Comments received on poems by willyweed



Katharina ( spirit ballerina)
Daniel said:

Inink Say's it all, absolutely brilliant!

July 8th, 2016 11:41

Katharina ( spirit ballerina)
inink said:

liked both the story and the poem. Would love to read the rest of the story.

July 8th, 2016 09:47

Corazon
inink said:

this is powerful and gave me chills and inspired me to be a better writer.

July 8th, 2016 08:33

Corazon
willyweed said:



July 8th, 2016 07:27

Corazon
Daniel said:

A poignant poem, beautifully written!

July 8th, 2016 00:16

Corazon
Tony36 said:

AWESOME!

July 7th, 2016 12:38

Corazon
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

MUERTE EN CARAZON ~ A beautifully crafted tone poem of life and love. Drugs and those who traffic in them are the Devil's curse on Society. I worked with the YMCA with Young Adults and I never yet met a hard drug addict over 40 they were all DEAD. When will we ever learn. Gracias por tu preocupacion ~ Tu Amigo BRIAN

July 7th, 2016 09:31

\"Poncho\"
lysistrata said:

I send you Lana del Rey singing " Born to Die".... I envy you,SOMETIMES!

July 7th, 2016 07:26

\"Poncho\"
Tony36 said:

Great write, really resounds the history of the time

July 6th, 2016 13:50

\"Poncho\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS WW ~ Echos of Pancho Villa the great Mexican Revolutionary. HS makes good fuel for a fire but is low in nutritional value ! I love poems about the Tables being Turned and this is a good one. Thanks for sharing. Is this an advert for USA Gun Laws "If your have a gun # you can beat the bandit with a bigger gun ~ if you don't have a gun you end up eating HS !" Nice structure to the poem ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN

July 6th, 2016 09:07

the poet and the devil
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks WW ~ a great moral here. We should all be careful who we sell our SOULS to and why. Of course SATAN is always the main bidder ~ but equally we can sell out to another person or a Cult or a Political Party or even "The Company Store" Thanks for another challenging WW ODE # Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN

July 5th, 2016 15:12

the poet and the devil
willyweed said:

Thank you Tony36 you are very kind. Glad you enjoyed it, you may like some of my other posts as well. Anyway I do appreciate your comment. ww

July 5th, 2016 12:27

the poet and the devil
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write and a wonderful read

July 5th, 2016 11:27

counting crows
ThomasAndrewHitchen said:

Being a pedantic soul, the wrong you're and their annoyed me.

Now that's been said, I enjoy the imagery and sentiment in this piece. I'd love it to be a little longer. That's always a good thing.

July 3rd, 2016 15:27

counting crows
Dee said:

Hi ww...I have never counted crows that's for sure, they scare me...I love birds and have quite few feeding stations in my garden..
but have a fear of crows for some reason....maybe the scarecrow knows why......
( the earth is 'quiet ? ) Great read and good imagery and I love the last two couplets makes for a great ending.....
Bravo my friend...Smiles ...Dee

July 3rd, 2016 12:01

\'\'Sandusky nights ( a dreamland fairytale)\'\'
lysistrata said:

"Meet me in Sandusky and raise the periscope...."

I can't make it to Sandusky,if you want rendezvous in Las PalmasπŸš€πŸ”­
It's my favourite till your next BETTER πŸ†• one...πŸ”








July 3rd, 2016 02:08

\'\'Sandusky nights ( a dreamland fairytale)\'\'
willyweed said:

Thanks Dee for catching the type o
now if I can fix that?

July 2nd, 2016 09:32

\'\'Sandusky nights ( a dreamland fairytale)\'\'
Dee said:

Wow brilliant work ww...I hardly took a breath from start to finish in the reading of this wonderful tale.. Great rhyme and flow and clever wording in this wonderful story I am becoming addicted to your works for sure...Smiles and Bravo to you my friend......Dee.
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( First couplet ' meet' ? )

July 2nd, 2016 09:27

\"The Poet and the King\"
lysistrata said:

"Well, when the poet did rise, the King was surprised, the most beautiful women stood there.
The King praised GOD above, then, they fell in love, and lived happily ever after."

Why did he praise God and not the Poet?
And who fell for whom? Is this King a Sultan?!Too many brides...πŸ‘©πŸ‘§πŸ’πŸ‘΅πŸ‘§πŸ‘©πŸ’




July 1st, 2016 08:55

damp earth
willyweed said:

I thank you again Dee, looks like you been busy
we all get to meet mister death someday. dammed if we go, dammed if we stay

June 30th, 2016 17:54

\"the puppet master\"
willyweed said:

Thanks again Dee, don't worry it's non-addictive...I suppose?

June 30th, 2016 17:48

\"The un-haunted house\"
Dee said:

Spooky kooky fun writes, that set me off giggling.....What a wonderful poem this is ww..I love it.. A great story in the telling, with clear imagery and it read perfectly ..Bravo my friend. .I just had to read it twice... Smiles you...Dee

June 30th, 2016 17:06

\"the puppet master\"
Dee said:

Great poem with clear imagery ww..
Super last stanza rounds it up perfectly. .Bravo my friend.. I could become addicted to reading you...smiles and Best wishes to you...Dee

June 30th, 2016 16:59

damp earth
Dee said:

That's the surest of things ww, we will all pass on one day. I just pray I have done enough to earn my wings...:) I like your take on the subject and you are right prince or pauper we all will be called one day...Best wishes to you ww....Dee

June 30th, 2016 16:52

\"The Poet and the King\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks WW ~ It's FUN-TO-SEE some FANTASY on MPS. Poets rule OK ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

June 30th, 2016 11:31

\"The Poet and the King\"
Dee said:

A beautiful fairy tale with a happy ending...that was one magical poem..Thoroughly enjoyed this work my friend.. must read more from you...Smiles...Dee

June 30th, 2016 07:58

\"The Poet and the King\"
Daniel said:

Nice to read a poem that isn't somber, it definitely made me smile.

June 30th, 2016 07:50

\"the puppet master\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANK WW ~ POCO the puppet can do anything ~ if someone else pulls the string ! The World id full of Puppet Masters who want to fetter and control us. In today's databank society we all have e-mails phone numbers card numbers etc and everyone wants to get their hands on them. Young People (M & F) are being trafficked by evil Men for their own (and other's) pleasure. A Blue Moon is a scond Full Moon and is often tinged with blue. It can occur in any month except February which is too short. Beware of puppet masters and manipulators ~ they are everywhere ! Yours BRIAN

June 29th, 2016 15:09

\"the puppet master\"
Tropicana said:

Is this about someone who's possessed or how people can't control themselves or something, loved the poem but please explain conmations, I'm really curious??

June 29th, 2016 13:07

\"the puppet master\"
lysistrata said:

"Who's pulling the strings?"

Unknown Forces are pulling the strings...πŸ‘»πŸ‘½πŸ‘Ύ

Thank you WW for reading my poem.Please write more kids poetry and
did we ever had Blue Moon in October? I know Fantasy, ,but why October?

June 29th, 2016 12:29



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