Comments received on poems by Efrain Cajar
Bruce Willis — A Tribute
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is a powerful tribute…you carry Bruce’s presence with a steady, grounded respect all the way through. It never feels inflated, just real. As a fan myself, and someone who shares his home state and alma mater, this lands in a personal way. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is a powerful tribute…you carry Bruce’s presence with a steady, grounded respect all the way through. It never feels inflated, just real. As a fan myself, and someone who shares his home state and alma mater, this lands in a personal way. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:16
Bruce Willis — A Tribute
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written a great tribute to a great actor I am familiar with many of his films from the Die hard series to the sixth sense and Pulp fiction and 12 monkeys. This was well done with rhyme and good meter. Loved it
March 19th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written a great tribute to a great actor I am familiar with many of his films from the Die hard series to the sixth sense and Pulp fiction and 12 monkeys. This was well done with rhyme and good meter. Loved it
March 19th, 2026 04:25
World Sleep Day
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Efrain. In this beautifully crafted poem of sleep and dreams lies a sense of peace in a tribute and explanation of night cycles and their value. Very nicely worded in beautiful rhyme it flows very well. Loved it
March 18th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Efrain. In this beautifully crafted poem of sleep and dreams lies a sense of peace in a tribute and explanation of night cycles and their value. Very nicely worded in beautiful rhyme it flows very well. Loved it
March 18th, 2026 04:18
Saint Patrick— The Day and the Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is a powerful piece… t carries a steady, almost reverent weight from beginning to end. The way it moves beyond celebration into something deeper… something remembered… really stays with me. This feels lived in, not just written. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this is a powerful piece… t carries a steady, almost reverent weight from beginning to end. The way it moves beyond celebration into something deeper… something remembered… really stays with me. This feels lived in, not just written. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:16
Saint Patrick— The Day and the Man
sorenbarrett said:
Efrain you are indeed a wordsmith and craftsman. A lovely tribute to St. Patrick so appropriate at this time of year. Well written it covers a life famous, historic and mythical as well. Nicely written in rhyme and good meter another fave
March 17th, 2026 03:01
sorenbarrett said:
Efrain you are indeed a wordsmith and craftsman. A lovely tribute to St. Patrick so appropriate at this time of year. Well written it covers a life famous, historic and mythical as well. Nicely written in rhyme and good meter another fave
March 17th, 2026 03:01
A Light Beyond Saturn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, that moment where the light “did not quite belong among / the fixed and ancient stars the charts revered” really caught me. It captures the exact spark of discovery…that subtle sense that something is out of place, and therefore profoundly important. That detail carries the whole narrative forward. Gorgeous writing, my friend. Breathtaking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, that moment where the light “did not quite belong among / the fixed and ancient stars the charts revered” really caught me. It captures the exact spark of discovery…that subtle sense that something is out of place, and therefore profoundly important. That detail carries the whole narrative forward. Gorgeous writing, my friend. Breathtaking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:44
A Light Beyond Saturn
sorenbarrett said:
Another marvelous story told in poetic form a fave
March 16th, 2026 03:03
sorenbarrett said:
Another marvelous story told in poetic form a fave
March 16th, 2026 03:03
The Warning of March
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this unfolds like a classical narrative poem…Rome waking, the whisper of warning, and the slow march toward the Senate hall where fate waits. The seer’s voice running through the poem gives the whole piece a sense of inevitability…as though history itself is speaking through the lines. A powerful retelling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 15th, 2026 18:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this unfolds like a classical narrative poem…Rome waking, the whisper of warning, and the slow march toward the Senate hall where fate waits. The seer’s voice running through the poem gives the whole piece a sense of inevitability…as though history itself is speaking through the lines. A powerful retelling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 15th, 2026 18:39
The Warning of March
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely rendition of both history and a classic Shakspearian tale. Told in narrative form with wonderful rhyme and good meter it rings out with the familiar tale. Lovely a fave
March 15th, 2026 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely rendition of both history and a classic Shakspearian tale. Told in narrative form with wonderful rhyme and good meter it rings out with the familiar tale. Lovely a fave
March 15th, 2026 03:32
The Voice of the Sea
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this feels vast from the very first stanza…like standing at the shoreline and realizing how small we are beside something ancient. The poem carries a calm, steady rhythm that mirrors the movement of the sea itself. By the end it feels less like a description and more like a quiet meditation on time and existence. Beautiful...nay...fantastically beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 14th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this feels vast from the very first stanza…like standing at the shoreline and realizing how small we are beside something ancient. The poem carries a calm, steady rhythm that mirrors the movement of the sea itself. By the end it feels less like a description and more like a quiet meditation on time and existence. Beautiful...nay...fantastically beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 14th, 2026 08:26
The Voice of the Sea
Mutley Ravishes said:
I guess Elendil would have liked this poem!
March 14th, 2026 05:24
Mutley Ravishes said:
I guess Elendil would have liked this poem!
March 14th, 2026 05:24
The Voice of the Sea
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent!! A brilliant composition in set form and rhyme with great meter and flow. It depicts the sea in all its splendor day and night and with use of metaphor relates it to people as well. A very nicely composed piece worthy of publication in any book of poetry. A fave for sure
March 14th, 2026 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent!! A brilliant composition in set form and rhyme with great meter and flow. It depicts the sea in all its splendor day and night and with use of metaphor relates it to people as well. A very nicely composed piece worthy of publication in any book of poetry. A fave for sure
March 14th, 2026 03:38
Aquamarine
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this hit me with a quiet kind of awe…the whole poem feels like standing before a calm sea at dawn. The imagery moves with patience and clarity, each stanza unfolding like another gentle tide. There’s a deep stillness running through this that lingers long after the last line. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 13th, 2026 08:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this hit me with a quiet kind of awe…the whole poem feels like standing before a calm sea at dawn. The imagery moves with patience and clarity, each stanza unfolding like another gentle tide. There’s a deep stillness running through this that lingers long after the last line. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 13th, 2026 08:59
Aquamarine
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of a stone shaped in color and symbolism of the sea. Nicely worded it carries its message well.
March 13th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of a stone shaped in color and symbolism of the sea. Nicely worded it carries its message well.
March 13th, 2026 03:43
The Quiet Flame
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this reads like a spiritual journey unfolding through nature, compassion, and quiet reflection. From rivers and mountains to stars and forests, each image builds toward the same truth… that the light we seek is already alive within us. A thoughtful and contemplative piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 12th, 2026 09:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this reads like a spiritual journey unfolding through nature, compassion, and quiet reflection. From rivers and mountains to stars and forests, each image builds toward the same truth… that the light we seek is already alive within us. A thoughtful and contemplative piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 12th, 2026 09:14
The Quiet Flame
sorenbarrett said:
A very spiritual poem that speaks of freeing the soul to be more than mere flesh. it is nicely rhymed and metered having good flow. Well written
March 12th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
A very spiritual poem that speaks of freeing the soul to be more than mere flesh. it is nicely rhymed and metered having good flow. Well written
March 12th, 2026 04:12
The Lazy Student’s Grand Strategy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this was a delight to read… Tom feels like the kind of character every school secretly needs. The humor runs through the whole piece while still keeping a warm affection for him. By the end it feels less like a joke and more like a tribute to the joy he brought to the room. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 11th, 2026 07:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, this was a delight to read… Tom feels like the kind of character every school secretly needs. The humor runs through the whole piece while still keeping a warm affection for him. By the end it feels less like a joke and more like a tribute to the joy he brought to the room. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 11th, 2026 07:58
The Lazy Student’s Grand Strategy
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem framed in great rhyme and meter and exuding the very point of the poem, humor. For far too long I have held that our view of intelligence and learning is too narrow and should be expanded. A fave
March 11th, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem framed in great rhyme and meter and exuding the very point of the poem, humor. For far too long I have held that our view of intelligence and learning is too narrow and should be expanded. A fave
March 11th, 2026 03:55
The Thing Beneath The Stairs
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem in the style of Poe. It aims to scare and it is creepy for any that believe in spirits. Nicely done with great wording and rhyme. A fave
March 10th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem in the style of Poe. It aims to scare and it is creepy for any that believe in spirits. Nicely done with great wording and rhyme. A fave
March 10th, 2026 03:52
The Whispering Hall
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a Poe like horror poem of fright. Crafted nicely it lurks in the shadows and moans to the reader its warning. Nicely done
March 10th, 2026 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a Poe like horror poem of fright. Crafted nicely it lurks in the shadows and moans to the reader its warning. Nicely done
March 10th, 2026 03:41
March 8
sorenbarrett said:
A celebration of equality in this poem that speaks out of being human not woman or man to throw off past chains and recognize an emancipation proclamation. Very nicely stated in poetic terms it argues its case in moderation and with a sense of assertion not aggression. Well done
March 8th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
A celebration of equality in this poem that speaks out of being human not woman or man to throw off past chains and recognize an emancipation proclamation. Very nicely stated in poetic terms it argues its case in moderation and with a sense of assertion not aggression. Well done
March 8th, 2026 04:01
A Letter the Wind Might Carry
Doggerel Dave said:
As all commentary above. Good stuff.
March 7th, 2026 16:00
Doggerel Dave said:
As all commentary above. Good stuff.
March 7th, 2026 16:00
A Letter the Wind Might Carry
Neville said:
Muchly enjoyed .. indeed, very muchly .. Neville
March 7th, 2026 14:04
Neville said:
Muchly enjoyed .. indeed, very muchly .. Neville
March 7th, 2026 14:04
A Letter the Wind Might Carry
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, the image of folding memory “like an ancient map whose roads no traveler can follow again” stayed with me. That line holds so much of the poem’s heart…love, distance, and the quiet understanding that some paths only live in remembrance. Beautifully crafted. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Efrain, the image of folding memory “like an ancient map whose roads no traveler can follow again” stayed with me. That line holds so much of the poem’s heart…love, distance, and the quiet understanding that some paths only live in remembrance. Beautifully crafted. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:53
A Letter the Wind Might Carry
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem\'s classic style and rhyme pattern. It despite its length keeps the interest and is so gentle and tender in its unveiling that it captures the heart. It exudes love in its verses and leaves the reader in a sense of peace. A fave for sure
March 7th, 2026 03:31
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem\'s classic style and rhyme pattern. It despite its length keeps the interest and is so gentle and tender in its unveiling that it captures the heart. It exudes love in its verses and leaves the reader in a sense of peace. A fave for sure
March 7th, 2026 03:31
The Good Wolf
Doggerel Dave said:
Well narrated fantasy that was an enjoyable read.
March 6th, 2026 08:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Well narrated fantasy that was an enjoyable read.
March 6th, 2026 08:09
The Good Wolf
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this fable and its message told so well in poetic form with good rhyme. A fave
March 6th, 2026 03:24
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this fable and its message told so well in poetic form with good rhyme. A fave
March 6th, 2026 03:24
Ode to Friendship
sorenbarrett said:
An ode to friendship in most beautiful poetic form. A tribute sent to all true friends that are so few and worth more than any gold. Lovely
March 5th, 2026 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
An ode to friendship in most beautiful poetic form. A tribute sent to all true friends that are so few and worth more than any gold. Lovely
March 5th, 2026 13:36
Where Sleep Walks In
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful, masterfully crafted with great rhyme it set the mood of evening and night and the awakening of day. A lovely write with great flow. A fave
March 4th, 2026 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful, masterfully crafted with great rhyme it set the mood of evening and night and the awakening of day. A lovely write with great flow. A fave
March 4th, 2026 06:44
Tuesday A.M.
Doggerel Dave said:
Longitudinal picture of a working day so very familiar portrayed in what has become (here) your rich visual style. Next one please.
March 3rd, 2026 16:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Longitudinal picture of a working day so very familiar portrayed in what has become (here) your rich visual style. Next one please.
March 3rd, 2026 16:59
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