Comments received on poems by DD.



Money
Augustus said:

Sorry your parents don't see your real value. From their standpoint it costs $200,000 or more, after taxes to raise a child from birth to 18 years. That is simply the way it is. It's life. My step mom never told me she loved me, but I realized she fed me and clothed me. When I moved out she wrote to me every 2 weeks. I am alive and not in jail. She did her job. All that said you did a nice job with your writing.

October 8th, 2016 14:09

One of those days
Tony36 said:

You know those days you just really like a poem. It's on of those days. Great write

October 7th, 2016 13:49

Emotions
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 6th, 2016 09:28

Emotions
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS KIT ~The poem is about EMOTIONS ~ but as you say and as your elegant (I love rhyming couplets) poem shows ~ emotions are ephemeral and impossible to define. The only advice I would give is DON'T LET THE SUN SET ON YOUR WRATH ~ Kiss an make up and sleep tight ~ Love BRIAN ~ Please check my POEM ~ Thanks B

October 6th, 2016 07:00

Sometimes it\'s not about shouting
Tony36 said:

Great write, Many times people think I am shouting when I am not

October 3rd, 2016 10:21

A Friend is better than Alone
Jeff said:

Ive been struggling with this same question for awhile now....still no answer. Great write

September 7th, 2016 03:13

Okay ?
Jeff said:

Great write

September 7th, 2016 03:02

Okay ?
PerpetualFlowers said:

I love this. I feel this on a deeep level. No but seriously great poem. I write kind of similar things, so I look forward to more from you.

July 13th, 2016 19:47

Will you hold me in your arms at night?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME KIT ~ Thanks for a beautiful first poem ~ but tinged with sadness ! "Help me make it through the Night" a real "cri de coeur". In my experience "to be alone" is the worst experience in a World of 7.5 billion people ~ but it happens so so often to so many. The poem expresses the need to be held and the angst of when we are alone again ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

July 12th, 2016 04:43

Will you hold me in your arms at night?
Daniel said:

A bestifull poem, I loved it!

July 11th, 2016 23:22

Will you hold me in your arms at night?
AlitaOpal said:

💐💐💐

July 11th, 2016 19:45

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