Comments received on poems by Inspiredartist3
a thought
AlitaOpal said:
Freedom to express yourself however and whichever you feel to..
Amazing flow and straight up 💐💐💐
July 14th, 2016 09:32
AlitaOpal said:
Freedom to express yourself however and whichever you feel to..
Amazing flow and straight up 💐💐💐
July 14th, 2016 09:32
he said
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks IA3 for a very inspiring and encouraging poem ~ exhorting us to be inspired by others like Kendrick and Tupac to keep writing ! MPS is a great site and giving us about 20 new poems every day and new poets each day. Varied personalities and a plethora of topics. That is how a poetry site keeps vibrant and alive. Please keep writing and we'll keep reading ~ Thanks BRIAN.
July 3rd, 2016 03:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks IA3 for a very inspiring and encouraging poem ~ exhorting us to be inspired by others like Kendrick and Tupac to keep writing ! MPS is a great site and giving us about 20 new poems every day and new poets each day. Varied personalities and a plethora of topics. That is how a poetry site keeps vibrant and alive. Please keep writing and we'll keep reading ~ Thanks BRIAN.
July 3rd, 2016 03:17
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Dee said:
Wonderful emotional poem. They say we never forget our first love, and that's true for me because I married mine and although I was widowed very young I will never forget him or ever want to. ' Was I another rose in your garden? I like that line very much.. I really do like the way you write Inspired. Bravo my friend..........Dee
July 2nd, 2016 05:35
Dee said:
Wonderful emotional poem. They say we never forget our first love, and that's true for me because I married mine and although I was widowed very young I will never forget him or ever want to. ' Was I another rose in your garden? I like that line very much.. I really do like the way you write Inspired. Bravo my friend..........Dee
July 2nd, 2016 05:35
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Dee said:
I think writing is meant to be for you and shared too Inspired. Your song writing came through clear to me in the rhythm found in the reading of this work.. Again you finish on a great line that rounds it all off beautifully. Writing is magical, and I like the way yours lifted you out of a ' stressin' mood to a positive one.. The power of the pen is truly amazing...I like your unique style of writing very much. Smiles and best wishes...Dee
June 28th, 2016 06:21
Dee said:
I think writing is meant to be for you and shared too Inspired. Your song writing came through clear to me in the rhythm found in the reading of this work.. Again you finish on a great line that rounds it all off beautifully. Writing is magical, and I like the way yours lifted you out of a ' stressin' mood to a positive one.. The power of the pen is truly amazing...I like your unique style of writing very much. Smiles and best wishes...Dee
June 28th, 2016 06:21
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Dee said:
Hi Inspired,
Many will relate to this poem...some great lines. I found a rhythm in the reading and has the making of a great song to my mind. Love the ending..'till then ill just a write a poem or two, just for you. two little typo's 6th line. To keep 'me' away....final line 'poem'
Best wishes to you...and bravo on a great poem....Dee
June 26th, 2016 09:05
Dee said:
Hi Inspired,
Many will relate to this poem...some great lines. I found a rhythm in the reading and has the making of a great song to my mind. Love the ending..'till then ill just a write a poem or two, just for you. two little typo's 6th line. To keep 'me' away....final line 'poem'
Best wishes to you...and bravo on a great poem....Dee
June 26th, 2016 09:05
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Daniel said:
A beautifully written poem, expressing the jealousy and frustration brilliantly.
June 26th, 2016 08:54
Daniel said:
A beautifully written poem, expressing the jealousy and frustration brilliantly.
June 26th, 2016 08:54
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME INSPIRED ~ thanks for your first poem. Love the shape and love the message. I'm 33 and have often faced this dilemma ! Love the resolve "but I wont wait too long". The title should be LOVE ON HOLD ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ BRIAN
June 26th, 2016 04:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME INSPIRED ~ thanks for your first poem. Love the shape and love the message. I'm 33 and have often faced this dilemma ! Love the resolve "but I wont wait too long". The title should be LOVE ON HOLD ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ BRIAN
June 26th, 2016 04:24
