Comments received on poems by š¯“¬š¯“±š¯“Ŗš¯“·š¯“®š¯“µ
i love life
sorenbarrett said:
I loved this concept that it is in the dark that one is most miserable and in need of company for it. Lovely
August 29th, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
I loved this concept that it is in the dark that one is most miserable and in need of company for it. Lovely
August 29th, 2026 04:11
the everlasting flame
ā€“ NoeticNonsense said:
This piece hold the raw power of an honest confessionā€”
this write holds nostalgia in its hands, spoon feeding me bits of its pain.
I recently experienced a traumatic relationship and reading this piece, I heard it in her voice.
Excellent job externalizing the internal weatherā€¦
August 28th, 2026 17:48
ā€“ NoeticNonsense said:
This piece hold the raw power of an honest confessionā€”
this write holds nostalgia in its hands, spoon feeding me bits of its pain.
I recently experienced a traumatic relationship and reading this piece, I heard it in her voice.
Excellent job externalizing the internal weatherā€¦
August 28th, 2026 17:48
the everlasting flame
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem and quite a pitch it is. Nicely worded it is romantic. Well done
August 28th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem and quite a pitch it is. Nicely worded it is romantic. Well done
August 28th, 2026 04:16
the vow that didn\'t last
sorenbarrett said:
Temptation often overrides common and good sense. Nicely written it presents each decision and its temptation one by one. Well done
August 28th, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Temptation often overrides common and good sense. Nicely written it presents each decision and its temptation one by one. Well done
August 28th, 2026 04:11
i am who i am
sorenbarrett said:
This poem delves deep into those underlying thoughts and feelings that build or impinge upon relationships. Nicely done
August 27th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
This poem delves deep into those underlying thoughts and feelings that build or impinge upon relationships. Nicely done
August 27th, 2026 04:30
