Comments received on poems by Atticus_made
A cold eve (LONG)
sorenbarrett said:
Here a story, a fairytale the question being like the book The Little Prince by Antonine de Saint-Exupery does it contain metaphors and allegories. Well written
March 19th, 2026 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
Here a story, a fairytale the question being like the book The Little Prince by Antonine de Saint-Exupery does it contain metaphors and allegories. Well written
March 19th, 2026 06:58
Deep abyss
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a most interesting write where one must determine what the moon stands for and if there are so many what planet we are on. An enigma in a poem nicely done
March 18th, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a most interesting write where one must determine what the moon stands for and if there are so many what planet we are on. An enigma in a poem nicely done
March 18th, 2026 04:46
The British Empire
Doggerel Dave said:
Complete and utter satire. If it is not then you should feel more than merely rather silly.
March 16th, 2026 17:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Complete and utter satire. If it is not then you should feel more than merely rather silly.
March 16th, 2026 17:14
The British Empire
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds as if it came from another era where immigrants were welcome and the statue of liberty extended her arms to all the tired and poor. Now it is irony and a laugh at what we have become. Well written
March 16th, 2026 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds as if it came from another era where immigrants were welcome and the statue of liberty extended her arms to all the tired and poor. Now it is irony and a laugh at what we have become. Well written
March 16th, 2026 07:21
Attempts
sorenbarrett said:
I love the wording of the periodic internal rhyme in this fanciful write that appears akin to the little prince and the fox. Well written
March 13th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
I love the wording of the periodic internal rhyme in this fanciful write that appears akin to the little prince and the fox. Well written
March 13th, 2026 03:59
Two faces
sorenbarrett said:
If this is family then a most horrible one it is. Dark and most disheartening.
March 12th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
If this is family then a most horrible one it is. Dark and most disheartening.
March 12th, 2026 06:48
For a friend
sorenbarrett said:
An offer and pledge of friendship nicely written in most poetic form. Well done
March 10th, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
An offer and pledge of friendship nicely written in most poetic form. Well done
March 10th, 2026 04:11
A poster
sorenbarrett said:
This brings up the issue of free speech vs environmental littering and a most interesting conflict it is. Nicely done
March 9th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
This brings up the issue of free speech vs environmental littering and a most interesting conflict it is. Nicely done
March 9th, 2026 04:03
In a house not far away
Poetic Licence said:
This gave me the sense of the boy hoping for peace and looking for freedom, nicely penned
March 4th, 2026 06:51
Poetic Licence said:
This gave me the sense of the boy hoping for peace and looking for freedom, nicely penned
March 4th, 2026 06:51
In a house not far away
sorenbarrett said:
A clear image of a small child that trapped inside searches for an exit. This may be taken as a metaphor for all in search of freedom. Nicely done
March 4th, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A clear image of a small child that trapped inside searches for an exit. This may be taken as a metaphor for all in search of freedom. Nicely done
March 4th, 2026 05:06
Wanderer
sorenbarrett said:
All things come to the patient, dreams enacted for those that wait. Lovely
March 2nd, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
All things come to the patient, dreams enacted for those that wait. Lovely
March 2nd, 2026 04:30
Joining
lilmoonxx said:
I really like the writing style and the flow of the poem. Really takes you back to older writing. A fav
March 1st, 2026 05:04
lilmoonxx said:
I really like the writing style and the flow of the poem. Really takes you back to older writing. A fav
March 1st, 2026 05:04
Joining
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write to read, I think you can only build trust if all eyes are open, walkly blindly only leads to failure and disappointment, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 18:01
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write to read, I think you can only build trust if all eyes are open, walkly blindly only leads to failure and disappointment, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 18:01
Joining
sorenbarrett said:
To trust with eyes open is the key for me. Do not walk blind into a relationship of trust always keep eyes open even after many years. Sleep only brings dreams. Nicely done
February 27th, 2026 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
To trust with eyes open is the key for me. Do not walk blind into a relationship of trust always keep eyes open even after many years. Sleep only brings dreams. Nicely done
February 27th, 2026 06:27
The sun
sorenbarrett said:
This a poem that speaks with desire to see again one held dear. Nicely worded it has a longing feeling to it.
February 26th, 2026 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
This a poem that speaks with desire to see again one held dear. Nicely worded it has a longing feeling to it.
February 26th, 2026 04:57
New York
Friendship said:
Being from New York, I really can relate. Your poem is New York City itself, capturing its essence as a vibrant, dynamic place filled with history and modernity. It explores the dichotomy of experiences and perceptions within the city, as well as the emotional responses that arise from them.
February 25th, 2026 08:22
Friendship said:
Being from New York, I really can relate. Your poem is New York City itself, capturing its essence as a vibrant, dynamic place filled with history and modernity. It explores the dichotomy of experiences and perceptions within the city, as well as the emotional responses that arise from them.
February 25th, 2026 08:22
New York
sorenbarrett said:
Well described a tribute to a city well written. Well done
February 25th, 2026 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Well described a tribute to a city well written. Well done
February 25th, 2026 05:47
brown bears
Paul Bell said:
Beware the bear that walks with care, he\'ll sneak up behind you like you\'re not there.
Something cute about bears.
February 23rd, 2026 04:46
Paul Bell said:
Beware the bear that walks with care, he\'ll sneak up behind you like you\'re not there.
Something cute about bears.
February 23rd, 2026 04:46
brown bears
lilmoonxx said:
Silence has the loudest impact. Your poem reflects that in the most simple way. A personal fav.
February 23rd, 2026 04:01
lilmoonxx said:
Silence has the loudest impact. Your poem reflects that in the most simple way. A personal fav.
February 23rd, 2026 04:01
brown bears
sorenbarrett said:
Silence has its virtues and just because we don\'t know what or even if something is thinking does not mean that there are not thoughts there. Those signs it leaves without words are the clues. Nicely worded
February 23rd, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Silence has its virtues and just because we don\'t know what or even if something is thinking does not mean that there are not thoughts there. Those signs it leaves without words are the clues. Nicely worded
February 23rd, 2026 03:45
Grass
sorenbarrett said:
It is the small that have big dreams, but from small acorns tall trees grow. A good write
February 13th, 2026 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
It is the small that have big dreams, but from small acorns tall trees grow. A good write
February 13th, 2026 07:13
Grass
lilmoonxx said:
It shows one the simplicity of something like grass. Is the thing poking out of the grass a worm?
February 13th, 2026 06:45
lilmoonxx said:
It shows one the simplicity of something like grass. Is the thing poking out of the grass a worm?
February 13th, 2026 06:45
You.
sorenbarrett said:
It often is the mixture of sweet and sour that makes the recipe just right
February 12th, 2026 07:12
sorenbarrett said:
It often is the mixture of sweet and sour that makes the recipe just right
February 12th, 2026 07:12
A pineapple within my burger
lilmoonxx said:
I get the context lol. Is it Bangchan\'s pinapple dilemma?
February 12th, 2026 06:09
lilmoonxx said:
I get the context lol. Is it Bangchan\'s pinapple dilemma?
February 12th, 2026 06:09
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