Comments received on poems by willyweed
the lady in the white dress
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS WILLY ~ For a beautiful but sad Fantasy story ~ but it does happen in real life ! Friends of mine have been jilted at the Altar or their partner has died just prior to the wedding or just after. I am pleased to report that in all the four cases that come to mind the one left behind recovered and went on to marry another and is still happily married. However the experience in each case left an indelible mark. Thanks for sharing BRIAN
January 1st, 2017 12:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS WILLY ~ For a beautiful but sad Fantasy story ~ but it does happen in real life ! Friends of mine have been jilted at the Altar or their partner has died just prior to the wedding or just after. I am pleased to report that in all the four cases that come to mind the one left behind recovered and went on to marry another and is still happily married. However the experience in each case left an indelible mark. Thanks for sharing BRIAN
January 1st, 2017 12:47
the lady in the white dress
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written though a sad tale. I always enjoy reading your poems.--Christina
January 1st, 2017 11:42
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written though a sad tale. I always enjoy reading your poems.--Christina
January 1st, 2017 11:42
the lady in the white dress
JerryBolton said:
Sadness is a fact of life. Most of us can adapt, but there are some who cannot . . . Hey! I made it here . . . Thanks for the referral!
January 1st, 2017 10:48
JerryBolton said:
Sadness is a fact of life. Most of us can adapt, but there are some who cannot . . . Hey! I made it here . . . Thanks for the referral!
January 1st, 2017 10:48
the lady in the white dress
P.H.Rose said:
Really good poem WW
Well done !!!!
January 1st, 2017 10:05
P.H.Rose said:
Really good poem WW
Well done !!!!
January 1st, 2017 10:05
the lady in the white dress
WriteBeLight said:
Very good but sad poem. Reminds me of the Charles Dickens story, and the \"Great Expectations,\" character Miss Havisham, having been made a fool of, and being left at the alter, and never removing her wedding gown...:)
January 1st, 2017 09:06
WriteBeLight said:
Very good but sad poem. Reminds me of the Charles Dickens story, and the \"Great Expectations,\" character Miss Havisham, having been made a fool of, and being left at the alter, and never removing her wedding gown...:)
January 1st, 2017 09:06
a tale to evil to tell
notapoet said:
I try to keep a deaf ear to those types of stories. Another great write sir!
December 31st, 2016 18:06
notapoet said:
I try to keep a deaf ear to those types of stories. Another great write sir!
December 31st, 2016 18:06
blue traveler
Quemis said:
strait, to the point, true.
Good bounce. The whole shebang.
Very nice. I like it.
December 31st, 2016 12:26
Quemis said:
strait, to the point, true.
Good bounce. The whole shebang.
Very nice. I like it.
December 31st, 2016 12:26
a tale to evil to tell
WriteBeLight said:
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha. I would like to send that to some people I know. Telling them to go to Hell and be happy to be on their way. Now that is TACT. Good one WW. Scary graphic!
December 31st, 2016 11:57
WriteBeLight said:
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha. I would like to send that to some people I know. Telling them to go to Hell and be happy to be on their way. Now that is TACT. Good one WW. Scary graphic!
December 31st, 2016 11:57
a tale to evil to tell
willyweed said:
you and me both kiddo! Happy days for the new year
and thank you for reading my tale. ww
December 31st, 2016 11:12
willyweed said:
you and me both kiddo! Happy days for the new year
and thank you for reading my tale. ww
December 31st, 2016 11:12
a tale to evil to tell
Christina8 said:
You tell stories so well, ww! But not willing to hear the story, not wanting the trip to hell. Fantastic write! Happy New Years! --Christina
December 31st, 2016 11:02
Christina8 said:
You tell stories so well, ww! But not willing to hear the story, not wanting the trip to hell. Fantastic write! Happy New Years! --Christina
December 31st, 2016 11:02
toy pony
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing WILLY ~ Oh to be a BOY again and live in one\'s imagination But perhaps ~ as one grows older one begins to lapse back into one\'s imagination AGAIN. I\'m not quite there yet ! BRIAN
December 30th, 2016 14:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing WILLY ~ Oh to be a BOY again and live in one\'s imagination But perhaps ~ as one grows older one begins to lapse back into one\'s imagination AGAIN. I\'m not quite there yet ! BRIAN
December 30th, 2016 14:24
toy pony
P.H.Rose said:
Oh my god WW
That is superb
I will not swear
But I think that
Is so..F.....ing good
Another favourite
For me.......
Thank you for sharing
December 30th, 2016 12:38
P.H.Rose said:
Oh my god WW
That is superb
I will not swear
But I think that
Is so..F.....ing good
Another favourite
For me.......
Thank you for sharing
December 30th, 2016 12:38
toy pony
Christina8 said:
I love your poem! You have a great imagination and it\'s a pleasure to read!
December 30th, 2016 11:20
Christina8 said:
I love your poem! You have a great imagination and it\'s a pleasure to read!
December 30th, 2016 11:20
\"Greed\"
Willy Beeman said:
I dig. The references used brilliantly and such an awesome way to tell it. Enjoyed it!
December 29th, 2016 21:32
Willy Beeman said:
I dig. The references used brilliantly and such an awesome way to tell it. Enjoyed it!
December 29th, 2016 21:32
\"Greed\"
P.H.Rose said:
Now that\'s what
I call a bloody
Brilliant poem...
Love it WW..
Well done....
December 29th, 2016 18:31
P.H.Rose said:
Now that\'s what
I call a bloody
Brilliant poem...
Love it WW..
Well done....
December 29th, 2016 18:31
\"Greed\"
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent write, ww! The part that makes me mad is that it\'s becoming truth. I just really hope the end of your story stays fiction. But it was a great read. You have a gift!
December 29th, 2016 15:15
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent write, ww! The part that makes me mad is that it\'s becoming truth. I just really hope the end of your story stays fiction. But it was a great read. You have a gift!
December 29th, 2016 15:15
\"Greed\"
WriteBeLight said:
I keep my fingers crossed that we do not end up like the \"humans\" in your poem story. People do take so much for granted. It really pissed me off! Excellent, but sad ending for the doomed.
December 29th, 2016 14:45
WriteBeLight said:
I keep my fingers crossed that we do not end up like the \"humans\" in your poem story. People do take so much for granted. It really pissed me off! Excellent, but sad ending for the doomed.
December 29th, 2016 14:45
In the Morning
Christina8 said:
I love this poem! Living in the moment is crucial. It\'s something I must work on. My favorite lines are the last two couplets. Awesome job!
December 28th, 2016 12:14
Christina8 said:
I love this poem! Living in the moment is crucial. It\'s something I must work on. My favorite lines are the last two couplets. Awesome job!
December 28th, 2016 12:14
In the Morning
WriteBeLight said:
Cup of Joe before I go, sit and think about the row to hoe! Nice poem WW!
December 28th, 2016 10:53
WriteBeLight said:
Cup of Joe before I go, sit and think about the row to hoe! Nice poem WW!
December 28th, 2016 10:53
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