Comments received on poems by sharad pandey
spark of life
BabiiGurl13 said:
Your very good at writing poems! I exspecially like this one cuz i can kinda relate to it.. Love that you had all the rhyming in it too im not very good at getting rhymes in mine lol.. Hope you read an like any of mine an comment telling me what you think about them (:
October 17th, 2011 00:08
BabiiGurl13 said:
Your very good at writing poems! I exspecially like this one cuz i can kinda relate to it.. Love that you had all the rhyming in it too im not very good at getting rhymes in mine lol.. Hope you read an like any of mine an comment telling me what you think about them (:
October 17th, 2011 00:08
spark of life
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating....very. Intriguing, for I do not quite understand it.....you address the insincerity, hope for the future because you will have it for the taking you presume, half-hope for a true lover,....but how does the truth lie beneath you?....and what do you mean by lighting a flare? And what it the "spark of life" to which you allude? I hope I am not offensive in asking, I am curious. It is a very interesting poem and I appreciated the rhyming too.
January 13th, 2011 15:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating....very. Intriguing, for I do not quite understand it.....you address the insincerity, hope for the future because you will have it for the taking you presume, half-hope for a true lover,....but how does the truth lie beneath you?....and what do you mean by lighting a flare? And what it the "spark of life" to which you allude? I hope I am not offensive in asking, I am curious. It is a very interesting poem and I appreciated the rhyming too.
January 13th, 2011 15:15
controversy
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting considerations.....serious. Since the "mice will play when the cat's away" and "curiosity killed the cat"...which should we be....hunted or hunter? I think while I dread the former, it is better.
January 12th, 2011 21:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting considerations.....serious. Since the "mice will play when the cat's away" and "curiosity killed the cat"...which should we be....hunted or hunter? I think while I dread the former, it is better.
January 12th, 2011 21:58
