Comments received on poems by Samabama2324
Word Vomit
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT FLOW POEM SAL - Bubbling with rhyme and rhythm for 34 unstoppable lines - I was out of breath reading it ! So much for the structure what did it say to me ? In the poem - I do see your soul ! You want to be liked and I do like you and your poetry - it's always challenging. Your poetry always makes me happy. Thanks for caring thanks for sharing - BRIAN
May 22nd, 2016 16:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT FLOW POEM SAL - Bubbling with rhyme and rhythm for 34 unstoppable lines - I was out of breath reading it ! So much for the structure what did it say to me ? In the poem - I do see your soul ! You want to be liked and I do like you and your poetry - it's always challenging. Your poetry always makes me happy. Thanks for caring thanks for sharing - BRIAN
May 22nd, 2016 16:03
Intergalactic Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SAL - another great poem ! In my experience LOVE is always intergalactic ! We spoon under the Moon and always see Stars ! I love rhyming couplets - gives the poem flow and an intergalactic glow ! BRIAN
May 21st, 2016 16:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SAL - another great poem ! In my experience LOVE is always intergalactic ! We spoon under the Moon and always see Stars ! I love rhyming couplets - gives the poem flow and an intergalactic glow ! BRIAN
May 21st, 2016 16:40
Look
Kebiin said:
Your symbolism is fantastic, as someone who is also new to this site I like to see what first time publications others have to bring. Your words were strong and very moving and I appreciated you sharing this. Keep up the creativity!
May 20th, 2016 15:36
Kebiin said:
Your symbolism is fantastic, as someone who is also new to this site I like to see what first time publications others have to bring. Your words were strong and very moving and I appreciated you sharing this. Keep up the creativity!
May 20th, 2016 15:36
Look
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SAL - Great first poem ! Love the flow and rhythm in your free verse poem - cool to read and recite. The topic comes as no surprise - most Men are very changeable ! The opening seven lines are how we like to be remembered ! Look - hold - cherish - touch - reminisce - care for - beautiful ! If we show these seven graces you promise to forget: Side glances - isolation - took for granted - hateful touch - invalidation ............. You are very forgiving. There is pathos in your last line ........ Then I will love you like you're the person you used to be.. SAL - When i read these sad love poems - it makes me ashamed to be a Man. Thanks for sharing we do learn from them ! BRIAN
May 20th, 2016 15:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SAL - Great first poem ! Love the flow and rhythm in your free verse poem - cool to read and recite. The topic comes as no surprise - most Men are very changeable ! The opening seven lines are how we like to be remembered ! Look - hold - cherish - touch - reminisce - care for - beautiful ! If we show these seven graces you promise to forget: Side glances - isolation - took for granted - hateful touch - invalidation ............. You are very forgiving. There is pathos in your last line ........ Then I will love you like you're the person you used to be.. SAL - When i read these sad love poems - it makes me ashamed to be a Man. Thanks for sharing we do learn from them ! BRIAN
May 20th, 2016 15:34
