Comments received on poems by tedious
Trigger
SheWasTheSun said:
A short yet powerful poem that leaves you thinking. I love it.
June 4th, 2016 00:41
SheWasTheSun said:
A short yet powerful poem that leaves you thinking. I love it.
June 4th, 2016 00:41
Trigger
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MISS "T" This is an important topic for a poem - GUNS ! I agree it's a major problem in the USA. I am always horrified when I see the gun shops we don't have them in the UK. For every 100 shot dead in the USA we only have ONE in the UK because of our Gun Laws. Trump wants to make it easier to own a gun - Hillary wants to make it harder to own a gun - who would you vote for ? The World is broken the sale of guns World wide must be stopped. Love your poem - love your attitude - Yours BRIAN
June 3rd, 2016 16:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MISS "T" This is an important topic for a poem - GUNS ! I agree it's a major problem in the USA. I am always horrified when I see the gun shops we don't have them in the UK. For every 100 shot dead in the USA we only have ONE in the UK because of our Gun Laws. Trump wants to make it easier to own a gun - Hillary wants to make it harder to own a gun - who would you vote for ? The World is broken the sale of guns World wide must be stopped. Love your poem - love your attitude - Yours BRIAN
June 3rd, 2016 16:32
Little Things
Naranjita32 said:
I love the picture full of love it's a wonderful visualization. Thanks for sharing you soul epression of love.
June 2nd, 2016 15:22
Naranjita32 said:
I love the picture full of love it's a wonderful visualization. Thanks for sharing you soul epression of love.
June 2nd, 2016 15:22
Little Things
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL MISS "T" It is the little things in life that make it bearable ! Love the structure of the poem. Quatrains (four line verses) make a neat statement and there is adequate rhyme & rhythm to make it flow. If it does not flow it's not a poem ! Poems are fluid prose ! Love the visual "Passing on the steps" ICONIC. Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
June 2nd, 2016 14:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL MISS "T" It is the little things in life that make it bearable ! Love the structure of the poem. Quatrains (four line verses) make a neat statement and there is adequate rhyme & rhythm to make it flow. If it does not flow it's not a poem ! Poems are fluid prose ! Love the visual "Passing on the steps" ICONIC. Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
June 2nd, 2016 14:43
Little Things
Berthold Lippel said:
Sweet love poem.
But it jogged my memory--I wrote something similar some years ago--and I found it. So I am publishing it in your honor: "Small Things Are Enough"
June 2nd, 2016 14:25
Berthold Lippel said:
Sweet love poem.
But it jogged my memory--I wrote something similar some years ago--and I found it. So I am publishing it in your honor: "Small Things Are Enough"
June 2nd, 2016 14:25
My Sweetie
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TEDIOUS (nice pen name) I love your first poem ! An excellent "free verse" ode with good syllable balance in each verse. This give it flow and makes it easy to read and recite (hallmarks of a good poem !). We all experience "Unrequited love" so I empathise with your poem. The object of our love is often both taken and unobtainable. Love your picture which adds substance to the dialogue. I add a picture to all my poems (please check). Each verse adds another facet to your dialogue. Love the last line "But, my sweetie, I surrender to your pain". Personally I feel the word SWEETIE is very appropriate for an unobtainable Englishman ! Yours BRIAN
June 1st, 2016 16:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TEDIOUS (nice pen name) I love your first poem ! An excellent "free verse" ode with good syllable balance in each verse. This give it flow and makes it easy to read and recite (hallmarks of a good poem !). We all experience "Unrequited love" so I empathise with your poem. The object of our love is often both taken and unobtainable. Love your picture which adds substance to the dialogue. I add a picture to all my poems (please check). Each verse adds another facet to your dialogue. Love the last line "But, my sweetie, I surrender to your pain". Personally I feel the word SWEETIE is very appropriate for an unobtainable Englishman ! Yours BRIAN
June 1st, 2016 16:28
My Sweetie
sickmind666 said:
I really enjoyed your first poem, I hope to see more like this one in the near future.
June 1st, 2016 15:59
sickmind666 said:
I really enjoyed your first poem, I hope to see more like this one in the near future.
June 1st, 2016 15:59
