Comments received on poems by DD.
Touch
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing DD a challenging PARADOX ! The sense of TOUCH is one of our more important senses. Our touch sensors are in the skin and our Skin is the biggest organ in the Human Body. Our finger tips are very sensitive to touch as our lips and we all have other touch sensitive areas ! Your opening VERSE shares the well known PARADOX ~ I desire to be touched (held) and an aversion ~ we want our own space ! It is partially *self preservation* because if we let someone get too close they could easily overpower & hurt us.
V\'s 3 & 4. In SE England we have pebbley beaches and often the best pebbles are in deep water (or under the sand) and always ~ Just out of reach. Just like our ambitions & deams !
Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN !
November 30th, 2019 17:24
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing DD a challenging PARADOX ! The sense of TOUCH is one of our more important senses. Our touch sensors are in the skin and our Skin is the biggest organ in the Human Body. Our finger tips are very sensitive to touch as our lips and we all have other touch sensitive areas ! Your opening VERSE shares the well known PARADOX ~ I desire to be touched (held) and an aversion ~ we want our own space ! It is partially *self preservation* because if we let someone get too close they could easily overpower & hurt us.
V\'s 3 & 4. In SE England we have pebbley beaches and often the best pebbles are in deep water (or under the sand) and always ~ Just out of reach. Just like our ambitions & deams !
Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN !
November 30th, 2019 17:24
Paper.
Tia Davis/テイア said:
I just loved this so much it is an amazing write. Thank you for writing such a piece.
November 7th, 2019 10:51
Tia Davis/テイア said:
I just loved this so much it is an amazing write. Thank you for writing such a piece.
November 7th, 2019 10:51
Despair
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing DD ~ hope you found it CATHARTIC ! Our only response would be NIL DESPERANDUM & BREW UP ! As a good Mancunian ~ You should know that a good strong cup of TEA cures anything !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
Pleasae check our SITE ~ Thanks A & B !
June 30th, 2019 18:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing DD ~ hope you found it CATHARTIC ! Our only response would be NIL DESPERANDUM & BREW UP ! As a good Mancunian ~ You should know that a good strong cup of TEA cures anything !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
Pleasae check our SITE ~ Thanks A & B !
June 30th, 2019 18:51
I\'d love to do nothing but write
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will be written and one day you will be able just to write.
November 5th, 2018 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will be written and one day you will be able just to write.
November 5th, 2018 01:37
Key
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Sounds like you\'re taking a chance. That\'s what life\'s about. Nicely done and thanks for sharing. :)
October 14th, 2018 17:15
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Sounds like you\'re taking a chance. That\'s what life\'s about. Nicely done and thanks for sharing. :)
October 14th, 2018 17:15
Questions
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS DD ~ Short & Sweet Poetry is always preferable to Long & Pithy ! Love today\'s offering : We also hate these questions of CONDITION ! I (BRIAN) always answer \"I\'m ALIVE are YOU ?\" and I (ANGELA) always answer \"Better than Yesterday\" which leaves them guessing ! What do you answer ? Your Friends BRIAN & ANGELA. Please check our BIRD Poems thanks B & A.
October 11th, 2018 18:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS DD ~ Short & Sweet Poetry is always preferable to Long & Pithy ! Love today\'s offering : We also hate these questions of CONDITION ! I (BRIAN) always answer \"I\'m ALIVE are YOU ?\" and I (ANGELA) always answer \"Better than Yesterday\" which leaves them guessing ! What do you answer ? Your Friends BRIAN & ANGELA. Please check our BIRD Poems thanks B & A.
October 11th, 2018 18:32
All of this in Fear
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very good write and I can understand your reasoning very well but I would still say that love is the strongest emotion as in my experience it can always conquer fear.
September 18th, 2018 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very good write and I can understand your reasoning very well but I would still say that love is the strongest emotion as in my experience it can always conquer fear.
September 18th, 2018 01:10
Thaw
MaggieF said:
I really enjoyed this, love the strength of feeling, it warmed my heart. Maggie
September 10th, 2018 02:42
MaggieF said:
I really enjoyed this, love the strength of feeling, it warmed my heart. Maggie
September 10th, 2018 02:42
There\'s a reason they call love electricity.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so true.
August 27th, 2018 23:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so true.
August 27th, 2018 23:55
I love my mind.
Crystal Hope said:
quite interesting thoughts. Nicely done! :)
August 7th, 2018 20:52
Crystal Hope said:
quite interesting thoughts. Nicely done! :)
August 7th, 2018 20:52
Writer
Poetic Dan said:
This was soul satisfaction
Your words in printed action
My mind is left in fascination
Thank you for the creation
July 31st, 2018 15:55
Poetic Dan said:
This was soul satisfaction
Your words in printed action
My mind is left in fascination
Thank you for the creation
July 31st, 2018 15:55
Tired
orchidee said:
Ahh, bit like replying \'I\'m all right\' when we may not be.
But then, depends who asks us if we\'re all right? And what would they do if we said \'Nope\'?!
July 13th, 2018 04:56
orchidee said:
Ahh, bit like replying \'I\'m all right\' when we may not be.
But then, depends who asks us if we\'re all right? And what would they do if we said \'Nope\'?!
July 13th, 2018 04:56
Selfishly self preserving
Reyas said:
Something about this work just speaks to me. Very well written.
July 10th, 2018 00:20
Reyas said:
Something about this work just speaks to me. Very well written.
July 10th, 2018 00:20
I\'m not allowed to be depressed
Novadose said:
I relate to this poem alot, im really glad you shared it on here. Its hard to express. You want to be in control of some of the pain thats caused to you and it brings a type of clarity. These days are meant for something. They feel empty and void but in time when you feel a little less empty and a little more content with your life it means all that much more and thats a gift in life down the road(:
July 7th, 2018 21:57
Novadose said:
I relate to this poem alot, im really glad you shared it on here. Its hard to express. You want to be in control of some of the pain thats caused to you and it brings a type of clarity. These days are meant for something. They feel empty and void but in time when you feel a little less empty and a little more content with your life it means all that much more and thats a gift in life down the road(:
July 7th, 2018 21:57
I want someone to love
E-Poems said:
I want to tell you, How beautiful and real this is. Absolutely brilliant work, I can\'t wait to read more. ~ E
July 2nd, 2018 14:33
E-Poems said:
I want to tell you, How beautiful and real this is. Absolutely brilliant work, I can\'t wait to read more. ~ E
July 2nd, 2018 14:33
Anger
MrNobody40 said:
I completely understand. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
May 23rd, 2018 09:32
MrNobody40 said:
I completely understand. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
May 23rd, 2018 09:32
Anger
Ian Primmer said:
Anger is a touchy subject, you described it so well, I like it, thank you for the read.
May 22nd, 2018 20:06
Ian Primmer said:
Anger is a touchy subject, you described it so well, I like it, thank you for the read.
May 22nd, 2018 20:06
Rejection
dusk arising said:
Ah, i can feel the self confidence ooozing out of this piece. Ooozing right out of it.
January 30th, 2018 18:42
dusk arising said:
Ah, i can feel the self confidence ooozing out of this piece. Ooozing right out of it.
January 30th, 2018 18:42
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