Comments received on poems by ᴍᴏᴏɴ
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Fränz Müller said:
They are not and should not be viewed as interchangeable! Mic drop!
September 20th, 2026 20:52
Fränz Müller said:
They are not and should not be viewed as interchangeable! Mic drop!
September 20th, 2026 20:52
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Freaking good question, Sylva...and I’m not sure most people know the difference anymore. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2026 18:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Freaking good question, Sylva...and I’m not sure most people know the difference anymore. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2026 18:13
Silly little life!
Fränz Müller said:
Something exciting awaits all of us, just around the bend, it we’re patient. Well done!
September 20th, 2026 16:30
Fränz Müller said:
Something exciting awaits all of us, just around the bend, it we’re patient. Well done!
September 20th, 2026 16:30
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sorenbarrett said:
A great question When love is found out to be passion.
September 20th, 2026 15:18
sorenbarrett said:
A great question When love is found out to be passion.
September 20th, 2026 15:18
\"ꜱᴀꜰᴇ\" ʜᴀᴠᴇɴ
Fränz Müller said:
Is there really a big difference between dreams we desire and memories of things we actually experienced?
September 19th, 2026 21:32
Fränz Müller said:
Is there really a big difference between dreams we desire and memories of things we actually experienced?
September 19th, 2026 21:32
Silly little life!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Sylva...yeah. Keep finding reasons. Ridiculous reasons, beautiful reasons, tiny reasons, whatever reasons work. Just keep finding them. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 15:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Sylva...yeah. Keep finding reasons. Ridiculous reasons, beautiful reasons, tiny reasons, whatever reasons work. Just keep finding them. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 15:09
Silly little life!
sorenbarrett said:
Why do I feel that I had just read this. Did I forget to comment? It is well written posing several questions pertinent to life itself. Nicely done
September 19th, 2026 15:06
sorenbarrett said:
Why do I feel that I had just read this. Did I forget to comment? It is well written posing several questions pertinent to life itself. Nicely done
September 19th, 2026 15:06
Silly little life!
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic listing of things to live for and an argument against going too soon. Well done.
September 19th, 2026 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic listing of things to live for and an argument against going too soon. Well done.
September 19th, 2026 14:32
\"ꜱᴀꜰᴇ\" ʜᴀᴠᴇɴ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oof, Sylva. There is a particular lingering hurt in wanting somewhere you\'ve never actually been, and somehow missing it anyway. I know that feeling. Relatable poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 14:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oof, Sylva. There is a particular lingering hurt in wanting somewhere you\'ve never actually been, and somehow missing it anyway. I know that feeling. Relatable poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 14:14
\"ꜱᴀꜰᴇ\" ʜᴀᴠᴇɴ
sorenbarrett said:
The mindset that one can not catches us by the foot and holds us back. A write of sadness over what one is not yet one can be anything if one lives it. Be what you want. Good write
September 18th, 2026 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
The mindset that one can not catches us by the foot and holds us back. A write of sadness over what one is not yet one can be anything if one lives it. Be what you want. Good write
September 18th, 2026 12:57
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, damn...this is tiny, but it carries such a huge ache. That helpless feeling of knowing something is inside you but being unable to bring it out comes through so clearly. Beautiful and most definitely, a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2026 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, damn...this is tiny, but it carries such a huge ache. That helpless feeling of knowing something is inside you but being unable to bring it out comes through so clearly. Beautiful and most definitely, a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2026 09:20
ᴛʜɪꜱ ɪꜱ ɢᴏᴏᴅʙʏᴇ, ᴛʜᴇɴ?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, what a painfully honest farewell. You hold love, confusion, rejection, and reluctant acceptance together without turning any of them into hatred. The absence of closure makes the loss even harder to carry…and you captured that beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2026 15:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, what a painfully honest farewell. You hold love, confusion, rejection, and reluctant acceptance together without turning any of them into hatred. The absence of closure makes the loss even harder to carry…and you captured that beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2026 15:01
ᴛʜɪꜱ ɪꜱ ɢᴏᴏᴅʙʏᴇ, ᴛʜᴇɴ?
Fränz Müller said:
It’s such a shame when people vanish out of our lives, leaving behind a shadow of memories and a cloud of questions…quite moving, this one.
September 15th, 2026 13:00
Fränz Müller said:
It’s such a shame when people vanish out of our lives, leaving behind a shadow of memories and a cloud of questions…quite moving, this one.
September 15th, 2026 13:00
ᴛʜɪꜱ ɪꜱ ɢᴏᴏᴅʙʏᴇ, ᴛʜᴇɴ?
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that speaks of all that loss we experience and feel after it is unexpectedly gone. Well written
September 15th, 2026 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that speaks of all that loss we experience and feel after it is unexpectedly gone. Well written
September 15th, 2026 10:51
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Fränz Müller said:
I like my computer chips barbeque flavored! 😁. Wonderfully written!
September 14th, 2026 14:02
Fränz Müller said:
I like my computer chips barbeque flavored! 😁. Wonderfully written!
September 14th, 2026 14:02
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful poem, Sylva. The fusion of biology, programming, and consciousness creates a disturbing world where personhood must continually defend itself against classification. It is philosophical, visceral, and painfully relevant. Exceptional writing, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2026 19:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful poem, Sylva. The fusion of biology, programming, and consciousness creates a disturbing world where personhood must continually defend itself against classification. It is philosophical, visceral, and painfully relevant. Exceptional writing, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2026 19:01
ᴘᴀʀɪꜱ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Gorgeous poem, Sylva! The romance carries both wonder and ache...two creative lives reaching toward one another across distance, uncertainty, and possibility. I know how precious an unlikely hope can become. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 08:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Gorgeous poem, Sylva! The romance carries both wonder and ache...two creative lives reaching toward one another across distance, uncertainty, and possibility. I know how precious an unlikely hope can become. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 08:55
ᴘᴀʀɪꜱ
sorenbarrett said:
This has such a wistful feel. So many cues the Paris brings memories of Casablanca and we will always have Paris, the second stanza Harry Chapin and Taxi, the third Neil Diamond and the song Play Me. The last stanza Herbert Gronemeyer Der Weg. A most lovey write that plays softly on the soul. A fave
September 8th, 2026 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
This has such a wistful feel. So many cues the Paris brings memories of Casablanca and we will always have Paris, the second stanza Harry Chapin and Taxi, the third Neil Diamond and the song Play Me. The last stanza Herbert Gronemeyer Der Weg. A most lovey write that plays softly on the soul. A fave
September 8th, 2026 06:18
ʜᴏᴡ ʟᴏɴɢ?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful piece, Sylva. The repetition gives the whole poem this relentless pressure...school, performance, identity, and sheer exhaustion all closing in at once. It feels deeply human and painfully immediate. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2026 14:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful piece, Sylva. The repetition gives the whole poem this relentless pressure...school, performance, identity, and sheer exhaustion all closing in at once. It feels deeply human and painfully immediate. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2026 14:00
ʜᴏᴡ ʟᴏɴɢ?
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that only the questioner can answer. We have all asked this from the bull rider reaching for an eight second ride to old man celebrating his hundredth birthday party. Well done
September 7th, 2026 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that only the questioner can answer. We have all asked this from the bull rider reaching for an eight second ride to old man celebrating his hundredth birthday party. Well done
September 7th, 2026 08:18
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a moving poem, Moon. The memories feel so alive that the loss of that closeness becomes even heavier…not because everything ended badly, but because something once deeply familiar has become distant. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a moving poem, Moon. The memories feel so alive that the loss of that closeness becomes even heavier…not because everything ended badly, but because something once deeply familiar has become distant. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:04
ꜱᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ
sorenbarrett said:
An end of school graduation poem that reflects the time of separation and people going their own ways. Nicely done
September 4th, 2026 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
An end of school graduation poem that reflects the time of separation and people going their own ways. Nicely done
September 4th, 2026 11:34
ꜱᴜᴅᴅᴇɴʟʏ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a poignant piece, Sylva. Time quietly alters the people, light, and world surrounding the speaker while childhood remains vivid just beneath the surface...bittersweet, intimate, and deeply relatable. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a poignant piece, Sylva. Time quietly alters the people, light, and world surrounding the speaker while childhood remains vivid just beneath the surface...bittersweet, intimate, and deeply relatable. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:30
ᴛʜᴇ ꜱʜᴀᴅᴏᴡ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a raw and haunting piece, Sylva. You move through the desperate need to understand an inner darkness, only to confront the terror that it cannot simply be removed...intimate, relentless, and painfully real. One hell of a poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a raw and haunting piece, Sylva. You move through the desperate need to understand an inner darkness, only to confront the terror that it cannot simply be removed...intimate, relentless, and painfully real. One hell of a poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:17
ꜱᴜᴅᴅᴇɴʟʏ
Fränz Müller said:
Life passes in the blink of an eye. Take it from a fifty-something teenager! 😭
September 3rd, 2026 09:42
Fränz Müller said:
Life passes in the blink of an eye. Take it from a fifty-something teenager! 😭
September 3rd, 2026 09:42
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