Comments received on poems by willyweed
the poet and the devil
willyweed said:
Thank you Tony36 you are very kind. Glad you enjoyed it, you may like some of my other posts as well. Anyway I do appreciate your comment. ww
July 5th, 2016 12:27
willyweed said:
Thank you Tony36 you are very kind. Glad you enjoyed it, you may like some of my other posts as well. Anyway I do appreciate your comment. ww
July 5th, 2016 12:27
counting crows
ThomasAndrewHitchen said:
Being a pedantic soul, the wrong you're and their annoyed me.
Now that's been said, I enjoy the imagery and sentiment in this piece. I'd love it to be a little longer. That's always a good thing.
July 3rd, 2016 15:27
ThomasAndrewHitchen said:
Being a pedantic soul, the wrong you're and their annoyed me.
Now that's been said, I enjoy the imagery and sentiment in this piece. I'd love it to be a little longer. That's always a good thing.
July 3rd, 2016 15:27
counting crows
Dee said:
Hi ww...I have never counted crows that's for sure, they scare me...I love birds and have quite few feeding stations in my garden..
but have a fear of crows for some reason....maybe the scarecrow knows why......
( the earth is 'quiet ? ) Great read and good imagery and I love the last two couplets makes for a great ending.....
Bravo my friend...Smiles ...Dee
July 3rd, 2016 12:01
Dee said:
Hi ww...I have never counted crows that's for sure, they scare me...I love birds and have quite few feeding stations in my garden..
but have a fear of crows for some reason....maybe the scarecrow knows why......
( the earth is 'quiet ? ) Great read and good imagery and I love the last two couplets makes for a great ending.....
Bravo my friend...Smiles ...Dee
July 3rd, 2016 12:01
\'\'Sandusky nights ( a dreamland fairytale)\'\'
lysistrata said:
"Meet me in Sandusky and raise the periscope...."
I can't make it to Sandusky,if you want rendezvous in Las Palmas🚤🔭
It's my favourite till your next BETTER 🆕 one...🔝
July 3rd, 2016 02:08
lysistrata said:
"Meet me in Sandusky and raise the periscope...."
I can't make it to Sandusky,if you want rendezvous in Las Palmas🚤🔭
It's my favourite till your next BETTER 🆕 one...🔝
July 3rd, 2016 02:08
\'\'Sandusky nights ( a dreamland fairytale)\'\'
willyweed said:
Thanks Dee for catching the type o
now if I can fix that?
July 2nd, 2016 09:32
willyweed said:
Thanks Dee for catching the type o
now if I can fix that?
July 2nd, 2016 09:32
\'\'Sandusky nights ( a dreamland fairytale)\'\'
Dee said:
Wow brilliant work ww...I hardly took a breath from start to finish in the reading of this wonderful tale.. Great rhyme and flow and clever wording in this wonderful story I am becoming addicted to your works for sure...Smiles and Bravo to you my friend......Dee.
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( First couplet ' meet' ? )
July 2nd, 2016 09:27
Dee said:
Wow brilliant work ww...I hardly took a breath from start to finish in the reading of this wonderful tale.. Great rhyme and flow and clever wording in this wonderful story I am becoming addicted to your works for sure...Smiles and Bravo to you my friend......Dee.
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( First couplet ' meet' ? )
July 2nd, 2016 09:27
\"The Poet and the King\"
lysistrata said:
"Well, when the poet did rise, the King was surprised, the most beautiful women stood there.
The King praised GOD above, then, they fell in love, and lived happily ever after."
Why did he praise God and not the Poet?
And who fell for whom? Is this King a Sultan?!Too many brides...👩👧💁👵👧👩💁
July 1st, 2016 08:55
lysistrata said:
"Well, when the poet did rise, the King was surprised, the most beautiful women stood there.
The King praised GOD above, then, they fell in love, and lived happily ever after."
Why did he praise God and not the Poet?
And who fell for whom? Is this King a Sultan?!Too many brides...👩👧💁👵👧👩💁
July 1st, 2016 08:55
damp earth
willyweed said:
I thank you again Dee, looks like you been busy
we all get to meet mister death someday. dammed if we go, dammed if we stay
June 30th, 2016 17:54
willyweed said:
I thank you again Dee, looks like you been busy
we all get to meet mister death someday. dammed if we go, dammed if we stay
June 30th, 2016 17:54
\"the puppet master\"
willyweed said:
Thanks again Dee, don't worry it's non-addictive...I suppose?
June 30th, 2016 17:48
willyweed said:
Thanks again Dee, don't worry it's non-addictive...I suppose?
June 30th, 2016 17:48
\"The un-haunted house\"
Dee said:
Spooky kooky fun writes, that set me off giggling.....What a wonderful poem this is ww..I love it.. A great story in the telling, with clear imagery and it read perfectly ..Bravo my friend. .I just had to read it twice... Smiles you...Dee
June 30th, 2016 17:06
Dee said:
Spooky kooky fun writes, that set me off giggling.....What a wonderful poem this is ww..I love it.. A great story in the telling, with clear imagery and it read perfectly ..Bravo my friend. .I just had to read it twice... Smiles you...Dee
June 30th, 2016 17:06
\"the puppet master\"
Dee said:
Great poem with clear imagery ww..
Super last stanza rounds it up perfectly. .Bravo my friend.. I could become addicted to reading you...smiles and Best wishes to you...Dee
June 30th, 2016 16:59
Dee said:
Great poem with clear imagery ww..
Super last stanza rounds it up perfectly. .Bravo my friend.. I could become addicted to reading you...smiles and Best wishes to you...Dee
June 30th, 2016 16:59
damp earth
Dee said:
That's the surest of things ww, we will all pass on one day. I just pray I have done enough to earn my wings...:) I like your take on the subject and you are right prince or pauper we all will be called one day...Best wishes to you ww....Dee
June 30th, 2016 16:52
Dee said:
That's the surest of things ww, we will all pass on one day. I just pray I have done enough to earn my wings...:) I like your take on the subject and you are right prince or pauper we all will be called one day...Best wishes to you ww....Dee
June 30th, 2016 16:52
\"The Poet and the King\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks WW ~ It's FUN-TO-SEE some FANTASY on MPS. Poets rule OK ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
June 30th, 2016 11:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks WW ~ It's FUN-TO-SEE some FANTASY on MPS. Poets rule OK ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
June 30th, 2016 11:31
\"The Poet and the King\"
Dee said:
A beautiful fairy tale with a happy ending...that was one magical poem..Thoroughly enjoyed this work my friend.. must read more from you...Smiles...Dee
June 30th, 2016 07:58
Dee said:
A beautiful fairy tale with a happy ending...that was one magical poem..Thoroughly enjoyed this work my friend.. must read more from you...Smiles...Dee
June 30th, 2016 07:58
\"The Poet and the King\"
Daniel said:
Nice to read a poem that isn't somber, it definitely made me smile.
June 30th, 2016 07:50
Daniel said:
Nice to read a poem that isn't somber, it definitely made me smile.
June 30th, 2016 07:50
\"the puppet master\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK WW ~ POCO the puppet can do anything ~ if someone else pulls the string ! The World id full of Puppet Masters who want to fetter and control us. In today's databank society we all have e-mails phone numbers card numbers etc and everyone wants to get their hands on them. Young People (M & F) are being trafficked by evil Men for their own (and other's) pleasure. A Blue Moon is a scond Full Moon and is often tinged with blue. It can occur in any month except February which is too short. Beware of puppet masters and manipulators ~ they are everywhere ! Yours BRIAN
June 29th, 2016 15:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK WW ~ POCO the puppet can do anything ~ if someone else pulls the string ! The World id full of Puppet Masters who want to fetter and control us. In today's databank society we all have e-mails phone numbers card numbers etc and everyone wants to get their hands on them. Young People (M & F) are being trafficked by evil Men for their own (and other's) pleasure. A Blue Moon is a scond Full Moon and is often tinged with blue. It can occur in any month except February which is too short. Beware of puppet masters and manipulators ~ they are everywhere ! Yours BRIAN
June 29th, 2016 15:09
\"the puppet master\"
Tropicana said:
Is this about someone who's possessed or how people can't control themselves or something, loved the poem but please explain conmations, I'm really curious??
June 29th, 2016 13:07
Tropicana said:
Is this about someone who's possessed or how people can't control themselves or something, loved the poem but please explain conmations, I'm really curious??
June 29th, 2016 13:07
\"the puppet master\"
lysistrata said:
"Who's pulling the strings?"
Unknown Forces are pulling the strings...👻👽👾
Thank you WW for reading my poem.Please write more kids poetry and
did we ever had Blue Moon in October? I know Fantasy, ,but why October?
June 29th, 2016 12:29
lysistrata said:
"Who's pulling the strings?"
Unknown Forces are pulling the strings...👻👽👾
Thank you WW for reading my poem.Please write more kids poetry and
did we ever had Blue Moon in October? I know Fantasy, ,but why October?
June 29th, 2016 12:29
\"The un-haunted house\"
willyweed said:
hey thanks Brian, I love the spooky, kooky fun writes, and I also have a few good fairytale type pieces, and some children's stuff. glad to have met you! peace WW
June 28th, 2016 13:37
willyweed said:
hey thanks Brian, I love the spooky, kooky fun writes, and I also have a few good fairytale type pieces, and some children's stuff. glad to have met you! peace WW
June 28th, 2016 13:37
\"The un-haunted house\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME WILLY ~ Great second poem ~ Love the OWLS my fave bird. I love fantasy poems and exorcism (getting rid of ghosts) is a fave subject of mine ! Seems in your very well written and spooky poem that for Mr P's soul to have rest Mrs P had to get her come-uppance ! Toasted with mulled wine seemed a fitting end ! Shame the "haunted house" has to be sacrificed as well. Thanks for sharing Yours ~ BRIAN
June 28th, 2016 13:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME WILLY ~ Great second poem ~ Love the OWLS my fave bird. I love fantasy poems and exorcism (getting rid of ghosts) is a fave subject of mine ! Seems in your very well written and spooky poem that for Mr P's soul to have rest Mrs P had to get her come-uppance ! Toasted with mulled wine seemed a fitting end ! Shame the "haunted house" has to be sacrificed as well. Thanks for sharing Yours ~ BRIAN
June 28th, 2016 13:24
\"The un-haunted house\"
willyweed said:
come dream with me
we'll make a wish
as lover's often do
in the glowing light
of the pale moonlight
we'll dream our wish
comes true.
thank you for your comment. ww
June 28th, 2016 13:09
willyweed said:
come dream with me
we'll make a wish
as lover's often do
in the glowing light
of the pale moonlight
we'll dream our wish
comes true.
thank you for your comment. ww
June 28th, 2016 13:09
\"The un-haunted house\"
lysistrata said:
Questions:
1.Do you have a wife?
2.Do you drink wine?
Dedicated to YOU:
Wine enters through the mouth,
Love, the eyes.
You raise the glass to your mouth,
I look at you,
I cry.😁😂
June 28th, 2016 11:56
lysistrata said:
Questions:
1.Do you have a wife?
2.Do you drink wine?
Dedicated to YOU:
Wine enters through the mouth,
Love, the eyes.
You raise the glass to your mouth,
I look at you,
I cry.😁😂
June 28th, 2016 11:56
damp earth
willyweed said:
Thank you kind sir! I appreciate your reading and comments, thank you for your time.
June 24th, 2016 13:28
willyweed said:
Thank you kind sir! I appreciate your reading and comments, thank you for your time.
June 24th, 2016 13:28
damp earth
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME WILLY ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ very true. We all started out as DUST and to DUST we shall all return. Have you noticed how well the trees and flowers grow in Cemeteries ! Well structured poem and a great theme ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN
June 24th, 2016 11:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME WILLY ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ very true. We all started out as DUST and to DUST we shall all return. Have you noticed how well the trees and flowers grow in Cemeteries ! Well structured poem and a great theme ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN
June 24th, 2016 11:05
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