Comments received on poems by grindbaby16
Enemies
Louis Gibbs said:
Congratulations on the level of maturity you have clearly attained, grindbaby! Strong poem, I especially like the last line, it speaks volumes.
May 31st, 2017 21:25
Louis Gibbs said:
Congratulations on the level of maturity you have clearly attained, grindbaby! Strong poem, I especially like the last line, it speaks volumes.
May 31st, 2017 21:25
Enemies
Sammertheone said:
Beautiful! Very well put. Your are strong, keep your head high and smile!
May 31st, 2017 21:20
Sammertheone said:
Beautiful! Very well put. Your are strong, keep your head high and smile!
May 31st, 2017 21:20
Enemies
hidden.shine said:
You voice great truth and you have astounding rhyme within this!
Well done.
May 31st, 2017 21:16
hidden.shine said:
You voice great truth and you have astounding rhyme within this!
Well done.
May 31st, 2017 21:16
Enemies
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GB - Love your first poem and the cool way you dealt with your enemies. Love the structure of the poem - each line is an internal rhyming couplet which gives the poem great pace and great flow. The poem exemplifies your maturity - you have dealt with your enemies and their violence so they no longer pose a threat and the fear has gone. A very positive poem - thanks for sharing. BRIAN
May 25th, 2016 15:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GB - Love your first poem and the cool way you dealt with your enemies. Love the structure of the poem - each line is an internal rhyming couplet which gives the poem great pace and great flow. The poem exemplifies your maturity - you have dealt with your enemies and their violence so they no longer pose a threat and the fear has gone. A very positive poem - thanks for sharing. BRIAN
May 25th, 2016 15:33
