Comments received on poems by DD.
Money
Augustus said:
Sorry your parents don't see your real value. From their standpoint it costs $200,000 or more, after taxes to raise a child from birth to 18 years. That is simply the way it is. It's life. My step mom never told me she loved me, but I realized she fed me and clothed me. When I moved out she wrote to me every 2 weeks. I am alive and not in jail. She did her job. All that said you did a nice job with your writing.
October 8th, 2016 14:09
Augustus said:
Sorry your parents don't see your real value. From their standpoint it costs $200,000 or more, after taxes to raise a child from birth to 18 years. That is simply the way it is. It's life. My step mom never told me she loved me, but I realized she fed me and clothed me. When I moved out she wrote to me every 2 weeks. I am alive and not in jail. She did her job. All that said you did a nice job with your writing.
October 8th, 2016 14:09
One of those days
Tony36 said:
You know those days you just really like a poem. It's on of those days. Great write
October 7th, 2016 13:49
Tony36 said:
You know those days you just really like a poem. It's on of those days. Great write
October 7th, 2016 13:49
Emotions
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS KIT ~The poem is about EMOTIONS ~ but as you say and as your elegant (I love rhyming couplets) poem shows ~ emotions are ephemeral and impossible to define. The only advice I would give is DON'T LET THE SUN SET ON YOUR WRATH ~ Kiss an make up and sleep tight ~ Love BRIAN ~ Please check my POEM ~ Thanks B
October 6th, 2016 07:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS KIT ~The poem is about EMOTIONS ~ but as you say and as your elegant (I love rhyming couplets) poem shows ~ emotions are ephemeral and impossible to define. The only advice I would give is DON'T LET THE SUN SET ON YOUR WRATH ~ Kiss an make up and sleep tight ~ Love BRIAN ~ Please check my POEM ~ Thanks B
October 6th, 2016 07:00
Sometimes it\'s not about shouting
Tony36 said:
Great write, Many times people think I am shouting when I am not
October 3rd, 2016 10:21
Tony36 said:
Great write, Many times people think I am shouting when I am not
October 3rd, 2016 10:21
A Friend is better than Alone
Jeff said:
Ive been struggling with this same question for awhile now....still no answer. Great write
September 7th, 2016 03:13
Jeff said:
Ive been struggling with this same question for awhile now....still no answer. Great write
September 7th, 2016 03:13
Okay ?
PerpetualFlowers said:
I love this. I feel this on a deeep level. No but seriously great poem. I write kind of similar things, so I look forward to more from you.
July 13th, 2016 19:47
PerpetualFlowers said:
I love this. I feel this on a deeep level. No but seriously great poem. I write kind of similar things, so I look forward to more from you.
July 13th, 2016 19:47
Will you hold me in your arms at night?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KIT ~ Thanks for a beautiful first poem ~ but tinged with sadness ! "Help me make it through the Night" a real "cri de coeur". In my experience "to be alone" is the worst experience in a World of 7.5 billion people ~ but it happens so so often to so many. The poem expresses the need to be held and the angst of when we are alone again ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 12th, 2016 04:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KIT ~ Thanks for a beautiful first poem ~ but tinged with sadness ! "Help me make it through the Night" a real "cri de coeur". In my experience "to be alone" is the worst experience in a World of 7.5 billion people ~ but it happens so so often to so many. The poem expresses the need to be held and the angst of when we are alone again ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 12th, 2016 04:43
Will you hold me in your arms at night?
Daniel said:
A bestifull poem, I loved it!
July 11th, 2016 23:22
Daniel said:
A bestifull poem, I loved it!
July 11th, 2016 23:22
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