Comments received on poems by E.J. Waling
Writers Of The Tome
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and conspiracy oriented it spreads its tale. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 20:51
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and conspiracy oriented it spreads its tale. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 20:51
Antidote4 With A.I. Analysis
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the effects of technology or the pollution of mankind. Nicely written
April 12th, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the effects of technology or the pollution of mankind. Nicely written
April 12th, 2026 14:17
Forms4 With A.I. Analysis
sorenbarrett said:
In evolution some change more rapidly than others and the reason may never be known just as it is not known if rapid evolution is any better than slow. Nicely written
April 11th, 2026 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
In evolution some change more rapidly than others and the reason may never be known just as it is not known if rapid evolution is any better than slow. Nicely written
April 11th, 2026 19:40
Which Way
sorenbarrett said:
We all have to ask what is real and each of us have our answer and over the difference between these views we argue and fight. Well written
April 7th, 2026 08:23
sorenbarrett said:
We all have to ask what is real and each of us have our answer and over the difference between these views we argue and fight. Well written
April 7th, 2026 08:23
Virtual Soul
sorenbarrett said:
This poem of short phrases moves right along never pausing just as one would expect a soul would do. Well written
March 31st, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
This poem of short phrases moves right along never pausing just as one would expect a soul would do. Well written
March 31st, 2026 03:59
Appears
sorenbarrett said:
What can we depend on in this world. Our vision an illusion, hearing a delusion, subject to marketing, political rhetoric a good write
March 29th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
What can we depend on in this world. Our vision an illusion, hearing a delusion, subject to marketing, political rhetoric a good write
March 29th, 2026 04:16
The Game
sorenbarrett said:
The greatest game on earth that of life. How could a game be designed with better precision where the contestant is not told the rules not even told it is a game and the clock is started racing against it without knowing how much time one has. Not knowing if one is playing against others as a teammate of others, who is on one\'s side or not. Not knowing the objective or what is permissible to obtain it. And in the end one gets to take nothing home. Well maybe bragging rights. Loved it a fave
March 24th, 2026 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
The greatest game on earth that of life. How could a game be designed with better precision where the contestant is not told the rules not even told it is a game and the clock is started racing against it without knowing how much time one has. Not knowing if one is playing against others as a teammate of others, who is on one\'s side or not. Not knowing the objective or what is permissible to obtain it. And in the end one gets to take nothing home. Well maybe bragging rights. Loved it a fave
March 24th, 2026 10:06
Connection2
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of change and rapid change it seems to be. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 17:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of change and rapid change it seems to be. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 17:23
Extreme
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the cycle and people do not learn but keep doing the same thing over and over expecting a different result. Well written
March 17th, 2026 18:38
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the cycle and people do not learn but keep doing the same thing over and over expecting a different result. Well written
March 17th, 2026 18:38
Downloaded
sorenbarrett said:
A true list of terms of fitting into technological society. Well done
March 12th, 2026 19:52
sorenbarrett said:
A true list of terms of fitting into technological society. Well done
March 12th, 2026 19:52
Vibrations 2
sorenbarrett said:
All is waves some disrupted by vibrations and deflections. Fields of force gravity, electric, magnetic some say love and where does entropy fall
March 9th, 2026 20:21
sorenbarrett said:
All is waves some disrupted by vibrations and deflections. Fields of force gravity, electric, magnetic some say love and where does entropy fall
March 9th, 2026 20:21
Retired
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of single worded lines that seem to set the stage for retirement. A word that once meant taking it easy but in a modern generation of avarice means doing something different. No longer working the factory line shut down by automation one bags groceries until ninety. Nicely written
March 9th, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of single worded lines that seem to set the stage for retirement. A word that once meant taking it easy but in a modern generation of avarice means doing something different. No longer working the factory line shut down by automation one bags groceries until ninety. Nicely written
March 9th, 2026 03:36
New World
sorenbarrett said:
Earth man\'s home is all of those things listed in this poem and more. Lovely
March 7th, 2026 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
Earth man\'s home is all of those things listed in this poem and more. Lovely
March 7th, 2026 09:25
What To Believe
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is most human with many of its aspects listed. Nicely written in short lines emphasizing each aspect. Well done
March 6th, 2026 16:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is most human with many of its aspects listed. Nicely written in short lines emphasizing each aspect. Well done
March 6th, 2026 16:22
What Evolves
sorenbarrett said:
Reality lived indeed it is. Although some may choose fantasy reality is a more pragmatic road. Nicely done
March 3rd, 2026 15:36
sorenbarrett said:
Reality lived indeed it is. Although some may choose fantasy reality is a more pragmatic road. Nicely done
March 3rd, 2026 15:36
Endless Source
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems at the atomic level or cellular level. Nicely written
February 27th, 2026 14:47
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems at the atomic level or cellular level. Nicely written
February 27th, 2026 14:47
Overwhelmed
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the question of what is real and what is not what can be believed and what can not. With deception in everything where does one begin. Well written
February 26th, 2026 09:54
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the question of what is real and what is not what can be believed and what can not. With deception in everything where does one begin. Well written
February 26th, 2026 09:54
What We Teach
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of life itself as we tunnel along through old and new. Well done in short lines giving the feeling of moving forward quickly. Very nice
February 24th, 2026 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of life itself as we tunnel along through old and new. Well done in short lines giving the feeling of moving forward quickly. Very nice
February 24th, 2026 10:22
A World Apart
sorenbarrett said:
A line by line, word by word journey in this poem where each line like a stepping stone took one forward. Nicely done
February 21st, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A line by line, word by word journey in this poem where each line like a stepping stone took one forward. Nicely done
February 21st, 2026 03:48
Perfect
sorenbarrett said:
I share those feelings watching the population seduced by a technological siren where TV met social needs, Video games became one\'s best friend, a cell phone promoted gossip that soon turned texting so one would not need to hear a human voice so much more and now AI that one can not distinguish from real Ted Kaczynski was right technology is the demise of humanity no wonder he was kept in solitary confinement.
February 17th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
I share those feelings watching the population seduced by a technological siren where TV met social needs, Video games became one\'s best friend, a cell phone promoted gossip that soon turned texting so one would not need to hear a human voice so much more and now AI that one can not distinguish from real Ted Kaczynski was right technology is the demise of humanity no wonder he was kept in solitary confinement.
February 17th, 2026 04:33
A New Beginning
sorenbarrett said:
Just as each generation does not foresee the changes of the next so is evolution. A poem that evolves as it devolves. Nicely done
February 14th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Just as each generation does not foresee the changes of the next so is evolution. A poem that evolves as it devolves. Nicely done
February 14th, 2026 04:14
Quantum Aether
Friendship said:
Your revolves around concepts from quantum physics, such as probability, observation, and the nature of reality.
February 11th, 2026 17:56
Friendship said:
Your revolves around concepts from quantum physics, such as probability, observation, and the nature of reality.
February 11th, 2026 17:56
Quantum Aether
sorenbarrett said:
I like you blended science with poetry and with our position in it all. Nicely done
February 11th, 2026 16:10
sorenbarrett said:
I like you blended science with poetry and with our position in it all. Nicely done
February 11th, 2026 16:10
Whirlwind
sorenbarrett said:
Economy, technology, modern world. A lovely write that word by word lays out the course of society. Well done
February 9th, 2026 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
Economy, technology, modern world. A lovely write that word by word lays out the course of society. Well done
February 9th, 2026 13:12
Every Person
sorenbarrett said:
Waves that intersect and effect each other in interaction. Well written
February 1st, 2026 16:35
sorenbarrett said:
Waves that intersect and effect each other in interaction. Well written
February 1st, 2026 16:35
Virtual Bliss
sorenbarrett said:
This one was thought provoking, nicely done
January 22nd, 2026 19:19
sorenbarrett said:
This one was thought provoking, nicely done
January 22nd, 2026 19:19
Noise
sorenbarrett said:
Everything is a wave and sound thereby if only we could hear it all it would overwhelm us. A wonderful poem
January 20th, 2026 09:14
sorenbarrett said:
Everything is a wave and sound thereby if only we could hear it all it would overwhelm us. A wonderful poem
January 20th, 2026 09:14
Noise
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like a signal-jam poem—fractured, staccato, intentionally abrasive. It sounds like what it’s describing. That’s its biggest strength.
January 20th, 2026 09:01
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like a signal-jam poem—fractured, staccato, intentionally abrasive. It sounds like what it’s describing. That’s its biggest strength.
January 20th, 2026 09:01
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