Comments received on poems by Skye Marlene
Organs
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SKYE ~ EVERY ORGAN IS VITAL ~ for our life and our quality of life ! Heart ~ more than just a pump ! Lungs ~ more than just a pair of bellows ! Liver ~ a great sorting house of our nefarious diets and our Kidneys purifying our water works. They all affect our life and our love ! And YES our SOUL (free spirit) that controls our moods and madness "What shall we give in exchange for our soul ?. I agree with you final sentiment "We are truly free when we are never slaves to others but in control of our destinies of Body & Soul." Thanks BRIAN
July 15th, 2016 02:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SKYE ~ EVERY ORGAN IS VITAL ~ for our life and our quality of life ! Heart ~ more than just a pump ! Lungs ~ more than just a pair of bellows ! Liver ~ a great sorting house of our nefarious diets and our Kidneys purifying our water works. They all affect our life and our love ! And YES our SOUL (free spirit) that controls our moods and madness "What shall we give in exchange for our soul ?. I agree with you final sentiment "We are truly free when we are never slaves to others but in control of our destinies of Body & Soul." Thanks BRIAN
July 15th, 2016 02:10
Organs
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SKYE ~ EVERY ORGAN IS VITAL ~ for our life and our quality of life ! Heart ~ more than just a pump ! Lungs ~ more than just a pair of bellows ! Liver ~ a great sorting house of our nefarious diets and our Kidneys purifying our water works. They all affect our life and our love ! And YES our SOUL (free spirit) that controls our moods and madness "What shall we give in exchange for our soul ?. I agree with you final sentiment "We are truly free when we are never slaves to others but in control of our destinies of Body & Soul." Thanks BRIAN
July 15th, 2016 02:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SKYE ~ EVERY ORGAN IS VITAL ~ for our life and our quality of life ! Heart ~ more than just a pump ! Lungs ~ more than just a pair of bellows ! Liver ~ a great sorting house of our nefarious diets and our Kidneys purifying our water works. They all affect our life and our love ! And YES our SOUL (free spirit) that controls our moods and madness "What shall we give in exchange for our soul ?. I agree with you final sentiment "We are truly free when we are never slaves to others but in control of our destinies of Body & Soul." Thanks BRIAN
July 15th, 2016 02:10
Beyond
willyweed said:
spread you wings and fly
wonderful words you pen. Bravo
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July 11th, 2016 12:22
willyweed said:
spread you wings and fly
wonderful words you pen. Bravo
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July 11th, 2016 12:22
Beyond
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SKYE ~ Reads like an interesting metamorphosis. We are creatures of Eternity and can be flora or fauna or even human for 70 years ! Guck ~ a shell ~ wine ~ a corpse (even) ~ BUT ~ then at last a LOTUS FLOWER ~ high incarnation. If I become a Lotus Flower I would want to stay that way for eternity ~ BEAUTIFUL ! Thanks for sharing. BRIAN
July 11th, 2016 10:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SKYE ~ Reads like an interesting metamorphosis. We are creatures of Eternity and can be flora or fauna or even human for 70 years ! Guck ~ a shell ~ wine ~ a corpse (even) ~ BUT ~ then at last a LOTUS FLOWER ~ high incarnation. If I become a Lotus Flower I would want to stay that way for eternity ~ BEAUTIFUL ! Thanks for sharing. BRIAN
July 11th, 2016 10:51
knowing is not knowing at all
lysistrata said:
Misunderstandings and neglect occasion more mischief in the world than even malice and wickedness.
And anyway,most people cannot be read (especially artists). They are nothing more than fiction books!!📒📑📓📕📖📰
Cheer up a bit,
Lysi.
June 8th, 2016 08:42
lysistrata said:
Misunderstandings and neglect occasion more mischief in the world than even malice and wickedness.
And anyway,most people cannot be read (especially artists). They are nothing more than fiction books!!📒📑📓📕📖📰
Cheer up a bit,
Lysi.
June 8th, 2016 08:42
knowing is not knowing at all
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SKYE And thanks for you first poem (and your explanation !) Your "free verse" poem has great line structure which giuves it flow and makes it easy to read. ! The content is salutary but clever the way in which you relate "knowing a book by its cover" to knowing a person by exteranalities and never knowing (or understanding) he real person. I can empathise because as we go through life we have similar experiences "meeting people who know things by not knowing them at all !" Thanks for caring and sharing - BRIAN
June 7th, 2016 15:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SKYE And thanks for you first poem (and your explanation !) Your "free verse" poem has great line structure which giuves it flow and makes it easy to read. ! The content is salutary but clever the way in which you relate "knowing a book by its cover" to knowing a person by exteranalities and never knowing (or understanding) he real person. I can empathise because as we go through life we have similar experiences "meeting people who know things by not knowing them at all !" Thanks for caring and sharing - BRIAN
June 7th, 2016 15:41
