Comments received on poems by mc4300
Worthless
Catherine Houston said:
Open your eyes.. Look in the mirror.. Now tell yourself you are worthy.. You are never alone when the pen rests in your hand.. write it out.. Share it and discover who you truly are.. Unleash the pain and start building the joy.. As long as this site is here.. We are not alone.. Now remember the last time you smiled and smile today. Be grateful that you can still carry that same smile.. Do not let life drop pebbles on your head.. You are worth so much more.......... Your new found friend, CAT
May 16th, 2016 14:19
Catherine Houston said:
Open your eyes.. Look in the mirror.. Now tell yourself you are worthy.. You are never alone when the pen rests in your hand.. write it out.. Share it and discover who you truly are.. Unleash the pain and start building the joy.. As long as this site is here.. We are not alone.. Now remember the last time you smiled and smile today. Be grateful that you can still carry that same smile.. Do not let life drop pebbles on your head.. You are worth so much more.......... Your new found friend, CAT
May 16th, 2016 14:19
Worthless
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MC ! A very sad but honest first poem ! Your poem is well structures with rhyme and rhythm but the content is WORTHLESS ! Why do your feel that way. I have "off days" when i feel WORTHLESS but i always bounce back. I realise that in MAN's sight I may be WORTHLESS but in God' sight I am unique and very very precious - OK _ BRIAN
May 16th, 2016 05:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MC ! A very sad but honest first poem ! Your poem is well structures with rhyme and rhythm but the content is WORTHLESS ! Why do your feel that way. I have "off days" when i feel WORTHLESS but i always bounce back. I realise that in MAN's sight I may be WORTHLESS but in God' sight I am unique and very very precious - OK _ BRIAN
May 16th, 2016 05:25
