Comments received on poems by Efrain Cajar
Meteorologist´s Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a real sense of respect…there’s a calm, steady reverence running through it. It feels thoughtful and intentional, like you’re honoring something often overlooked. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a real sense of respect…there’s a calm, steady reverence running through it. It feels thoughtful and intentional, like you’re honoring something often overlooked. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:20
Meteorologist´s Day
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words combine in tribute to meteorologists and meteorology itself an art that attempts to use scientific methods where there are too many variables to account for. Well put together
March 23rd, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words combine in tribute to meteorologists and meteorology itself an art that attempts to use scientific methods where there are too many variables to account for. Well put together
March 23rd, 2026 04:12
World Water Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this carries real weight…there’s a calm authority to it, like something meant to be spoken and remembered. It feels steady, almost timeless in its voice. That sense of reverence stays with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 22nd, 2026 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this carries real weight…there’s a calm authority to it, like something meant to be spoken and remembered. It feels steady, almost timeless in its voice. That sense of reverence stays with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 22nd, 2026 09:36
World Water Day
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of ecology and plea for conservation. Nicely worded in verse and good rhyme as well as smooth flow. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of ecology and plea for conservation. Nicely worded in verse and good rhyme as well as smooth flow. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 04:05
World Poetry Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this resonates…that idea of poetry as something that moves through all of us, not belonging to any one voice. It feels like a reminder of why we write at all. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 21st, 2026 08:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this resonates…that idea of poetry as something that moves through all of us, not belonging to any one voice. It feels like a reminder of why we write at all. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 21st, 2026 08:49
World Poetry Day
sorenbarrett said:
Truly beautiful this homage to poetry. Set in wonderful rhyming verse with such good meter the flow carries the reader onward as if down stream on currents of metaphor and analogy past great imagery with such a peaceful feeling yet one of triumph. Very nicely written it is a fave
March 21st, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Truly beautiful this homage to poetry. Set in wonderful rhyming verse with such good meter the flow carries the reader onward as if down stream on currents of metaphor and analogy past great imagery with such a peaceful feeling yet one of triumph. Very nicely written it is a fave
March 21st, 2026 03:57
Sparrow and Joy — A Day of Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this hit me in a reflective way…that tension between striving and simply being is something I think a lot of us wrestle with. The sparrow here feels like a quiet reminder I probably need more often. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 09:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this hit me in a reflective way…that tension between striving and simply being is something I think a lot of us wrestle with. The sparrow here feels like a quiet reminder I probably need more often. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 09:58
Sparrow and Joy — A Day of Light
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done this poem on love with the analogy of the bird. It carries a good deal of wisdom in its verses and flows with good rhyme. Nicely done
March 20th, 2026 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done this poem on love with the analogy of the bird. It carries a good deal of wisdom in its verses and flows with good rhyme. Nicely done
March 20th, 2026 03:42
Bruce Willis — A Tribute
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is a powerful tribute…you carry Bruce’s presence with a steady, grounded respect all the way through. It never feels inflated, just real. As a fan myself, and someone who shares his home state and alma mater, this lands in a personal way. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is a powerful tribute…you carry Bruce’s presence with a steady, grounded respect all the way through. It never feels inflated, just real. As a fan myself, and someone who shares his home state and alma mater, this lands in a personal way. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:16
Bruce Willis — A Tribute
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written a great tribute to a great actor I am familiar with many of his films from the Die hard series to the sixth sense and Pulp fiction and 12 monkeys. This was well done with rhyme and good meter. Loved it
March 19th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written a great tribute to a great actor I am familiar with many of his films from the Die hard series to the sixth sense and Pulp fiction and 12 monkeys. This was well done with rhyme and good meter. Loved it
March 19th, 2026 04:25
World Sleep Day
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Efrain. In this beautifully crafted poem of sleep and dreams lies a sense of peace in a tribute and explanation of night cycles and their value. Very nicely worded in beautiful rhyme it flows very well. Loved it
March 18th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Efrain. In this beautifully crafted poem of sleep and dreams lies a sense of peace in a tribute and explanation of night cycles and their value. Very nicely worded in beautiful rhyme it flows very well. Loved it
March 18th, 2026 04:18
Saint Patrick— The Day and the Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is a powerful piece… t carries a steady, almost reverent weight from beginning to end. The way it moves beyond celebration into something deeper… something remembered… really stays with me. This feels lived in, not just written. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is a powerful piece… t carries a steady, almost reverent weight from beginning to end. The way it moves beyond celebration into something deeper… something remembered… really stays with me. This feels lived in, not just written. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:16
Saint Patrick— The Day and the Man
sorenbarrett said:
Efrain you are indeed a wordsmith and craftsman. A lovely tribute to St. Patrick so appropriate at this time of year. Well written it covers a life famous, historic and mythical as well. Nicely written in rhyme and good meter another fave
March 17th, 2026 03:01
sorenbarrett said:
Efrain you are indeed a wordsmith and craftsman. A lovely tribute to St. Patrick so appropriate at this time of year. Well written it covers a life famous, historic and mythical as well. Nicely written in rhyme and good meter another fave
March 17th, 2026 03:01
A Light Beyond Saturn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, that moment where the light “did not quite belong among / the fixed and ancient stars the charts revered” really caught me. It captures the exact spark of discovery…that subtle sense that something is out of place, and therefore profoundly important. That detail carries the whole narrative forward. Gorgeous writing, my friend. Breathtaking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, that moment where the light “did not quite belong among / the fixed and ancient stars the charts revered” really caught me. It captures the exact spark of discovery…that subtle sense that something is out of place, and therefore profoundly important. That detail carries the whole narrative forward. Gorgeous writing, my friend. Breathtaking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:44
A Light Beyond Saturn
sorenbarrett said:
Another marvelous story told in poetic form a fave
March 16th, 2026 03:03
sorenbarrett said:
Another marvelous story told in poetic form a fave
March 16th, 2026 03:03
The Warning of March
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this unfolds like a classical narrative poem…Rome waking, the whisper of warning, and the slow march toward the Senate hall where fate waits. The seer’s voice running through the poem gives the whole piece a sense of inevitability…as though history itself is speaking through the lines. A powerful retelling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 15th, 2026 18:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this unfolds like a classical narrative poem…Rome waking, the whisper of warning, and the slow march toward the Senate hall where fate waits. The seer’s voice running through the poem gives the whole piece a sense of inevitability…as though history itself is speaking through the lines. A powerful retelling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 15th, 2026 18:39
The Warning of March
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely rendition of both history and a classic Shakspearian tale. Told in narrative form with wonderful rhyme and good meter it rings out with the familiar tale. Lovely a fave
March 15th, 2026 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely rendition of both history and a classic Shakspearian tale. Told in narrative form with wonderful rhyme and good meter it rings out with the familiar tale. Lovely a fave
March 15th, 2026 03:32
The Voice of the Sea
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this feels vast from the very first stanza…like standing at the shoreline and realizing how small we are beside something ancient. The poem carries a calm, steady rhythm that mirrors the movement of the sea itself. By the end it feels less like a description and more like a quiet meditation on time and existence. Beautiful...nay...fantastically beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 14th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this feels vast from the very first stanza…like standing at the shoreline and realizing how small we are beside something ancient. The poem carries a calm, steady rhythm that mirrors the movement of the sea itself. By the end it feels less like a description and more like a quiet meditation on time and existence. Beautiful...nay...fantastically beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 14th, 2026 08:26
The Voice of the Sea
Mutley Ravishes said:
I guess Elendil would have liked this poem!
March 14th, 2026 05:24
Mutley Ravishes said:
I guess Elendil would have liked this poem!
March 14th, 2026 05:24
The Voice of the Sea
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent!! A brilliant composition in set form and rhyme with great meter and flow. It depicts the sea in all its splendor day and night and with use of metaphor relates it to people as well. A very nicely composed piece worthy of publication in any book of poetry. A fave for sure
March 14th, 2026 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent!! A brilliant composition in set form and rhyme with great meter and flow. It depicts the sea in all its splendor day and night and with use of metaphor relates it to people as well. A very nicely composed piece worthy of publication in any book of poetry. A fave for sure
March 14th, 2026 03:38
Aquamarine
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this hit me with a quiet kind of awe…the whole poem feels like standing before a calm sea at dawn. The imagery moves with patience and clarity, each stanza unfolding like another gentle tide. There’s a deep stillness running through this that lingers long after the last line. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 13th, 2026 08:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this hit me with a quiet kind of awe…the whole poem feels like standing before a calm sea at dawn. The imagery moves with patience and clarity, each stanza unfolding like another gentle tide. There’s a deep stillness running through this that lingers long after the last line. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 13th, 2026 08:59
Aquamarine
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of a stone shaped in color and symbolism of the sea. Nicely worded it carries its message well.
March 13th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of a stone shaped in color and symbolism of the sea. Nicely worded it carries its message well.
March 13th, 2026 03:43
The Quiet Flame
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this reads like a spiritual journey unfolding through nature, compassion, and quiet reflection. From rivers and mountains to stars and forests, each image builds toward the same truth… that the light we seek is already alive within us. A thoughtful and contemplative piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 12th, 2026 09:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this reads like a spiritual journey unfolding through nature, compassion, and quiet reflection. From rivers and mountains to stars and forests, each image builds toward the same truth… that the light we seek is already alive within us. A thoughtful and contemplative piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 12th, 2026 09:14
The Quiet Flame
sorenbarrett said:
A very spiritual poem that speaks of freeing the soul to be more than mere flesh. it is nicely rhymed and metered having good flow. Well written
March 12th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
A very spiritual poem that speaks of freeing the soul to be more than mere flesh. it is nicely rhymed and metered having good flow. Well written
March 12th, 2026 04:12
The Lazy Student’s Grand Strategy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this was a delight to read… Tom feels like the kind of character every school secretly needs. The humor runs through the whole piece while still keeping a warm affection for him. By the end it feels less like a joke and more like a tribute to the joy he brought to the room. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 11th, 2026 07:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this was a delight to read… Tom feels like the kind of character every school secretly needs. The humor runs through the whole piece while still keeping a warm affection for him. By the end it feels less like a joke and more like a tribute to the joy he brought to the room. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 11th, 2026 07:58
The Lazy Student’s Grand Strategy
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem framed in great rhyme and meter and exuding the very point of the poem, humor. For far too long I have held that our view of intelligence and learning is too narrow and should be expanded. A fave
March 11th, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem framed in great rhyme and meter and exuding the very point of the poem, humor. For far too long I have held that our view of intelligence and learning is too narrow and should be expanded. A fave
March 11th, 2026 03:55
The Thing Beneath The Stairs
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem in the style of Poe. It aims to scare and it is creepy for any that believe in spirits. Nicely done with great wording and rhyme. A fave
March 10th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem in the style of Poe. It aims to scare and it is creepy for any that believe in spirits. Nicely done with great wording and rhyme. A fave
March 10th, 2026 03:52
The Whispering Hall
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a Poe like horror poem of fright. Crafted nicely it lurks in the shadows and moans to the reader its warning. Nicely done
March 10th, 2026 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a Poe like horror poem of fright. Crafted nicely it lurks in the shadows and moans to the reader its warning. Nicely done
March 10th, 2026 03:41
March 8
sorenbarrett said:
A celebration of equality in this poem that speaks out of being human not woman or man to throw off past chains and recognize an emancipation proclamation. Very nicely stated in poetic terms it argues its case in moderation and with a sense of assertion not aggression. Well done
March 8th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
A celebration of equality in this poem that speaks out of being human not woman or man to throw off past chains and recognize an emancipation proclamation. Very nicely stated in poetic terms it argues its case in moderation and with a sense of assertion not aggression. Well done
March 8th, 2026 04:01
A Letter the Wind Might Carry
Doggerel Dave said:
As all commentary above. Good stuff.
March 7th, 2026 16:00
Doggerel Dave said:
As all commentary above. Good stuff.
March 7th, 2026 16:00
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