Comments received on poems by Tony36



Peace, love, kindness
Cassie58 said:

A very positive and inclusive write, the focus for me being on peace. Diversity is good, violence isnโ€™t. You took me to many places with your words. Nicely conveyed.

September 8th, 2024 10:25

Mystery Girl
Saleh Ben Saleh said:

A mysterious girl indeed.
When you refer to her eyes did you mean \"her eyes are\".
Nicely expressed.

September 8th, 2024 01:34

The Pocket Watch
Cheeky Missy said:

Winsome and charmingly poignant. Reminds me of old stories and also of the locket I found in my adopted grandmother\'s stuff. How beautiful and sweet, nicely detailed to effect and like the item itself. Thank you very much.

September 7th, 2024 15:56

The Pocket Watch
Thad Wilk said:

A wonderful poem,
a very touching and
emotional piece
so eloquently
penned my friend! ๐Ÿ‘
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad


September 7th, 2024 14:56

The Pocket Watch
sorenbarrett said:

A special story with special meaning about a special object. Nicely done, Tony.

September 7th, 2024 14:05

Mystery Girl
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Perhaps it\'s the mystery you described so succinctly captivates so many of us. At leat to me a house never become home without a She. Love it

September 7th, 2024 11:06

Mystery Girl
Teddy.15 said:

This is gorgeous. Makes the reader want to ask who is she? But I won\'t. ๐ŸŒน We can leave it with intreague makes her even more of a lady.

September 7th, 2024 03:54

Mystery Girl
Dan Williams said:

Mystery girls have caused a fair amount of the trouble in my life, I learned nothing from it. Nice work.

September 7th, 2024 01:28

Mystery Girl
Doggerel Dave said:

Good write.

September 6th, 2024 19:49

Mystery Girl
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic, you bring the intrigue of women to life here.

September 6th, 2024 17:04

Mystery Girl
Cassie58 said:

Mysterious and intriguing. That hint of darkness needs exploring. Nice write. Have a happy Friday.

September 6th, 2024 11:26

Mystery Girl
Lorenz said:

Talentuous .

September 6th, 2024 09:53

Mystery Girl
sorenbarrett said:

A mystery indeed. Maybe an attractive one. A fun write

September 6th, 2024 09:50

Mystery Girl
John Lee said:

A mystery indeed

September 6th, 2024 09:26

Mystery Girl
Cheeky Missy said:

Sounds like a boy is musing on a girl and oh! how I love to listen to him describe her to effect, remembering what one of my brothers used to say about how we girls are forever such mysteries to you guys. Very lovely with charming poignancy and great details. Thank you for sharing.

September 6th, 2024 07:57

Point of View
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done, a fine write.

September 6th, 2024 06:37

Point of View
Cheeky Missy said:

Truly said. \"...man looketh on the outward appearance, but the LORD looketh on the heart--\" (or something like that). Fewer will look until others\' eyes. If only folk would they might begin to see their neighbors. Very beautifully rendered. Me likes. Thank you for sharing.

September 5th, 2024 20:32

Point of View
sorenbarrett said:

Prejudice again, darkens the eyesight of the viewer. Very nicely put into poetic verse, and the solution included as well. Fortunately, some people can see beyond the veneer. A good message to this poem.

September 5th, 2024 10:48

Point of View
Doggerel Dave said:

Great write.

September 5th, 2024 07:07

Crush
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done, you really paint the picture.

September 5th, 2024 06:58

Crush
Thad Wilk said:

A lovely write! โœ๏ธ
Brought back some
memories,
to read a delight!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 4th, 2024 20:57

Crush
Cheeky Missy said:

Paint the town RED like my favorite Famous In a Small Town [https://youtu.be/_xjy6EuMPGA?si=7UC2pDste3juau_l] and kiss her behind a tree. Lovely!

September 4th, 2024 15:46

Crush
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:

Great work!

September 4th, 2024 13:41

Crush
sorenbarrett said:

Ahh for those days again. This was a very fun read, and I wish you the best of luck.

September 4th, 2024 12:49

Crush
hzugman said:

Good write, Tony

September 4th, 2024 09:49

Crush
Teddy.15 said:

Yep, those curtains twitchers lol ah so lovely. ๐ŸŒน

September 4th, 2024 08:21

Things Have Changed
Tom Dylan said:

Good point, well made.

September 4th, 2024 05:55

Things Have Changed
Saleh Ben Saleh said:

You bring back beautiful memories Tony, thank you for this.
Unfortunately the internet and modern technology has killed our spirits and taking the very essence of life away from us.

September 4th, 2024 05:39

Things Have Changed
Thad Wilk said:

Yup, kids don\'t go outside
and play sports like we
did it\'s true! ๐Ÿ˜ข
Videos and computer games
all they wanna doยฟ ๐Ÿคช
Thanks for sharing much enjoyed!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 3rd, 2024 21:51

Things Have Changed
Thomas W Case said:

So true. Excellent work.

September 3rd, 2024 20:28



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