Comments received on poems by Efrain Cajar
The Mystery of the Titanic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and needed a minute to recover. This takes me to those moments where certainty feels solid until it suddenly isn’t…where you realize how much rests on what we don’t see or understand. That tension feels very real here. Really well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and needed a minute to recover. This takes me to those moments where certainty feels solid until it suddenly isn’t…where you realize how much rests on what we don’t see or understand. That tension feels very real here. Really well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:05
The Mystery of the Titanic
sorenbarrett said:
An epic poem that works so well with the AB style that rocks it like waves. It is a metaphor as well as a historic tale and nicely worded and imaged. A fave.
April 16th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
An epic poem that works so well with the AB style that rocks it like waves. It is a metaphor as well as a historic tale and nicely worded and imaged. A fave.
April 16th, 2026 03:48
The Human Genome
sorenbarrett said:
The unraveling of the genome and its relationship to the human being and our view of reality. Well written a complete tribute and yet the missing linkage to the being. Well done
April 14th, 2026 19:37
sorenbarrett said:
The unraveling of the genome and its relationship to the human being and our view of reality. Well written a complete tribute and yet the missing linkage to the being. Well done
April 14th, 2026 19:37
Between Moments
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain… this carries a quiet, steady presence…like everything slowing just enough to be felt. That space between moments holds it all together, and it lingers in a calm, grounded way. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain… this carries a quiet, steady presence…like everything slowing just enough to be felt. That space between moments holds it all together, and it lingers in a calm, grounded way. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 08:04
Between Moments
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written it stands on its own what a great message in poetic verse
April 13th, 2026 19:49
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written it stands on its own what a great message in poetic verse
April 13th, 2026 19:49
For Kurt Cobain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, wow…yeah, I remember that moment too. Seeing it unfold in real time…that stays with you. This brought all of that rushing back. You captured that weight in a way that feels real, not forced. Appreciate you for this. A fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, wow…yeah, I remember that moment too. Seeing it unfold in real time…that stays with you. This brought all of that rushing back. You captured that weight in a way that feels real, not forced. Appreciate you for this. A fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 07:55
For Kurt Cobain
sorenbarrett said:
A sensitive tribute to a lost soul that was a great artist. Sad and poignant. A fave
April 9th, 2026 02:13
sorenbarrett said:
A sensitive tribute to a lost soul that was a great artist. Sad and poignant. A fave
April 9th, 2026 02:13
Make Use of the Hours
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, there’s a steadiness here that lingers… especially in how you frame time not as something to conquer but something to shape. The image of attention as a living flame ties it all together… careful, deliberate, human. It reads like a guide, but never loses its soul. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2026 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, there’s a steadiness here that lingers… especially in how you frame time not as something to conquer but something to shape. The image of attention as a living flame ties it all together… careful, deliberate, human. It reads like a guide, but never loses its soul. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2026 08:51
Make Use of the Hours
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a poem of advice for making a better life and better person. Well crafted in good structure and rhyme it flows well nicely done
April 2nd, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a poem of advice for making a better life and better person. Well crafted in good structure and rhyme it flows well nicely done
April 2nd, 2026 03:55
Music in the Schools
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is impressive…placing music inside the classroom like this gives it real weight. It doesn’t feel decorative…it feels essential to how people grow. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 10:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is impressive…placing music inside the classroom like this gives it real weight. It doesn’t feel decorative…it feels essential to how people grow. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 10:00
On Reading Awareness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, there’s a real clarity and purpose running through this that lands. The way you move from the personal act of reading into something broader…something communal and enduring…gives it weight. It doesn’t rush…it builds. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 09:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, there’s a real clarity and purpose running through this that lands. The way you move from the personal act of reading into something broader…something communal and enduring…gives it weight. It doesn’t rush…it builds. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 09:57
Music in the Schools
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done this tribute to music and its schooling. Speaking of music as a universal language that touches all and unites us. Well written
March 30th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done this tribute to music and its schooling. Speaking of music as a universal language that touches all and unites us. Well written
March 30th, 2026 03:40
On Reading Awareness
sorenbarrett said:
This is quite a call to readers to do more. A call to arms so to speak. It enumerates the advantages of reading and sets forth so well the blessings of such. Very nicely written in most poetic form it is a fave
March 30th, 2026 03:14
sorenbarrett said:
This is quite a call to readers to do more. A call to arms so to speak. It enumerates the advantages of reading and sets forth so well the blessings of such. Very nicely written in most poetic form it is a fave
March 30th, 2026 03:14
The Theatre
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this hit me hard… there’s a reverence running through this that feels earned, not performed. It holds the weight of theatre as something lived, not just observed. Beautifully written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this hit me hard… there’s a reverence running through this that feels earned, not performed. It holds the weight of theatre as something lived, not just observed. Beautifully written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:12
The Theatre
sorenbarrett said:
The analogy of theater and life goes back to Shakespeare, maybe further. Well developed in this poem it reads well with good flow and rhyme. Very nicely done
March 27th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
The analogy of theater and life goes back to Shakespeare, maybe further. Well developed in this poem it reads well with good flow and rhyme. Very nicely done
March 27th, 2026 03:54
Independence of Greece
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this carries real weight…there’s a steady, almost epic pulse running through it. It feels like something meant to be spoken aloud…measured, deliberate, and grounded in conviction. That closing lands with authority…“the freedom that no force can break or kill.” Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this carries real weight…there’s a steady, almost epic pulse running through it. It feels like something meant to be spoken aloud…measured, deliberate, and grounded in conviction. That closing lands with authority…“the freedom that no force can break or kill.” Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:37
Independence of Greece
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of tribute so well rhymed and metered it flows smoothly off the tongue and seems so natural. Very well done
March 25th, 2026 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of tribute so well rhymed and metered it flows smoothly off the tongue and seems so natural. Very well done
March 25th, 2026 03:39
Ode to Truth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this makes me think about how truth isn’t always comfortable…how it can cut as much as it clarifies. That tension between seeking it and fearing it feels real here. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this makes me think about how truth isn’t always comfortable…how it can cut as much as it clarifies. That tension between seeking it and fearing it feels real here. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:46
Ode to Truth
sorenbarrett said:
As always well written a tribute to truth or at least what we perceive it to be. Nicely crafted in great rhyme and meter. Your works all in standard form of twelve stanzas must require a great deal of time and work.
March 24th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
As always well written a tribute to truth or at least what we perceive it to be. Nicely crafted in great rhyme and meter. Your works all in standard form of twelve stanzas must require a great deal of time and work.
March 24th, 2026 04:24
Meteorologist´s Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a real sense of respect…there’s a calm, steady reverence running through it. It feels thoughtful and intentional, like you’re honoring something often overlooked. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a real sense of respect…there’s a calm, steady reverence running through it. It feels thoughtful and intentional, like you’re honoring something often overlooked. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:20
Meteorologist´s Day
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words combine in tribute to meteorologists and meteorology itself an art that attempts to use scientific methods where there are too many variables to account for. Well put together
March 23rd, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words combine in tribute to meteorologists and meteorology itself an art that attempts to use scientific methods where there are too many variables to account for. Well put together
March 23rd, 2026 04:12
World Water Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this carries real weight…there’s a calm authority to it, like something meant to be spoken and remembered. It feels steady, almost timeless in its voice. That sense of reverence stays with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 22nd, 2026 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this carries real weight…there’s a calm authority to it, like something meant to be spoken and remembered. It feels steady, almost timeless in its voice. That sense of reverence stays with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 22nd, 2026 09:36
World Water Day
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of ecology and plea for conservation. Nicely worded in verse and good rhyme as well as smooth flow. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of ecology and plea for conservation. Nicely worded in verse and good rhyme as well as smooth flow. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 04:05
World Poetry Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this resonates…that idea of poetry as something that moves through all of us, not belonging to any one voice. It feels like a reminder of why we write at all. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 21st, 2026 08:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this resonates…that idea of poetry as something that moves through all of us, not belonging to any one voice. It feels like a reminder of why we write at all. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 21st, 2026 08:49
World Poetry Day
sorenbarrett said:
Truly beautiful this homage to poetry. Set in wonderful rhyming verse with such good meter the flow carries the reader onward as if down stream on currents of metaphor and analogy past great imagery with such a peaceful feeling yet one of triumph. Very nicely written it is a fave
March 21st, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Truly beautiful this homage to poetry. Set in wonderful rhyming verse with such good meter the flow carries the reader onward as if down stream on currents of metaphor and analogy past great imagery with such a peaceful feeling yet one of triumph. Very nicely written it is a fave
March 21st, 2026 03:57
Sparrow and Joy — A Day of Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this hit me in a reflective way…that tension between striving and simply being is something I think a lot of us wrestle with. The sparrow here feels like a quiet reminder I probably need more often. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 09:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this hit me in a reflective way…that tension between striving and simply being is something I think a lot of us wrestle with. The sparrow here feels like a quiet reminder I probably need more often. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 09:58
Sparrow and Joy — A Day of Light
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done this poem on love with the analogy of the bird. It carries a good deal of wisdom in its verses and flows with good rhyme. Nicely done
March 20th, 2026 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done this poem on love with the analogy of the bird. It carries a good deal of wisdom in its verses and flows with good rhyme. Nicely done
March 20th, 2026 03:42
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