Comments received on poems by Frankyflowmandella.nyc
Feel what I feel
lysistrata said:
Frankygoestogym,
That was the first thing you wrote after her death and let me guess the second?
YOU LAID YOUR SOUL BARE and took off your clothes.
Right matey?! I could see the pain...
July 14th, 2016 07:26
lysistrata said:
Frankygoestogym,
That was the first thing you wrote after her death and let me guess the second?
YOU LAID YOUR SOUL BARE and took off your clothes.
Right matey?! I could see the pain...
July 14th, 2016 07:26
Wasted time
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FFM~NYC _ Thanks for a great "confessional " first poem ! I love the structure ~ rhythmic rhyming couplets. The message is clear ~ In many respects your life (to date) has been a waste of time. Many of us can empathise with that ! BUT ~ There comes a time when we take stock and say from TODAY (for my children etc ........) I'm going to be responsible ! Death is inevitable but we all have TIME before we die (I'm hoping for another 60 years) we can all make sure we don't ever WASTE IT AGAIN ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN.
July 11th, 2016 04:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FFM~NYC _ Thanks for a great "confessional " first poem ! I love the structure ~ rhythmic rhyming couplets. The message is clear ~ In many respects your life (to date) has been a waste of time. Many of us can empathise with that ! BUT ~ There comes a time when we take stock and say from TODAY (for my children etc ........) I'm going to be responsible ! Death is inevitable but we all have TIME before we die (I'm hoping for another 60 years) we can all make sure we don't ever WASTE IT AGAIN ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN.
July 11th, 2016 04:43
