Comments received on poems by Efrain Cajar
For Kurt Cobain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, wow…yeah, I remember that moment too. Seeing it unfold in real time…that stays with you. This brought all of that rushing back. You captured that weight in a way that feels real, not forced. Appreciate you for this. A fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, wow…yeah, I remember that moment too. Seeing it unfold in real time…that stays with you. This brought all of that rushing back. You captured that weight in a way that feels real, not forced. Appreciate you for this. A fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 07:55
For Kurt Cobain
sorenbarrett said:
A sensitive tribute to a lost soul that was a great artist. Sad and poignant. A fave
April 9th, 2026 02:13
sorenbarrett said:
A sensitive tribute to a lost soul that was a great artist. Sad and poignant. A fave
April 9th, 2026 02:13
Make Use of the Hours
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, there’s a steadiness here that lingers… especially in how you frame time not as something to conquer but something to shape. The image of attention as a living flame ties it all together… careful, deliberate, human. It reads like a guide, but never loses its soul. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2026 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, there’s a steadiness here that lingers… especially in how you frame time not as something to conquer but something to shape. The image of attention as a living flame ties it all together… careful, deliberate, human. It reads like a guide, but never loses its soul. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2026 08:51
Make Use of the Hours
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a poem of advice for making a better life and better person. Well crafted in good structure and rhyme it flows well nicely done
April 2nd, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a poem of advice for making a better life and better person. Well crafted in good structure and rhyme it flows well nicely done
April 2nd, 2026 03:55
Music in the Schools
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is impressive…placing music inside the classroom like this gives it real weight. It doesn’t feel decorative…it feels essential to how people grow. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 10:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is impressive…placing music inside the classroom like this gives it real weight. It doesn’t feel decorative…it feels essential to how people grow. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 10:00
On Reading Awareness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, there’s a real clarity and purpose running through this that lands. The way you move from the personal act of reading into something broader…something communal and enduring…gives it weight. It doesn’t rush…it builds. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 09:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, there’s a real clarity and purpose running through this that lands. The way you move from the personal act of reading into something broader…something communal and enduring…gives it weight. It doesn’t rush…it builds. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 09:57
Music in the Schools
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done this tribute to music and its schooling. Speaking of music as a universal language that touches all and unites us. Well written
March 30th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done this tribute to music and its schooling. Speaking of music as a universal language that touches all and unites us. Well written
March 30th, 2026 03:40
On Reading Awareness
sorenbarrett said:
This is quite a call to readers to do more. A call to arms so to speak. It enumerates the advantages of reading and sets forth so well the blessings of such. Very nicely written in most poetic form it is a fave
March 30th, 2026 03:14
sorenbarrett said:
This is quite a call to readers to do more. A call to arms so to speak. It enumerates the advantages of reading and sets forth so well the blessings of such. Very nicely written in most poetic form it is a fave
March 30th, 2026 03:14
The Theatre
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this hit me hard… there’s a reverence running through this that feels earned, not performed. It holds the weight of theatre as something lived, not just observed. Beautifully written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this hit me hard… there’s a reverence running through this that feels earned, not performed. It holds the weight of theatre as something lived, not just observed. Beautifully written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:12
The Theatre
sorenbarrett said:
The analogy of theater and life goes back to Shakespeare, maybe further. Well developed in this poem it reads well with good flow and rhyme. Very nicely done
March 27th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
The analogy of theater and life goes back to Shakespeare, maybe further. Well developed in this poem it reads well with good flow and rhyme. Very nicely done
March 27th, 2026 03:54
Independence of Greece
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this carries real weight…there’s a steady, almost epic pulse running through it. It feels like something meant to be spoken aloud…measured, deliberate, and grounded in conviction. That closing lands with authority…“the freedom that no force can break or kill.” Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this carries real weight…there’s a steady, almost epic pulse running through it. It feels like something meant to be spoken aloud…measured, deliberate, and grounded in conviction. That closing lands with authority…“the freedom that no force can break or kill.” Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:37
Independence of Greece
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of tribute so well rhymed and metered it flows smoothly off the tongue and seems so natural. Very well done
March 25th, 2026 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of tribute so well rhymed and metered it flows smoothly off the tongue and seems so natural. Very well done
March 25th, 2026 03:39
Ode to Truth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this makes me think about how truth isn’t always comfortable…how it can cut as much as it clarifies. That tension between seeking it and fearing it feels real here. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this makes me think about how truth isn’t always comfortable…how it can cut as much as it clarifies. That tension between seeking it and fearing it feels real here. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:46
Ode to Truth
sorenbarrett said:
As always well written a tribute to truth or at least what we perceive it to be. Nicely crafted in great rhyme and meter. Your works all in standard form of twelve stanzas must require a great deal of time and work.
March 24th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
As always well written a tribute to truth or at least what we perceive it to be. Nicely crafted in great rhyme and meter. Your works all in standard form of twelve stanzas must require a great deal of time and work.
March 24th, 2026 04:24
Meteorologist´s Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a real sense of respect…there’s a calm, steady reverence running through it. It feels thoughtful and intentional, like you’re honoring something often overlooked. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a real sense of respect…there’s a calm, steady reverence running through it. It feels thoughtful and intentional, like you’re honoring something often overlooked. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:20
Meteorologist´s Day
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words combine in tribute to meteorologists and meteorology itself an art that attempts to use scientific methods where there are too many variables to account for. Well put together
March 23rd, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words combine in tribute to meteorologists and meteorology itself an art that attempts to use scientific methods where there are too many variables to account for. Well put together
March 23rd, 2026 04:12
World Water Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this carries real weight…there’s a calm authority to it, like something meant to be spoken and remembered. It feels steady, almost timeless in its voice. That sense of reverence stays with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 22nd, 2026 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this carries real weight…there’s a calm authority to it, like something meant to be spoken and remembered. It feels steady, almost timeless in its voice. That sense of reverence stays with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 22nd, 2026 09:36
World Water Day
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of ecology and plea for conservation. Nicely worded in verse and good rhyme as well as smooth flow. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of ecology and plea for conservation. Nicely worded in verse and good rhyme as well as smooth flow. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 04:05
World Poetry Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this resonates…that idea of poetry as something that moves through all of us, not belonging to any one voice. It feels like a reminder of why we write at all. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 21st, 2026 08:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this resonates…that idea of poetry as something that moves through all of us, not belonging to any one voice. It feels like a reminder of why we write at all. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 21st, 2026 08:49
World Poetry Day
sorenbarrett said:
Truly beautiful this homage to poetry. Set in wonderful rhyming verse with such good meter the flow carries the reader onward as if down stream on currents of metaphor and analogy past great imagery with such a peaceful feeling yet one of triumph. Very nicely written it is a fave
March 21st, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Truly beautiful this homage to poetry. Set in wonderful rhyming verse with such good meter the flow carries the reader onward as if down stream on currents of metaphor and analogy past great imagery with such a peaceful feeling yet one of triumph. Very nicely written it is a fave
March 21st, 2026 03:57
Sparrow and Joy — A Day of Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this hit me in a reflective way…that tension between striving and simply being is something I think a lot of us wrestle with. The sparrow here feels like a quiet reminder I probably need more often. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 09:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this hit me in a reflective way…that tension between striving and simply being is something I think a lot of us wrestle with. The sparrow here feels like a quiet reminder I probably need more often. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 09:58
Sparrow and Joy — A Day of Light
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done this poem on love with the analogy of the bird. It carries a good deal of wisdom in its verses and flows with good rhyme. Nicely done
March 20th, 2026 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done this poem on love with the analogy of the bird. It carries a good deal of wisdom in its verses and flows with good rhyme. Nicely done
March 20th, 2026 03:42
Bruce Willis — A Tribute
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is a powerful tribute…you carry Bruce’s presence with a steady, grounded respect all the way through. It never feels inflated, just real. As a fan myself, and someone who shares his home state and alma mater, this lands in a personal way. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is a powerful tribute…you carry Bruce’s presence with a steady, grounded respect all the way through. It never feels inflated, just real. As a fan myself, and someone who shares his home state and alma mater, this lands in a personal way. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:16
Bruce Willis — A Tribute
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written a great tribute to a great actor I am familiar with many of his films from the Die hard series to the sixth sense and Pulp fiction and 12 monkeys. This was well done with rhyme and good meter. Loved it
March 19th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written a great tribute to a great actor I am familiar with many of his films from the Die hard series to the sixth sense and Pulp fiction and 12 monkeys. This was well done with rhyme and good meter. Loved it
March 19th, 2026 04:25
World Sleep Day
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Efrain. In this beautifully crafted poem of sleep and dreams lies a sense of peace in a tribute and explanation of night cycles and their value. Very nicely worded in beautiful rhyme it flows very well. Loved it
March 18th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Efrain. In this beautifully crafted poem of sleep and dreams lies a sense of peace in a tribute and explanation of night cycles and their value. Very nicely worded in beautiful rhyme it flows very well. Loved it
March 18th, 2026 04:18
Saint Patrick— The Day and the Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is a powerful piece… t carries a steady, almost reverent weight from beginning to end. The way it moves beyond celebration into something deeper… something remembered… really stays with me. This feels lived in, not just written. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is a powerful piece… t carries a steady, almost reverent weight from beginning to end. The way it moves beyond celebration into something deeper… something remembered… really stays with me. This feels lived in, not just written. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:16
Saint Patrick— The Day and the Man
sorenbarrett said:
Efrain you are indeed a wordsmith and craftsman. A lovely tribute to St. Patrick so appropriate at this time of year. Well written it covers a life famous, historic and mythical as well. Nicely written in rhyme and good meter another fave
March 17th, 2026 03:01
sorenbarrett said:
Efrain you are indeed a wordsmith and craftsman. A lovely tribute to St. Patrick so appropriate at this time of year. Well written it covers a life famous, historic and mythical as well. Nicely written in rhyme and good meter another fave
March 17th, 2026 03:01
A Light Beyond Saturn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, that moment where the light “did not quite belong among / the fixed and ancient stars the charts revered” really caught me. It captures the exact spark of discovery…that subtle sense that something is out of place, and therefore profoundly important. That detail carries the whole narrative forward. Gorgeous writing, my friend. Breathtaking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, that moment where the light “did not quite belong among / the fixed and ancient stars the charts revered” really caught me. It captures the exact spark of discovery…that subtle sense that something is out of place, and therefore profoundly important. That detail carries the whole narrative forward. Gorgeous writing, my friend. Breathtaking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:44
A Light Beyond Saturn
sorenbarrett said:
Another marvelous story told in poetic form a fave
March 16th, 2026 03:03
sorenbarrett said:
Another marvelous story told in poetic form a fave
March 16th, 2026 03:03
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