Comments received on poems by Dee
Wondrous Nature (Haiku)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DEE ~ awesome tune and visual for Sunday ~ I love the Fall ~ when Autumn leaves sail past my window ~ the red the brown ~ yellow and gold ! Love the Haiku too ~ Nature shows the Glory of God ~ The Autumn palette is His handiwork. He made the dieing of a leaf like the dyeing of a fabric ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
July 3rd, 2016 08:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DEE ~ awesome tune and visual for Sunday ~ I love the Fall ~ when Autumn leaves sail past my window ~ the red the brown ~ yellow and gold ! Love the Haiku too ~ Nature shows the Glory of God ~ The Autumn palette is His handiwork. He made the dieing of a leaf like the dyeing of a fabric ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
July 3rd, 2016 08:10
How Can I Forget You
sarahsuebearah said:
Very sweet and concise, I loved the purity and movement!
July 2nd, 2016 20:04
sarahsuebearah said:
Very sweet and concise, I loved the purity and movement!
July 2nd, 2016 20:04
Heloise and Abelard (12th Century Lovers)
Inspiredartist3 said:
Wow so moving. Great story telling, romance and tragedy something im familiar with to well
July 2nd, 2016 15:30
Inspiredartist3 said:
Wow so moving. Great story telling, romance and tragedy something im familiar with to well
July 2nd, 2016 15:30
Heloise and Abelard (12th Century Lovers)
Daniel said:
I have always loved History Dee, and live could be a very dangerous endeavor back then. You have told this story beautifully and with great charm!
July 2nd, 2016 06:45
Daniel said:
I have always loved History Dee, and live could be a very dangerous endeavor back then. You have told this story beautifully and with great charm!
July 2nd, 2016 06:45
Heloise and Abelard (12th Century Lovers)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW DEE ~ You are going all classical on us ! Wonderful poem by a lovely poet ~ on a tragic event in the lives of two innocent people whose only crime was to fall in love. I have relations who are sad Spinsters because their Parents never considered the men they loved good enough. Thanks GOD you and I are free to fall in love (and marry if we wish) whom we will. I knew of Heloise & Albard (love the painting !) but your elegant verse (and codicil) really brought them alive. Thanks for caring and sharing. Elegant poem ~ delicate subject. Your Friend BRIAN
July 2nd, 2016 05:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW DEE ~ You are going all classical on us ! Wonderful poem by a lovely poet ~ on a tragic event in the lives of two innocent people whose only crime was to fall in love. I have relations who are sad Spinsters because their Parents never considered the men they loved good enough. Thanks GOD you and I are free to fall in love (and marry if we wish) whom we will. I knew of Heloise & Albard (love the painting !) but your elegant verse (and codicil) really brought them alive. Thanks for caring and sharing. Elegant poem ~ delicate subject. Your Friend BRIAN
July 2nd, 2016 05:44
How Can I Forget You
willyweed said:
wow is it hot in here or what. now that is how you write a love poem
my knees are knockin' ! ww
July 1st, 2016 11:35
willyweed said:
wow is it hot in here or what. now that is how you write a love poem
my knees are knockin' ! ww
July 1st, 2016 11:35
How Can I Forget You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU DEE ~ For another beautiful poem of past love. Love always has a plus and a minus because so so often one is taken and the other left. I have not yet experienced such deep pangs of lost love but your lovely poems ~ in a sense ~ prepare me for it. The happier we are in a relationship the sadder we are when it ends. I love the second and fifth stanzas ~ so so sensuous and so so true to ones experience of true love ! Love BRIAN
July 1st, 2016 06:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU DEE ~ For another beautiful poem of past love. Love always has a plus and a minus because so so often one is taken and the other left. I have not yet experienced such deep pangs of lost love but your lovely poems ~ in a sense ~ prepare me for it. The happier we are in a relationship the sadder we are when it ends. I love the second and fifth stanzas ~ so so sensuous and so so true to ones experience of true love ! Love BRIAN
July 1st, 2016 06:19
How Can I Forget You
Daniel said:
Great poem as always Dee, I love "between the warm spaces and the soft rain, and the palpable flame that burns me up with false hope" such beautiful imagery.
July 1st, 2016 04:00
Daniel said:
Great poem as always Dee, I love "between the warm spaces and the soft rain, and the palpable flame that burns me up with false hope" such beautiful imagery.
July 1st, 2016 04:00
A Poets Love
Severus Alexander said:
Your work is seamless, and so lovely.
I admire a poet for whom words flow first from the heart.
June 30th, 2016 18:58
Severus Alexander said:
Your work is seamless, and so lovely.
I admire a poet for whom words flow first from the heart.
June 30th, 2016 18:58
A Poets Love
willyweed said:
I love this Ar's Poetica a poem of the poet, and love too, how good could it get, your piece is well structured and flows like a river over rock, write on my dear lady!!
June 30th, 2016 18:04
willyweed said:
I love this Ar's Poetica a poem of the poet, and love too, how good could it get, your piece is well structured and flows like a river over rock, write on my dear lady!!
June 30th, 2016 18:04
Mother Nature
willyweed said:
what heartfelt beauty you create with this. bravo! ww
June 30th, 2016 10:36
willyweed said:
what heartfelt beauty you create with this. bravo! ww
June 30th, 2016 10:36
Dawn Prayer
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW DEE ~ Beautiful an awesome symbiosis of picture and poem. New every morning is God's love ~ our waking and uprising prove ! Every sunrise is different and our dawn prayer is to a God of infinite variety ~ who treats each of us as individuals. Our GOD is an awesome GOD ! Your free verse is perfect and ripples with rhythm ~ You are beautiful. Love BRIAN
June 30th, 2016 08:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW DEE ~ Beautiful an awesome symbiosis of picture and poem. New every morning is God's love ~ our waking and uprising prove ! Every sunrise is different and our dawn prayer is to a God of infinite variety ~ who treats each of us as individuals. Our GOD is an awesome GOD ! Your free verse is perfect and ripples with rhythm ~ You are beautiful. Love BRIAN
June 30th, 2016 08:23
Dawn Prayer
lysistrata said:
For many many years I go swimming at dawn.
Just me ,the seagulls,a drifting dog(maybe) and the crystal clear sea.
You feel sooo blessed to be alive and enjoy all this beauty around you....
Thank you,Dee.Now I have and your inspiring prayer to accompany my swim.....🌄
June 30th, 2016 08:18
lysistrata said:
For many many years I go swimming at dawn.
Just me ,the seagulls,a drifting dog(maybe) and the crystal clear sea.
You feel sooo blessed to be alive and enjoy all this beauty around you....
Thank you,Dee.Now I have and your inspiring prayer to accompany my swim.....🌄
June 30th, 2016 08:18
Beautiful And Rare
Daniel said:
A great poem that expresses our insecurity, The feeling that we are not good enough. You express the emotion well, loved reading it.
June 29th, 2016 06:55
Daniel said:
A great poem that expresses our insecurity, The feeling that we are not good enough. You express the emotion well, loved reading it.
June 29th, 2016 06:55
Beautiful And Rare
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh DEE ~ Love all you poems they are so so fragrant. Love the silhouette just like you ~ Beautiful & Rare ! All you poems bring tears to my eyes (real Men do cry) and for this one "Tears of Joy". Your poetic fragrance fills MPS with Love & Peace. Four perfect quatrains balanced in rhyme (xaxa xbxb etc) and rhythm. True love (as you know Dee) looks into our eyes and sees beyond the scars of the past and sees only the beauty and promise of the "Pure Love you have to share". Another perfect poem ~ from a beautiful Lady ~ Love BRIAN
June 29th, 2016 02:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh DEE ~ Love all you poems they are so so fragrant. Love the silhouette just like you ~ Beautiful & Rare ! All you poems bring tears to my eyes (real Men do cry) and for this one "Tears of Joy". Your poetic fragrance fills MPS with Love & Peace. Four perfect quatrains balanced in rhyme (xaxa xbxb etc) and rhythm. True love (as you know Dee) looks into our eyes and sees beyond the scars of the past and sees only the beauty and promise of the "Pure Love you have to share". Another perfect poem ~ from a beautiful Lady ~ Love BRIAN
June 29th, 2016 02:59
Mother Nature
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring and sharing DEE ~ Beautiful. Planet Earth is unique because God created it that way. As an Ecologist I see beauty ~ order ~ purpose ~ design in Creation (especially Planet earth) and it disavows blind chance and screams for a Creator ! It is no accident but Divine wisdom that the first verse in God's Word is "In the beginning God Created ......." If by faith we are wise enough to believe that then the rest of the Bible (even The Book of Revelations) all makes perfect sense. Thanks ~ each of your perfect poems ameliorates MPS. Love them and you and I'm so so glad you decided to join. Every Blessing BRIAN
June 28th, 2016 06:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring and sharing DEE ~ Beautiful. Planet Earth is unique because God created it that way. As an Ecologist I see beauty ~ order ~ purpose ~ design in Creation (especially Planet earth) and it disavows blind chance and screams for a Creator ! It is no accident but Divine wisdom that the first verse in God's Word is "In the beginning God Created ......." If by faith we are wise enough to believe that then the rest of the Bible (even The Book of Revelations) all makes perfect sense. Thanks ~ each of your perfect poems ameliorates MPS. Love them and you and I'm so so glad you decided to join. Every Blessing BRIAN
June 28th, 2016 06:28
Offer Declined ( Sonnet )
Dee said:
Thank you Brian for such a wonderful review. I am happy you enjoyed this offering.. This work came about after seeing a picture and reading about Narcissus ..poor man.. lol....All best wishes to you
and thank you again...Smiles..Dee
June 28th, 2016 05:24
Dee said:
Thank you Brian for such a wonderful review. I am happy you enjoyed this offering.. This work came about after seeing a picture and reading about Narcissus ..poor man.. lol....All best wishes to you
and thank you again...Smiles..Dee
June 28th, 2016 05:24
A Poets Love
Dee said:
Thank you so much Brian for your review and kind words. I am happy you enjoyed the read..Smiles and Best wishes to you ...Dee
June 28th, 2016 05:17
Dee said:
Thank you so much Brian for your review and kind words. I am happy you enjoyed the read..Smiles and Best wishes to you ...Dee
June 28th, 2016 05:17
Offer Declined ( Sonnet )
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS DEE ! What better herald to a Monday Morning than a perfect 4 4 4 2 Love Sonnet from my fave MPOS Poet. Alas the subject is not "Love Requited" but "Love Rejected". In a divine way DEE you focus "not on the outward appearance ~ but on the heart". "'Tis beauty that I seek without a doubt ~ But that which from the inside shine'th out". What we see is often superficial ~ however what we feel and perceive is real. The structure and abab cdcd rhyming pattern is perfect. The message is direct and declining. Now you are making me cry ! Thanks for caring and sharing. Yours as ever BRIAN
June 27th, 2016 04:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS DEE ! What better herald to a Monday Morning than a perfect 4 4 4 2 Love Sonnet from my fave MPOS Poet. Alas the subject is not "Love Requited" but "Love Rejected". In a divine way DEE you focus "not on the outward appearance ~ but on the heart". "'Tis beauty that I seek without a doubt ~ But that which from the inside shine'th out". What we see is often superficial ~ however what we feel and perceive is real. The structure and abab cdcd rhyming pattern is perfect. The message is direct and declining. Now you are making me cry ! Thanks for caring and sharing. Yours as ever BRIAN
June 27th, 2016 04:39
Offer Declined ( Sonnet )
Daniel said:
Another great poem! Your take on vanity and the search for inner beauty is well written with great imagery.
I loved reading it.
June 27th, 2016 01:02
Daniel said:
Another great poem! Your take on vanity and the search for inner beauty is well written with great imagery.
I loved reading it.
June 27th, 2016 01:02
A Poets Love
Inspiredartist3 said:
wow Dee, this is beautiful. its written very well i wish to write this deep. and love the picture that comes with it.
June 26th, 2016 12:10
Inspiredartist3 said:
wow Dee, this is beautiful. its written very well i wish to write this deep. and love the picture that comes with it.
June 26th, 2016 12:10
A Poets Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW DEE ~ I love ANIMES and the poem is gorgeous too. Love the classical structure. A quartette of quatrains with a perfect abab cdcd etc rhyme pattern. It flowed off the page like liquid honey. Love and poetry (as you know) are synonymous and your lovely poem explores their interaction sensuously. I love classical poetry ~ and classical poets ! Yours BRIAN
June 26th, 2016 11:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW DEE ~ I love ANIMES and the poem is gorgeous too. Love the classical structure. A quartette of quatrains with a perfect abab cdcd etc rhyme pattern. It flowed off the page like liquid honey. Love and poetry (as you know) are synonymous and your lovely poem explores their interaction sensuously. I love classical poetry ~ and classical poets ! Yours BRIAN
June 26th, 2016 11:15
A Poets Love
Daniel said:
Wow, even better than your last poem! You write about love with effortless ease.
It was a pleasure to read.
June 26th, 2016 08:57
Daniel said:
Wow, even better than your last poem! You write about love with effortless ease.
It was a pleasure to read.
June 26th, 2016 08:57
　Roses And rainbows ( Free Verse )
Daniel said:
A really wonderful poem. You expressed the emotion of love perfectly. Thank you for sharing your poem.
June 26th, 2016 08:38
Daniel said:
A really wonderful poem. You expressed the emotion of love perfectly. Thank you for sharing your poem.
June 26th, 2016 08:38
　Roses And rainbows ( Free Verse )
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DEE ~ Thank you for your elegant first poem. It is "free verse" but it has great structure and rhythm and flow. I'm a performance poet and I found it delightful to recite ~ six tight stanzas and the seventh (for poetic reasons) an extended one ! The title complements the content. LOVE is exempilified by Roses & Rainbows and you have captured that. S1. Ravishing love S2. Idol of one's idol (I love that !) S3. Memories of the first time S4. Living alone ~ like living without the sun (beautiful) S5. Feeling the warmth of your sun enveloping me! S6. Loved the coyness in this verse ! S7. "That rose smiled back at me ............" The last verse confirms that the subject of the poem is a departed Lover and completes the perfection of the passion in your perfect poem. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
June 25th, 2016 13:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DEE ~ Thank you for your elegant first poem. It is "free verse" but it has great structure and rhythm and flow. I'm a performance poet and I found it delightful to recite ~ six tight stanzas and the seventh (for poetic reasons) an extended one ! The title complements the content. LOVE is exempilified by Roses & Rainbows and you have captured that. S1. Ravishing love S2. Idol of one's idol (I love that !) S3. Memories of the first time S4. Living alone ~ like living without the sun (beautiful) S5. Feeling the warmth of your sun enveloping me! S6. Loved the coyness in this verse ! S7. "That rose smiled back at me ............" The last verse confirms that the subject of the poem is a departed Lover and completes the perfection of the passion in your perfect poem. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
June 25th, 2016 13:44
