Comments received on poems by willyweed



\"The Poet and the King\"
Dee said:

A beautiful fairy tale with a happy ending...that was one magical poem..Thoroughly enjoyed this work my friend.. must read more from you...Smiles...Dee

June 30th, 2016 07:58

\"The Poet and the King\"
Daniel said:

Nice to read a poem that isn't somber, it definitely made me smile.

June 30th, 2016 07:50

\"the puppet master\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANK WW ~ POCO the puppet can do anything ~ if someone else pulls the string ! The World id full of Puppet Masters who want to fetter and control us. In today's databank society we all have e-mails phone numbers card numbers etc and everyone wants to get their hands on them. Young People (M & F) are being trafficked by evil Men for their own (and other's) pleasure. A Blue Moon is a scond Full Moon and is often tinged with blue. It can occur in any month except February which is too short. Beware of puppet masters and manipulators ~ they are everywhere ! Yours BRIAN

June 29th, 2016 15:09

\"the puppet master\"
Tropicana said:

Is this about someone who's possessed or how people can't control themselves or something, loved the poem but please explain conmations, I'm really curious??

June 29th, 2016 13:07

\"the puppet master\"
lysistrata said:

"Who's pulling the strings?"

Unknown Forces are pulling the strings...👻👽👾

Thank you WW for reading my poem.Please write more kids poetry and
did we ever had Blue Moon in October? I know Fantasy, ,but why October?

June 29th, 2016 12:29

\"the puppet master\"
Daniel said:

Great imagery, fantastic poem.

June 29th, 2016 11:25

\"The un-haunted house\"
willyweed said:

hey thanks Brian, I love the spooky, kooky fun writes, and I also have a few good fairytale type pieces, and some children's stuff. glad to have met you! peace WW

June 28th, 2016 13:37

\"The un-haunted house\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME WILLY ~ Great second poem ~ Love the OWLS my fave bird. I love fantasy poems and exorcism (getting rid of ghosts) is a fave subject of mine ! Seems in your very well written and spooky poem that for Mr P's soul to have rest Mrs P had to get her come-uppance ! Toasted with mulled wine seemed a fitting end ! Shame the "haunted house" has to be sacrificed as well. Thanks for sharing Yours ~ BRIAN

June 28th, 2016 13:24

\"The un-haunted house\"
willyweed said:

come dream with me
we'll make a wish
as lover's often do
in the glowing light
of the pale moonlight
we'll dream our wish
comes true.

thank you for your comment. ww

June 28th, 2016 13:09

\"The un-haunted house\"
lysistrata said:

Questions:
1.Do you have a wife?
2.Do you drink wine?
Dedicated to YOU:

Wine enters through the mouth,
Love, the eyes.
You raise the glass to your mouth,
I look at you,
I cry.😁😂

June 28th, 2016 11:56

damp earth
willyweed said:

Thank you kind sir! I appreciate your reading and comments, thank you for your time.

June 24th, 2016 13:28

damp earth
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME WILLY ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ very true. We all started out as DUST and to DUST we shall all return. Have you noticed how well the trees and flowers grow in Cemeteries ! Well structured poem and a great theme ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN

June 24th, 2016 11:05

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