Comments received on poems by K Strider



Aspiration
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely written this piece is nicely rhymed in AB format and has a easy to read meter. It carries its message well. A fave

October 30th, 2026 03:51

Hurricane
sorenbarrett said:

Here analogies, metaphor and personification merge to describe an emotional state of being overwhelmed. Well done

October 20th, 2026 04:11

When It Settles
Fränz Müller said:

Quite a powerful piece. Thank you for sharing it with us!

October 19th, 2026 20:55

When It Settles
sorenbarrett said:

A poetic dark write and I can see how it is relatable to PTSD, Well written

October 19th, 2026 18:13

Wide Awake
sorenbarrett said:

A poetic expression of the vacillation between faith and a belief system and rational thinking. Nicely done

October 19th, 2026 04:05

Release the Kraken
Friendship said:

Nicely done

October 18th, 2026 09:13

Release the Kraken
sorenbarrett said:

Well rhymed and with good meter this story of a beast in dream form may well be taken as a metaphor as well as a mythical tale. Nicely done.

October 18th, 2026 04:06