Comments received on poems by Efrain Cajar
Carnival Crown
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent poem so well written. This work of art captures the spirt of Carneval. Here in Brazil it is a major thing with it going all night in the streets, bars and clubs. Where I am the rain has put a bit of a damper on it but still it goes like a fire in the rain. I am truly impressed with the vivid imagery used in this poem and as I read it I can hear the drums and chants the crowds and feet dancing. You have captured it so well a definite fave
February 16th, 2026 15:41
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent poem so well written. This work of art captures the spirt of Carneval. Here in Brazil it is a major thing with it going all night in the streets, bars and clubs. Where I am the rain has put a bit of a damper on it but still it goes like a fire in the rain. I am truly impressed with the vivid imagery used in this poem and as I read it I can hear the drums and chants the crowds and feet dancing. You have captured it so well a definite fave
February 16th, 2026 15:41
Things
sorenbarrett said:
A most philosophic poem where an old saying is restated and rationalized in more poetic terms. Well done
January 20th, 2026 19:53
sorenbarrett said:
A most philosophic poem where an old saying is restated and rationalized in more poetic terms. Well done
January 20th, 2026 19:53
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