Comments received on poems by John Prophet



Waste
Poetic Licence said:

Make good use of the precious time we have and don\'t waste it, enjoyed the read

February 25th, 2025 05:38

Waste
Goldfinch60 said:

Time is so precious John, we must use each moment of it to bring happiness to our lives.

Andy

February 25th, 2025 02:22

Waste
sorenbarrett said:

A call to arms and a motivational poem at that.

February 24th, 2025 22:02

Beating Heart
hzugman said:

First vertical poem read for me. Like it and like the theme.

February 23rd, 2025 15:45

Beating Heart
Poetic Licence said:

The beat of life within us and around us, enjoyed the read

February 20th, 2025 04:35

Beating Heart
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting meaning to this poem. If one takes it to be the last phrase it means one thing but if one takes it to be the entirety of the poem it means another. Nicely done

February 20th, 2025 04:15

Beating Heart
Goldfinch60 said:

That oblivion is waiting for us John, but not yet.

Andy

February 20th, 2025 02:16

Beating Heart
arqios said:

The pulse of life in all that surrounds us echoing what’s within us…

February 20th, 2025 01:43

Thick Fog
Goldfinch60 said:

We each have a light within us to find our way through that fog John.

Andy

February 17th, 2025 02:20

Thick Fog
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 16th, 2025 09:10

Thick Fog
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful images each word defining a picture Lovely write

February 16th, 2025 08:51

Thick Fog
2781 said:

There\'s plenty to see.

February 16th, 2025 08:33

Thick Fog
Poetic Licence said:

May humanity`s light shine bright again very soon, enjoyed the read

February 16th, 2025 08:18

Thick Fog
arqios said:

Barely. More Light please! Blinding, revealing light. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 16th, 2025 08:08

Built
sorenbarrett said:

Word by word just like brick by brick the poem was built as the civilization was. A great write that passed quickly just as life does. Nicely done John

February 15th, 2025 04:24

Built
Poetic Licence said:

It would be nice if human evolvement would erase the nastier elements of the human race, but instead we appear to be breeding more of them, interesting and enjoyable read

February 15th, 2025 02:57

Built
Goldfinch60 said:

We come from a long line and many are shaped into wonderful human beings John although the leaders seem to have been formulated another way.

Andy

February 15th, 2025 02:53

Precipice
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 12th, 2025 08:32

Precipice
Poetic Licence said:

I love the lay out of this poem, as you read you end up speeding up as the process does, Enjoyed the read

February 12th, 2025 05:50

Precipice
sorenbarrett said:

Flashes of words tell the story. The whole process is speeded up. Very nice

February 12th, 2025 04:25

Gene Pool
sorenbarrett said:

I liked the construction of this poem the single of few word lines pulled one from one to the next in a (mind control) sort of way. A great message

February 10th, 2025 03:53

Gene Pool
Poetic Licence said:

Interesting read and the systems of control, i guess it boils down to, if we let them control our minds and life they certainly will. Enjoyed the read.

February 10th, 2025 03:48

Gene Pool
Goldfinch60 said:

That mind control is tried everywhere John but as individuals we must not let it control us.

Andy

February 10th, 2025 03:20

Cosmic Onion
arqios said:

Knives peelers, and slicers out! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 7th, 2025 20:20

Cosmic Onion
Poetic Licence said:

An interesting and enjoyable write, making me one how many layers are there to the cosmic onion, do we know, enjoyed the read

February 7th, 2025 04:31

Cosmic Onion
sorenbarrett said:

A great litteral and metaphoric write and so it is in most all of our universes from the physical to the emotional layers upon layers from the infinate to the infinitesimally small. Very nicely done

February 7th, 2025 04:21

Cosmic Onion
Goldfinch60 said:

As we go through each layer new things get shown that got us to the place we are now in John.

Andy

February 7th, 2025 03:00

Cosmic Onion
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 6th, 2025 19:42

Program
Goldfinch60 said:

Free will can be found outside the box John.

Andy

February 5th, 2025 02:52

Program
Poetic Licence said:

I sense the fact that we are slowly being dictated to and changed and told what we can say and do, becoming like machines. I love the layout, really enjoyed the read.

February 4th, 2025 10:42

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