another. Nicely written
April 6th, 2026 16:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being possessed and captured by another. Nicely written
April 6th, 2026 16:17
The truth
sorenbarrett said:
There is anticipation in this poem and a sense of desired surprise for others seen as doubters and antagonists. Well done
April 3rd, 2026 10:03
sorenbarrett said:
There is anticipation in this poem and a sense of desired surprise for others seen as doubters and antagonists. Well done
April 3rd, 2026 10:03
Apples
sorenbarrett said:
Love the shape of the poem that resembles an apple tree. Nicely done in great style
March 30th, 2026 18:57
sorenbarrett said:
Love the shape of the poem that resembles an apple tree. Nicely done in great style
March 30th, 2026 18:57
Cloud recesses
lilmoonxx said:
Love this one. Even if we keep adding complex layers to our lives, the outside world still remains simple and sometimes we fail to see that.
March 27th, 2026 14:59
lilmoonxx said:
Love this one. Even if we keep adding complex layers to our lives, the outside world still remains simple and sometimes we fail to see that.
March 27th, 2026 14:59
Cloud recesses
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of reassurance with this poem nicely penned
March 27th, 2026 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of reassurance with this poem nicely penned
March 27th, 2026 09:43
To a hero
sorenbarrett said:
It is by warmth that we characterize both love and anger in this poem it is the first and well penned
March 26th, 2026 13:16
sorenbarrett said:
It is by warmth that we characterize both love and anger in this poem it is the first and well penned
March 26th, 2026 13:16
Ephemeral
sorenbarrett said:
Playing with rhyme is like the gravity of planets and their attraction to other bodies and at times they collide in destruction and others in harmony orbit. Well done
March 25th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Playing with rhyme is like the gravity of planets and their attraction to other bodies and at times they collide in destruction and others in harmony orbit. Well done
March 25th, 2026 04:00
Absquatulate
Thomas W Case said:
Quiet hits hard here—your leaving leaves the air thick, but his kindness hangs like smoke you can’t shake.
Even in absence, the poem keeps him human, gentle, real… a small grace against the churn of everything else.
March 24th, 2026 07:28
Thomas W Case said:
Quiet hits hard here—your leaving leaves the air thick, but his kindness hangs like smoke you can’t shake.
Even in absence, the poem keeps him human, gentle, real… a small grace against the churn of everything else.
March 24th, 2026 07:28
Absquatulate
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say that there is a special fun and playfulness to the cadence and word play with rhyme in this short poem that all work so well with the theme. It is a bit haughty and conceited but fun as well. Loved it a fave
March 24th, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say that there is a special fun and playfulness to the cadence and word play with rhyme in this short poem that all work so well with the theme. It is a bit haughty and conceited but fun as well. Loved it a fave
March 24th, 2026 04:46
Absquatulate
lilmoonxx said:
Well written!! I am assuming this poem reflects on a breakup due to it being very \"one-sided\".
March 24th, 2026 03:25
lilmoonxx said:
Well written!! I am assuming this poem reflects on a breakup due to it being very \"one-sided\".
March 24th, 2026 03:25
Depravity
sorenbarrett said:
Some words just feel in a visceral way and that often feels depraved or perverse by association. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Some words just feel in a visceral way and that often feels depraved or perverse by association. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 04:17
Depravity
lilmoonxx said:
Random words but makes perfect sense. It is very relatable. I like it
March 23rd, 2026 04:14
lilmoonxx said:
Random words but makes perfect sense. It is very relatable. I like it
March 23rd, 2026 04:14
A cold eve (LONG)
sorenbarrett said:
Here a story, a fairytale the question being like the book The Little Prince by Antonine de Saint-Exupery does it contain metaphors and allegories. Well written
March 19th, 2026 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
Here a story, a fairytale the question being like the book The Little Prince by Antonine de Saint-Exupery does it contain metaphors and allegories. Well written
March 19th, 2026 06:58
Deep abyss
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a most interesting write where one must determine what the moon stands for and if there are so many what planet we are on. An enigma in a poem nicely done
March 18th, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a most interesting write where one must determine what the moon stands for and if there are so many what planet we are on. An enigma in a poem nicely done
March 18th, 2026 04:46
The British Empire
Doggerel Dave said:
Complete and utter satire. If it is not then you should feel more than merely rather silly.
March 16th, 2026 17:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Complete and utter satire. If it is not then you should feel more than merely rather silly.
March 16th, 2026 17:14
The British Empire
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds as if it came from another era where immigrants were welcome and the statue of liberty extended her arms to all the tired and poor. Now it is irony and a laugh at what we have become. Well written
March 16th, 2026 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds as if it came from another era where immigrants were welcome and the statue of liberty extended her arms to all the tired and poor. Now it is irony and a laugh at what we have become. Well written
March 16th, 2026 07:21
Attempts
sorenbarrett said:
I love the wording of the periodic internal rhyme in this fanciful write that appears akin to the little prince and the fox. Well written
March 13th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
I love the wording of the periodic internal rhyme in this fanciful write that appears akin to the little prince and the fox. Well written
March 13th, 2026 03:59
Two faces
sorenbarrett said:
If this is family then a most horrible one it is. Dark and most disheartening.
March 12th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
If this is family then a most horrible one it is. Dark and most disheartening.
March 12th, 2026 06:48
For a friend
sorenbarrett said:
An offer and pledge of friendship nicely written in most poetic form. Well done
March 10th, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
An offer and pledge of friendship nicely written in most poetic form. Well done
March 10th, 2026 04:11
A poster
sorenbarrett said:
This brings up the issue of free speech vs environmental littering and a most interesting conflict it is. Nicely done
March 9th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
This brings up the issue of free speech vs environmental littering and a most interesting conflict it is. Nicely done
March 9th, 2026 04:03
In a house not far away
Poetic Licence said:
This gave me the sense of the boy hoping for peace and looking for freedom, nicely penned
March 4th, 2026 06:51
Poetic Licence said:
This gave me the sense of the boy hoping for peace and looking for freedom, nicely penned
March 4th, 2026 06:51
In a house not far away
sorenbarrett said:
A clear image of a small child that trapped inside searches for an exit. This may be taken as a metaphor for all in search of freedom. Nicely done
March 4th, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A clear image of a small child that trapped inside searches for an exit. This may be taken as a metaphor for all in search of freedom. Nicely done
March 4th, 2026 05:06
Wanderer
sorenbarrett said:
All things come to the patient, dreams enacted for those that wait. Lovely
March 2nd, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
All things come to the patient, dreams enacted for those that wait. Lovely
March 2nd, 2026 04:30
Joining
lilmoonxx said:
I really like the writing style and the flow of the poem. Really takes you back to older writing. A fav
March 1st, 2026 05:04
lilmoonxx said:
I really like the writing style and the flow of the poem. Really takes you back to older writing. A fav
March 1st, 2026 05:04
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