Comments received on poems by John Prophet



Spirit
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write John. May that release forever be the way forward.

Andy

October 2nd, 2020 00:17

Consciousness
Goldfinch60 said:

Music is so important in my life and I know that I will be listening to it as I go towards infinity.

Andy

September 29th, 2020 00:17

Consciousness
Unsub said:

The problem is our five sense prison does not allow our consciousness to connect with infinity. We no longer know how to!

Sad piece reflecting what should be!

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September 28th, 2020 09:10

Mist
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true in these times John. We seem to be going nowhere or even going backwards.

Andy

September 25th, 2020 00:33

Alone
Goldfinch60 said:

There must be other life out there, the arrogance of man is the thing that says we are the only life in the Universe. Good words John.

September 24th, 2020 00:26

Box
Goldfinch60 said:

Thinking outside the box can bring such unexpected wonders to our lives.

Andy

September 21st, 2020 00:31

Calculations
Goldfinch60 said:

There is no proof that 1 + 1 = 2, we have to accept it.

I have see a proof in the past that 1 + 1 = 3.

Andy

September 17th, 2020 00:23

Sculptor
Goldfinch60 said:

Sculptures can be such wonderful things, so much beauty and wonder created from a lump of clay or marble or wood.

Andy

September 13th, 2020 00:56

Might
Goldfinch60 said:

So true, who says and who does , is it right.

Andy

September 10th, 2020 15:20

Searching
Fay Slimm. said:

You outline the search for answers so well with descriptive short phrasing and highlighting the Whys with a final question makes the write one I can relate to. Thanks for sharing it.

September 9th, 2020 02:23

Searching
Goldfinch60 said:

Why? The question that is impossible to answer.

Andy

September 9th, 2020 00:09

Odds
L. B. Mek said:

indeed, one need only look up the odds of probability on the forces counter acting - to create that gravity we take for granted,
then tell me there is no such thing as great design...

August 31st, 2020 03:48

Deity
Goddess of the Mist said:

Interesting style, we are all clinging to something it seems.

August 27th, 2020 21:54

Quantum
Goddess of the Mist said:

Wow! This is great - the title drew me in!

August 25th, 2020 18:04

Firefly
Goldfinch60 said:

Our lives on this are only like a blink of a fireflies light.

Andy

August 11th, 2020 00:03

Now
Goldfinch60 said:

So true John.

Andy

July 10th, 2020 00:01

Now
Unsub said:

a timeless loop where time doesn\'t exist.

Infinite awareness.

Really enjoyed this one.

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July 9th, 2020 07:32

Individualism
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true John.

Andy

June 25th, 2020 00:08

Compliance
Goldfinch60 said:

Like never before - so true.

Andy

June 14th, 2020 23:53

View
Goldfinch60 said:

Everybody sees things in different ways.

Andy

June 11th, 2020 00:29

Field
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true John, enlightenment is there for us all.

Andy

June 9th, 2020 00:27

Blend
Unsub said:

JP,

I read this through a few times to see if I got anything deeper within; but I didn\'t.

The creation as we are right now is in total chaos & is a corrupt society of people who have forgotten how to love one another. Hate is the creation of humankind at the moment.

So I really don\'t want to absorb any of it.

One to the other to the whole...feels more like one to the other to the HOLE!

I tried to see some positive in this but this poem does not feel like it is written with a true understanding of life, creation & society right now.

So it just feels out-dated & a little preachy (is that even a word?)

I tried,

sorry,

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June 8th, 2020 05:57

Blend
Goldfinch60 said:

That whole is within us all once all the connections are there.

Andy

June 8th, 2020 00:10

Authority
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true John, organise religion is a load of untruths spouted to the ignorant.

Andy

June 6th, 2020 01:28

Past
Goldfinch60 said:

Everything repeats in natures realm.

Andy

June 5th, 2020 00:57

Tech
Goldfinch60 said:

Eyes wide open certainly but there are so many out there now with their eyes wide shut.

Andy

June 4th, 2020 00:27

Tally
Goldfinch60 said:

Powerful write John and those last two lines are so true.

May 22nd, 2020 00:15

Expression
Audax said:

Such a simple and yet exquisite literary piece that you wrote! I’ll make sure to keep an eye out for more poems to come out!

May 19th, 2020 10:15

Primitive
A said:

Let me be the first to comment, you really set the \'organic thoughts\' quick pace, passionate kind of script here. You\'ve got a mindset, a fire in you
I like the way you\'re getting ut out,
Putting it in your words.
It\'s almost like a rose in a sense. Round after round, endless petals. Thought after thought, but it\'s not like just thought, it feeling. Feelings arent always sentences, and most times the best words to use to describe a feeling are in no way actually relative to that feeling at all.
But it\'s just, like
Purely feeling satisfaction.
From your poem,
Personally, I\'ve gotten the perspective that you have every intention to write in a delicate and powerful, conscious perspective. To write with a cause.
However your lost in your mindset on that.
You dont know where to begin to describe the cause you have so much fire for, because also you arent fully sure what \'all\' of your \'cause\' is.
Your lost.
Idk atleast that\'s my interp. Could just be about burgers or some sht.;)

May 10th, 2020 10:57

Sail
FredPeyer said:

Even though it would be great, it is impossible to find the \'perfect tack\' in life. Read it three times, am still pondering....

April 26th, 2020 12:30

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