Comments received on poems by willyweed



\"Sweet death\"
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow awesome rhyme scheme here. U make death sound peaceful and appealing with this poem in great muse and imagery but don\'t die on us yet as we need your fine poetry since u have great talent which I can find out by reading but a single poem of a poet. Kudos.

October 22nd, 2016 10:03

\"Sweet death\"
Augustus said:

You had me a little worried with both poisons,Hemlock and Yew. Your poem approaches death with thoughts of love and no trepidation, nor violence. Very heart warming and peaceful.

September 27th, 2016 21:34

\"Sweet death\"
WriteBeLight said:

Very comforting.

September 27th, 2016 16:01

\"Sweet death\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

I've missed you WILLY ~ love the rhyme and folksy rhythm in this one ! Blessed in the sight of the LORD is the passing over to Glory of his SAINTS ! Thanks for sharing. Please check my POEMS ~ BRIAN

September 27th, 2016 13:55

Gethsemane
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 10th, 2016 12:26

Gethsemane
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing WW ~ Lest I forget Gethsemene ~ Lest I forget thine agony ~ Lest I forget thy love to me ~ Lead me to Calvary ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN

August 10th, 2016 09:22

I was a teenage cannibal
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 6th, 2016 21:09

I was a teenage cannibal
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing WILLY ~ it happens. Mainly when people either starve to death or eat the flesh of their dead companions. Cannibals do of course exist and records show that human flesh tastes not unlike PORK ! Your story is quite spooky especially the last sentence ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN

August 6th, 2016 09:58

roses & brandy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks WILLY WEED for meeting a need ~ Showing us History is not just a mystery. And even though our History's gory ~ God's still in control and history's HIS STORY ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN

August 5th, 2016 11:27

roses & brandy
rrodriguez said:

Nicely done! This sounds very historical.

August 5th, 2016 10:44

somewhere near Monterrey
rrodriguez said:

Monterrey, CA is a beautiful place to find love and to enjoy the ocean. Some of John Steinbeck's novels are about this place. Nice!

August 4th, 2016 18:21

somewhere near Monterrey
Dandylion said:

I can picture this...lovely

August 4th, 2016 18:12

somewhere near Monterrey
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

August 4th, 2016 18:00

love was waiting
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS WILLY ~ That's my experience too ! Love always drives out the Demons and the Angels are sucked into the vacuum created ~ awesome. Thanks for sharing BRIAN

August 3rd, 2016 12:29

little flowers
rrodriguez said:

This poem is very well written and expressive. I like it!


August 2nd, 2016 15:57

little flowers
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS WW ~ Satan tempts us 24/7 by fair means or foul. We can challenge Satan by quoting the Scriptures as Jesus did. The Good Book says "Resist Satan and he will flee from you ~ Because the Holy Spirit ~ who indwells all Christian Believers ~ is greater than Satan. Always remember that Satan is just a fallen Angel. God the Father ~ Son ~ Holy Spirit form the ALMIGHTY TRINITY against whom no powers Spiritual or Terrestrial can prevail ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN

August 2nd, 2016 15:25

little flowers
Tony36 said:

I love flowers, Great write

August 2nd, 2016 14:26

twang twang twang (yes i love you)
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

August 1st, 2016 15:47

twang twang twang (yes i love you)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Grat poem WILLY
I don't think it's SILLY

Yours BRIAN ~ Willy Nilly !

August 1st, 2016 10:32

twang twang twang (yes i love you)
lysistrata said:

Very silly..
Very,very silly...
Extremely silly....
The silliest of ALL the silly...
Back to the classroom now,silly boy.

August 1st, 2016 09:42

the clever king
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks WILLY ~ I agree ~ Love is the Answer to our every need ! Good poem ~ with a moral ~ thanks for sharing BRIAN

July 28th, 2016 17:03

turn around
Michael Champion said:

Love it!

July 28th, 2016 16:23

ghost writer
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thank you WILLY for your ode ~ about the phantom who your pen did goad ! It has has happened to me ~ and it didn't stop ~ until it disabled my poor laptop ! The moral of the story ~ and I'm sure I'm right _ is never abuse your muse at night ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

July 27th, 2016 10:29

turn around
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing WILLY ~ Great song lyric and a great maxim we all need to heed ! When will we ever Learn ~ when will we ever Learn ? Yours BRIAN

July 26th, 2016 12:56

just another day in paradise
lysistrata said:

I enjoyed the story.There is nothing good in a war except its ending.
But you are happy?! I am happy.And we feel safe! Aren't we?!

July 26th, 2016 03:25

just another day in paradise
Tony36 said:

Great write, thank you for sharing

July 25th, 2016 13:10

queen of hearts
willyweed said:



July 25th, 2016 08:19

the crooked heart
lysistrata said:

Be careful,my friend. Don't translate fast.
The translator's job is to find his own way of rendering work from another language.
Translating needs to combine both 'craft & technique'.

July 25th, 2016 02:39

the whispering bell
Dandylion said:

such a beautiful poem...really loved this:)

July 25th, 2016 00:56

queen of hearts
Dandylion said:

really enjoyed this!

July 25th, 2016 00:56



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