Comments received on poems by Survivor48
What is Considered Success?
willyweed said:
well said good form and structure. ww
August 10th, 2016 14:29
willyweed said:
well said good form and structure. ww
August 10th, 2016 14:29
Fear of Failure
lysistrata said:
If a God and a Human have sex,who is going to have the best orgasm?!😜
And who is to blame in case of Failure?!!😏
August 8th, 2016 08:45
lysistrata said:
If a God and a Human have sex,who is going to have the best orgasm?!😜
And who is to blame in case of Failure?!!😏
August 8th, 2016 08:45
My Own Worst Enemy
rrodriguez said:
We can be our own worse enemy. Nicely done!
August 7th, 2016 08:18
rrodriguez said:
We can be our own worse enemy. Nicely done!
August 7th, 2016 08:18
Patience
willyweed said:
I agree time like other things depends on one's perception.
well penned. ww
August 1st, 2016 14:23
willyweed said:
I agree time like other things depends on one's perception.
well penned. ww
August 1st, 2016 14:23
When they Say You Can’t, You Can
So So Bad Official said:
Well Written poem and great job!!!
July 30th, 2016 00:23
So So Bad Official said:
Well Written poem and great job!!!
July 30th, 2016 00:23
The Music of Lyrics
willyweed said:
well done with a positive message
I'm liking it! nice work!
July 28th, 2016 09:55
willyweed said:
well done with a positive message
I'm liking it! nice work!
July 28th, 2016 09:55
When they Say You Can’t, You Can
lysistrata said:
You should embrace uncertainty and explore your errors.
Some people are not as talented as they think or their environment tells them sooo...
July 25th, 2016 02:51
lysistrata said:
You should embrace uncertainty and explore your errors.
Some people are not as talented as they think or their environment tells them sooo...
July 25th, 2016 02:51
Motivation
lysistrata said:
"Running without stopping to victory"
I wouldn't recommendations that.
Watch your steps....
July 25th, 2016 02:48
lysistrata said:
"Running without stopping to victory"
I wouldn't recommendations that.
Watch your steps....
July 25th, 2016 02:48
When a Dream Leads to Greed
lysistrata said:
A dream that comes true and brings along fame and money is a different thing from Growth for the sake of growth. The latter is a breeding cancer...
I think you need to go deeper..
July 16th, 2016 10:40
lysistrata said:
A dream that comes true and brings along fame and money is a different thing from Growth for the sake of growth. The latter is a breeding cancer...
I think you need to go deeper..
July 16th, 2016 10:40
When a Dream Leads to Greed
DamilareBizBoss said:
Nice work... i really like it
July 16th, 2016 09:10
DamilareBizBoss said:
Nice work... i really like it
July 16th, 2016 09:10
Does the End Justify the Means?
lysistrata said:
"If the journey is kept righteous"
It is a matter of character to keep the journey righteous and who is responsible for 'constructing' this character?
Parental Upbringing
Experience &
Reason.
You did touch a very interesting theme....
July 13th, 2016 15:34
lysistrata said:
"If the journey is kept righteous"
It is a matter of character to keep the journey righteous and who is responsible for 'constructing' this character?
Parental Upbringing
Experience &
Reason.
You did touch a very interesting theme....
July 13th, 2016 15:34
Never Surrender
lysistrata said:
I NEVER surrender.I like the being sure but not too sure and expect the unexpected.
Si vis pacem,para bellum...
July 9th, 2016 11:52
lysistrata said:
I NEVER surrender.I like the being sure but not too sure and expect the unexpected.
Si vis pacem,para bellum...
July 9th, 2016 11:52
When Losing is the Only Option
inink said:
Losing teaches you a lot more than winning does.
July 8th, 2016 08:15
inink said:
Losing teaches you a lot more than winning does.
July 8th, 2016 08:15
When Waking Up Feels Meaningless
lysistrata said:
Allow yourself to get distracted when you go to bed...and at least then you'd have a good reason of wanting to stay under the sheets.
Better go to bed now,my friend.
July 7th, 2016 15:44
lysistrata said:
Allow yourself to get distracted when you go to bed...and at least then you'd have a good reason of wanting to stay under the sheets.
Better go to bed now,my friend.
July 7th, 2016 15:44
When Waking Up Feels Meaningless
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks "S 48" ~ A great set of couplets which (if we are honest) we can all relate to when the alarm rings @ 7am ! However in my case as soon as my bare feet touch the cold floor ~ reality kicks in and a New Day dawns. Thanks GOD for cold floors ! Yours BRIAN
July 7th, 2016 14:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks "S 48" ~ A great set of couplets which (if we are honest) we can all relate to when the alarm rings @ 7am ! However in my case as soon as my bare feet touch the cold floor ~ reality kicks in and a New Day dawns. Thanks GOD for cold floors ! Yours BRIAN
July 7th, 2016 14:02
When Waking Up Feels Meaningless
willyweed said:
nicely done, good message, never give up! ww
July 7th, 2016 13:19
willyweed said:
nicely done, good message, never give up! ww
July 7th, 2016 13:19
The Tendency to Sin
The 2 A.M Writer said:
We are all not perfect, but we can always strive to climb higher on the ladder of perfection. Good poem!
July 5th, 2016 16:58
The 2 A.M Writer said:
We are all not perfect, but we can always strive to climb higher on the ladder of perfection. Good poem!
July 5th, 2016 16:58
The Tendency to Sin
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
S 48 ~ Thanks for caring and sharing. We are ~ as you point out ~ born with a tendency to sin carry out what St Paul calls "The works of the flesh" and which are a reflection of how most people act in Society (and Politics) to get their own way. Paul does however suggest that these sinful traits can be counteracted by the Fruit of the Spirit ~ Love ~ Joy ~ Peace etc (Galatians chapter 5). Like you I strive to be the finest person I can ~ especially with a little help from GOD. Thanks YOURS BRIAN
July 5th, 2016 14:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
S 48 ~ Thanks for caring and sharing. We are ~ as you point out ~ born with a tendency to sin carry out what St Paul calls "The works of the flesh" and which are a reflection of how most people act in Society (and Politics) to get their own way. Paul does however suggest that these sinful traits can be counteracted by the Fruit of the Spirit ~ Love ~ Joy ~ Peace etc (Galatians chapter 5). Like you I strive to be the finest person I can ~ especially with a little help from GOD. Thanks YOURS BRIAN
July 5th, 2016 14:23
The Tendency to Sin
willyweed said:
I agree we all need to find our better self's.
July 5th, 2016 13:03
willyweed said:
I agree we all need to find our better self's.
July 5th, 2016 13:03
Challenging Decisions
lysistrata said:
Evidently, you have begun practising spiritual automatic wtiting or spiritual automatic writing has begun its practise on YOU?!
If you want to talk,I am listening..
July 4th, 2016 15:25
lysistrata said:
Evidently, you have begun practising spiritual automatic wtiting or spiritual automatic writing has begun its practise on YOU?!
If you want to talk,I am listening..
July 4th, 2016 15:25
A New Approach
willyweed said:
your swimming in the river of truth here. good work. ww
July 1st, 2016 11:31
willyweed said:
your swimming in the river of truth here. good work. ww
July 1st, 2016 11:31
The Unknown
lysistrata said:
"Live in the present mind frame"
And drift.............drift...................
Until you would be certain
Until you would be in control.
And you are gaining this control,my friend.🙌💪
June 30th, 2016 08:09
lysistrata said:
"Live in the present mind frame"
And drift.............drift...................
Until you would be certain
Until you would be in control.
And you are gaining this control,my friend.🙌💪
June 30th, 2016 08:09
Heaven Can Wait
lysistrata said:
Indeed Survivor,
Heaven can wait for a long time....
We need you HERE.😁
Keep writing my friend.
June 29th, 2016 11:58
lysistrata said:
Indeed Survivor,
Heaven can wait for a long time....
We need you HERE.😁
Keep writing my friend.
June 29th, 2016 11:58
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