Comments received on poems by E.J. Waling
A World Apart
sorenbarrett said:
A line by line, word by word journey in this poem where each line like a stepping stone took one forward. Nicely done
February 21st, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A line by line, word by word journey in this poem where each line like a stepping stone took one forward. Nicely done
February 21st, 2026 03:48
Perfect
sorenbarrett said:
I share those feelings watching the population seduced by a technological siren where TV met social needs, Video games became one\'s best friend, a cell phone promoted gossip that soon turned texting so one would not need to hear a human voice so much more and now AI that one can not distinguish from real Ted Kaczynski was right technology is the demise of humanity no wonder he was kept in solitary confinement.
February 17th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
I share those feelings watching the population seduced by a technological siren where TV met social needs, Video games became one\'s best friend, a cell phone promoted gossip that soon turned texting so one would not need to hear a human voice so much more and now AI that one can not distinguish from real Ted Kaczynski was right technology is the demise of humanity no wonder he was kept in solitary confinement.
February 17th, 2026 04:33
A New Beginning
sorenbarrett said:
Just as each generation does not foresee the changes of the next so is evolution. A poem that evolves as it devolves. Nicely done
February 14th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Just as each generation does not foresee the changes of the next so is evolution. A poem that evolves as it devolves. Nicely done
February 14th, 2026 04:14
Quantum Aether
Friendship said:
Your revolves around concepts from quantum physics, such as probability, observation, and the nature of reality.
February 11th, 2026 17:56
Friendship said:
Your revolves around concepts from quantum physics, such as probability, observation, and the nature of reality.
February 11th, 2026 17:56
Quantum Aether
sorenbarrett said:
I like you blended science with poetry and with our position in it all. Nicely done
February 11th, 2026 16:10
sorenbarrett said:
I like you blended science with poetry and with our position in it all. Nicely done
February 11th, 2026 16:10
Whirlwind
sorenbarrett said:
Economy, technology, modern world. A lovely write that word by word lays out the course of society. Well done
February 9th, 2026 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
Economy, technology, modern world. A lovely write that word by word lays out the course of society. Well done
February 9th, 2026 13:12
Every Person
sorenbarrett said:
Waves that intersect and effect each other in interaction. Well written
February 1st, 2026 16:35
sorenbarrett said:
Waves that intersect and effect each other in interaction. Well written
February 1st, 2026 16:35
Virtual Bliss
sorenbarrett said:
This one was thought provoking, nicely done
January 22nd, 2026 19:19
sorenbarrett said:
This one was thought provoking, nicely done
January 22nd, 2026 19:19
Noise
sorenbarrett said:
Everything is a wave and sound thereby if only we could hear it all it would overwhelm us. A wonderful poem
January 20th, 2026 09:14
sorenbarrett said:
Everything is a wave and sound thereby if only we could hear it all it would overwhelm us. A wonderful poem
January 20th, 2026 09:14
Noise
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like a signal-jam poem—fractured, staccato, intentionally abrasive. It sounds like what it’s describing. That’s its biggest strength.
January 20th, 2026 09:01
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like a signal-jam poem—fractured, staccato, intentionally abrasive. It sounds like what it’s describing. That’s its biggest strength.
January 20th, 2026 09:01
Wafting
sorenbarrett said:
Life in the process in this poem that bubbles up new ingredients needed. Very nicely done
January 17th, 2026 10:23
sorenbarrett said:
Life in the process in this poem that bubbles up new ingredients needed. Very nicely done
January 17th, 2026 10:23
Cloud Mind
sorenbarrett said:
The interconnection of thoughts and feelings in this poem well done. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 21:03
sorenbarrett said:
The interconnection of thoughts and feelings in this poem well done. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 21:03
Alien Intelligence
sorenbarrett said:
A mind provoking write where no creator is in view. Not that any are. Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
A mind provoking write where no creator is in view. Not that any are. Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 07:18
Worlds Apart
sorenbarrett said:
Some things are so different that in their divergence at infinity they converge, parallel lines, a straight line extending to infinity will return to where it began. At the extreme, the extreme right meets the extreme left. At that point never becomes always. A mind provoking poem. Loved it
December 23rd, 2025 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
Some things are so different that in their divergence at infinity they converge, parallel lines, a straight line extending to infinity will return to where it began. At the extreme, the extreme right meets the extreme left. At that point never becomes always. A mind provoking poem. Loved it
December 23rd, 2025 03:32
Human World
sorenbarrett said:
With change bit by bit humanity is lost until it becomes unrecognizable. Nicely done word by word.
December 22nd, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
With change bit by bit humanity is lost until it becomes unrecognizable. Nicely done word by word.
December 22nd, 2025 03:52
Star Trek/Terminator
sorenbarrett said:
A dichotomy and evenly spaced good vs evil. It speaks of opposites and how one might not exist without the other. A lovely write
December 19th, 2025 16:23
sorenbarrett said:
A dichotomy and evenly spaced good vs evil. It speaks of opposites and how one might not exist without the other. A lovely write
December 19th, 2025 16:23
They’re Here
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to me a poetic criticism of technology gone array. Well done in single word flow.
December 16th, 2025 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to me a poetic criticism of technology gone array. Well done in single word flow.
December 16th, 2025 11:19
Superverse
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a fractal poem where the repetition of words is a reoccurring mathematical equation. Very nicely done.
December 15th, 2025 19:33
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a fractal poem where the repetition of words is a reoccurring mathematical equation. Very nicely done.
December 15th, 2025 19:33
Manifestation Of Creativity
NinjaGirl said:
The creativity us humans have is astounding...something so beautiful about humanity...and you have it!
December 10th, 2025 21:06
NinjaGirl said:
The creativity us humans have is astounding...something so beautiful about humanity...and you have it!
December 10th, 2025 21:06
Manifestation Of Creativity
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful line of words that flow as a stream downward culminating in limitations. Lovely
December 10th, 2025 18:55
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful line of words that flow as a stream downward culminating in limitations. Lovely
December 10th, 2025 18:55
From Essence To Reality
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice flow to this poem both in meter and in meaning. Well done
December 9th, 2025 19:45
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice flow to this poem both in meter and in meaning. Well done
December 9th, 2025 19:45
A.I. Narratives
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds very computer like now days you can\'t tell what is AI. Well written
December 7th, 2025 17:59
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds very computer like now days you can\'t tell what is AI. Well written
December 7th, 2025 17:59
Tiny Blue Bubble
sorenbarrett said:
Mico worlds in a dew drop. We see things from our perspective but are there bigger and smaller worlds that we can not see being only atoms in their world or galaxies with them only cells and atoms. Thought provoking
December 4th, 2025 07:30
sorenbarrett said:
Mico worlds in a dew drop. We see things from our perspective but are there bigger and smaller worlds that we can not see being only atoms in their world or galaxies with them only cells and atoms. Thought provoking
December 4th, 2025 07:30
Mind Control
sorenbarrett said:
Under old names new threats appear on the horizon. A world spiraling downward. Well done
November 29th, 2025 17:45
sorenbarrett said:
Under old names new threats appear on the horizon. A world spiraling downward. Well done
November 29th, 2025 17:45
Out Of The Bottle
sorenbarrett said:
Pandora\'s box is open, the genie is out of the bottle and like the atomic bomb once out it can not be put back. A lovely write
November 28th, 2025 10:43
sorenbarrett said:
Pandora\'s box is open, the genie is out of the bottle and like the atomic bomb once out it can not be put back. A lovely write
November 28th, 2025 10:43
Alchemist Toil
sorenbarrett said:
Aren\'t we all alchemists of a sort. Looking for the philosopher stone to change lead into gold in the market, relations, or metaphorical. A lovely write
November 27th, 2025 10:23
sorenbarrett said:
Aren\'t we all alchemists of a sort. Looking for the philosopher stone to change lead into gold in the market, relations, or metaphorical. A lovely write
November 27th, 2025 10:23
Revolution Evolution
sorenbarrett said:
A series of poetic words that blend to an end. Nicely done
November 22nd, 2025 19:50
sorenbarrett said:
A series of poetic words that blend to an end. Nicely done
November 22nd, 2025 19:50
The Merger
sorenbarrett said:
The process of amalgamation, the mixing and merging of all things to unify and become one. Nicely done
November 17th, 2025 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
The process of amalgamation, the mixing and merging of all things to unify and become one. Nicely done
November 17th, 2025 03:35
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