Comments received on poems by ᴍᴏᴏɴ
ᴅɪꜱᴘᴏꜱᴀʙʟᴇ
Fränz Müller said:
We all have a limited shelf life, but the brutality of others can shorten even that. One man’s trash is another man’s treasure, as the saying goes, so while others may not see my value, I fancy myself as a pile of golden doubloons. Great poem!
August 25th, 2026 21:27
Fränz Müller said:
We all have a limited shelf life, but the brutality of others can shorten even that. One man’s trash is another man’s treasure, as the saying goes, so while others may not see my value, I fancy myself as a pile of golden doubloons. Great poem!
August 25th, 2026 21:27
ᴅɪꜱᴘᴏꜱᴀʙʟᴇ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is brutal. The escalating physical destruction makes the emotional exploitation terrifyingly tangible...being valued only for what one provides leaves the speaker emptied of dignity and expecting abandonment. This struck a raw place. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 19:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is brutal. The escalating physical destruction makes the emotional exploitation terrifyingly tangible...being valued only for what one provides leaves the speaker emptied of dignity and expecting abandonment. This struck a raw place. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 19:01
ᴅɪꜱᴘᴏꜱᴀʙʟᴇ
sorenbarrett said:
Disposable in a throw away world. A sad write of being used. Here today gone tomorrow. Well written
August 25th, 2026 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
Disposable in a throw away world. A sad write of being used. Here today gone tomorrow. Well written
August 25th, 2026 09:23
ᴄᴏʟʟᴇɢᴇ ᴋɪᴅ
Fränz Müller said:
We rush to grow up and then discover when we arrive that this whole adult thing is a load of malarkey!
August 23rd, 2026 15:55
Fränz Müller said:
We rush to grow up and then discover when we arrive that this whole adult thing is a load of malarkey!
August 23rd, 2026 15:55
ᴄᴏʟʟᴇɢᴇ ᴋɪᴅ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a powerful and painfully honest piece. The repetition begins with determination, then gradually reveals the frightened young person beneath every expectation. As a parent of young adults in this stage, this landed deeply with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 13:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a powerful and painfully honest piece. The repetition begins with determination, then gradually reveals the frightened young person beneath every expectation. As a parent of young adults in this stage, this landed deeply with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 13:02
ᴄᴏʟʟᴇɢᴇ ᴋɪᴅ
sorenbarrett said:
We are all school kids learning as we go and the lessons are homework given. Nicely written real and metaphorical. Well done
August 23rd, 2026 12:41
sorenbarrett said:
We are all school kids learning as we go and the lessons are homework given. Nicely written real and metaphorical. Well done
August 23rd, 2026 12:41
ᴛʜɪꜱ ɪꜱɴᴛ ᴇᴠᴇɴ ᴀ ᴘᴏᴇᴍ
Fränz Müller said:
Sometimes life goes on even when the shine has long since faded out. Nicely said.
August 19th, 2026 19:58
Fränz Müller said:
Sometimes life goes on even when the shine has long since faded out. Nicely said.
August 19th, 2026 19:58
ᴛʜɪꜱ ɪꜱɴᴛ ᴇᴠᴇɴ ᴀ ᴘᴏᴇᴍ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this is raw, painful, and deeply human. You captured the strange cruelty of continuing physically while feeling depleted within. Your words matter, and so do you…please stay connected to someone you trust and let them know how you are feeling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this is raw, painful, and deeply human. You captured the strange cruelty of continuing physically while feeling depleted within. Your words matter, and so do you…please stay connected to someone you trust and let them know how you are feeling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:19
ᴛʜɪꜱ ɪꜱɴᴛ ᴇᴠᴇɴ ᴀ ᴘᴏᴇᴍ
sorenbarrett said:
There is a melancholy to this write a darkness and shadow that draws ever closer to the final beat. There is this finality where the race ends and nothing awaits. Well written
August 19th, 2026 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
There is a melancholy to this write a darkness and shadow that draws ever closer to the final beat. There is this finality where the race ends and nothing awaits. Well written
August 19th, 2026 06:15
ᴇꜱᴄᴀᴘᴇ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, I’ve spent a lot of time with thoughts like these myself…that strange place between what we know, what we feel, and what might exist beyond all of it. This connected with me right away. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, I’ve spent a lot of time with thoughts like these myself…that strange place between what we know, what we feel, and what might exist beyond all of it. This connected with me right away. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:44
ᴇꜱᴄᴀᴘᴇ
sorenbarrett said:
There is something about this write whether the internal rhyme or cadence, or just the message that makes it special. A fave
August 13th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
There is something about this write whether the internal rhyme or cadence, or just the message that makes it special. A fave
August 13th, 2026 04:27
