Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Moon
sorenbarrett said:
The moon is vital to what we know as earth. Nicely written
August 17th, 2024 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
The moon is vital to what we know as earth. Nicely written
August 17th, 2024 13:47
Energy
Cassie58 said:
Plenty of energy in this write John. So much movement in these lines. Happy Thursday.
August 15th, 2024 02:58
Cassie58 said:
Plenty of energy in this write John. So much movement in these lines. Happy Thursday.
August 15th, 2024 02:58
Energy
sorenbarrett said:
I felt the energy in this powerful piece. It pulsates with reverberations of energy.
August 13th, 2024 20:29
sorenbarrett said:
I felt the energy in this powerful piece. It pulsates with reverberations of energy.
August 13th, 2024 20:29
Spirit2
sorenbarrett said:
There seemed to be a running drum beat in this poem as each word followed the next. Nicely done
August 12th, 2024 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
There seemed to be a running drum beat in this poem as each word followed the next. Nicely done
August 12th, 2024 05:42
The Station
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a journey painted in vivid images. A fun ride.
August 9th, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a journey painted in vivid images. A fun ride.
August 9th, 2024 06:13
Interesting Times
Cassie58 said:
Describes well the current situation in the UK. Not so easy to go with the flow as you get older. I don’t recognize the land of my youth. It’s just a lovely memory. Powerful writing John. Hits the spot.
August 9th, 2024 03:30
Cassie58 said:
Describes well the current situation in the UK. Not so easy to go with the flow as you get older. I don’t recognize the land of my youth. It’s just a lovely memory. Powerful writing John. Hits the spot.
August 9th, 2024 03:30
Interesting Times
jarcher54 said:
Very compelling. New gods in the sky indeed!
August 8th, 2024 04:05
jarcher54 said:
Very compelling. New gods in the sky indeed!
August 8th, 2024 04:05
Interesting Times
Goldfinch60 said:
Things change all the time John and we cannot seem to do anything about it.
Andy
August 8th, 2024 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Things change all the time John and we cannot seem to do anything about it.
Andy
August 8th, 2024 01:45
Perception3
Goldfinch60 said:
That grander view is there John but so many just do hot see it.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That grander view is there John but so many just do hot see it.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:46
Perception3
sorenbarrett said:
A chain of thoughts linked in free association to a single thought. Nice
August 4th, 2024 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
A chain of thoughts linked in free association to a single thought. Nice
August 4th, 2024 09:45
Substrate2
sorenbarrett said:
I get the feel of a poetic 0 1 poetic code a binomial system of rapid computer processing here. Free association also comes to mind and the flow take me to the sea. Nicely done
August 1st, 2024 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
I get the feel of a poetic 0 1 poetic code a binomial system of rapid computer processing here. Free association also comes to mind and the flow take me to the sea. Nicely done
August 1st, 2024 05:28
Substrate2
Goldfinch60 said:
Those formulations seem to rule out lives John.
Andy
August 1st, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Those formulations seem to rule out lives John.
Andy
August 1st, 2024 01:41
Flawed Creator
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t want AI for God. Don\'t even want it at all, servant, slave, or machine. Good write.
July 27th, 2024 20:36
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t want AI for God. Don\'t even want it at all, servant, slave, or machine. Good write.
July 27th, 2024 20:36
Soul Wars
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting choice of format one word at a time as if machinegun fire or a drum beat it draws one on. Nicely done
July 26th, 2024 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting choice of format one word at a time as if machinegun fire or a drum beat it draws one on. Nicely done
July 26th, 2024 05:52
Soul Wars
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, \"Soul Wars\" really hit me hard! The way it\'s structured—so fragmented and disjointed—perfectly captures the chaos and overwhelm of modern life. Each line feels like a jolt, just like the constant barrage of information we deal with every day. The themes of manipulation and information warfare are so relevant right now, and you’ve nailed that sense of cognitive overload. It’s like you’ve put into words what so many of us are feeling but can’t quite articulate. This poem really makes you think about the battle for our minds and beliefs in this digital age. Truly thought-provoking and powerful!
July 25th, 2024 22:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, \"Soul Wars\" really hit me hard! The way it\'s structured—so fragmented and disjointed—perfectly captures the chaos and overwhelm of modern life. Each line feels like a jolt, just like the constant barrage of information we deal with every day. The themes of manipulation and information warfare are so relevant right now, and you’ve nailed that sense of cognitive overload. It’s like you’ve put into words what so many of us are feeling but can’t quite articulate. This poem really makes you think about the battle for our minds and beliefs in this digital age. Truly thought-provoking and powerful!
July 25th, 2024 22:23
Dragon
Goldfinch60 said:
Back when they believed the world was flat as they reached the edge there was a sign that said \"Here Be Dragons\".
Nothing has changed John.
Andy
July 9th, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Back when they believed the world was flat as they reached the edge there was a sign that said \"Here Be Dragons\".
Nothing has changed John.
Andy
July 9th, 2024 01:20
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