Comments received on poems by IAmJaz
Keep On Faking It
elphaba993 said:
I love this. Fake it til you make it, right?
July 21st, 2016 13:48
elphaba993 said:
I love this. Fake it til you make it, right?
July 21st, 2016 13:48
Keep On Faking It
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JAZZ ~ When we are depressed no one hears our cries. BUT ~ as you suggest ~ when we fake it people actually notice us ! SMILE (even a fake one) and the World smiles with you ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
July 21st, 2016 13:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JAZZ ~ When we are depressed no one hears our cries. BUT ~ as you suggest ~ when we fake it people actually notice us ! SMILE (even a fake one) and the World smiles with you ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
July 21st, 2016 13:28
Coward
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Powerful, and very strong words. I hope you wrote this about someone other than you; but if not,
what a forceful comeback!
July 20th, 2016 12:50
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Powerful, and very strong words. I hope you wrote this about someone other than you; but if not,
what a forceful comeback!
July 20th, 2016 12:50
Because Of You
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
There is nice imagery with this piece, in which, I can relate. Nicely done, fellow poet!
I look forward to more.
July 20th, 2016 04:03
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
There is nice imagery with this piece, in which, I can relate. Nicely done, fellow poet!
I look forward to more.
July 20th, 2016 04:03
A Mother\'s Love
Daniel said:
Wow,a very emotional moving poem beautifully written.
June 26th, 2016 19:23
Daniel said:
Wow,a very emotional moving poem beautifully written.
June 26th, 2016 19:23
Ignored
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI JAZ ~ The maxim is ~ The shorter the Poem the more powerful the message and often we say it best when we say nothing at all ! My Ghost always dances and always try to thwart my muse ! We are "what we are" and that is more important than whether we matter or not ! But always remember JAZ that by posting a poem (however short or fraught) you are telling me YOU EXIST ~ and by commenting I am telling you YOU MATTER ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
June 23rd, 2016 15:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI JAZ ~ The maxim is ~ The shorter the Poem the more powerful the message and often we say it best when we say nothing at all ! My Ghost always dances and always try to thwart my muse ! We are "what we are" and that is more important than whether we matter or not ! But always remember JAZ that by posting a poem (however short or fraught) you are telling me YOU EXIST ~ and by commenting I am telling you YOU MATTER ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
June 23rd, 2016 15:31
A Mother\'s Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL JAZZ ~ Love the poem ~ love the photo ! Your MUM is the most precious person in the World to always be there for you 24/7 "S" is for salvation and our Mum's save us from many things and through their prayers even from Satan himself'. I love my MUM just as you love yours ! Thanks for carin' an' sharin' Love BRIAN
June 23rd, 2016 10:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL JAZZ ~ Love the poem ~ love the photo ! Your MUM is the most precious person in the World to always be there for you 24/7 "S" is for salvation and our Mum's save us from many things and through their prayers even from Satan himself'. I love my MUM just as you love yours ! Thanks for carin' an' sharin' Love BRIAN
June 23rd, 2016 10:34
Break Away
IAmJaz said:
Your feedback has literally been the highlight of my days since I've been on here. Have a wonderful day Brian. 💘
May 21st, 2016 08:32
IAmJaz said:
Your feedback has literally been the highlight of my days since I've been on here. Have a wonderful day Brian. 💘
May 21st, 2016 08:32
Break Away
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JAZ for another beautiful poem to brighten our day ! Perfectly structured replete with rhyme and rhythm ! The content surpasses the structure. ! An invitation to open our minds - spread our wings - open our hearts to love ! Break free - break away and let our inner light shine through ! I love the message and it's Saturday - mad as a hatter day - AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
May 21st, 2016 03:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JAZ for another beautiful poem to brighten our day ! Perfectly structured replete with rhyme and rhythm ! The content surpasses the structure. ! An invitation to open our minds - spread our wings - open our hearts to love ! Break free - break away and let our inner light shine through ! I love the message and it's Saturday - mad as a hatter day - AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
May 21st, 2016 03:52
Spoon
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JAZ - great analogy ! Lots of people love to be spoon fed and people like you and I (the encouragers) are always on hand to feed them and often no one feeds us. If we are not careful we become weary with well doing ! "underdog - dull - forgotten - lost - empty - invisible (I love this poem !) BUT - Sail on silver girl - sail on by - all your dreams are on their way - see how they shine ! If you ever need a Friend - I'm sailing close behind - Like a Bridge over Troubled Water - I will ease your mind ! More poems PLEASE - BRIAN
May 20th, 2016 08:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JAZ - great analogy ! Lots of people love to be spoon fed and people like you and I (the encouragers) are always on hand to feed them and often no one feeds us. If we are not careful we become weary with well doing ! "underdog - dull - forgotten - lost - empty - invisible (I love this poem !) BUT - Sail on silver girl - sail on by - all your dreams are on their way - see how they shine ! If you ever need a Friend - I'm sailing close behind - Like a Bridge over Troubled Water - I will ease your mind ! More poems PLEASE - BRIAN
May 20th, 2016 08:27
Trail
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JAZ - and thanks for a great first poem ! We are NOT born equal we are born DIFFERENT. However (as your poem says) we are all born with endless opportunities and it how we grasp them (or let them slip) that makes the difference ! I think your negatives exemplify "all" our experiences ! NO Roads - NO Globes - NO Thrones - N0 Pedestals - NO overflowing wallet and the inevitability of FATE ! Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
May 20th, 2016 03:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JAZ - and thanks for a great first poem ! We are NOT born equal we are born DIFFERENT. However (as your poem says) we are all born with endless opportunities and it how we grasp them (or let them slip) that makes the difference ! I think your negatives exemplify "all" our experiences ! NO Roads - NO Globes - NO Thrones - N0 Pedestals - NO overflowing wallet and the inevitability of FATE ! Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
May 20th, 2016 03:07
