Comments received on poems by E.J. Waling



Hung Up
sorenbarrett said:

This poem seemed a flowing and creative process itself. Well done it flows.

July 22nd, 2026 04:09

What Will Be
2781 said:

It is finished, you know.

July 20th, 2026 09:23

What Will Be
sorenbarrett said:

This sounds like an apt description of entropy. Well written

July 20th, 2026 08:53

As Time Goes By
sorenbarrett said:

A good read this poem in short lines conveys the rush of life. Well done

July 17th, 2026 11:16

Time Irrelevant
sorenbarrett said:

Time poetically expressed in all its distortions. Nicely written

July 16th, 2026 20:05

Rolling Waves
NafisaSB said:

A powerful poem that reflects what is seen and felt

July 5th, 2026 21:55

Rolling Waves
soheil khodaparasti said:

The metaphorical sea becomes a force of inevitable change, culminating in a \"New / Reality,\" one that mirrors the ongoing reality of our lives.

July 4th, 2026 09:49

Rolling Waves
sorenbarrett said:

These one word lines leave the sensation of a rush as wave after wave beats against the rocks. Nicely worded

July 4th, 2026 07:12

Incomprehensible
sorenbarrett said:

One word follows the next leaving meaning that changes with each addition. Well done

July 3rd, 2026 18:10

Yet To Be
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of nature and birth. Of generations and sequence. Well done

June 25th, 2026 20:13

All Things
sorenbarrett said:

So much motion in this poem it dances with energy. Nicely written

June 24th, 2026 06:51

Unbroken
sorenbarrett said:

This poem a journey itself as it unwinds line by line. Nicely written

June 22nd, 2026 03:42

In The Beginning
soheil khodaparasti said:

A beautifully crafted existential reflection: a vain search for meaning, born of purpose\'s evasiveness, through unanswered questions, competing theories, and an unresolved ending.

June 11th, 2026 12:18

In The Beginning
sorenbarrett said:

I like the one or two word line that like sparks of thought carry the image to the next link and onward. Well done

June 11th, 2026 07:49

Running Out Of Time
sorenbarrett said:

A good rush with the one word one line delivery speeding everything up. Well done

June 4th, 2026 21:36

Initialization
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely done a fave

June 2nd, 2026 19:54

Work In Progress
rhmn_7 said:

The whole world is now sadly reduced to short dopamine kicks, great write!

May 31st, 2026 02:01

Work In Progress
sorenbarrett said:

The constant change in the world portrayed in this poem. Well written

May 30th, 2026 19:28

Views
sorenbarrett said:

An artists painting in words as each stroke is made, line by line. Well done E.J.

May 25th, 2026 03:58

Passing Through2
sorenbarrett said:

Traveling different dimensions in this write. Well done

May 23rd, 2026 15:45

Intertwined
sorenbarrett said:

Connected just as the words of the poem are. Well done

May 18th, 2026 20:20

Silicon Sky
sorenbarrett said:

A good write of personal perspective what ever one believes is their reality. Well done

May 17th, 2026 17:26

Being Human
Friendship said:

Well said

May 16th, 2026 19:31

Being Human
sorenbarrett said:

One word at a time taken on a journey. Well done

May 16th, 2026 19:14

Narrative Wars
sorenbarrett said:

Here it seems that thought change direction and shift. Well written

May 13th, 2026 17:28

Echoes2
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely piece where meaning bounces off walls of being in echoes. Nicely done

May 11th, 2026 10:11

What Is Known
Friendship said:

Nicely done

May 2nd, 2026 07:53

What Is Known
sorenbarrett said:

Somewhat cosmic and evolutionary it runs the gamete from beginning to end. Nicely done

May 1st, 2026 22:58

Ghost Story
sorenbarrett said:

I am always enthralled with different paradigms and their perspective. Nicely done

April 29th, 2026 13:51

Final Truth
sorenbarrett said:

Highly philosophical it speaks of rights and wrongs, enemies and friends and the balance weighed by a scale of perspective. Nicely done

April 25th, 2026 20:31

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