Comments received on poems by E.J. Waling
Hallowed Halls
soheil khodaparasti said:
A fascinating modern reinterpretation of ancient mythology, suggesting that technology has become a new form of alchemy, empowering humanity with almost godlike abilities to create, reshape, and transform entire worlds.
November 14th, 2026 13:59
soheil khodaparasti said:
A fascinating modern reinterpretation of ancient mythology, suggesting that technology has become a new form of alchemy, empowering humanity with almost godlike abilities to create, reshape, and transform entire worlds.
November 14th, 2026 13:59
Hallowed Halls
sorenbarrett said:
One might imagine presidents and rulers imagining themselves as these gods. Nicely written with great images and flow.
November 14th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
One might imagine presidents and rulers imagining themselves as these gods. Nicely written with great images and flow.
November 14th, 2026 04:06
Timelessness
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept with that last line \"where time has no sway\" Nicely done
November 12th, 2026 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept with that last line \"where time has no sway\" Nicely done
November 12th, 2026 09:20
Organized Chaos
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophical it evolves to the end. Nicely done
November 7th, 2026 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophical it evolves to the end. Nicely done
November 7th, 2026 07:19
Expansion2
sorenbarrett said:
A open shaft to enlightenment in this linear progression to nirvana. Well done
November 5th, 2026 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
A open shaft to enlightenment in this linear progression to nirvana. Well done
November 5th, 2026 07:44
Expanded Horizons
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of enlightenment a spiritual proclamation. Nicely done
November 4th, 2026 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of enlightenment a spiritual proclamation. Nicely done
November 4th, 2026 11:47
Wither The Mind
sorenbarrett said:
Needs met by AI perhaps promises promises and what will be the costs.
November 2nd, 2026 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
Needs met by AI perhaps promises promises and what will be the costs.
November 2nd, 2026 20:25
Doomed
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of a downward slide in this write where something is taking over and one is loosing control. Well done
October 29th, 2026 18:35
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of a downward slide in this write where something is taking over and one is loosing control. Well done
October 29th, 2026 18:35
Looking Glass
sorenbarrett said:
A mirror shows what is in front of it and changes as it changes. Nicely written
October 28th, 2026 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
A mirror shows what is in front of it and changes as it changes. Nicely written
October 28th, 2026 13:08
In Their Heads
sorenbarrett said:
Awareness, perception, interpretation all in the head. Nicely written
October 27th, 2026 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
Awareness, perception, interpretation all in the head. Nicely written
October 27th, 2026 07:55
Soul3
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic word association that flows to a spiritual end, Nicely done
October 19th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic word association that flows to a spiritual end, Nicely done
October 19th, 2026 03:56
It’s Not A.I.
sorenbarrett said:
A warning. Beware the powerful and wealth as well as famous. Well done
October 17th, 2026 17:42
sorenbarrett said:
A warning. Beware the powerful and wealth as well as famous. Well done
October 17th, 2026 17:42
Mind Vision
sorenbarrett said:
This hits close to heart. I have always felt that each life form has its world from which we can not escape but each equal to any other. A lovely write.
October 14th, 2026 18:48
sorenbarrett said:
This hits close to heart. I have always felt that each life form has its world from which we can not escape but each equal to any other. A lovely write.
October 14th, 2026 18:48
Transition3
sorenbarrett said:
A mix of the old and the new. I\'ve seen all. Nicely done
October 12th, 2026 20:48
sorenbarrett said:
A mix of the old and the new. I\'ve seen all. Nicely done
October 12th, 2026 20:48
Where Humanity Lives
sorenbarrett said:
I have considered this before and it may well be the truth all living in a matrix. Nicely written it speaks with power a concept foreign to most of us. Our body merely an apparatus receiving and sending signals to a greater cosmic consciousness in this we are all one.
October 11th, 2026 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
I have considered this before and it may well be the truth all living in a matrix. Nicely written it speaks with power a concept foreign to most of us. Our body merely an apparatus receiving and sending signals to a greater cosmic consciousness in this we are all one.
October 11th, 2026 07:57
Violence
sorenbarrett said:
There is a falling flow to this poem that seems to cascade off of rocks as a waterfall. Well done
October 7th, 2026 13:19
sorenbarrett said:
There is a falling flow to this poem that seems to cascade off of rocks as a waterfall. Well done
October 7th, 2026 13:19
A New Way
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a journey formed as a staircase line by line step by step. Nicely done
September 29th, 2026 16:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a journey formed as a staircase line by line step by step. Nicely done
September 29th, 2026 16:38
A Different Place
sorenbarrett said:
Seduction takes us all sooner or later. Well written.
September 20th, 2026 15:19
sorenbarrett said:
Seduction takes us all sooner or later. Well written.
September 20th, 2026 15:19
Betwixt And Between
sorenbarrett said:
The forced choice where either way ends the same. Well done.
September 16th, 2026 17:58
sorenbarrett said:
The forced choice where either way ends the same. Well done.
September 16th, 2026 17:58
Create
sorenbarrett said:
The flow of short lines carry this poem in a race to the end. Nicely done
September 15th, 2026 14:50
sorenbarrett said:
The flow of short lines carry this poem in a race to the end. Nicely done
September 15th, 2026 14:50
Rumbling
sorenbarrett said:
We all grab for that golden ring but most miss. Nicely written
September 14th, 2026 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
We all grab for that golden ring but most miss. Nicely written
September 14th, 2026 09:11
Wilderness
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a cosmic feel that applies to the individual and their time. Nicely done
September 13th, 2026 16:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a cosmic feel that applies to the individual and their time. Nicely done
September 13th, 2026 16:54
Conviction
sorenbarrett said:
Love the last \"Original thought rarely found\". Nicely done
September 8th, 2026 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
Love the last \"Original thought rarely found\". Nicely done
September 8th, 2026 13:03
The Veil
sorenbarrett said:
A veil of words and stories separating us from the horrors of reality. Well done
September 7th, 2026 18:10
sorenbarrett said:
A veil of words and stories separating us from the horrors of reality. Well done
September 7th, 2026 18:10
Another Master
sorenbarrett said:
Who\'s god is bigger, badder, the winner of the fight. Loved the continued rhyme. Well done
August 29th, 2026 20:32
sorenbarrett said:
Who\'s god is bigger, badder, the winner of the fight. Loved the continued rhyme. Well done
August 29th, 2026 20:32
The Churn
Syd said:
Hi EJ, everything is continually changing including ourselves. Normality is only temporary.
A thought provoking write.
- Syd 🍄
August 22nd, 2026 11:29
Syd said:
Hi EJ, everything is continually changing including ourselves. Normality is only temporary.
A thought provoking write.
- Syd 🍄
August 22nd, 2026 11:29
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