Comments received on poems by E.J. Waling
Thick Fog
Goldfinch60 said:
We each have a light within us to find our way through that fog John.
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
We each have a light within us to find our way through that fog John.
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:20
Thick Fog
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images each word defining a picture Lovely write
February 16th, 2025 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images each word defining a picture Lovely write
February 16th, 2025 08:51
Thick Fog
Poetic Licence said:
May humanity`s light shine bright again very soon, enjoyed the read
February 16th, 2025 08:18
Poetic Licence said:
May humanity`s light shine bright again very soon, enjoyed the read
February 16th, 2025 08:18
Thick Fog
arqios said:
Barely. More Light please! Blinding, revealing light. 🙏🏻🕊
February 16th, 2025 08:08
arqios said:
Barely. More Light please! Blinding, revealing light. 🙏🏻🕊
February 16th, 2025 08:08
Built
sorenbarrett said:
Word by word just like brick by brick the poem was built as the civilization was. A great write that passed quickly just as life does. Nicely done John
February 15th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Word by word just like brick by brick the poem was built as the civilization was. A great write that passed quickly just as life does. Nicely done John
February 15th, 2025 04:24
Built
Poetic Licence said:
It would be nice if human evolvement would erase the nastier elements of the human race, but instead we appear to be breeding more of them, interesting and enjoyable read
February 15th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
It would be nice if human evolvement would erase the nastier elements of the human race, but instead we appear to be breeding more of them, interesting and enjoyable read
February 15th, 2025 02:57
Built
Goldfinch60 said:
We come from a long line and many are shaped into wonderful human beings John although the leaders seem to have been formulated another way.
Andy
February 15th, 2025 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
We come from a long line and many are shaped into wonderful human beings John although the leaders seem to have been formulated another way.
Andy
February 15th, 2025 02:53
Precipice
Poetic Licence said:
I love the lay out of this poem, as you read you end up speeding up as the process does, Enjoyed the read
February 12th, 2025 05:50
Poetic Licence said:
I love the lay out of this poem, as you read you end up speeding up as the process does, Enjoyed the read
February 12th, 2025 05:50
Precipice
sorenbarrett said:
Flashes of words tell the story. The whole process is speeded up. Very nice
February 12th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Flashes of words tell the story. The whole process is speeded up. Very nice
February 12th, 2025 04:25
Gene Pool
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the construction of this poem the single of few word lines pulled one from one to the next in a (mind control) sort of way. A great message
February 10th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the construction of this poem the single of few word lines pulled one from one to the next in a (mind control) sort of way. A great message
February 10th, 2025 03:53
Gene Pool
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting read and the systems of control, i guess it boils down to, if we let them control our minds and life they certainly will. Enjoyed the read.
February 10th, 2025 03:48
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting read and the systems of control, i guess it boils down to, if we let them control our minds and life they certainly will. Enjoyed the read.
February 10th, 2025 03:48
Gene Pool
Goldfinch60 said:
That mind control is tried everywhere John but as individuals we must not let it control us.
Andy
February 10th, 2025 03:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That mind control is tried everywhere John but as individuals we must not let it control us.
Andy
February 10th, 2025 03:20
Cosmic Onion
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable write, making me one how many layers are there to the cosmic onion, do we know, enjoyed the read
February 7th, 2025 04:31
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable write, making me one how many layers are there to the cosmic onion, do we know, enjoyed the read
February 7th, 2025 04:31
Cosmic Onion
sorenbarrett said:
A great litteral and metaphoric write and so it is in most all of our universes from the physical to the emotional layers upon layers from the infinate to the infinitesimally small. Very nicely done
February 7th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
A great litteral and metaphoric write and so it is in most all of our universes from the physical to the emotional layers upon layers from the infinate to the infinitesimally small. Very nicely done
February 7th, 2025 04:21
Cosmic Onion
Goldfinch60 said:
As we go through each layer new things get shown that got us to the place we are now in John.
Andy
February 7th, 2025 03:00
Goldfinch60 said:
As we go through each layer new things get shown that got us to the place we are now in John.
Andy
February 7th, 2025 03:00
Program
Poetic Licence said:
I sense the fact that we are slowly being dictated to and changed and told what we can say and do, becoming like machines. I love the layout, really enjoyed the read.
February 4th, 2025 10:42
Poetic Licence said:
I sense the fact that we are slowly being dictated to and changed and told what we can say and do, becoming like machines. I love the layout, really enjoyed the read.
February 4th, 2025 10:42
Program
sorenbarrett said:
This thought provoking piece was a great read mking one think as its format resembles that of a machine or computor
February 4th, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
This thought provoking piece was a great read mking one think as its format resembles that of a machine or computor
February 4th, 2025 08:42
The Great Filter
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted piece, it does appear in this world an awful lot of effort goes in to maintaining our silence, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 03:43
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted piece, it does appear in this world an awful lot of effort goes in to maintaining our silence, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 03:43
The Great Filter
sorenbarrett said:
Familiar words but not really this poem is filled with statements. Very nice
January 28th, 2025 19:19
sorenbarrett said:
Familiar words but not really this poem is filled with statements. Very nice
January 28th, 2025 19:19
Grasping
sorenbarrett said:
Man\'s search for answers to questions of meaning existential purpose. Nicely put in poetic form. Lovely
January 23rd, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Man\'s search for answers to questions of meaning existential purpose. Nicely put in poetic form. Lovely
January 23rd, 2025 04:34
Grasping
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed the read, life feels very much at the moment that we are trying to find something to hang on to.
January 22nd, 2025 22:15
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed the read, life feels very much at the moment that we are trying to find something to hang on to.
January 22nd, 2025 22:15
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