Comments received on poems by OnMySoul
حبيبتى, My Love
lysistrata said:
Joking about "added 70% of it while i was typing it". It's so good....
Not sure about the title in Arabic?! I think you describe a 'dream love'? So....
I also think it needs a second look,but it's your call.I am sure you could improve it and I am looking forward to it. Now,what I think about LOVE?
Love could bring Paradise to Earth
Bond the East with the West
Transform a lion into lamb
Make broken glass sound like harp.
May 31st, 2016 10:14
lysistrata said:
Joking about "added 70% of it while i was typing it". It's so good....
Not sure about the title in Arabic?! I think you describe a 'dream love'? So....
I also think it needs a second look,but it's your call.I am sure you could improve it and I am looking forward to it. Now,what I think about LOVE?
Love could bring Paradise to Earth
Bond the East with the West
Transform a lion into lamb
Make broken glass sound like harp.
May 31st, 2016 10:14
حبيبتى, My Love
lysistrata said:
You are joking,right?
Feed?Back?
Tomorrow...
Alas,translate the Title?!
May 30th, 2016 10:08
lysistrata said:
You are joking,right?
Feed?Back?
Tomorrow...
Alas,translate the Title?!
May 30th, 2016 10:08
IDK
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME OMS - THANKS FOR BEAUTIFUL FIRST POEM ! Check my poems and you will see that (in essence) they are often inspired by a PICTURE. The poem you have conjured up is special because it is metaphorical and speaks he waves of life. My muse often strikes first with a visual image. Yours BRIAN
May 29th, 2016 09:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME OMS - THANKS FOR BEAUTIFUL FIRST POEM ! Check my poems and you will see that (in essence) they are often inspired by a PICTURE. The poem you have conjured up is special because it is metaphorical and speaks he waves of life. My muse often strikes first with a visual image. Yours BRIAN
May 29th, 2016 09:57
