Comments received on poems by Zafor pathan @ জাফর পাঠান
Tears of War
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this really moved me. The image that stays with me most is not the weapons or the destruction, but the children caught in the middle of it all. They never choose these conflicts, yet they so often carry the deepest scars. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this really moved me. The image that stays with me most is not the weapons or the destruction, but the children caught in the middle of it all. They never choose these conflicts, yet they so often carry the deepest scars. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:14
Tears of War
sorenbarrett said:
It would be hard to disagree with this poem its imagery is graphic as is war itself. Well done
June 12th, 2026 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
It would be hard to disagree with this poem its imagery is graphic as is war itself. Well done
June 12th, 2026 07:18
Fisted Hands
sorenbarrett said:
This piece cries out with outrage and stands firm drawing its boundaries. It speaks of defending the right and is powerful and strong. Nicely written
March 14th, 2026 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
This piece cries out with outrage and stands firm drawing its boundaries. It speaks of defending the right and is powerful and strong. Nicely written
March 14th, 2026 03:53
I am the devil
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting comparison of the two aspects religion and government I see Smashana Kali here. Government pretends to be Dakshina Kali the nurturer and mother but when in place turns her face and Smashana takes over. A lovely write
March 1st, 2026 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting comparison of the two aspects religion and government I see Smashana Kali here. Government pretends to be Dakshina Kali the nurturer and mother but when in place turns her face and Smashana takes over. A lovely write
March 1st, 2026 13:05
