Comments received on poems by ᴍᴏᴏɴ
ꜱᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ
sorenbarrett said:
An end of school graduation poem that reflects the time of separation and people going their own ways. Nicely done
September 4th, 2026 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
An end of school graduation poem that reflects the time of separation and people going their own ways. Nicely done
September 4th, 2026 11:34
ꜱᴜᴅᴅᴇɴʟʏ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a poignant piece, Sylva. Time quietly alters the people, light, and world surrounding the speaker while childhood remains vivid just beneath the surface...bittersweet, intimate, and deeply relatable. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a poignant piece, Sylva. Time quietly alters the people, light, and world surrounding the speaker while childhood remains vivid just beneath the surface...bittersweet, intimate, and deeply relatable. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:30
ᴛʜᴇ ꜱʜᴀᴅᴏᴡ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a raw and haunting piece, Sylva. You move through the desperate need to understand an inner darkness, only to confront the terror that it cannot simply be removed...intimate, relentless, and painfully real. One hell of a poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a raw and haunting piece, Sylva. You move through the desperate need to understand an inner darkness, only to confront the terror that it cannot simply be removed...intimate, relentless, and painfully real. One hell of a poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:17
ꜱᴜᴅᴅᴇɴʟʏ
Fränz Müller said:
Life passes in the blink of an eye. Take it from a fifty-something teenager! 😭
September 3rd, 2026 09:42
Fränz Müller said:
Life passes in the blink of an eye. Take it from a fifty-something teenager! 😭
September 3rd, 2026 09:42
ꜱᴜᴅᴅᴇɴʟʏ
sorenbarrett said:
Time an illusion that in the swing of the wand, clap of hands and puff of smoke things change in a magic world. Nicely written
September 3rd, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Time an illusion that in the swing of the wand, clap of hands and puff of smoke things change in a magic world. Nicely written
September 3rd, 2026 04:08
ᴛʜᴇ ꜱʜᴀᴅᴏᴡ
Fränz Müller said:
We cannot escape who we are but we can make the decision to become someone else entirely 😁
September 2nd, 2026 16:43
Fränz Müller said:
We cannot escape who we are but we can make the decision to become someone else entirely 😁
September 2nd, 2026 16:43
ᴛʜᴇ ꜱʜᴀᴅᴏᴡ
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of how one can never escape who they are. Nicely composed with feeling. Well written
September 2nd, 2026 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of how one can never escape who they are. Nicely composed with feeling. Well written
September 2nd, 2026 10:16
ɴᴏ ᴡᴀʏ ᴏᴜᴛ
somberabyss said:
beautiful poem, your writing spoke to my heart.
September 1st, 2026 16:59
somberabyss said:
beautiful poem, your writing spoke to my heart.
September 1st, 2026 16:59
ɴᴏ ᴡᴀʏ ᴏᴜᴛ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a raw piece, Sylva. The darkness feels consuming, but the voice never completely disappears inside it...there is still resistance, still awareness, still something refusing to surrender entirely. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a raw piece, Sylva. The darkness feels consuming, but the voice never completely disappears inside it...there is still resistance, still awareness, still something refusing to surrender entirely. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:41
ɴᴏ ᴡᴀʏ ᴏᴜᴛ
sorenbarrett said:
All prisoners of our body and mind we have no way out of this. I hear this in the poem where the corporal and the mental are prisons for the soul. Well written
September 1st, 2026 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
All prisoners of our body and mind we have no way out of this. I hear this in the poem where the corporal and the mental are prisons for the soul. Well written
September 1st, 2026 08:17
ɪ ᴘʀᴇꜰᴇʀ ʙᴜɢꜱ
Fränz Müller said:
Sometimes we need to hold onto things that are just for us.
August 31st, 2026 22:15
Fränz Müller said:
Sometimes we need to hold onto things that are just for us.
August 31st, 2026 22:15
ɪ ᴘʀᴇꜰᴇʀ ʙᴜɢꜱ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a sharp little piece, Sylva. It holds back a storm of feeling beneath an almost peaceful surface...and that refusal to hand over even one more piece of yourself gives the ending real force. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2026 08:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a sharp little piece, Sylva. It holds back a storm of feeling beneath an almost peaceful surface...and that refusal to hand over even one more piece of yourself gives the ending real force. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2026 08:35
ɪ ᴘʀᴇꜰᴇʀ ʙᴜɢꜱ
sorenbarrett said:
The emotions overflow in this poem where a can is opened finding it overfilled. I have felt this before when the weather is too good to disturb and the moment passes making it too late for intervention all to experience a calm and sunny day. Lovely a fave
August 31st, 2026 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
The emotions overflow in this poem where a can is opened finding it overfilled. I have felt this before when the weather is too good to disturb and the moment passes making it too late for intervention all to experience a calm and sunny day. Lovely a fave
August 31st, 2026 05:04
ᴅɪꜱᴘᴏꜱᴀʙʟᴇ
Fränz Müller said:
We all have a limited shelf life, but the brutality of others can shorten even that. One man’s trash is another man’s treasure, as the saying goes, so while others may not see my value, I fancy myself as a pile of golden doubloons. Great poem!
August 25th, 2026 21:27
Fränz Müller said:
We all have a limited shelf life, but the brutality of others can shorten even that. One man’s trash is another man’s treasure, as the saying goes, so while others may not see my value, I fancy myself as a pile of golden doubloons. Great poem!
August 25th, 2026 21:27
ᴅɪꜱᴘᴏꜱᴀʙʟᴇ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is brutal. The escalating physical destruction makes the emotional exploitation terrifyingly tangible...being valued only for what one provides leaves the speaker emptied of dignity and expecting abandonment. This struck a raw place. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 19:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is brutal. The escalating physical destruction makes the emotional exploitation terrifyingly tangible...being valued only for what one provides leaves the speaker emptied of dignity and expecting abandonment. This struck a raw place. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 19:01
ᴅɪꜱᴘᴏꜱᴀʙʟᴇ
sorenbarrett said:
Disposable in a throw away world. A sad write of being used. Here today gone tomorrow. Well written
August 25th, 2026 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
Disposable in a throw away world. A sad write of being used. Here today gone tomorrow. Well written
August 25th, 2026 09:23
ᴄᴏʟʟᴇɢᴇ ᴋɪᴅ
Fränz Müller said:
We rush to grow up and then discover when we arrive that this whole adult thing is a load of malarkey!
August 23rd, 2026 15:55
Fränz Müller said:
We rush to grow up and then discover when we arrive that this whole adult thing is a load of malarkey!
August 23rd, 2026 15:55
ᴄᴏʟʟᴇɢᴇ ᴋɪᴅ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a powerful and painfully honest piece. The repetition begins with determination, then gradually reveals the frightened young person beneath every expectation. As a parent of young adults in this stage, this landed deeply with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 13:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a powerful and painfully honest piece. The repetition begins with determination, then gradually reveals the frightened young person beneath every expectation. As a parent of young adults in this stage, this landed deeply with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 13:02
ᴄᴏʟʟᴇɢᴇ ᴋɪᴅ
sorenbarrett said:
We are all school kids learning as we go and the lessons are homework given. Nicely written real and metaphorical. Well done
August 23rd, 2026 12:41
sorenbarrett said:
We are all school kids learning as we go and the lessons are homework given. Nicely written real and metaphorical. Well done
August 23rd, 2026 12:41
ᴛʜɪꜱ ɪꜱɴᴛ ᴇᴠᴇɴ ᴀ ᴘᴏᴇᴍ
Fränz Müller said:
Sometimes life goes on even when the shine has long since faded out. Nicely said.
August 19th, 2026 19:58
Fränz Müller said:
Sometimes life goes on even when the shine has long since faded out. Nicely said.
August 19th, 2026 19:58
ᴛʜɪꜱ ɪꜱɴᴛ ᴇᴠᴇɴ ᴀ ᴘᴏᴇᴍ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this is raw, painful, and deeply human. You captured the strange cruelty of continuing physically while feeling depleted within. Your words matter, and so do you…please stay connected to someone you trust and let them know how you are feeling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this is raw, painful, and deeply human. You captured the strange cruelty of continuing physically while feeling depleted within. Your words matter, and so do you…please stay connected to someone you trust and let them know how you are feeling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:19
ᴛʜɪꜱ ɪꜱɴᴛ ᴇᴠᴇɴ ᴀ ᴘᴏᴇᴍ
sorenbarrett said:
There is a melancholy to this write a darkness and shadow that draws ever closer to the final beat. There is this finality where the race ends and nothing awaits. Well written
August 19th, 2026 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
There is a melancholy to this write a darkness and shadow that draws ever closer to the final beat. There is this finality where the race ends and nothing awaits. Well written
August 19th, 2026 06:15
ᴇꜱᴄᴀᴘᴇ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, I’ve spent a lot of time with thoughts like these myself…that strange place between what we know, what we feel, and what might exist beyond all of it. This connected with me right away. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, I’ve spent a lot of time with thoughts like these myself…that strange place between what we know, what we feel, and what might exist beyond all of it. This connected with me right away. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:44
ᴇꜱᴄᴀᴘᴇ
sorenbarrett said:
There is something about this write whether the internal rhyme or cadence, or just the message that makes it special. A fave
August 13th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
There is something about this write whether the internal rhyme or cadence, or just the message that makes it special. A fave
August 13th, 2026 04:27
